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Old 2007-03-05, 19:59   Link #301
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i like it but there is one problem

the 8 tailed demon is a snake, orochi no yamata
sry didnt know ok time to go editing in word...again
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Old 2007-03-07, 05:51   Link #302
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sry didnt know ok time to go editing in word...again
Hah, I feel your pain. I've edited mine in word about a million times. Might I suggest that you just leave the tailed beast out? Your character is perfectly fine without it and even seems more original with the tailed beast left off. Just a thought though . Oh, by the way awesome sig. Love it.

I've finished my two characters for the most part and posted them in the following spoiler tags. I'm still working on Hikari's jutsus but I can't seem to come up with anything that hasn't already been done. Hopefully I'll get some feedback this time as they are my first characters. Anyone not willing to do a bit of reading just disregard(or skip to the jutsu I suppose) cus they are somewhat in depth. lol. Enjoy.

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Old 2007-03-09, 22:32   Link #303
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[QUOTE=chaz017;854725]Hah, I feel your pain. I've edited mine in word about a million times. Might I suggest that you just leave the tailed beast out? Your character is perfectly fine without it and even seems more original with the tailed beast left off. Just a thought though . Oh, by the way awesome sig. Love it.

thnx i'll think about editing the tailed beast out good suggestion the problem is his original village is burned down by akatsuki and y else would they attack if not for the tailed beast...nyway thnx about my sig haha
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Old 2007-03-09, 22:43   Link #304
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new jutsu

in this jutsu ninja surrounds himself with a whirlwind of shuriken and kunai. The ninja then uses body flicker to move out of the whirlwind, using his chakra to kep the whirlwind moving. Upon inspection of the whirlwind by the opposing ninja, the ninja performing the jutsu releases his chakra, impaling his enemy with a rain of kunai and shuriken. I don't have a name yet so please post suggestions.
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Old 2007-03-09, 22:43   Link #305
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Name--|||Nara Shikmaro|||

Justu--|||Ninpo, Shadow Eclipse justu|||


Shadow Eclipse block out the sun in every direction, shikmaro's shadow surrounds the sun, by doing that he can catch anybody with his shadow

Also when caught by his shadow, while Shadow Eclipse is still in effect, you Whole body will be surrounded by his shadow and you die.

This justu can also be used to help allies avoid being spotted by and enemy, friend/ally can hide in the shadow without dying. Because Shikamaro has the choice to kill the person or not.
sry if I sound like a jerk but by chance did you read the rules? if not check them this seems a BIT to powerful add a few disadvantages like huge chakra consumption, you might die,ect,ect,ect just a thought

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in this jutsu ninja surrounds himself with a whirlwind of shuriken and kunai. The ninja then uses body flicker to move out of the whirlwind, using his chakra to kep the whirlwind moving. Upon inspection of the whirlwind by the opposing ninja, the ninja performing the jutsu releases his chakra, impaling his enemy with a rain of kunai and shuriken. I don't have a name yet so please post suggestions.
nice heres a problem though this sounds a bit like tentens whirlwind technique
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Old 2007-03-10, 01:39   Link #306
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another character

Name: sanji erinda(not his actual last name)

Age: 19
family: adopted sister:akimoto erinda adopted mother ayane erinda(deceased)
Eye color: blue

Hair color black with 2 red stripes through it

Weapon: a silver katana with blue runes that mach kuro yama’s black katana’s runes (the reason is explained in his bio)

Village(s) hidden waterfall village goes with kuro yama to the twilight village

Rank: ANBU black ops

Clothing a grey cloak his headband wrapped around his arm

bio: almost 18 years ago in the waterfall village a long battle took place almost destroying the waterfall village in the end the survivors found the child sanji in a bombed out building near the silver katana in a weapons rack they found that the second katana that was in the rack had disappeared (see second sword is kuro yamas the black katana that is) and the waterfall village could not find the parents so they allowed the erinda clan who had found him to take care of him since the sword was found with him he was given it when he turned 12 when he started training in the academy at 10 he and kuro yama were set up as teammates along with (I need help GIVE ME IDEAS FOR A 3rd NAME preferably a girls name)

Jutsus: type ninjutsu name dark waters in this jutsu the user creates a large wave appear behind him covering the area in its shadow going forward twoards the target sanji using his chakra to make the wave follow the target
Disadvantages large chakra consumption needs to be near a large body of water

and thats all I got so far
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Old 2007-03-10, 20:57   Link #307
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(I need help GIVE ME IDEAS FOR A 3rd NAME preferably a girls name)
Well, how about Chiaki Hasegawa?

If you need Japanese names, try a name generator. I have a link for one here.

http://rumandmonkey.com/widgets/toys/namegen/969/
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Old 2007-03-11, 02:59   Link #308
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thnx i'll think about editing the tailed beast out good suggestion the problem is his original village is burned down by akatsuki and y else would they attack if not for the tailed beast...nyway thnx about my sig haha
Ahh, I suppose it makes sense with your story. It just seems like every other person in this thread has a tailed beast. And your character seems fine without it. Not many people in this thread give honest feedback either, so I thought I would. If the problem is with them atttacking the village for the tailed beast couldn't it have been either rumored to be there or contained in someone else? That would solve the problem of why they attacked .

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Well, how about Chiaki Hasegawa?

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I like the name Chiaki. Plus it would be Chia-chan. Cute indeed.
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Old 2007-03-12, 16:56   Link #309
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I created a character named ukar wodahs (revers for raku shadow).he has shadow abilities.he has a demon that was born inside him.the demons name is raku shadow.he got this name because he looks like a shadow.ukar can transform into raku when ever he wants.he can disaper and run fast.he has a jutsu called Chisengan.its like chidori fussed with resengan but its dark.this jutsu can destroy halve a house.you can only use this jutsu once.

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Old 2007-03-12, 18:21   Link #310
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Ahh, I suppose it makes sense with your story. It just seems like every other person in this thread has a tailed beast. And your character seems fine without it. Not many people in this thread give honest feedback either, so I thought I would. If the problem is with them atttacking the village for the tailed beast couldn't it have been either rumored to be there or contained in someone else? That would solve the problem of why they attacked .



I like the name Chiaki. Plus it would be Chia-chan. Cute indeed.
aha THANK YOU now lets see.... oh and that name chia-chan.....lmfao I won't use it cuz my friend victoria gave me the name akimoto and for sum reason it stuck
hmmmmm mabye the rumor thing would work cuz I cant think of any thing else tht can remove the tailed beast from the storyline nyway i'l post my 3rd character now*ahem*

name:akimoto erinda

age:20

eye color: purple

hair color: white

weapon: a halberd

villages waterfall village/twilight village

rank:ANBU black ops

clothing: a white robe no headband and she wears spiked gloves(and she is VERY good at taijutsu...ouch)

bio: another survivor of the attack 18 years ago she and her mother ayane looked for survivors near the outskirts of the village they found sanji and the katana thier clan was ordered by the villages kage to look after the boy akimoto considers sanji a brother and when they started at the academy they were assigned with kuro thier team was the only team that year to get past the chunin exams and 3 years later became jounins 12 years later ANBU black ops she normally avoids conflict but when faced with a mission she can and will kill if necesarry
jutsus: type kekkai genkai (ok I have no name for this I know I suck) well this jutsu can do 1 of 2 things1 it can deafen the opponent for a short amount of time while this might seem as an advantage it can effect allies nearby you see the way it works is she energizes her vocal chords wit chakra and screams main reason its not used a whole lot in missions(big duh there) but its good for singe 1 on 1 fighting the second is she can improve her own hearing to astronomical proportions by of course energizing her ears wit chakra again sounds advantaegous in missions but it harms her ears horridly if someone in a hypothetical sense were to say put a metallica CD on and turn it up as loud as they could(and thts painful normally I should know I tried*rubs ears*) but its great for spying on enemies
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Old 2007-03-13, 02:09   Link #311
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Name--|||Nara Shikmaro|||
Justu--|||Ninpo, Shadow Eclipse justu|||

Shadow Eclipse block out the sun in every direction, shikmaro's shadow surrounds the sun, by doing that he can catch anybody with his shadow
Also when caught by his shadow, while Shadow Eclipse is still in effect, you Whole body will be surrounded by his shadow, you cannot get out of this justu and you will not be able to breath, thereforeÖ

This justu can also be used to help allies avoid being spotted by and enemy, friend/ally can hide in the shadow without dying. Because Shikamaro has the choice to kill the person or not.

iunno if you think it's good or not but oh well
Tell me if it's ok.
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Okay, I have another character

Musashi

Rank: Chuunin
Age: 20

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Bio: An orphan from another country, Musashi was taken in by the third Hokage after his parents were murdered by unidentified ninja. Around the age of 10, he enrolled late into the Ninja Academy. Being among children younger than him struggling with normally easy jutsu and chakra techniques made him isolated and alienated from children his own age, who would often be close to becoming Genin. Two years after his enrollment, he tried to cheat in a match against another, much stronger student by eating 10 soldier pills at once. The huge amount of chakra nearly killed him, and revealed a previously unknown kekkei-genkai in his left eye. After this incident, he was tutored by a taijutsu specialist, and learned of the great swordsman, Musashi, who he named himself after. He developed a strict sense of honor from his mentor, and has since become good friends with the student he tried to cheat against, Kazuma Yamada. Now 20 years old, he is a reknown taijutsu user, and is especially skilled with swords, and is rumored to be the best swordsman in Konoha, though many contest this claim, including Kazuma.

Musashi's sword, Konohaken, was made by Musahi himself, under the instruction of his mentor. The blade was infused with Musashi's chakra throughout every stage of it's creation, making it nothing short of an extension of his body when used in combat. This has also made the blade seem extremely light to Musashi, as if it were only 2 or 3 pounds, when it is in fact, more than 70. It's edge is sharp enough to cut a falling leaf with no movement at all, and can cleave through a tree as if it were made of water.

Musahi's kekkei-Genkai, Kengan, acts in a similar manner as a Sharingan in that it observes muscle movements and can easily predict in what way an opponent will move or attack next. Kengan also allows for increible accuracy with throwing objects, as well as allowing a faint view of internal organs, as well as the chakra networks.

Special Jutsu:

Whirlwind tempest - A unique taijutsu move in which Musashi hits the opponent with the blunt end of his sword, and with the enemy still on the blade, jumps upward, spinning in circles, spiraling like a whirlwind. Once Musashi stops, he slams the enemy to the ground from midair (blunt edge again) and falls straight down, impaling the enemy.

Spider Limbs - A mixture of high speed taijutsu and genjutsu, Spider Limbs gives the illusion of Musashi having eight arms, each with it's own Konohaken. The arms are obviously hard to coordinate, but each one strikes with the full force of a real arm/sword, and if used properly, can be absolutely devastating.

Stone Shard Assault - Upon finding a large rock or boulder, Musashi slashes at it repeatedly, dividing the stone into dozens, hundreds, or even thousands of pieces, given on how much time he takes. Afterwards, Musashi punches the stone as hard as he can, as well as with a good amount of chakra. The stone then shatters into the cut pieces, which then fly towards the enemy at an incredible speed. Musashi also has a large amount of control on the firing angles of the shards, and can make it a narrow, one person range, or can fan it out to make a huge fan of flying rocks and stone.
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Old 2007-03-13, 04:15   Link #313
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Okay, I have another character

Musashi

Rank: Chuunin
Age: 20

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Bio: An orphan from another country, Musashi was taken in by the third Hokage after his parents were murdered by unidentified ninja. Around the age of 10, he enrolled late into the Ninja Academy. Being among children younger than him struggling with normally easy jutsu and chakra techniques made him isolated and alienated from children his own age, who would often be close to becoming Genin. Two years after his enrollment, he tried to cheat in a match against another, much stronger student by eating 10 soldier pills at once. The huge amount of chakra nearly killed him, and revealed a previously unknown kekkei-genkai in his left eye. After this incident, he was tutored by a taijutsu specialist, and learned of the great swordsman, Musashi, who he named himself after. He developed a strict sense of honor from his mentor, and has since become good friends with the student he tried to cheat against, Kazuma Yamada. Now 20 years old, he is a reknown taijutsu user, and is especially skilled with swords, and is rumored to be the best swordsman in Konoha, though many contest this claim, including Kazuma.

Musashi's sword, Konohaken, was made by Musahi himself, under the instruction of his mentor. The blade was infused with Musashi's chakra throughout every stage of it's creation, making it nothing short of an extension of his body when used in combat. This has also made the blade seem extremely light to Musashi, as if it were only 2 or 3 pounds, when it is in fact, more than 70. It's edge is sharp enough to cut a falling leaf with no movement at all, and can cleave through a tree as if it were made of water.

Musahi's kekkei-Genkai, Kengan, acts in a similar manner as a Sharingan in that it observes muscle movements and can easily predict in what way an opponent will move or attack next. Kengan also allows for increible accuracy with throwing objects, as well as allowing a faint view of internal organs, as well as the chakra networks.

Special Jutsu:

Whirlwind tempest - A unique taijutsu move in which Musashi hits the opponent with the blunt end of his sword, and with the enemy still on the blade, jumps upward, spinning in circles, spiraling like a whirlwind. Once Musashi stops, he slams the enemy to the ground from midair (blunt edge again) and falls straight down, impaling the enemy.

Spider Limbs - A mixture of high speed taijutsu and genjutsu, Spider Limbs gives the illusion of Musashi having eight arms, each with it's own Konohaken. The arms are obviously hard to coordinate, but each one strikes with the full force of a real arm/sword, and if used properly, can be absolutely devastating.

Stone Shard Assault - Upon finding a large rock or boulder, Musashi slashes at it repeatedly, dividing the stone into dozens, hundreds, or even thousands of pieces, given on how much time he takes. Afterwards, Musashi punches the stone as hard as he can, as well as with a good amount of chakra. The stone then shatters into the cut pieces, which then fly towards the enemy at an incredible speed. Musashi also has a large amount of control on the firing angles of the shards, and can make it a narrow, one person range, or can fan it out to make a huge fan of flying rocks and stone.
Dang it! Yet another awesome character sparatically given a sharingan, tailed beast, or insane amount of chakra for no reason. Besides the Kengan that doesn't seem to fit I love the character. Well thought out with quite innovative sword techniques (And it's hard to get me to like a sword bearing character outside of Kenshin). I most definitely like how the sword is much lighter to him and him alone. That would most definitely fit into a Naruto character. I can easily see the shocked faces after he cuts through a few trees and boulders. I can just as easily see someone else straining themselves to pick up his sword and use it.
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Old 2007-03-13, 05:14   Link #314
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Dang it! Yet another awesome character sparatically given a sharingan, tailed beast, or insane amount of chakra for no reason.
By the way, the count is now up to 11 rasengan thingys, 8 chidori thingys, and 9 people with either tailed-beasts or demons of some sort stuck in them
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Old 2007-03-13, 16:40   Link #316
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oi...

Shadow Eclipse block out the sun in every direction, shikmaro's shadow surrounds the sun, by doing that he can catch anybody with his shadow
Also when caught by his shadow, while Shadow Eclipse is still in effect, you Whole body will be surrounded by his shadow, you cannot get out of this justu and you will not be able to breath, therefore…

This justu can also be used to help allies avoid being spotted by and enemy, friend/ally can hide in the shadow without dying. Because Shikamaro has the choice to kill the person or not.


oi read the rules its over powered add a few drawbacks

oh and is it me or did this guy post twice? I could have sworn it was deleted by hunter the last time...

p.s. so this dosn't seem off topic I came up with ideas for a jutsu*ahem*
this is a genjutsu I call "ewwwww" once you charge a large amount of chakra you launch the chakra someone and they begin to see............................................... .................................................. .................................................. monkeys yes monkeys wich begin to throw fecal matter at the ninja they freak.......great party trick
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By the way, the count is now up to 11 rasengan thingys, 8 chidori thingys, and 9 people with either tailed-beasts or demons of some sort stuck in them
People are so creative.... If you're going to create your own characters then just do it, don't just modify existing ones. You can import abilities from x-men or Heroes, their are more sources of super powers than Naruto.

Here's one of the top of head (try to guess my sources!):

Endoh Tsubasa
Chuunin, Hidden Rock village
element: earth (gravity based)
BLL: graviton manipulation
eye color: brown
hair: long and black
ht: 147 cm
Family: Product of breeding program, unknown

Bio/history:
Deemed an abomination by the Bene Gesserit sect's breeding program, Endoh was treated as a failure by the sect. As a failure she was not trained in the use of "the Voice" which was every member's birthright.
Endoh, always with a sense of entitlement that all Bene Gesserit have, refused to believe this and trained her butt off. It was during her 10th year that manifested the unique bloodline that the sect had hoped for: gravitron manipulation, the very essence of earth element.

They soon treated her like a star and started her training on use of "the Voice". Dispite her age (most Bene Gessirit are trained from birth) she excelled in this as well. However, Endoh never got over her mistreatment at the hands of the sect and was often openly insubordinate and sarcastic to the sect leaders. While her most higher ups excuse this lack of manners due to her talents but it is clear that their patience was running thin.

She was also enrolled late to the Hidden Rock due to her early "abomination" status. Most of her peers assumed she was a washout from last year. Her attitude didn't make her any friends either. As it came time graduate it was clear that she was anything but a washout and dazzled her peers and instructors with her unique BLL. Her promotion to Chuunin and Jounin were all just a matter of time, or so she thought. Dispite the Bene Gessrit's vast contributions to the ranks of Rock ninjas most were treated with distrust, or sometimes even out right contempt. Achieving Chuunin was simple for her, but the stigma of the sect combined with her rude treatment of her superiors, made the rank of Jounin elusive.

With ninja war waging, Endoh was determined to distinguish herself to both her village and her sect. She lead her team many early victories, and was able to survive 3 encounters with the legendary "Yellow Flash" (although all 3 times lead to her defeat). She made it her goal to defeat Leaf's shining star, but in the end was recalled by the Bene Gessrit. The exact reasons for this recall are unknown (as are alot of the Bene Gessirit's motives) but it was widely assumed that she was to participate in the infamous breeding program. Endoh resisted the call but had no choice once the sect sent its most powerful elders to take her. Using the all powerful Voice, they were successful in removing her from battle.

By the time she returned to the village over a year later the war was over, and worse still the "Yellow Flash" had perished in a fight with Kyuubi. So she was never able redeem her defeats. Her apparent dessertion on the battlefield made prospects of promotion even more distant. Worse of all she has been completely cut off from the Bene Gessirit since coming back. Most assumed that it was her resistance to being recalled that made her fall out of favor with them.

The truth was Endoh was part of breeding program, and when she did give birth to her child she instantly attached to it, and wished to take care of it herself. But this was not the Bene Gessirit way, "above blood ties" was their motto, and all mothers, even Endou's, were separated and hidden from the instant they were born and raised by the sect. Unlike Endoh, her child manifested an even more powerful BLL right from birth. They deemed Endoh not only as extraneous, but also dangerous to their cause, and expelled her.

Endoh has since tried even harder to become Jounin, but now for the sole purpose of gaining access to secret files that could give her clue to her heritage as well as lead her to her child (she doesn't even know what sex it is). At the same time she has been raising her resistant to the Voice to give her a fighting chance of being reunited with her child.
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Endoh cont'd

The Bene Gessirit (you should all know were I pulled this reference out of by now):

A mysterious sect made of predominantly women, and have been part of the Earth country's background for as long as anyone can remember. Their goals are completely unknown to all but the elders and those hags never reveal their secrets. The sect has an agreement with the Hidden Rock, in which the BG provided outstanding troops and the village provided them with ample "breeding substrates" and the option of recalling their members at anytime. The village also provides training for the young sect members which the sect deems as beneath them.

The main reason for the village ninja's distrust of the sect is mainly because of Voice (which in essence allowed to deceive everyone) and the fact that BG nins seem to be recalled right when the fight is starting to get intense (like in Endoh's case).

The real reason is that during wars with other countries, the sect has much more opportunities to capture bloodline user from other countries. Even the Tsuchikage correctly guessed (half-jokingly) that even without the Voice, coercing prisoners into mating with attractive sect members wouldn't be too hard.

Children born into the sect are separated from their mother (who knows what happens to the father), where they start their training in the Voice. Since most breeding takes place at the same time, and the fact that only elders are allowed contact with the new members, the mothers rarely have a means of finding out who their child is. The BG do this because they believe that blood ties lead to irrational behavior, and hence weakness in thought.

Despite all secrecy it is said that a master-list of lineages must exist for the breeding program to be so successful. Endoh is determined to find this list at all costs.




Jutsu: Endoh's jutsu make her a fearsome opponent but they often lack subtly that is required of ninjas. While the Voice is a great ninja tool, Endoh often squanders it. As such many of the village Jounin think she is a fight first character, although many have come to reconsider since her valor in the ninja war.

the Voice:
This auditory genjutsu is the trademark jutsu of all BG. Some say that it is the BG BLL, other think it can be learned. Whatever it is so far only the BG have mastered it. It allows the user immense powers of persuasion over its victim. It has it limits like it will not work as well if the victim never wanted to do such an action to begin with. However, it is well documented that elders have made enemies kill themselves with just a sentence. Thankfully the elders rarely ever engage in combat and even fewer have such extensive control over it.
Endoh is considered an adept in using the Voice, and uses it to convince her enemies to attack her by convincing them she is a "weak little girl", or to attack a well guarded area. Many BG feel she doesn't use the Voice to its full potential and instead relies on her BLL more. In truth Endoh hates to use it because it reminds her that she is a BG. She has been using it more frequently now to try to find out its limits and a way to counter it.

Disruption:
This jutsu is the main reason why she could survive the 4th Hokage's attacks. By distorting the already unstable summoning field with her gravitron control she can effectively counter any summoning jutsu, including the 4th's Hirashin jutsu. Unfortunately the 4th Hokage had other tricks that Endoh had no counter for.

Singularity:
Creates a dense orb of gravity that sucks up all matter. Endoh herself is immune to its effects and uses it draw in fleeing enemies. The draw in effect is quite violent often tearing and breaking bones due to the gravitational differences. The mini black hole is unstable and collapses on itself in in .2 sec, which is good news for the universe. The effective radius for this jutsu is 100 m, but even out of this range shearing damage is still dealt. Endoh tries not to use this when her team is around since she has hurt them in the past with this very same jutsu.

Gravitron beam (this should be dead givaway):
Endoh's goto move. Basically a thin black beam that super compresses everything in its path. It immense power is the reason why Endoh is so feared. It is pretty telegraphed and has a long wind up, but with her control of gravity she usually can slow down her oppenent (though doing both at the same time puts some strain on her, she would never admit it).

Elemental vortex:
This is Endoh "ultimate defense". By modifying the gravitrons she can suck in any elemental attack directed at her and bounce it back in concentrated form to its attacker. The amount absorbed is not 100% and for big area of effect spells she still take on substantial damage.

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Old 2007-03-13, 22:39   Link #319
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Dang it! Yet another awesome character sparatically given a sharingan, tailed beast, or insane amount of chakra for no reason. Besides the Kengan that doesn't seem to fit I love the character.

In all honesty, I drew the character long before I posted him here, and didn't feel like erasing his eye, so went with it. If you're going to make a sharingan/byakkugan ripoff, you might as well go all the way. If I post another, I'll leave out the super powered eyes and evil inner demons.
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In all honesty, I drew the character long before I posted him here, and didn't feel like erasing his eye, so went with it. If you're going to make a sharingan/byakkugan ripoff, you might as well go all the way. If I post another, I'll leave out the super powered eyes and evil inner demons.
I wasn't meaning to single you out by any means. Your character at least has the rest to fall back on as originality and barely even seems to use the special eye you gave him. It was just that your character seemed very original and great outside of that extra ability. I was just complaining to the world in general, so you can give him sharakugan or byaringan if you want. I'll just keep telling myself he doesn't have it and I'll be happy since I like the rest of the character .
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