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Old 2004-08-17, 23:34   Link #1
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Guys, I need your help! Please~~

Here is Shujan, he supposed to be Devil King but he's only 12 years old, on his right hand is the demon gaunlet, passed down to every generation of kings, thats my character but..I have some toruble character designing today, for my new to-be manga "oni-densetsu" But I don't really have much creativity when it comes to character designing so guys, help me out and give me some ideas or suggestions. ANY suggestions will help.

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Old 2004-08-18, 00:40   Link #2
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Maybe baggy shorts would be better as opposed to pants... or a hoodie underneath the vest? ...

cool looking character though... kinda reminds me of Sasuke from Naruto (the hair)... I also like the gaunlet idea...
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Old 2004-08-18, 00:51   Link #3
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long legs wit tight pants! ahaha, ; the way you curve their faces, just like your other drawings, keeps me interested with envious.
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Old 2004-08-18, 23:29   Link #4
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Wow... that devil sign on the gauntlet looks amazingly similar to the Flame of Recca symbol for the Hokage. Is there a symbolic reference to that loop with the dot in the middle?
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Old 2004-08-19, 01:02   Link #5
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Okay I am gonna change this character drastically, knowing how unoriginal the character design is, the new and (hopefully) improved version will be up tommorrow.

Forsake>> The symbol? Well I never really given it much thought, I thought it just there to signify the Mark of the King. As for the Dot in the middle I just thought it looks cool.
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Old 2004-08-19, 04:58   Link #6
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the design process can be considered somewhat scientific.

First you have to clearly identify what your trying to come up with. In your case, you subject is: (1) a demon (2) a royalty (3) and from your available description, a cool teenager.

Second is the character's "flavor". There can be multiple flavors to a subject. Think of them as an appandage to your identified subject - the add-on style, mood or influence (I've never got to find out myself, but I suppose a subject without a flavor will just be photo-realistic). The picture indicates you're trying to have manga as your flavor.

Then you're off to researching your subject and flavor, meaning you will be drawing/sketching some conventional demons. Depending on how much of the character's appearance will be showing signs of royalty or 'coolness', you may research only particular aspects of the subjects (crowns, bling blings, 'cool' clothes).

Personal creativity still plays an important part, but applying this process will help you come up with truly novel ideas you'll otherwise miss. You may come up with various designs for the same character using this process, just cut/paste to come up with the demon you wanted.

This is just a crude outline of the design process, try googling the topic or take up a design course. If you're trying to become a professional, getting familiar with this process is a must. But either case, you wanna make sure you're enjoying some fun designing instead of turning it into some bland and strenuous chore.
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Old 2004-08-19, 05:12   Link #7
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dude ...its perfect the only thing you should change is his jacket .....try to do another ..........but your drawing is perfect^^x
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Old 2004-08-20, 02:37   Link #8
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Here is the Mother, she is very evil, she schemes with Jazek ( Shujans step father) To over throw shujan's throne. She is an oever all biatch...so....please help me out guys, what do you think?




Here is the NEW shujan, not much has really changed I like the clothes design, I added the Hoody, Change the Symbol on his gaunlet, removed the birthmark and changed his hair style, and simplify the vest just a little more. What do you think guys?


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Old 2004-08-20, 03:17   Link #9
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wow, really nice. Good command of proportion, pose, and perspective. I'd be interested to see where all this leads

as for the changes, I think they are all pretty much and inmprovement. I really like the new hair better, and the birthmark removal is a plus, too
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Old 2004-08-20, 05:35   Link #10
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mommy needs bigger rack.. try 34EE... there's got to be something of the mom's that impress Jazek..
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Old 2004-08-20, 19:16   Link #11
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"dont underestimate me just becuase im a kid" lol that just makes me laugh reminds me of so many anime it should becoem a clich

*the sign looks to dull now
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Old 2004-08-20, 19:35   Link #12
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Yea the sign's kinda simple. Tommorow ill draw one a bit more "evil" and post it so you can go from there
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Old 2004-08-20, 22:24   Link #13
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Damn...very nice. I Really like the new design, and i agree with xfordained about the symbol being a bit dull now. I think it would be cool to make the gauntlet look similar to something like those guys in black wore in The Lord of the Rings: Fellowship of the ring . It may be just me but i think it would be cool with him with some kind of birthmark to make him more unique but that's just my OP. His mom looks nice too, maybe do something to make her look more evil. the pic you drew makes her look like a good guy :P . Keep up the good work, I'd like to see the finished results.
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Old 2004-08-20, 23:20   Link #14
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yes, a guy with big boobs. I don't really see a guy in that
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Old 2004-08-20, 23:41   Link #15
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i would like to request if u Shoeshefied could draw Dou's Gundam with dou in the pic as well, thanks
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Old 2004-08-20, 23:50   Link #16
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i would like to request if u Shoeshefied could draw Dou's Gundam with dou in the pic as well, thanks
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um wrong thread dood, its in Fanart Request. Try again ^ _^'..(where the hell did i came from)

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well since im here,..whoaa that chicks a mom = **T , shes lookz gOod = ]**

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Old 2004-08-23, 02:25   Link #17
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thats mighty spiffy otaku! whats his personality like anyway? is it raw and energetic? slight bratty and rebellious? i like the skull shirt touch. how about a denim vest thats frayed on the edges and a little worn? i like the 1st shujan hair design. and tell me more about his gauntlet. does it suck in souls into a jewel? anyway this looks fun, mind if i give it a little whirl? XD

brb while i draw
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