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Old 2008-10-22, 18:13   Link #17581
Ararara-ra
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Spoiler for Possible mistakes:

Someone should proofread my own "proofreading". I'm kind of a comma-holic. That, and I've only completed grade ten English, lol....
Thank you for your close notes
I took note of all of that.

I had some people online to proofread it for me real quick but as I lack of a team and I am a one-person group any kind of input is appreciated


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I'm sorry to bother you,

Spoiler:
Spoiler for Thank you JINNSK~:


Wah wah wah, thanks a lot for the corrections and suggestions


EDIT:

A little something I made to see if I could make everybody laugh
Spoiler for scene:
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Old 2008-10-22, 18:20   Link #17582
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Yes, yes you did.

Nanoha/Teana, Nanoha/Subaru or Teana/Subaru...

Decisions, decisions, decisions.
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Old 2008-10-22, 18:24   Link #17583
Vivio Testarossa
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Rapidshares for the two doujins I posted earlier:

http://rapidshare.com/files/15659370...Nanoha_PV6.zip
http://rapidshare.com/files/15661660...Nanoha_PV7.zip



Spoiler for [GRINP] Lyrical Bonus!!!!!:


Spoiler for [Kohakunosima] O Yakusoku wa Zettai! Muteki Nano~:


Spoiler for [Kikakugai.Extend] Fate Out of Standard:


Spoiler for [Briest] LMR 02 (Somewhat NSFW?):


Spoiler for [Upagoya Endori] Nanoha Standby Ready Clock Up! (Again a little ecchi):


An english? translation of Magical SEED Soushuuhen X is on 4chan's /rs/ board.
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Old 2008-10-22, 19:16   Link #17584
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Originally Posted by Ararara-ra View Post
Thank you for your close notes
I took note of all of that.

I had some people online to proofread it for me real quick but as I lack of a team and I am a one-person group any kind of input is appreciated




Spoiler for Thank you JINNSK~:


Wah wah wah, thanks a lot for the corrections and suggestions


EDIT:

A little something I made to see if I could make everybody laugh
Spoiler for scene:
I forgot the following in my previous post.
お疲れ様です、頑張ってください
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Old 2008-10-22, 19:50   Link #17585
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it's just a poem, so it's not that easy to translate. This was made by our dear doujinshi editor and fanfic writer naymco (who also redrew hazukashikunai no ga koi) for a thread in our forums that is for role playing as canon nanoha characters (the thread is fun because now everyone is 'rolling' their chracters in the whole forum xd). Our fate is marrying our nanoha soon, so she drew it for the occasion, and maybe the poem is for her votes...? We'll have to wait until the weeding to know ^^

also is hard for me to translate from spanish to english, but i'll give it a try if you want (but i can guarantee that it will sound weird, and some sentences would have to be reworded )



if i were an angel
i would fly to you
forever
i would do it
i would do anything
to be by your side
i would do
the impossible
to hold your hand
you are my life
my destiny, my day by day.
You are
what i dream
what i yearn.
I need you,
like flowers and the waters
drops in a umbrella
heart in a soul
i feel that way
i feel something beautiful
i have a feeling and tell you
i tell and repeat
that i just...
Fell in love with you.


done.
I think it sounded better in spanish, but anyway i'll be pleased if someone tells me what should be corrected (grammar, wording, spelling). It's mainly because i had some problems translating this and i want to know where are any mistakes.

Cuídense y sigan sorniendo

creo que tu traduccion esta excelente, totalmente de acuerdo, esta mejor en español que en ingles!!!!!!! Tiene mas sentimiento

gracias,
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Old 2008-10-22, 19:53   Link #17586
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Thanks, VT! I appreciate it~

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Spoiler for [Upagoya Endori] Nanoha Standby Ready Clock Up! (Again a little ecchi):
LOL. I'm... not quite sure if I should consider that Fate/Signum or not. I'd just about kill for some actual fatenum at this point. D:
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Old 2008-10-22, 20:13   Link #17587
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Thanks, VT! I appreciate it~



LOL. I'm... not quite sure if I should consider that Fate/Signum or not. I'd just about kill for some actual fatenum at this point. D:
Will dokupan translate?
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Old 2008-10-22, 20:58   Link #17588
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Will dokupan translate?
dokupan has some serious conjunctivitis at the moment and she wont be translating a thing until that's all cleared up.

After that, who knows? It'll all depend on my mood. :>

Although there's a good chance I'll be working on a certain doujin that a certain someone sent me before I do anything else.
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Old 2008-10-22, 22:56   Link #17589
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Nanoha, Rise of Techno - Union, chapter 13


Spoiler for Intro:


Spoiler for Preview:


Full download link:

http://rapidshare.com/files/15667327...peror.zip.html

Enjoy!

PD: 2 chapters more to go
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Old 2008-10-22, 23:06   Link #17590
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Dont think this Doujin was ever posted:
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Dont remember were I got it
I also don't Know who Translated it, But all credit goes Him/her/it
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Old 2008-10-22, 23:13   Link #17591
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Dont think this Doujin was ever posted:
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Dont remember were I got it
I also don't Know who Translated it, But all credit goes Him/her/it
I think Salary Man (or was it dokupan?), may have done that one...

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Old 2008-10-23, 00:03   Link #17592
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I think Salary Man (or was it dokupan?), may have done that one...
I just got this sudden urge to go weep in a corner.

WHERE OUR CREDIT PAGE IS? D<
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Old 2008-10-23, 00:19   Link #17593
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I just got this sudden urge to go weep in a corner.

WHERE OUR CREDIT PAGE IS? D<
Who edited it again? LVD? Which page were they translated on? I don't seem to have this doujin in my "master file".
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Old 2008-10-23, 00:44   Link #17594
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http://spikewible.deviantart.com/art...of-M-101488347

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Old 2008-10-23, 01:32   Link #17595
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I think Salary Man (or was it dokupan?), may have done that one...
I don't recognize it, though.
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Old 2008-10-23, 01:38   Link #17596
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MASTER
rainbowsarepretty.


Okay, people. This here's that angstfest of doujin that I agreed to translate for some reason. It's quite possible I ended up rushing it itwasn'tonpurposeIswear!, so it's entirely my fault if it sounds retarded.

But at least raizoo made it look nice, yes? :V

@ Aforementioned individual: I AM. :<
Here would be the original post. Clearing up anything.
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Old 2008-10-23, 01:52   Link #17597
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You probably didn't notice because I was too busy working to scream "thank you thank you thank you" for translating it. <_<

A little late, but...

Thank you thank you thank you for translating it! It's such a heartwarming doujin.
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Old 2008-10-23, 07:53   Link #17598
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Heartwarming? How about highly depressing? Bad End for Nanoha = Comar doesn't like.
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Old 2008-10-23, 08:20   Link #17599
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It was heartwarming because it showed how much Nanoha cares for Vivio, for her to give Raising Heart, a partner whom she's never been separated from for years, is a little bit different from passing down any old thing.

And I'm a drama glutton, Nanoha doesn't die here so we get drama + heartwarming mother/daughter relationship. Win/win for me.
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Old 2008-10-23, 09:28   Link #17600
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Hmmm...did you draw this yourself? Because this is really nice.
Btw, who are the other girls there? I can only recognize Subaru and Cutie Honey (thanks for putting her in!).
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