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Old 2007-05-18, 02:32   Link #201
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Thanks for the feedbacks. Now I can take a break and decide on what to do on the final chapter. On the mean time, I'm almost done with Lyrical of Time, Chapter 1. It feels kind of weird, since it almost reflects StrikerS's episode 1-- oops, I said too much.
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Old 2007-05-18, 20:04   Link #202
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Thanks for the feedbacks. Now I can take a break and decide on what to do on the final chapter. On the mean time, I'm almost done with Lyrical of Time, Chapter 1. It feels kind of weird, since it almost reflects StrikerS's episode 1-- oops, I said too much.
Haha, Its okay. I really like the Sleeping Lyrical . One of the best parodys in FF.net
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Old 2007-05-21, 11:12   Link #203
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Sorry for double post, but a new chapter in Satashi's story came out today: TSAB Mobile force 6. Chapter 3
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Old 2007-05-23, 00:51   Link #204
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Not usually interested in Satashi's story, but I'll give it a shot.

Attention! Lyrical of Time is updated. Charter 01 is up for reading.
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Not usually interested in Satashi's story, but I'll give it a shot.

Attention! Lyrical of Time is updated. Charter 01 is up for reading.
Yay! Now this I'm gonna read. *Runs off to read fic*
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Old 2007-05-23, 18:03   Link #206
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Not usually interested in Satashi's story, but I'll give it a shot.

Attention! Lyrical of Time is updated. Charter 01 is up for reading.
Nice!!! Enfield sort of reminds me of Caro and Shin reminds me of Chrono which I really don't know why. More importantly Yuuno is in there and got 2 seconds of narration
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Old 2007-05-23, 20:43   Link #207
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Not usually interested in Satashi's story, but I'll give it a shot.

Attention! Lyrical of Time is updated. Charter 01 is up for reading.
Yay it's cool! And I see how it mirrors, but using Unlimited Blad- I mean, Midnight Carnival right off the bat came to me as a big surprise. Alexandra's characterization was another surprise because I was expecting a Saber type personality.

I know I'm old, and that should've been a Kamen Rider ref, but somehow "It's Morphin Time!" kicked in in my head instead.

Where's Yuuno, S_K? I didn't even read him being mentioned.

I've been thinking that Sophia might well be Alexandra's nemesis, if you see her appearance in the Nanoha CrosiS SS being broadcast in the OC thread and then catch the references... Luckily they're both on the same side.

Over all very good! Let's see where this goes next.
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Yay it's cool! And I see how it mirrors, but using Unlimited Blad- I mean, Midnight Carnival right off the bat came to me as a big surprise. Alexandra's characterization was another surprise because I was expecting a Saber type personality.

I know I'm old, and that should've been a Kamen Rider ref, but somehow "It's Morphin Time!" kicked in in my head instead.

Where's Yuuno, S_K? I didn't even read him being mentioned.

I've been thinking that Sophia might well be Alexandra's nemesis, if you see her appearance in the Nanoha CrosiS SS being broadcast in the OC thread and then catch the references... Luckily they're both on the same side.

Over all very good! Let's see where this goes next.
Yuuno is mentioned at the part where they talk about that kid(sorry dont know the name) and how he wants to play with somebody but the main character is unconscious(again I forgot the name)

And Kha, I'd like to know what is Nanoha Crosis SS????
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Old 2007-05-23, 21:15   Link #209
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And Kha, I'd like to know what is Nanoha Crosis SS????
That would be this post detailing the 21st Vs Necrons
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Old 2007-05-24, 09:55   Link #210
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Thought I try something myself (a crossover in fact), though it sort of takes the point of view of a character from the other series.

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Old 2007-05-24, 17:15   Link #211
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So until I manage to remember the password to my old FF.net account, I'll just post this on my Livejournal.

Caveats: the story is at chapter 1, untitled, and I'm not entirely happy with it. I'm willing to take suggestions for improvement, and definitely suggestions for titles. I've got the basic framework of the plot down, but I'm expecting to change it dramatically as new information in StrikerS is revealed.

Character profiles for Ivey, Rancer, Reiz, and Nova are here. I'm trying to write the story such that the profiles are not necessary, however.
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Old 2007-05-24, 21:44   Link #212
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Nanoha CrosyS: The Animesuki Sound Stage

For those who've been wondering what I meant about that CrosyS thing, here it is, a repost from the OC Thread:


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The OP

Spoiler for Destiny - Chiyo:
Text-based opening theme ficlets were one of my most daring but successful experiments in FF.net. But this was a remarkable challenge because of the sheer number of characters to consider. The chorus changes ever episode (There's that many OCs to feature) so even if they aren't in this one they'll be in the next, or the one after that.

I chose Destiny for its great beat. This video on j00t00b helped me get started. Hope you guys like it!

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Spoiler for Track 1 - Shadow on the Horizon:
Spoiler for Track 1.5 - Keroko‘s Warning:
Spoiler for Track 2 - Down by the Service...:
Spoiler for Track 3 - The Plot Thickens:
Spoiler for Track 4 - Report to Carim:
Released 9-6-2007
Spoiler for Track 5 - The 21st makes their moves:
Released 11-7-2007
Spoiler for Track 6 - A Surprise Visit:

I'll be posting future SS and associated media in this thread at this post so as to keep the OC thread on topic. I might turn this into a full fic someday, if I got time.
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Old 2007-05-24, 22:13   Link #213
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Awesome. I was actually going to ask about that; I managed to find episode 3 onwards of CrosyS, but not one and two.
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Old 2007-05-25, 06:23   Link #214
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For those who've been wondering what I meant about that CrosyS thing, here it is, a repost from the OC Thread:

Spoiler for Track 1 - Shadow on the Horizon:
Spoiler for Track 1.5 - Keroko‘s Warning:
Spoiler for Track 2 - Down by the Service...:
Spoiler for Track 3 - The Plot Thickens:
Spoiler for Track 4 - Report to Carim:


I'll be posting future SS in this thread so as to keep the OC thread on topic. I might turn this into a full fic someday, if I got time.

@others: Sorry I gtg uni now. I'll review them later alright?
Just wondering, where is this OC thread??? Keep going with it I like it!
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Just wondering, where is this OC thread??? Keep going with it I like it!
That would be the Character Creation and Interaction Thread here on the forums.
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Old 2007-05-25, 22:58   Link #216
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Nice!!! Enfield sort of reminds me of Caro and Shin reminds me of Chrono which I really don't know why. More importantly Yuuno is in there and got 2 seconds of narration
Ehehehehe, it was done on the spot, you see. So I didn't even have the time to double-check the file.

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Yay it's cool! And I see how it mirrors, but using Unlimited Blad- I mean, Midnight Carnival right off the bat came to me as a big surprise. Alexandra's characterization was another surprise because I was expecting a Saber type personality.

I know I'm old, and that should've been a Kamen Rider ref, but somehow "It's Morphin Time!" kicked in in my head instead.

Where's Yuuno, S_K? I didn't even read him being mentioned.

I've been thinking that Sophia might well be Alexandra's nemesis, if you see her appearance in the Nanoha CrosiS SS being broadcast in the OC thread and then catch the references... Luckily they're both on the same side.

Over all very good! Let's see where this goes next.
Ahahaha, that Unlimited Blade reference was also done on the spot XD

Yuuno was briefly mentioned in the ending part of the chapter (Anna mentioned that she was bored because Yuuno was too busy working at the Infinite Library).

Well, I think Charter 2 might have to wait as my college's new term is starting in three days time, so I might be busy organizing my class schedules and stuffs like that.
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Old 2007-05-26, 07:12   Link #217
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Ehehehehe, it was done on the spot, you see. So I didn't even have the time to double-check the file.



Ahahaha, that Unlimited Blade reference was also done on the spot XD

Yuuno was briefly mentioned in the ending part of the chapter (Anna mentioned that she was bored because Yuuno was too busy working at the Infinite Library).

Well, I think Charter 2 might have to wait as my college's new term is starting in three days time, so I might be busy organizing my class schedules and stuffs like that.
Don't worry just take your time, because i'm looking forward to your fanfics
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Old 2007-05-27, 01:35   Link #218
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New extremely interesting chapter on Satashi's story TSAB 6th Mobile Division. Chapter 4 is out. For the fans of this fic: Don't read the 'preview'. It's painfully angsty.
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Old 2007-05-27, 21:45   Link #219
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I modified part of chapter 1, rewrote chapter 2, and have an entirely new chapter 3 now:
http://yourupload.com/fh/download/243/story2.xhtml.html

Edit: I also gave each of the chapters names.
Chapter 1: Dragon
Chapter 2: The Beginning
Chapter 3: After the Fact
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Old 2007-05-28, 06:22   Link #220
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Attention! Lyrical of Time is updated. Charter 01 is up for reading.
Oooh, very interesting. I'll give you a konata good job pose!
Added to my watch list of fics to read.

Enfiled seems to be an interesting indivdual, the spell that she used was cool!
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