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Old 2007-11-11, 01:25   Link #4001
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Double post for ficcy 'cause no one else is posting T_T

[Nanoha Fate] Following is lemon material opening for one I'm working on right now, if you want the full teaser you gotta PM me 'cause I ain't gonna post it here :3

Spoiler for NSFW:
I'll wait for the full version. But this gives us an idea of what to expect ^3^
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Old 2007-11-11, 02:49   Link #4002
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I'll wait for the full version. But this gives us an idea of what to expect ^3^
(b")b it's being worked on along with my Hayate/Yuuno one.
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Old 2007-11-11, 02:53   Link #4003
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(b")b it's being worked on along with my Hayate/Yuuno one.
Well you've tickled my interest indeed ^^

BTW, was there an official age for Vivio? Does anyone happen to know?
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Old 2007-11-11, 03:12   Link #4004
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BTW, was there an official age for Vivio? Does anyone happen to know?
well, it seems there is no official age for her but she may be 6 at the end of Strikers
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I see.

Well here's another one-shot, literally hot off the press. This is the first draft, literally up for picking and tearing.

Go right ahead and critique it, because chances are I'll be taking all of your advices when I go back to this in the afternoon tomorrow and start editing it.

Spoiler for New one-shot:
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Old 2007-11-11, 11:07   Link #4006
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Double post for ficcy 'cause no one else is posting T_T

[Nanoha Fate] Following is lemon material opening for one I'm working on right now, if you want the full teaser you gotta PM me 'cause I ain't gonna post it here :3

Spoiler for NSFW:
I really hope that you're not planning to do something hardcore there...


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I see.

Well here's another one-shot, literally hot off the press. This is the first draft, literally up for picking and tearing.

Go right ahead and critique it, because chances are I'll be taking all of your advices when I go back to this in the afternoon tomorrow and start editing it.

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Nice short, the final lines are so O(≧▽≦)O

Saludos, Haru

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Old 2007-11-11, 11:30   Link #4007
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Kha..... What was that.........

You're supposed to be enticing them... not scaring them away...
What was Lowe’s line? Oh yeah “Kha is Kha” he really can’t help it, for better or worse, and it often is for the worse.
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Old 2007-11-11, 12:51   Link #4008
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Anyway *yawns* anything new going on fic wise with anyone?
*glasses glints in the sunlight as it got pushed up*

Your wish just came true.

Sort of.

Impasse.

The long awaited high school fic, I suppose. But I'm not as confident in this one as I am in past fictions for...certain reasons stated down in the A/N. So, here goes your warning. It's unbeta-ed, and there are probably a bunch of places that don't look very good.

There's also little to none angst. Though that may change in the future, of course. Gotta admit this is one of my lighter works, though.

And Haru...do you mind telling me how you type out those characters? They look so...cute. *_*
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Old 2007-11-11, 13:03   Link #4009
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And Haru...do you mind telling me how you type out those characters? They look so...cute. *_*
  1. Press <windows key>+R
  2. Type "charmap" and press Enter
  3. Copy & Paste

It's usefull to save the emoticons in a txt file.

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Old 2007-11-11, 13:54   Link #4010
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*glasses glints in the sunlight as it got pushed up*

Your wish just came true.

Sort of.

Impasse.

The long awaited high school fic, I suppose. But I'm not as confident in this one as I am in past fictions for...certain reasons stated down in the A/N. So, here goes your warning. It's unbeta-ed, and there are probably a bunch of places that don't look very good.

There's also little to none angst. Though that may change in the future, of course. Gotta admit this is one of my lighter works, though.
I liked it, even if you did beat up Yuuno a little bit in it. A note, though, why would Nanoha call him a ferret if there's no magic yet? May want to develop a little on that.

Fate and kendo doesn't really click to me for some,strange, reason. I guess it's because Kendo is really precise and formal and I view Fate's fighting as more...erratic and careless. Such as her sonic form, she completely disregards herself for speed in a rash attempt to slay whatever she's going against.

BTW, if you want a few kendo facts, you got it right for the most part. You have to call out your attack location (when you think you'll land a hit), and if you miss it after calling it, it's taken as bad form. Also, the formula is to step up, bow, go into fight stance, start fight when ref declares start, call attack place when striking for the kill, when a hit lands both people step back and then bow before going to their knees in a formal sitting postion while waiting for the judge to call it. Best 2 of 3 I think it is. I an be wrong there, since my knowledge is based on a little reading and seeing a few actual matches. I hope that helps a little?

I like the idea of Fate and Nanoha meeting like that, and it's obvious Nanoha seems to like girls....but does she know she does yet or does Fate like girls yet?

Looking forward to reading more, although I hope your story continues to taste good for a while before becoming bittersweet with angst.

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I really hope that you're not planning to do something hardcore there...

Saludos, Haru
It's hardcore, yes, but not in the way you think. Although it's a little more graphic than Emerald Dream, it's more....funny. Yes that's right, I said funny. During the course of their love making several things will happen, ranging from kinky-erotic, to Fate breaking into laughter at Nanoha's attempt to be sexy.
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Old 2007-11-11, 14:13   Link #4011
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It's hardcore, yes, but not in the way you think. Although it's a little more graphic than Emerald Dream, it's more....funny. Yes that's right, I said funny. During the course of their love making several things will happen, ranging from kinky-erotic, to Fate breaking into laughter at Nanoha's attempt to be sexy.
that was...somehow really tempting
you just made me want to read it now, Satashi-san
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Old 2007-11-11, 14:17   Link #4012
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It's hardcore, yes, but not in the way you think. Although it's a little more graphic than Emerald Dream, it's more....funny. Yes that's right, I said funny. During the course of their love making several things will happen, ranging from kinky-erotic, to Fate breaking into laughter at Nanoha's attempt to be sexy.
I hope you knew what I was thinking when I wrote the post... if it be so then I'll be looking forward to that kinky-funny fic

Saludos, Haru
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Old 2007-11-11, 14:22   Link #4013
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(b")b the point of this fic is to experiment with how Nanoha and Fate spend their personal lives together. Although this one is a little more graphic than Emerald, don't expect me to stray from my normal quirky, funny writing style. You can read this fic in two ways. One being in a strictly perverted eye (which is okay, it's a lemon) and the other is to enjoy it and giggle along with the girls as they attempt to be kinky with each other and kind of succeed, kind of fail at it.
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Old 2007-11-11, 16:10   Link #4014
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*Pops in* A few days ago I took a little check to see if people here were interested in a more serious story centered around Ancient Belka, and since there were some voices of interest...

First, a bit of a preview to the main OC:

Spoiler for preview:


And after that, part 1 of Legend of Ancient Belka: Fall of an Empire.

Spoiler for Part 1 A burning vessel:
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Old 2007-11-11, 16:24   Link #4015
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*Pops in* A few days ago I took a little check to see if people here were interested in a more serious story centered around Ancient Belka, and since there were some voices of interest...

First, a bit of a preview to the main OC:

Spoiler for preview:


And after that, part 1 of Legend of Ancient Belka: Fall of an Empire.

Spoiler for Part 1 A burning vessel:
It's really interesting (With Vivio for once time... I mean in central figure).
But in your story, it's a flash back? (Your part 1A). And What is the age of Vivio?

(I hope you post the next soon )
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Old 2007-11-11, 17:01   Link #4016
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It's really interesting (With Vivio for once time... I mean in central figure).
But in your story, it's a flash back? (Your part 1A). And What is the age of Vivio?

(I hope you post the next soon )
The first post is only a minor introduction, meant to show what the main OC looks like. True, I could have just posted the picture, but I always like to weave a story around it.

The second post (A burning vessel) is the real prologue. Obviously we'll make a timeskip backwards in the next parts when explainig how that situation came to be.

As for Vivio's age, she'd be around 22. A young king, yes, but a needed one.
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Old 2007-11-11, 19:54   Link #4017
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I liked it, even if you did beat up Yuuno a little bit in it. A note, though, why would Nanoha call him a ferret if there's no magic yet? May want to develop a little on that.
Yep, I do have some plans to build up his character. Or so-called plans, anyway. I didn't mean to seem abusive to Yuuno there but...hmm...*rubs chin* it's just that I think he's really observant and...stuff. I will explain a little more come next chapter or so, I suppose.

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Fate and kendo doesn't really click to me for some,strange, reason. I guess it's because Kendo is really precise and formal and I view Fate's fighting as more...erratic and careless. Such as her sonic form, she completely disregards herself for speed in a rash attempt to slay whatever she's going against.

BTW, if you want a few kendo facts, you got it right for the most part. You have to call out your attack location (when you think you'll land a hit), and if you miss it after calling it, it's taken as bad form. Also, the formula is to step up, bow, go into fight stance, start fight when ref declares start, call attack place when striking for the kill, when a hit lands both people step back and then bow before going to their knees in a formal sitting postion while waiting for the judge to call it. Best 2 of 3 I think it is. I an be wrong there, since my knowledge is based on a little reading and seeing a few actual matches. I hope that helps a little?
Ooh, yes, that helps. *files information away* Thanks. XD To be honest, I probably won't focus very much on kendo or...whatever clubs and stuff, but every now and then, they'll probably come into play.

That one-hit-rule, admittedly, is just something I came up with. Mostly because I didn't want to turn the matches into formal duels of sort...and also because I intended for the duels to be brief. Also because I actually kind of preferred continuous fighting compared to hit once then stop then hit then stop. But I do think that this kind of one-hit rule or continuous fighting does happen in practice and etc. Though if anyone can confirm, that will help, of course.

On another note, while I do know the difference between shinai and bokken, does anyone know when and where which one will be used? @_@

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I like the idea of Fate and Nanoha meeting like that, and it's obvious Nanoha seems to like girls....but does she know she does yet or does Fate like girls yet?

Looking forward to reading more, although I hope your story continues to taste good for a while before becoming bittersweet with angst.
I was actually just hoping to give the impression of Nanoha having some bubbling curiosity.

But oh, well. And yeah, it won't get angsty for a little while more. A little, maybe, but that's probably it.
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Old 2007-11-11, 20:45   Link #4018
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On another note, while I do know the difference between shinai and bokken, does anyone know when and where which one will be used? @_@


I was actually just hoping to give the impression of Nanoha having some bubbling curiosity.
A shinai is a bamboo sword shaped practice item. It's used in kendo and stuff. Made of several pieces of bamboo put together, it doesn't hurt real bad when you get hit with it. Perfect for sports. It's also loud when you get hit by it. Dunno it that's relevant or not tho.

A Bokken is a solid piece of wood shaped like a sword, it's used in actual sparing or solo katas and stuff.

I have both of them actually ^^

And I like the idea of Nanoha being curious, it fits her XD
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Double poooooooooooooooost!

I just realized I never psoted the original ending to Redemption VI, so here it is. This split off from the posted one at the very end, when Nanoha woke up
Spoiler for length:
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Old 2007-11-11, 21:27   Link #4020
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Double poooooooooooooooost!

I just realized I never psoted the original ending to Redemption VI, so here it is. This split off from the posted one at the very end, when Nanoha woke up
Spoiler for length:
wow...I personally would've liked either ending...but wow...damn that hurts XD

oh here here's the link to my one-shot which i've edited a bit. Spirtual Garden
enjoy ^^

Mind you, Fate's a tad bit OOC in this.

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