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Old 2004-09-12, 23:30   Link #1
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Red face Friends Drawings

my friend, Lis, wanted me to post these on here and she is wondering if anyone has any tips for her


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Old 2004-09-13, 00:27   Link #2
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my friend, Lis, wanted me to post these on here
thankx jay', i appreciate it that you posted em' on here, as soon as i get a scanner ill stop buggin' you , anyways what does everyone think?
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Old 2004-09-13, 05:11   Link #3
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hmmmmmmmmm like the first one, second one too scrachy, though body porportions are good yet the neck is a bit thick.
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Old 2004-09-13, 15:26   Link #4
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i agree with you on the second one ^_^
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Old 2004-09-13, 19:35   Link #5
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it could be my "taste" but i think eyes are too wide apart.
thats just me prolly though
otherwise its great
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Old 2004-09-13, 19:49   Link #6
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it could be my "taste" but i think eyes are too wide apart.
thats just me prolly though
otherwise its great
Nope, I think so too...
Other then the eye thingy...awesome ^^
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Old 2004-09-13, 21:55   Link #7
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Nope, I think so too...
Other then the eye thingy...awesome ^^

lol yeah i have a thing for making the eyes, apart, and jay thanx again for posting these, anyways i dont like the second one but thnx for the tips, ill keep that in mind
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Old 2004-09-14, 01:14   Link #8
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are u gonna post more up?
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Old 2004-09-14, 18:37   Link #9
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are u gonna post more up?

Yup , I intend on posting up two more...ones "R" rated as they say here though...is that ok?
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Old 2004-09-14, 18:41   Link #10
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ones "R" rated ... is that ok?
Depends what you mean by "R" rated. If you mean "artistic" nudity or "ecchi" content, we don't mind... you'll want to make it a link with a note, rather than an inline image though. However, if you mean simple "Hentai" / outright pornography, we'll ask you not to post it. (Given your age, I'm guessing the former is true and we'll welcome more of your work )
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Old 2004-09-15, 10:15   Link #11
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The first one's pretty cute. I like the look and expression on her face. It'd be nice to see a colored version, if possible. The second one isn't terrible, but it could be improved. Maybe a thinner ink pen so the drawing doesn't look as messy. And I agree with mememe-san, that the neck is a little thick, but the proportions are still pretty good. Don't feel bad about the eyes, Li145-san. I have a tendency to make them too far apart, uneven, and one smaller than the other. >.<*

Keep drawing. I'd like to see some of your work and catch the improvements. ^.^;;
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Old 2004-09-16, 21:33   Link #12
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oh, ^-^ its not pure hentai or pornography, lol, and thnx for the tips, ill be posting up another drawing in two days...and colouring the first drawing in as well



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Old 2004-09-16, 22:45   Link #13
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Old 2004-09-19, 23:53   Link #14
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lis... do i even wanna know about the "R" rated drawings...

anyways.. heres your colored drawing.. get a good computer .. lol
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Old 2004-09-20, 00:16   Link #15
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lol jay' ill promise to get a better feel for computerized colouring soon, if not ill paint it with my own paints...heh... ..n-e-ways thanx for colouring it..i had no idea what the heck a mask was
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Old 2004-09-20, 09:17   Link #16
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lol jay' ill promise to get a better feel for computerized colouring soon, if not ill paint it with my own paints...heh... ..n-e-ways thanx for colouring it..i had no idea what the heck a mask was
I know! Painting programs are so freakin' confusing. I have so many drawings I want to color on the computer, but I can't do a thing with Adobe without asking my sister for help. ^.^;;

What the freak IS a mask, anyway?!
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Old 2004-09-20, 13:50   Link #17
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Okay so here are my opinions.

critisism first.

first of all, i gotta agree with the eyes being to far apart. But nothing that can't be fixed. What the hey. Even i had some problems with the eyes. i putted mine a bit to high (still do...acording to some of my friends ^^;; )

on that second picture. Well i dunno...it's not that the neck is to thick. I find that the head is to big. And that the neck is a little to long. Cause when i look closely the head is almost as big as her upper body. Plus the eye is a bit to far to the center.


Okay now to the aprasials. (*loves this part*)

First pic:
I like that you used a different angle on that first pic. People usualy just do the normal frontal pic when they make those. It's a common error most do so it's nice to see that the error is disapearing. I also like the clothes you used in this one. It's simple made but it's still eye catching. And the sweatband/bandana is also a nice touch.


Second picture:

Even though it's scribbled it's still well made
I especially liked the oddity of the idea of those two completely different wings.
Once again. like the clothes.

The rest on both of the pictures are just great. You got natural talent.
(*is sure that also many hours of practise is behind it all too*)


okay well that's that...hmm...i wonder. it's still something i haven't mentioned.
AHH!!! now i know.

I've noticed you have the hands hidden in both of the pics. hmmmmmmm my artist instincts says you have a problem with drawing hands. Actually i can say that with certainty since i used to do the same untill a month ago. Then i forced myself to draw visible hands. But i cheat alot (*uses glove technique for now*)
All i can say is practise practise practise. ^-^V



Oh! :3 by the way. You said you have problems with coloring on the computer right? ^^ well then i just gotta make comersials for my friend Niti's Colouring Tutorial thread (gooooooo Nitti ^-^d )

And if you want to you can add me on msn and or pm me (msn prefferd since i'm not in animesuki very often). I can see if i can digg upp my old "learn how to draw hands" papers i'm certain i have somewhere in this little dump i call home =/ Plus the more ppl i know the merrier x3
(*Loves exchaning ideas and tips that can improve his and others art*)


anyways. Keep up the good work Lis-chan *two thumbs up for ya* b^-^d
I'm looking forward to see more of your art.
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Old 2004-09-20, 16:26   Link #18
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okay well that's that...hmm...i wonder. it's still something i haven't mentioned.
AHH!!! now i know.

I've noticed you have the hands hidden in both of the pics. hmmmmmmm my artist instincts says you have a problem with drawing hands. Actually i can say that with certainty since i used to do the same untill a month ago. Then i forced myself to draw visible hands. But i cheat alot (*uses glove technique for now*)
All i can say is practise practise practise. ^-^V
Lol yes me and lis have problems with hands... me more than her .. anyways the thing about the coloring is that me and lis use paint shop pro.. not adobe... for the last time
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Old 2004-09-20, 20:51   Link #19
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Add me to the same, I-can't-draw-hands-worth-crap boat! But yes, keep trying and keep practicing. You'll get better. Even I have, and my art's still not that awesome.
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Old 2004-09-20, 22:04   Link #20
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lol , uh huh , well right now im painting it with my own paint, to see what happens with it, but anyways sure ill add you to my msn..thing..er...list.. ill look into those hand tutorial things (also if ever i post the same sideways drawing with the paint, you'll notice how lazy i am so as to not change the eyes, lol i kinda like 'em , but yeah they are a bit too far apart

Heres another picture i drew, i dunno if itll show ..im no good with HTML either.lol




(well im gunna go now, my computer wont agree with me , when i type my R's i have to press the darned key three times just to get it....well c yah..till 2-morrow anyways )

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