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Li Jianliang · 2006-05-12, 02:44

Okay, maybe it will be a webcomic since I've done two strips, and I haven't graduated from high school...yet. XDD But yeah, I hang out with cool geeks/otakus who cause the weirdest ruckus at school.

Please comment & critique! ^^;;

May 11th: One of my friends, Karma, attempts to get enough signatures on a petition to make another friend the sophomore class president.

May 12th: I don't understand nerds. Geeks, yes, but nerds? No.

May 13th: The infamous community service assignment from Shimei's 8th grade.

May 15th: There is a guy renowned schoolwide for his sleeping skillz in class... Okay, this strip did not turn out as good as I wanted. What went wrong? I can kind of feel it, but not really pinpoint the exact problems. Help!

May 16th: I think this strip turned out better than the last one, even though they share the same joke.

May 18th: Someone(s) from another forum advised that pictures should tell more of the story than the dialogue, so I did my best and experimented with a bigger panel and paying more attention to line weights.

May 25th: Not much improvement. In continuation from strip #1 (?), we finally see what the sophomore prez candidate, Yichen, looks like, and how much the upperclassmen adore him.

laphingman · 2006-05-15, 07:47

very funny keep them comeing

Diaboso · 2006-05-15, 07:52

you know thats scary...... it reminds me of me and my freinds....... I KNEW IT THERES VIDIO CAMS EVERYWHERE AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!

good work I look forward to more.

Kiva128 · 2006-05-15, 15:43

lol those are awesome. I like them both.

Go Yichen! WOOO!

Reminds me of those azumanga daiou comics. Good stuff!

Li Jianliang · 2006-05-16, 23:27

Thanks! ^_^

This is the first webcomic that I've actually maintained for more than 3 days. Please be picky and just point out whatever can be better (and why) so that I can improve on those areas and bring better strips for people to read in the future.

I'm going to start trying new panel sizes with the next strip to achieve better visual effects...

Diaboso · 2006-05-18, 10:27

Ok the sleeping guy is just like my freind in math class but the teacher uses chak erasers.

I will say it again these are great and......you must be spying on us

RedSorceress · 2006-05-19, 13:19

Yah! The math class one is funny. I think everyone can relate. Keep up the good work.

raphaël · 2006-05-21, 01:07

Sorry if I sound rude, but those don't especially made me laugh. Your drawing style is indeed very cool but I feel like I've already read those strips many times.
Anyway, I think you noticed that yourself. I guess creating short strips is a real art. Yet, the last one with the wig is closer to what i'd call a good one, imho.

Needless to ask you to keep them coming though.

Slacker · 2006-05-21, 11:26

hmm ..spontaneous awesomeness - that how you should call your thread
they re all spontaneously awesome and funny but i didn t get the last one .. although that s spontaneously awesome or partialy spontaneously awesome in the very least ...keep em coming^_^

2006-05-12, 02:44	Link #1
Li Jianliang This is my ____ face Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: In front of my laptop Age: 25	Daily Life Webcomic: Updated 5/18 Okay, maybe it will be a webcomic since I've done two strips, and I haven't graduated from high school...yet. XDD But yeah, I hang out with cool geeks/otakus who cause the weirdest ruckus at school. Please comment & critique! ^^;; May 11th: One of my friends, Karma, attempts to get enough signatures on a petition to make another friend the sophomore class president. May 12th: I don't understand nerds. Geeks, yes, but nerds? No. May 13th: The infamous community service assignment from Shimei's 8th grade. May 15th: There is a guy renowned schoolwide for his sleeping skillz in class... Okay, this strip did not turn out as good as I wanted. What went wrong? I can kind of feel it, but not really pinpoint the exact problems. Help! May 16th: I think this strip turned out better than the last one, even though they share the same joke. May 18th: Someone(s) from another forum advised that pictures should tell more of the story than the dialogue, so I did my best and experimented with a bigger panel and paying more attention to line weights. May 25th: Not much improvement. In continuation from strip #1 (?), we finally see what the sophomore prez candidate, Yichen, looks like, and how much the upperclassmen adore him. __________________ Umineko no Naku Koro ni Chiru episode 5: End of the golden witch Translations & summaries & a billion screenshots Part I \| Part II \| Part III \| Part IV \| Part V \| Part VI \| Part VII \| Part VIII \| Part IX \| Part X \| Part XI \| Part XII In progress Umineko no Naku Koro ni Chiru episode 6: Dawn of the golden witch Translations & summaries & screenshots Part I \| Part II In progress Last edited by Li Jianliang; 2006-05-27 at 16:13.

2006-05-15, 07:52	Link #3
Diaboso we girls arnt safe! Artist Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: In the space between your walls Age: 25	you know thats scary...... it reminds me of me and my freinds....... I KNEW IT THERES VIDIO CAMS EVERYWHERE AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!! good work I look forward to more. __________________ credit to Neaco

2006-05-15, 15:43	Link #4
Kiva128 Kairin-chan's #1 Fan Artist Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: Canada	lol those are awesome. I like them both. Go Yichen! WOOO! Reminds me of those azumanga daiou comics. Good stuff! __________________ My New Site http://www.azuremidnight.com Summer Kairin Drawing! http://forums.animesuki.com/showthre...44#post3086844

2006-05-16, 23:27	Link #5
Li Jianliang This is my ____ face Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: In front of my laptop Age: 25	... Thanks! ^_^ This is the first webcomic that I've actually maintained for more than 3 days. Please be picky and just point out whatever can be better (and why) so that I can improve on those areas and bring better strips for people to read in the future. I'm going to start trying new panel sizes with the next strip to achieve better visual effects... __________________ Umineko no Naku Koro ni Chiru episode 5: End of the golden witch Translations & summaries & a billion screenshots Part I \| Part II \| Part III \| Part IV \| Part V \| Part VI \| Part VII \| Part VIII \| Part IX \| Part X \| Part XI \| Part XII In progress Umineko no Naku Koro ni Chiru episode 6: Dawn of the golden witch Translations & summaries & screenshots Part I \| Part II In progress

2006-05-18, 10:27	Link #6
Diaboso we girls arnt safe! Artist Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: In the space between your walls Age: 25	Ok the sleeping guy is just like my freind in math class but the teacher uses chak erasers. I will say it again these are great and......you must be spying on us __________________ credit to Neaco

2006-05-15, 07:47	Link #2
laphingman Story writer for hire Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: In Texas	very funny keep them comeing

2006-05-19, 13:19	Link #7
RedSorceress Junior Member Join Date: Apr 2006	Yah! The math class one is funny. I think everyone can relate. Keep up the good work.

2006-05-21, 01:07	Link #8
raphaël trainee archangel Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: actually quite close to Jim Morrison Age: 31	Sorry if I sound rude, but those don't especially made me laugh. Your drawing style is indeed very cool but I feel like I've already read those strips many times. Anyway, I think you noticed that yourself. I guess creating short strips is a real art. Yet, the last one with the wig is closer to what i'd call a good one, imho. Needless to ask you to keep them coming though. __________________ YOU USED TO BE ALRIGHT, WHAT HAPPENED? and my literary blog, in french : www.pourlamaingauche.net

2006-05-21, 11:26	Link #9
Slacker Junior Member Join Date: May 2006	hmm ..spontaneous awesomeness - that how you should call your thread they re all spontaneously awesome and funny but i didn t get the last one .. although that s spontaneously awesome or partialy spontaneously awesome in the very least ...keep em coming^_^