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Old 2004-01-03, 01:46   Link #1
aahhsin
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Not actual FanArt.. but Writing is an Art....

Here's a Naruto FanFict I thought up after some Kakashi's death thread I read... Unless you watched/read Naruto, you probably won't understand....


Naruto : Sasuke!!!
Sasuke : (Looks at Naruto)........
Naruto : Sasuke!! HOW CAN YOU KILL YOUR MASTER LIKE THAT?! WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH YOU?!
Sasuke : I did what I had to, Naruto...
Naruto : What?
Sasuke : Naruto, your dream is to be come Hokage, and you had defeated everyone that got in your way.
Naruto : (Astonished Look)......
Sasuke : I mearly did the same thing... He got in my way. Naruto, you're the same as me. You would never allow anyone to get in your way of your dream. Your's becomming Hokage.. Mine is...
Naruto : Killing Itachi... reviving your clan...
Sasuke : Heh.. You remember... please understand Naruto... I had to kill Kakashi - Sensei to achieve my dream
Naruto : ..........................................
Sasuke : Naruto don't get in my way or you'll end up like Kakashi - Sensei.

Sasuke proceeds to walk away

Naruto : SASUKE!!!!
Sasuke : Hmmm?
Naruto : I.... I.... I.... Killed Itachi..... he's dead Sasuke... you can't get to him.... I'm sorry....
Sasuke : !!!!! You're Lying!!!
Kakashi : It's true.......uggghh..... Sasuke stop your meaningless attempt to find him... your dream has been accomplished.... come back and join the team.... uhhhgg...

Naruto : LET ME EXPLAIN!! Sakura's life was in .....
Sasuke : Y-Y-You shattered my dream... my dream.....
Naruto : Come back to us Sasuke, Sakura is waiting for you!
Sasuke : My dream....
Naruto : C'mon Sasuke!!! THERE WAS NOTHING I COULD HAVE DONE!

Sasuke : NARUTO YOU BASTARD!!! YOU DESTROYED MY DREAM!!! NOW I'LL DESTROY YOURS!!
Naruto : Waaahhh???
Sasuke : (Incredible speed and kicks Naruto in the face)
Naruto : Uhhh...
Sasuke : (Procedes to pound on Naruto, Naruto falls to the floor. Sasuke grabing one hand on Naruto's neck and the other charging Chidori, procedes to kill Naruto
Naruto : (Flashback of their friendship and past. Flashback about him telling everyone about his dream)
Naruto : (Kicks Sasuke and flips away) .... Sasuke... I never thought this would happen between us... but I'm going to bring you back!
Sasuke : Shut up and Die you loser!!!

Sasuke charges with Chidori on both hands, Naruto with Ransengan

Both : WAAAHHHH (Both go faster then Gui)

Kakashi : UHHHHHH!!!! (Takes all attacks)
Naruto & Sasuke : !!!!! (Astonished Looks)
Kakashi : Stop it both of you..... dying.... Sasuke snap out of it, your dream was flawed from the beginning. Naruto, never forsake your friendship for anything.... not even your dream.... this is my last lesson to both of you........

Sasuke : !!!!!!! Kakashi - Sensei
Naruto : K-K-Kakashi - Sensei.......

*Kakashi dies

End of that particualar Chapter.

How you guys like it?

Last edited by aahhsin; 2004-01-03 at 03:39.
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Old 2004-01-03, 06:50   Link #2
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lol! this could be a spin-off of naruto "naruto: the soap series" or something like that
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Old 2004-01-03, 07:06   Link #3
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Nah i dunno...
i don't really like it...
but it wasn't his dream...he just wanted to kill him...
err....makes no sence...and who is he charging?
Chidori??
isn't that from FMP??
hehhe...a crossover from Naruto to FMP.
Nah man...you are gonna have to work on that one some more.
heheh...whats next...Sagara comes charging down the hill with the arbalest....heheh

sry if i am a bit nasty but hey...thats just...like my oppinion man.
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Old 2004-01-03, 12:14   Link #4
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Originally Posted by Marshall Banana
Nah i dunno...
i don't really like it...
but it wasn't his dream...he just wanted to kill him...
err....makes no sence...and who is he charging?
Chidori??
isn't that from FMP??
hehhe...a crossover from Naruto to FMP.
Nah man...you are gonna have to work on that one some more.
heheh...whats next...Sagara comes charging down the hill with the arbalest....heheh

sry if i am a bit nasty but hey...thats just...like my oppinion man.
Chidori is the name of a skill in Naruto. It means 1000 birds. And is also known as raikiri or 'Lightning Edge'
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