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Old 2006-04-15, 19:07   Link #21
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-Since I created Zaigou backstory and posted it I thought it was time to post his sister (no picture though, sorry ):

Name: Hana (flower) Age: 16 Occupation: Jinchuuriki, Special Jonin of Kumogakure.
Bijuu: Gobi no Tori (5-tailed Bird). Seal Location: Spine.
Bijuu effect: Once the power is drawn, Hana is then struck by a bolt of lightning which will grant her the wings the bijuu once possesed as well as the number of tails (depending on how much power was used). In this state Hana is able to take flight and is able to achieve the speed of Mach 5. The wings are nearly indestructeable and will offer near absolute protection from attacks. Normally using such power for a prolonged period of time would crush her bones but since the Kumogakure priests "blessed" the seal she is able to use the bijuu's power without consequence.

Quotes: "Filthy cur, watch your tongue! You are in the pressence of a divine entity!" (speaking to Zaigou). "Why is it that you just can't accept the reality of things?"

Attack: Raiton: Juuniyajuu Kanshiki no Justu (Thunder Element: 12-Beast's Judgement skill). Hana performs a single seal and begins to calls forth the 12 animals in the Chinese zodiac. It's basically her own little army which will obey her every command with vicious efficiency. Problem is that she cannot do any other jutsu while this one is in place.

Story: Shortly after the sealing of the 2 bijuu, Hana was proclaimed a saint, a defender of Kumogakure by the priests. As such she was raised by the current Raikage's family (separated from her brother). She was also a prodigy and was declared an ANBU member at the age of 8 because of her control over her powers as a Jinchuuriki. Sadly her first assasination mission was to torture and kill her own brother (whom she had forgotten over the years). As she was handed a katana to cut off the boy's head, the boy unleashed a devastating power, one that was even greater than her own. He ran towards the gate and jumped off the mountain peak where the village was located. Presumed dead, her mission was declared a succes and was promoted to jonin. Over the years she enjoyed the luxary of being the supposed "saint" until she received news that the target that escaped those years ago is coming back, and this time he was not alone...

(Well that about wraps up her story. Can anyone guess who Zaigou is going to be visiting with?)
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Old 2006-04-15, 19:16   Link #22
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Well ... it's not really a character or jutsu this time, but rather a story I might draw.


Clickable, 1.2Mbytes

I might add a branch of a sakura tree on the frame with bridge, in the right bottom.
No textballoon yet... but I had this kind of story in mind.

Naruto's (PTS) nights are being haunted by Kyuubi. In fact, Kyuubi found a way to weaken Naruto, by driving his mind into a corner, intending to kill him. This weakens the seal little by little. After Kyuubi is about to attack Naruto, he wakes up, breathing heavily, soaked with sweat. The rest of the night he cannot sleep anymore, just laying there wondering why this happens.
Because of that, Naruto has a bad mood, feels not so well and it gets worse every week.

Now it came to the point where instead of being the number one most noisy ninja in the morning, impatiently awaiting Kakashi and a new mission, he just stumbles to the rendez-vous point at the bridge, with his eyes almost closed, having a sad look.

Sakura and Sasuke are already waiting and think Naruto just overslept, until they see him. They're like shocked when they see him.
Sakura asks if everything is ok. Sasuke for some reason gets annoyed by seeing him like that. Naruto makes a fake smile and says it's nothing and that he's just a little tired.

That's it for page 1

I think that for page 2, I'm gonna make Kakashi come in late as usual, giving a lame excuse, but instead of Naruto and Sakura yelling at him, Naruto keeps silent.
Kakashi raises an eyebrow and says they get a day off.
Sakura asks if Sasuke wants to do something with her, but he rejects the offer and Sakura and Kakashi leave. Sasuke stays behind and asks Naruto again what's wrong with him. After Naruto keeps silent, he hits him in the face, making Naruto fall on the ground... with tears in his eyes.

Page 3 (I guess). Sasuke helps him up and they go to the park, where Naruto tells him about Kyuubi. After Naruto got over with it, Sasuke walk him home and runs straight to Tsunade's office. Kakashi and Sakura are there too, but when he tells what Naruto said, Tsunade understands what going on.

Guess it's more that 1 page for each paragraph :s
Anyway, I'll continue.

Tsunade wants to play it safe and orders an ANBU team to guard Naruto's appartment during the night. Kyuubi manifests himself once more, but this time one mark of Naruto's seal dissappears. Kyuubi makes Naruto go out and kill the ANBU members stationed before his door. When they're dead, he gets back in and drop on the floor, covered with their blood, sleeping soundly as if nothing happened.

The next morning, the ANBU team to take the new shift find the corpses, enter Naruto's appartment and 'arrests' him. Poor Naruto doesn't understand and is shocked with all the blood on his PJ and on the ground. They cuf him up with some kind of seal and bring him to the basement of the Hokage building, where he gets locked onto a bed.

Tsunade and Kakashi enter the room as she wants to have a look at the damage on the seal. Naruto just lies there, crying.
When Tsunade examines the seal, they see a second mark disappear.
The moment it's gone, they feel an terrible intent to kill... Naruto didn't do it on purpose, but little by little Kyuubi takes over his mind and body.
With the red chakra, Naruto melts the belts keeping him restrained in the bed, followed by a mini chakra shockwave, cracking the walls and blowing Tsunade, Kakashi and the ANBU guards violently away. Naruto escapes and runs back to his appartment.

While running, he encounters Sasuke, who sees Naruto covered with blood and grabs his arm. Naruto stop... looks enraged at Sasuke, burning his hand were he hold Naruto. Naruto gives him a powerful blow on the chest, almost breaking ribs and continues on his way home.

At home, he changes into his orange jumpsuit, gathers his weapons, explosive tags etc. Fills his backpack too and writes a little note he leaves on the table, saying he has to leave Konoha because he has the feeling something really bad is going to happen.
Naruto doesn't even care to take his favourite cupramen with him.

On the way out of Konoha, he goes by Sakura's house, sitting on a electrical pole, watching her sleep soundly. He turns his head away with a tear rolling over his cheek and leaves Konoha.

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Haven't thought about the rest yet. What do you think about the drawing and about this story?
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Old 2006-04-15, 19:30   Link #23
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A wielder of this bloodline limit I thought of has a strong affinity to the elements, but is only able to seperate elements from one another, destroying life or any creation of nature.
He or she will have access to devastating and chakra-effective elemental techniques. Such as..

Elemental Purification Technique (Gogyou Jouka no Jutsu?)
Activated at will, the user's touch causes the elements composing the target break all bonds with eachother. The process is gradual, but even a short contact weakens the target's structure. The more chakra a target holds, the longer will it take to break down.
As the user's mastery increases, this technique will have more and more uses. An advanced ninja could absorb fire by seperating it from the oxygen that feeds it.
The immeadiate effect of using this on a person would cause mental and physical sluggishness. If prolonged, water would invade the target's lungs, drowning him or her. Eventually, the victim would dissolve completely.
These ninja's touch can reduce trees into piles of ashes.

Elemental Void Technique (Gogyou Garandou no Jutsu?)
This advanced technique requires a complex handseal sequence, after which the caster can, with a point of a hand, evoke a sector where for as long as the technique can be channeled, nothing is allowed to exist. The result is a massive wave of destruction as all matter, from air and rock to blood and flesh, is propelled outwards from the sector.
This technique is chakra-intensive, and requires a great level of mastery lest the users be blown away themselves.
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Old 2006-04-15, 19:46   Link #24
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That's it for now ^^'
Haven't thought about the rest yet. What do you think about the drawing and about this story?
-Oh my God, that is simply amazing . Wish I had such creative ideas but sadly I do not (curse you TV and low I.Q scores, GRRRRR). Please continue since I'm already hooked on what you already have.
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Old 2006-04-16, 00:03   Link #25
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LOL! speechless!! LOL

@syaoran I can give ya a few ideas if ya like to see if you can keep on going (it is rude to take someone else's story and keep it going, but it is helpfull to give ideas to the writer so he can feel insipired )

Now to continue with my characters history: (in case u don't like my character I can't leave things unfinished so don't worry i'll try and finish this now).

After kakashi suggesting Nakashima Taiki to become a hunternin, he went to become the most feared of them all at the village hidden in the leaves. Every other ninja in Konoha chose to leave him alone and not associate with him, for all the missing nins he has killed, and stories of how brutally he is in order to accomplish his missions. The one story that made Konoha almost hate him, was when he alone attacked a village where there was a missing nin living at. It was said that the missingnin had given himself up, and wanted to return to Konoha, but Nakashima didn't want to return and be considered a weakling for showing mercy, and deciding to bring back his target alive. Before he managed to kill the missing nin in one of the small countries near the borders of Konoha, ninja from that village decided to step in. Nakashima warned them that before they messed with matters that didn't concern him that they would not succeed in killing him. Even with the warning, the weaklings from the village attacked one of the best hunternins from the village hidden in the leaves. Nakashima worked alone for a good reason, he was cursed to lose all of his teamates in all of his missions, or so it was believed. Nakashima threw one of his new bombs made by himself, hoping to only stun the ninja's, kill his target and return without causing trouble. Only problem with this, was that he must of mixed something wrong when he made that bombs, for the entire village went up in smoke. Napalm came out of the bomb, creating flames that didn't wash away with water. He brought an entire village down, along with 3/4 of the villagers, and all of his targets. For his rotten luck, he was unharmed since his kekei genkai also created walls of Iron around him whenever he needed. He though that his shield would of blocked him from the stun, instead it blocked him and the villagers that lived from the blast and flames.
Nakashima returned at full speed to Konoha to give the news to the third hokage, to be told that what happened during his mission was only a small problem in his mind at the moment. When Nakashima returned Itachi had killed almost everyone from his clan except for sasuke. Due to fear by the third hokage of Itachi returning, and killing sasuke, he put Nakashima as his body guad as punishment. A more severe one will come afterwards, but at the time the hokage was too sad to think of some type of punishment for Nakashima.
News of Nakashima being the bodyguard of sasuke at the hospital due to the MS sharingan spread to the families that were friends with the Uchiha clan. Due to the fear that the villagers had towards Nakashima nobody visited Sasuke in his entire stay in the hospital. For exception of the hokage and Kakashi who went to talk to Nakashima upon his actions on his last mission. Nakashima admired Kakashi and would do whatever he asked of him, well almost whatever. By the end of the day Nakashima had a decision to make: To either be prosecuted as a criminal for disobeying his orders as a hunternin, or to become sasuke's shadow untill told otherwise. So Nakashima became very closely Sasuke's only friend and shadow. Ever since Sasuke had left the hospital and lived in his house all alone, Nakashima was there. He would escort him from far to the academy and back. Untill Sasuke one day bursted into tears and told Nakashima to go to leave him alone, that he hates him and that he reminds him of Itachi. In response Nakashima asked two questions to sasuke:
Nakashima: Do you hate your brother?
Sasuke: *sob sob* Yes with all my heart *sob*
Nakashima: Do you want to be strong?
Sasuke: YES! that way I can avenge father and mother and kill HIM!
Nakashima: If you let me, I will help you, but with one condition.
Sasuke: *stoping to cry* what is it
Nakashima: You must never cry again, for the strong don't cry no matter the pain on their bodies or hearts, and as such you will become as cold as ice, and as strong as Iron.

A year passed after this, and Nakashima grew weaker and more attached to Sasuke, while on the other hand Sasuke stopped caring about everything and everyone, and his only concern was to become stronger. And as promised the third hokage came to Nakashima and told him, that he had been punished enough, and that he didn't have to guard sasuke anymore. And that if he wanted he could be made into a jounin. But Nakashima refused and decided to stay as a hunternin. Even though Nakashima's strength is near the kage level, his jutsu isn't and even less his self control. Upon his last mission as a hunternin, he was sent after Itachi. Which Nakashima did catch up to, but soon afterwards he wasn't heard from again. It was believed that had been defeated by Itachi, untill a year later he appeared back at konoha removed from his headgear, and showing his clans symbol, instead of konoha. Upon his return, he was asked why didn't he return sooner, and where had he been, and what had happened to him. But it wasn't untill he spoke to the third that he gave up all everything that had happened. When he caught up to Itachi, he was in the hidden mist village. To avoid starting a war, and a conflict that might make the village hidden in the mist think that konoha is at war with them, he waited nearby for a chance to catch Itachi off-guard. But he was captured by hidden mist jounins instead. Nakashima told the ninja, that he was from konoha on a mission to kill a missing nin, that they had to not interfere. Right when they were going to let Nakashima go away, one of the senior Jounin saw the taiki clans emblem on his right arm. As soon as he saw this, he asked with desperation what Nakashima's full name was, and when he said Nakashima Taiki, the jounin tried to kill Nakashima. He told Nakashima he was one of the ninja in the mission that killed his entire family. And that untill Nakashima died that mission is still considered a failure. By hearing this, Nakashima kills the jounin using his katan in a flash, where the other jounin that was watching didn't even see the sword blow. As soon as this happens, the jounin starts doing symbols for the 水刑務所の技術 (water prison jutsu), Nakashima being a good hidden mist decendant, uses a water jutsu, which was 水ドラゴンの技術 (water dragon jutsu). With both jounins dead, Nakashima went to where once stood his clans home. Frustrated with the lies of his childhood, been told that his parents where killed in the last war, and him fighting for konoha all this time when he isn't even one of their own, he decides to remove his protector, and any symbols from konoha, and give up the chase after Itachi. And as a good tracker, he tracks down all of the ninja that were involved in the annihalation of his clan. And as such one after the other fell, including ninja's from other villages and he started to steal their secrets. Nakashima now had jutsu's from all of the most important villages in the land, from the village hidden in the clouds, from the village hidden in the sand, and the village hidden among the stones. And once his revenge was finished, he decided to return to the one place he called home, Konoha. Believing that other hunternins might be after him, since for sure he must be considered a missingnin at the moment, he was very carefull in hiding who he was, and covered his tracks everywhere. After 7 months that Nakashima headed out to kill Itachi, Nakashima returns to Konoha without any head protector, and with the spilled blood of his enemies. As soon as he finishes telling the story to the third hokage, he tells him that he no longer can be considered part of konoha and that he knew this. Or that he can return to the land of water. So to bragain his staying in Konoha, the one place he has ever called home, he asks the third to consider him the first of his kind, the first の傭兵 (mercenary). He would work for Konoha, and that he would perform any type of mission, and that he would do it without any fear of konoha ever been caught or told that they send ninja's to invade other lands. (ok im out of fresh ideas ill come up with sum tmrw lol)
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Old 2006-04-16, 16:17   Link #26
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I attempted making page 2 today...

Screwed up on the 6th frame ^^'
Should represent Kakashi vanishing and Sakura running back into town.
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Old 2006-04-16, 17:58   Link #27
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alright here's my character.
name: suzume kai
name meaning:suzume=suzumebachi which means wasp, kai means sea or water.
village: hidden mist
rank:[upper] chuunin
personallity:a mix of shino and naruto
background story: he is the suzume clan heir. the suzume clan is a bug clan like the aburame and kamizuru clans only the suzume clan uses wasp. like the aburame clan the suzume clan has their bugs in their body, only the suzume clan has has 7 "nest" instead of the member's whole body like the aburame clan. 2 nest are in the right arm,4 nest are in the back, and the last on is in the left arm.the suzume clan cover the "nest". kai is considered a higher level of genius, he is also one of the smartest nins in the hidden mist. he wears his forehead protecter on his left knee, he feels it improves his taijutsu a little and it does.he dislikes the hidden sound , people who fawn over the cool guys, the uchina clan since he feels it's over rated, and mising nins from any village. if you think he looks like shino, you'd be surprised.

i'll try to get a picture up.

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Old 2006-04-17, 16:57   Link #28
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I would take the genetic materials of The Fourth (demon counter moves) The Sharingan clan (copy all jutsu's) the Hyuuga clan (360 degree view plus see chakra points) also give them the skeleton of adamantium and spidersense and the regeneration skills of the Borg plus they can go into like Supersaiyen level like open gates and crap like becoming more stronger and have control of the elements like sub-zero and firestar and massive body armor like spawn with chains combined like scorpion and they have Ha-Do-Ken even more powerful then Rasengan or Chidori
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Old 2006-04-17, 17:00   Link #29
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I would take the genetic materials of The Fourth (demon counter moves) The Sharingan clan (copy all jutsu's) the Hyuuga clan (360 degree view plus see chakra points) also give them the skeleton of adamantium and spidersense and the regeneration skills of the Borg plus they can go into like Supersaiyen level like open gates and crap like becoming more stronger and have control of the elements like sub-zero and firestar and massive body armor like spawn with chains combined like scorpion and they have Ha-Do-Ken even more powerful then Rasengan or Chidori
U forgot the cherry on top of this characters head and that he/she is gay
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Old 2006-04-17, 17:07   Link #30
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U forgot the cherry on top of this characters head and that he/she is gay
-You forgot to mention the sign he'd have to carry: "Too gay to function". No offence Uberdork but if that character came to be he'd be too unstable, not to mention he'd cause timewarps all over due to his make-up (abilities of all the beings that he has).
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Old 2006-04-17, 17:10   Link #31
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In middle of fights he would be too confused to know what to do ... while he is screaming like a girl to turn supersayin, one of the ninja's already made a jutsu to cook him into a crispy yellow haired bizarre ninja ... not too smart.
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Old 2006-04-18, 01:39   Link #32
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Continuation of my characters history:

Sarutobi not sure of what to think about Nakashima Taiki, tells him that he will think about it, but that meanwhile he should wait for his response at his home in Konoha. Of course following the wise Hokage's suggestion he goes home and waits patiently for Sarutobi's answer. Not knowing what to expect from his answer though, he is in full battlegear and ready to leave at the first sign of trouble. While Nakashima waited waited for Sarutobi's response about a mercenary ninja, someone who has no allegiance to any village and is willing to get payed off, is a dangerous weapon to both have or use. But since he knew Nakashima since he was a young child, he is willing to give the reason of the doubt, as long as Kakashi the one who has been like a brother to him agrees to it.
Kakashi knowing that it is a dangerous game that the hokage is playing in leaving a double edge sword in Konoha, decides to leave Nakashima as a mercenary, but who must work with ninja's from Konoha on every mission.
Sarutobi convinced that Kakashi is been very cautious about Nakashima's presence knowing that he is a very powefull ninja asks Kakashi if he knew of any ninja's that would willingly work with the feared hunternin Nakashima Taiki.
With great pain and almost anguish Kakashi responds to Sarutobi with a sorrowfull no. Both Kakashi and Sarutobi, along with an ANBU team go to Nakashima's abode, to speak with him upon sarutobi's resolve.
Sarutobi now serious about the matter at hand gives Nakashima 2 choices. He either returns to Konoha as a ninja of Konoha, or leaves the village to never return, but who's services might be called upon someday of need.
Nakashima unsure about what his next move should be, asks for 24 hours in order to come up with his answer.
Sarutobi being the nice guy he is, lets him have his 24 hours, with an ANBU team nearby of course.

Nakashima that day walking around in the village, looks upon the villagers, and sees eyes of hatred and fear. But for once not only directed towards him, but also towards a young boy of yellow hair. Unkown to Nakashima what the reason is for such eyes of hatred towards such a young child, Nakashima approuches the kid.
Nakashima: Hey kid what is you name?
Naruto: Me? ... I am Naruto ... Naruto Uzumaki.
Nakashima: *looking into the expression of hope in this kids face for contact with someone else* I have a question for you, and depending upon your answer, I will give you a prize.
Naruto: *puppy dog eyes* really? thank you mister, what is it? what is it? what is it? what's the question?
Nakashima: If someone doesn't like you, what do you do?
Naruto: ... *thinking* ... I just don't talk to them, or leave. *looks at nakashima's face*
Nakashima: I see ...
Naruto: Well did i win your prize?
Nakashima: Yes you did, and I will give you a bit extra for you being such an honest boy.
Naruto: *eyes widened* WHAT?? WHAT I WIN? WHAT I WIN??? ...
Nakashima: Just follow me.
They walk for a while untill they reach a ramen shop (where naruto eats in konoha all the time).
This is your prize. *hands bowl of ramen to naruto*
Naruto as the hungry pit without bottom that he is, eats it and another bowl as well. Soon after Naruto was done eating, Nakashima told Naruto one thing, that if he became hokage, he can change all those faces that show fear and anger, into loving and peacefull faces. as long as he never gave up and fought for what he believed in.

Nakashima later that day meets up with Sarutobi, and tell him that he chooses to leave Konoha. He isn't liked in the village, and he knows it. But he also tells sarutobi that even if he was born in the village hidden in the mist, that Konoha shall forever be his one true home. And that if Konoha ever needs of someone to help it against its enemies, that he was always there to help, since this is his home. The next day Nakashima leaves Konoha for good, but he is erased from the books as a missingnin. Instead he is written as possible ally.
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Old 2006-04-18, 20:17   Link #33
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Lmao, First you Start with Chidori on one hand, and Then rasengan.. Then using Chakra to form them together. Thus creating rasendori, Utter and complete destruction, muahaha xD

EDIT: Do Chidori first XD, because you need seals, and Rasengan.. do that last. Quite Possible


And yet another one, Alike Sharingan, This is another blood-line limit, From the Shikamaru Clan.. < Lmao
Yes.. Its an eye, that is normally red, and it turns pitch black when you use it, causing ANYONE to see it to be immediatly plunged into darkness and Fear thus immobilizing him. Which leads to another one of my techniques. You multiply Kunais and you control the masssive amounts of Kunai with your Chakra, and Confusing the victim, BECAUSE the Kunais are fake, and The Kunais Shadows are the ones that are dealing real damage. Using that with the Eye technique above, Ha! xD Total Pownage from Shikamaru's Clan xDD
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Old 2006-04-21, 14:30   Link #34
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I haven't proceeded on my story nor on the drawing... I tried to improve them instead.
Tonight I came up with this:
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I like this one more than first one. Kyuubi looks more threatening and Naruto on the other side ... well ... dunno ... It's prettier that way.
I think I'm gonna try doing page one like that. There'll be less on the page, but if I manage to get it right, it will be a lot nicer that previous version.

I feel like hi-jacking a thread to say this >_<
Gomen...
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Old 2006-04-21, 15:18   Link #35
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I haven't proceeded on my story nor on the drawing... I tried to improve them instead.
Tonight I came up with this:
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I like this one more than first one. Kyuubi looks more threatening and Naruto on the other side ... well ... dunno ... It's prettier that way.
I think I'm gonna try doing page one like that. There'll be less on the page, but if I manage to get it right, it will be a lot nicer that previous version.

I feel like hi-jacking a thread to say this >_<
Gomen...
Cute fox?? wait that was kyubi?? it looked like kiba's little dog playing with naruto (naruto just looking into the emptiness of the world saying why am I being pestered by such an annoying little doggy) ^_^

Sry I had to say it Syaoran I can't draw so I gotta commend you for your boldness on trying and practicing.
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Old 2006-04-22, 08:52   Link #36
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U forgot the cherry on top of this characters head and that he/she is gay

ow sorry i didn't knew you where gay and have a cherry on you head
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Old 2006-04-22, 09:46   Link #37
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ok, you said original, so here we go :

Jutsu : ultra hentai no jutsu
type: doujutsu, genjutsu
effect : while making eye contact, this badass doujutsu gives a powerfull orgasm that paralyses the victim. Only works on females fortunately.
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Old 2006-04-22, 13:02   Link #38
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ow sorry i didn't knew you where gay and have a cherry on you head
Yes I am a happy person (in the dictionary gay means happy so yes I am happy about watching naruto : / ), and no I don't wear cherries on top of my head. Only dorks do that : / so the one you wear since ur an uberdork must be pretty damn big.

@ Sharingard ok you forgot one thing dude chicks can have mutliple orgasms and still beat ur ass -_- u better hope that they don't catch you with ur pants down for using the jutsu, cuz who knows what they might get a chance to CUT off!
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Old 2006-04-23, 05:42   Link #39
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Yes I am a happy person (in the dictionary gay means happy so yes I am happy about watching naruto : / ), and no I don't wear cherries on top of my head. Only dorks do that : / so the one you wear since ur an uberdork must be pretty damn big.

@ Sharingard ok you forgot one thing dude chicks can have mutliple orgasms and still beat ur ass -_- u better hope that they don't catch you with ur pants down for using the jutsu, cuz who knows what they might get a chance to CUT off!

hope you happy
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Old 2006-04-23, 11:13   Link #40
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Not while fillers are on
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