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Old 2013-04-16, 00:07   Link #901
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Yandere Yuuhi??


Currently I'm writing a Yandere Yuuhi, I want to know what's your reaction to this...
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Old 2013-04-16, 08:06   Link #902
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Yandere Yuuhi??


Currently I'm writing a Yandere Yuuhi, I want to know what's your reaction to this...
Crack fic is always welcomed.Most of the time.
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Old 2013-04-16, 09:37   Link #903
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Crack fic is always welcomed.Most of the time.
nope... a serious 1 shot cross over fic...
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Old 2013-04-16, 10:27   Link #904
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nope... a serious 1 shot cross over fic...
In my opinion,any fanfic that seems even slightly insane(By my standard,which is a lot) is automatically a crack fic,even if the seriousness is over the top and the humour is zero.
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Old 2013-04-17, 09:38   Link #905
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Don't know if you'll like this but yeah... a simple draft I had with a crossover i thought

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Old 2013-04-18, 01:59   Link #906
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Don't know if you'll like this but yeah... a simple draft I had with a crossover i thought

Spoiler for A Rhapsody of a Girl:
Normally I would just say "Great" when reading such a good fic that's comparable to some of the best examples I known of and dwarfed mine(considering how bad my writing skill is,I seriously need to work hard if I want to write that battletech crossover fic.)

Anyway,if the atmosphere of ancient Japan rather than Muvluv sci-fi is intentional,then you did well on it.From your writing,I can clearly see that Yuuhi and this certain someone have been together for quite awhile.There's also repeated mentionings of Yuuhi's nobility that have been described in a elegant way.And then there's Yuuhi yandere side....yah,she's clearly insane.

Overall,it's a very good oneshot.
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Old 2013-04-18, 05:19   Link #907
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Actually it's pretty good. I mean, it's a little rough, don't get me wrong, and you need the polish, but you've got your wooden table out, and all you need is sanding, polish and varnish.

....also I am imagining this as the start of an ero manga. Next will be scenes drawn by, hmmm. Kima-Gray, Homunculous, Hisashi, Cuvie, Tony Taka, Takayuki, Gunma Kisaragi, Napata, ...

...nah, this is waff, that means Homunculous and Napata tied for first place.

Also their proposal reminds me of Demon Queen and Hero.

Basic tl;dr version: awesome sauce, write MOAR. Also I find it amusing that the two most recent snips here have been about couples sneaking away to be with each other.
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Old 2013-04-18, 08:04   Link #908
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Yandere Yuuhi??


Currently I'm writing a Yandere Yuuhi, I want to know what's your reaction to this...
Yuuhi being Yuuhi...how would we know she's Yandere? For all we know she already is, and that she's just really good at covering it up...
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Old 2013-04-18, 11:09   Link #909
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Yuuhi being Yuuhi...how would we know she's Yandere? For all we know she already is, and that she's just really good at covering it up...
Why did her image fit yandere so perfectly? It fits even better than Yuzuka.
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Old 2013-04-18, 11:51   Link #910
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Why did her image fit yandere so perfectly? It fits even better than Yuzuka.
It is because she is Yuuhi, the shogun. You don't get to be a shogun if you are not broken 1 way or another... I think...
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Old 2013-04-18, 16:31   Link #911
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I'd really think the Japanese, for all their faults, would put someone mentally unstable in charge of the country (and yandere is mentally unstable, IMO). Too much is at stake to be jeopardized by a temper tantrum of a teenaged girl. That, or Japanese politicians like their monopoly on screwing things up.

But the promise is interesting, regardless. Keep at it.
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Old 2013-04-18, 19:09   Link #912
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Nipponjin. In charge of common sense. I should've saw it coming.
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Old 2013-04-18, 21:15   Link #913
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Regards common sense, I'd just note this discussion on Spacebattles, on the discipline of the Imperial Japanese forces.

tl;dr, your average IJA junior officer (JO, from 2LT to CPT), was an insubordinate little fuck who'd ignore orders to be YAMATO DAMASHII and ran around half-cocked. Note how many assassinations and military coups were run by junior officers in the 20s and 30s - and that's before we get into how the IJA and IJN would assassinate each other's officers. They didn't see America as the enemy, they saw the enemy as being the IJA and IJN.

(I can't remember if I've actually posted this before.)

On Yuuhi, I don't see her as being too yandere in that snip, btw. Well, she's not yet at the YAN stage. She's being more dereyan in that snip. Well until the end. Wait what am I saying I need coffee and breakfast.

That said, you could argue that being forced into the role of Shogun has warped her, especially given the kind of teachings noble families fill the heads of their children with.
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Old 2013-04-19, 01:15   Link #914
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In Japan,everyone is too YAMATO DAMASHI to be bounded by common sense and logic.
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Old 2013-04-19, 01:27   Link #915
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well she's still 16 years old in this snip and the young man is implied to be 13 years old(???)(needs to be proven)... it happened during Yui's tenureship in IRG academy in kyoto 1997 while the scene happened somewhere near/inside Kyoto. He's Yui's only male classmate BTW
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Old 2013-04-19, 02:10   Link #916
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Make the ages similar, if they're classmates. Japan isn't really a big believer in skipping grades, and is big on that whole sempai kohai thimajig.
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Old 2013-04-19, 02:37   Link #917
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Finally caught up with one last loop.. they EXTRA part still seem somewhat weird like what I remembered, but it's still a good read.

Oh and I almost thought that Iilfride was killed in his story but I guess she survives shame that she wouldn't be able to see Makabe again though.
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Old 2013-04-19, 03:18   Link #918
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Paul Xion Fanfic is out, chapter 73

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7112821/73/
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Old 2013-04-19, 03:23   Link #919
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@Goose

Yes, I am very well aware of it. It also did not extended much to the upper ranks - which arguably was encouraging the whole affair by using said junior officers to settle their own power plays.
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Old 2013-04-19, 03:50   Link #920
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I was thinking of a scenario of an orphan without an orphanage, since the government doesn't know what to do with him, they decided to test if he is applicable to be added in the ranks, new recruits are always welcome this days. TO their surprise the orphan boy has a very high aptitude to be an eishi... you know the rest
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