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Old 2004-08-14, 22:35   Link #1
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wip ~~ spot the errors

something i just cooked up just finished the lineart and im really happy with it it would be nice is ppl could point out some errors before i start coloring it since im going to try really hard on the CG'ing since i havent been doing anything with my tablet for a month now

http://bb.1asphost.com/xfordained/li...hed%20copy.jpg
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Old 2004-08-14, 22:45   Link #2
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only thing I'll comment on... thicker outline for foreground, thinner for background. but if you're going to just blend it in (lineless), then doesn't matter.
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Old 2004-08-16, 12:56   Link #3
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this done by flash righ?....maybe the hand can use some lines but maybe not, ..wonder how you gonna draw the eyes, limiting my curiousity
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Old 2004-08-16, 17:12   Link #4
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Beautiful. Really beautiful. It's stark simplicity heightens its intensity. It is marvelous that you could do so much with so little. My feeling is that coloring this in any way will reduce the power of the composition.
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Old 2004-08-17, 22:30   Link #5
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thx im glad someone likes as for the eyes there covered by his hair.Right now the coloring is fealing a bit odd might after all the coloring erase the outline lol
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Old 2004-08-18, 20:29   Link #6
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i just finished the coloring here it is
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Old 2004-08-18, 21:10   Link #7
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the jaw area. you need to change the flow of the blood in order to show it
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Old 2004-08-19, 00:27   Link #8
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Quote:
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i just finished the coloring here it is
http://bb.1asphost.com/xfordained/inking2345678.jpg
I take back what I said about not coloring this one. That is absolutely wonderful. It is however very different. I like both aesthetics so I'll keep a copy of both before and after to appreciate.

Is that full sized?
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Old 2004-08-19, 15:07   Link #9
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no its not full screened when u look at it fullscreen its looks weird so i resized it and .gaara i dont know what u mean by the jaw line what other way could the blood go?
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Old 2004-08-19, 19:02   Link #10
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i think what .gaara meant by the blood flow is that it should go toward the chin, so it flows with the robe's? flow..
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Old 2004-08-19, 20:58   Link #11
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I think it is currently running down the line of the mouth and then trickling in that direction from the corner of the mouth. That's what I see, but I now that it was pointed out I can see how that is unclear.
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