Puella Magi Mato Magica

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Hi everybody, Im new to the forum and thought of coming here in search of help.

Months ago I purchased the Insane Black Rock Shooter bundle that came with a set of 4 dvds about an 8 episode anime called "Black Rock Shooter". I dint knew anything about the series and the fact that there were no subtitles available made me just forget about it until a few weeks ago.

when I got through the series I noticed that, if arranged properly it would become a really messed up story

Spoiler for Spoiler about Black Rock Shooter tv:

The Kagari, Yomi and Mato's breakdowns scenes; Kagari falling from the stairs, the fights, etc.

So I ripped the dvds, arranged some scenes in WMM, added some music (OP, Ed and some BGM but apparently I suck at it).

Spoiler for plot involves all sorts of spoiler regarind Madoka and BRS:

Characters:

Mato: The main character who goes back in time to achive happiness.

Yomi: Mato's friend and a very insecure girl. She turned Mato into a Magical Girl in the 1st and 2nd timeline. Second Guradian of the Soul Cradle.

Yuu: Mato's friend and the last guardian of the Soul Cradle.

Kagari: Old friend of Yomi and a Magical Girl. She transfer to Yomi and Mato school in episode 1.


Plot:

Overall:

This is set up in the timeline Madoka created where demons were the main source of energy to prevent the death of the universe. The problem is by the time Mato becomes a Magical Girl(MG) demons have ceased to exist. The only solution Incubators find is start sacrificing entire system to sustain the existence of whats left of the universe. The earth was on its way to damnation but a group of MGs developed a witch-like ability to create alternate dimensions where they stored tons of energy called The Soul Cradle (SC). The Incubators can't get access to that supply and destroying the earth would make that energy disappear so they need an insider who were powerufl enough to force her way into the Soul Cradle and so far they have been unsuccesful

Ep 1:
Mato (BRS) was a magical girl for (Insert reason here) but is betrayed and fights YOmi who ends up killing her. She wakes up realizing she has died and learns an awful truth about her friends and magical girls (about the energy, her friends and the other girls she was force to kill protecting and feeding the Soul Cradle). The Incubator tells her she could achieve happiness and he can give her another chance to be with her family, to create a world according to her wishes with the vast amount of energy in the SC.

Mato (Now as IBRS) accepts and go back in time where she kills the 2nd timeline Mato. After that she meets with 2nd timeline Yomi and goes to school, later at night she decides she will create a world for he friends and family to be happy and of course beat the living hell out of her magical buddies.

http://youtu.be/ZCwlgQK0Wms

So thats it, the video contains a rough and mute draft about whats going on in EP 1. The quality is not very good but it will get better once YouTube stops processing my videos for 5 hours. there are some background music but its not that good either.

Only the OP and ED have sound, I like the ED a lot

Help:

I would love to get some background music suggestions because I'm terrible at that.

The character lines are also one of my main problems since everything I think about sound to damn corny

Id love to see some suggestions about this.

Update:

- I rearranged some scenes and added bgm for the first fight. It wont be a problem since I have a ton of Kajiura Yuki Osts.

- the first fight is shorter to match the bgm.

- Switched OP theme to Dead End by Faylan.

- the dvd audio can't be ripped in 5.1 WAV, if anyone know how to get these I'd love to get some tips.