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Old 2008-03-01, 21:10   Link #21061
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I can't helpt but imagine... if Robo Gatsurally ever came into contact with the 'non-threat' that is Crash, Robo would spontaniously develope various robotic mechanical problems and fall apart on his feet.


CRASH: Hey man *Taps Robo on the shoulder* You're blocking my view.

**Robo Turns around.**

CRASH: Whoa! You're a BOT!

ROBO: Prepare_to_die_ fleshbag.

*Robo raises his beam sword... which stutters and goes out.*

ROBO: !

*Robo's arm then falls off.*

ROBO: !!

CRASH: You haven't undergone maintanance in a while have you? EDI's more dangerous than you.

EDI: Are you identifying me as an adversary?

CRASH: No, I'm just comparing him to how dangerous you can be.

EDI: I am dangerous? According to my calculations, there is no danger to bystanders from me as long as I maintain a clear set of objectives and assess potential collatteral based on complete information.

CRASH: Uh... No. What I mean is that I'm comparing your reletive threat levels.

EDI: My threat level should be calculated based on both my physical abilities, my aggressiveness to achieving my objective, and the operations restrictions as stated by the Rules of Engagement

CRASH: What I mean is that I'm treating the situation as if I were simulating you in a fight.

EDI: ...
CRASH: ...

EDI: I do not understand. Why would you fight me?

CRASH: *Facepalm.*

FOX: Idiot.
Je, je...
I think I don't get it.
How are these Crash and Edi? I don't remember I ...well, my characters ever mentionate them
Did I miss something?
Sorry, resently I don't been in the computer much time
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Old 2008-03-01, 21:17   Link #21062
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Old 2008-03-01, 21:21   Link #21063
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Think mechanical principles that apply to crash, and apply them when he touches Robo.
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Old 2008-03-01, 21:31   Link #21064
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Think mechanical principles that apply to crash, and apply them when he touches Robo.
O.K.
I f you read ROBO-GATSURALLY'S profile you should know he wants to kill Nanoha, not Crash.
ROBO-GATSURALLY also is the ultimate cyberbot model of the Tecno - Union Empire I think he gets enough maintanance and the fact his arm falls in the middle of battle sounds a bit... dum

Now I think ROBO-GATSURALLY should be quite a match for Crash, cause his armor is just an exterior, you should worry what's behind ROBO-GATSURALLY's mask (muahahaha!!!)
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Old 2008-03-01, 22:55   Link #21065
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The way your mind goes round and round never fails to amuse me.
I learn from the best

In fact, let me introduce to you this song from "Poets of the Fall"...

Entitled; "Sorry goes 'round "




(It gets catchy over time)


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You have to understand one thing, we are trikster players. We started 3 as triksters, we finished it as striksters, and we only switched for the lulz of it. We could finish off pretty much all bosses without getting hit once if we tried. Going from something like that to Nero, which relies on the 'lulz, one button kill' arm... the switch rivaled into the frustrating level.

Example being the fruit-boss, with Nero we got hit, with Dante we dodged everything the fruit lady had to throw at us, and finished her in record time.

As for his Devil Trigger being more effective... eh, thats subject to debate. Concidering his Bringer-moves get more powerfull as well, that could be true, but it relies -again- on the 'lulz, one button kill' arm. Otherwise? They're about equal in power, but Dante gets more hits in.

Well obviously if you favor Survivability over DPS, trickster-Dante is the way to go. But after awhile, and attempting the insane new Bloody Palace, I've put more focus into DPS.

And your argument of over-using the 'B' button is abit flawed. That's like saying you over-use the 'Y' button for melee. There are only 4 buttons on that controller after all. Using 'B' IS part of Nero's fighting style and Combo.

You can use it all the time to solve your problem, but that's doesn't mean it's Recommended. Against some mobs like the Frost and Assault and the Angelos, it would leave you open to back-stab.

And you have to remember, that one arm is suppose to even the score between Nero and all of Dante's Devil Arms and Style, that's alot to live up to.

Devil Trigger wise, I just like to use his "Showdown" Attack


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And Vergil... yes, I am damn well aware of that. Which makes the slap in the face they gave with Nero hurt that much more.
Oh come on, Nero isn't that bad of a character.

He still lives up to the DMC spirit, abeit, it's different from Dante's easy-going Attitude or Vergil's badass-ness.

But if he were the same as any of those two, people would be complaining even worse, am I right?


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That only proves you're a river.
I thought I'm an Ocean now ?


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Anyway, I think Nero is a bit on the main-stream hack and slash character side, what with his weird arm of imbalance and all? Not very memorable...

But with Dante, he doesn't have anything that makes him flat out imbalance or immediately too one-trick pony-ish.

I'll always remember the satisfaction I got the first time I got the "STYLISH!" thing emblazoning my screen...Dammit, it felt GOOD.
I'll like to counter that.

How many hack-and-slash characters have a propane-fuel injection system in their sword? The fact that he is a playable DMC character makes him memorable by itself. The fact that he has Devil-Vergil, is going to solidified that fact.

And Yes, that arm helps as well.

Btw, you use the word 'imbalance', but who or what are you comparing it too? There are only two playable characters in this game, and both of them have their difference way of playing.

As for the term one-trick pony, are you telling me that you use every single one of Dante's styles and weapons?

No, you have a fixed favorite way to play Dante, using only half of them, am I right?

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Actually, women are not to be trifled with.
And you know this , because... ?


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Not like you'd show me.
Not like you'd sell your soul to me.


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I didn't think you meant anything special.
Shows what you know


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Well that's cause I can't ever seem to remember the full title of the anime.
"Mou, what are you doing! You have to work harder !"


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Is that some twisted sense of humour you've got there? Or just sadistic?
That's for the viewers to decide.

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Maybe cause of you?
Now, why would you think that ?


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I wonder whether to believe you are sincere or not. Never mind.
Shows what you know... Again.


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You do know suggestive subtlety is his specialty, no?
Or would you rather I lose the tact ?

I can do that you know, I did take biology, and there's a chapter in sexual organs.



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See L.E, what did I tell you about unpredictability? This thread isn't suppose to give me 4 pages of backlog in one day! orz
I wonder why it happened...

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I see you've taken quite a liking to this.
Dante: "Is sanity... The price to pay... FOR POWER!?"


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Though personally, I'd prefer if it was... JAM it in.
Don't worry, I understand prefectly

(Mental note, Nighty likes to jam 'it' in...)

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Right, and my name's Fred Sanford.
Really? I was under the impression you were I-van A. Roricorn

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Old 2008-03-01, 23:01   Link #21066
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Really? I was under the impression you were I-van A. Roricorn
Eeh!?

Nonono, my name's "Crazy Ivan." I blow things up!

*puts TNT pack on Chaos and hides*
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Old 2008-03-01, 23:03   Link #21067
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Eeh!?

Nonono, my name's "Crazy Ivan." I blow things up!

*puts TNT pack on Chaos and hides*

Hah! You can't kill me with violence, Roricorn !
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Old 2008-03-01, 23:11   Link #21068
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Eeh!? Explain NAO.
Crack.

The last part is written in 3 minutes without thought, so don't bother.

I just hid the 'real' scenario inside my head.

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Don't worry, I understand prefectly

(Mental note, Nighty likes to jam 'it' in...)
~Of course, ramming it would be so crude, wouldn't it?

Although jamming isn't all that pleasant either, but life is full of rough fittings, we all have to make do with compromises.
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Old 2008-03-01, 23:30   Link #21069
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I just hid the 'real' scenario inside my head.
Nighty 's head...

*Shudder*


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~Of course, ramming it would be so crude, wouldn't it?

Although jamming isn't all that pleasant either, but life is full of rough fittings, we all have to make do with compromises.
Yet at the same time, it give one the impression of being rather inexperience at the task at hand.
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Old 2008-03-02, 00:20   Link #21070
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Adjustments made to the blushes.
And Due survives, and two of the cloacked ones are revealed. Carim, I expected, Genya, had me going. 'Dwa? '

Small correction, Carim is called 'Kishi Carim' not the other way around.
Ah, that'll be corrected in the future. Thanks.
As for why Carim and Genya are involved at all... well, I'll go into detail on that in upcoming chapters.

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That's like , and some more


Quite a story there
lol thanks :3

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Hmm... a little slow, I'd say.

Character planning layout = 60%. There's some characters whom backstory is still pending, and such, along with what character to put in and how.
Overall story draft = 70%. The idea behind the beginning, the mid-way climax, the build-up to the finale and the finale itself is quite complete, but there's some empty holes to pad.
Side-story draft = 30%. One-shots that show the current status of the RF6s... I have ideas for Subaru/Teana/Numbers/a few more, but the others are a little...

LOL WRITING PROGRESS = 5%. I wrote... say, 70% of 3 tracks in DestinyS's version of SS04, 20% of Jail Break, 20% of the random "KEWL" speeches throughout DestinyS, 5% of the finale, and 10% of the beginning. Oh, and 30% of flashback to Alhazred's destruction.

One of the bigger plot problems is the finale a little, since there's so many characters semi-intertwined, it seems a slight pity that connecting some is a little hard to do.

Not to mention I'm trying to balance the gray a little. I've noticed I've kinda made TSAB look more evil than the antagonist.
Sounds like me, just with a bit more writing progress. I have a lot of stuff planned out except for holes right in the middle. But I've read your stuff and know enough to think that whatever it is, it will be awesome :3

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15, 000 words!? For all of Alpha till now, you mean?

And oh~ once again, EPIC rocks. And do I spy a Xenogears there?
Accounting for tags, there's about 12000 words in Episode 01, and about 15500 in Episode 02, so about 27500 words total .

And yes, System Id is a Xenogears-ish reference.
Fun fact: Originally, Alpha was going to have a lot of Xenogears references, including a finally involving Nanoha piloting the titular Gear itself against the final enemy.

...you can see why it was scrapped.

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Due survived, now that's a surprise. I do hope she's still able to do that after birthing Juliet Scagletti...

Though the later parts had me going "WUD?!" Genya?! Why...?

And Carym had me in from the amount of crack just exploding into existence. A sample of what's going on in the mental storm:

Spoiler for A second in Khrack's mind:
...I hope you still have your sanity after looking inside my head.
That's... quite a tangent. As for the answer... well, things are not always what they seem...

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Viral?!?

I approve! *thumbs up*

Nice fight scene, too. Kagerou, you're still on a roll.

And does the plot ever thicken...it just gets more epic with each chapter. So does this mean...that we have traitors in the midst???

Can't wait for the next.
Fights scenes are hard, btw >.>
And are there traitors? Perhaps. Emphasis because to be honest I haven't decided.

*breaths* and now a temporary rest. Some Call of Duty, Audiosurf, and Counter-Strike to ease my mind for the next episode.
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Old 2008-03-02, 00:55   Link #21071
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Gimmy: Yosh! ORE NO TA-- (stepped on)



Daihou Shonen Gatling Kai, KENZAN!

[Cue music: "disarm dreamer" by Aki Misato]

Gimmy: Oi! My head is not a springboard!!!

Spoiler for LOL:
Even though I held back on several more spoilers, oh the Khrack! The KHRACK!!!

And here's more:
Spoiler for Relationships:
More in future, as Rebuilt progresses.

Now for the cake:
Spoiler for Uomo:
Backlog breaking once I escape from the Moderators.

*RUNS AT LUDICRIOUS SPEED*
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Old 2008-03-02, 01:29   Link #21072
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Gimmy: Yosh! ORE NO TA-- (stepped on)



Daihou Shounen Gatling Kai, KENZAN!

[Cue music: "disarm dreamer" by Aki Misato]

Gimmy: Oi! My head is not a springboard!!!

Spoiler for LOL:
Even though I held back on several more spoilers, oh the Khrack! The KHRACK!!!

And here's more:
Spoiler for Relationships:
More in future, as Rebuilt progresses.

Now for the cake:
Spoiler for Uomo:
Backlog breaking once I escape from the Moderators.

*RUNS AT LUDICRIOUS SPEED*
A good example of "Armed & Dangerous"
If I like it...
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Old 2008-03-02, 01:58   Link #21073
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Hmm...

Spoiler:


Spoiler:
Awesome!



I see you've taken quite a liking to this.

Though personally, I'd prefer if it was... JAM it in.


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EEEEEEH???

[tsun]I'm not OLD!!! PF no BAKAAAAA!!! *Megaton Punch>>>PF[/tsun]
Don't mind PF. He calls me old all the time.


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Right on. And I have been flamed more times than I can count. But like I said, it's some money in my pocket...my class schedule's weird so I don't have time for a real day job.
I'm currently a customer service staff myself, and I got flamed a few times myself. The only saving grace is that they aren't through telephones. In any case I'm saying good bye to my current job in 2 weeks time.


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I hacked through six yesterday. Settled down for the weekend, as usual.
Its settled now over here. Only a few posts since last night. *phew*


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Well obviously if you favor Survivability over DPS, trickster-Dante is the way to go. But after awhile, and attempting the insane new Bloody Palace, I've put more focus into DPS.

And your argument of over-using the 'B' button is abit flawed. That's like saying you over-use the 'Y' button for melee. There are only 4 buttons on that controller after all. Using 'B' IS part of Nero's fighting style and Combo.

You can use it all the time to solve your problem, but that's doesn't mean it's Recommended. Against some mobs like the Frost and Assault and the Angelos, it would leave you open to back-stab.

And you have to remember, that one arm is suppose to even the score between Nero and all of Dante's Devil Arms and Style, that's alot to live up to.

Devil Trigger wise, I just like to use his "Showdown" Attack
Please don't make me feel depressed because I still don't own a PS3 yet!

Though other than DMC4 I'm highly anticipating the English release for Disgaea 3.


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Oh come on, Nero isn't that bad of a character.

He still lives up to the DMC spirit, abeit, it's different from Dante's easy-going Attitude or Vergil's badass-ness.

But if he were the same as any of those two, people would be complaining even worse, am I right?
I prefer to chain combos really, since I suck at dodging.


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I thought I'm an Ocean now ?
Since when you were upgraded?


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I'll like to counter that.

How many hack-and-slash characters have a propane-fuel injection system in their sword? The fact that he is a playable DMC character makes him memorable by itself. The fact that he has Devil-Vergil, is going to solidified that fact.

And Yes, that arm helps as well.

Btw, you use the word 'imbalance', but who or what are you comparing it too? There are only two playable characters in this game, and both of them have their difference way of playing.

As for the term one-trick pony, are you telling me that you use every single one of Dante's styles and weapons?

No, you have a fixed favorite way to play Dante, using only half of them, am I right?
No strategy involve?


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And you know this , because... ?
Real life experience?


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Not like you'd sell your soul to me.
Too valuable lol. And I don't have any other things to trade.


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Shows what you know
Nah I'm just naive to think that I won't be seeing anything weird. In hindsight, I probably should have expected it.


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"Mou, what are you doing! You have to work harder !"

Doesn't compute.


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That's for the viewers to decide.



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Now, why would you think that ?
Oh I dunno. Just maybe?


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Shows what you know... Again.



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Or would you rather I lose the tact ?

I can do that you know, I did take biology, and there's a chapter in sexual organs.
I'll pass. =\


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I wonder why it happened...
Work. Can't bum at home and lurk here all day anymore.
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Old 2008-03-02, 02:01   Link #21074
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I move for putting a facepalm smiley on these boards. Minna?


- i recommend saving this into your own picture hosts...

- i Just borrowed it from My Guild Goddess...

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Because it's always been backlog...and always SHALL BE!!!
AND WILL BE FOREVER!!!

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Is "free ice for grass available" still listed in there???
haven't checked... yet

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Ahh...I don't get it, but that's the most excessive kill I've seen in a while.
This is basically the I really wanted to do this to a customer breaker that i know that will not happen- only in the OC

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Yes. *hits Enter key*
Dr. Eifman has indeed been assimilated into VEDA

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Sorry, handing out ratings isn't something I'm good at either...


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*prepares Big-Ass Magic*

Next person to call me old gets this to the face.
BAKANNNAAAAAAAA~ *flies off*

Andrei: well that's what you get...

Ara ara...

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Wait...isn't the cake a lie too?
i don't know which is the true lie here...

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*ducks* We seem to have a lot of those here recently.
now they are GN Oars...



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Gimmy: Yosh! ORE NO TA-- (stepped on)



Daihou Shonen Gatling Kai, KENZAN!

[Cue music: "disarm dreamer" by Aki Misato]

Gimmy: Oi! My head is not a springboard!!!

Spoiler for LOL:
Backlog breaking once I escape from the Moderators.

*RUNS AT LUDICRIOUS SPEED*


Oh you're going to get it...

"Rala Corps inbound!!!"

Andrei: yup... *takes away Jinmu and D*

===

Next up is a formal Rebuit of Rurika... as per Fuyu's request...
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Old 2008-03-02, 02:18   Link #21075
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Oh you're going to get it...

"Rala Corps inbound!!!"

Andrei: yup... *takes away Jinmu and D*
Yes it's Kazuki Yotsuga, the guy which became the face of the first anime-version of Kha. (He appears in a discontinued El Hazard fanfic).

Yes I loved Dual! for all the anime injokes.

And no. JINV KINSHI!!!

IMO, the Astray is t3h best mecha design ever, if only for it's elegant simplicity.

*sees Keroko surfing by and preps to run really really really fast from ICB, Kane and Keroko-tan*





And this is the first time there are 3 versions of Kha in the same universe... Multiverse much? >_<
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SUPA KAOS TIMU!
It's been a while since I've seen this.

[Bob]Vellucum bak.[/Bob]

Don't mind him, his mouth is still sore after getting hit by Permanence Impact.

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And thus I begin GARyuu and Lurio/Erutecia on paper. :3


Doth my eyes spy a rivalry between Caro and Lutecia over Erio?

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Spoiler for MSLN Alpha Scene III Part B:


Some EPIC fighting here!

And something is beginning to show here, especially the relationship between Glen and Omega (I do hope that they're not two bodies separated into different entities ).

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Done, added the following spells:

Spoiler for New spells for Tesla:
Scanned and saved. Awesome spells too.

Anyway, if I remember correctly, Tesla would go pale lavender when in Unison with Reinforce, no?

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....

Since when did I become the Norse expert here?

Veðrfölnir was unknown to me until I wiki-ed it up.

....: The pursuit of knowledge is an eternal task.
Me: Indeed.
Neither do I. But, since it fits, I just took it.

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Will be monitoring... and maybe a bit of collaboration perhaps?
I most probably will be touching only the surface of religious practices of Mid-childa without going too much into the "faith" themselves. Still, collaboration will be most appreciated. I'm all ears for ideas.

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I hate Mummies...

in the meantime...

Imhotep! Imhotep! Imhotep!

*runs from religious fanatics of Amun*
Saint X, you just reminded me of the most mind-boggling adventure in Titan Quest where I had to fight mobs of scorpions and mummies and whatnots in epic-sized maps! (And in that game, Imhotep was impotent. )

Anyway, are you getting some Egyptian influence or something?

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Oh lawd is dat sum Junpei?

Anyway, finished Episode 02. Expect the chapter in full to show up on the fanfiction thread

Spoiler for Final scene, MSLN Alpha, Episode 02:


EDIT: Part A is here, Part B is here. Hope you like much :3
You're writing faster than I can follow.

Anyway, if this isn't EPIC revelations, I don't know what is.

Due, Genya, possibly Carim (the White) ... The mix is so unexpected I don't know what they could be doing. The White seemed to be protective of Nanoha and Vivio, but the others ...

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Hmm...

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Nighty's EPICNESS is most unparalleled, even in crack!

Even though Leona giving a superb kick like that is out-of-character, me still likes it.

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Hmm... a little slow, I'd say.

Character planning layout = 60%. There's some characters whom backstory is still pending, and such, along with what character to put in and how.
Overall story draft = 70%. The idea behind the beginning, the mid-way climax, the build-up to the finale and the finale itself is quite complete, but there's some empty holes to pad.
Side-story draft = 30%. One-shots that show the current status of the RF6s... I have ideas for Subaru/Teana/Numbers/a few more, but the others are a little...

LOL WRITING PROGRESS = 5%. I wrote... say, 70% of 3 tracks in DestinyS's version of SS04, 20% of Jail Break, 20% of the random "KEWL" speeches throughout DestinyS, 5% of the finale, and 10% of the beginning. Oh, and 30% of flashback to Alhazred's destruction.

One of the bigger plot problems is the finale a little, since there's so many characters semi-intertwined, it seems a slight pity that connecting some is a little hard to do.

Not to mention I'm trying to balance the gray a little. I've noticed I've kinda made TSAB look more evil than the antagonist.
Epic planning is required for epic writing.

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recieving feedback from his actions. -_-
I see that he did.

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How much older is he than his "targets?"
Around 10 years gap? I don't know.

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EEEEEEH???

[tsun]I'm not OLD!!! PF no BAKAAAAA!!! *Megaton Punch>>>PF[/tsun]
And that was meant as a compliment ...

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Accounting for tags, there's about 12000 words in Episode 01, and about 15500 in Episode 02, so about 27500 words total .

And yes, System Id is a Xenogears-ish reference.
Fun fact: Originally, Alpha was going to have a lot of Xenogears references, including a finally involving Nanoha piloting the titular Gear itself against the final enemy.

...you can see why it was scrapped.
Ah, that certainly is going to come into HAXX-busting scrutiny, if Nanoha ever drives the Gear into war.

And what the ... that's an insane amount of words for just two chapters!

And to think that I've only just written over 79K words (discounting tags) for six chapters.



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Fights scenes are hard, btw >.>
And are there traitors? Perhaps. Emphasis because to be honest I haven't decided.
I agree on the fighting part, it's very difficult to write a detailed one. Liingo is probably the only one who writes the most comprehensive battle scenes ever.
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No... time...

Progress Report.

GenerationS Chapter 1: part 3
Words: 10,421 and counting
I guess I better explain details about Tiara as well... thru Rein...

Will comment later...

But Before I leave...

YOUR CRACK HAS SURPASSED BREAKING POINT!!!
WTF IS WITH THAT FREAKY SYRINGE CRAAACCCKKK!!!?!!!?
NIIIIIIGGGGHHHHTYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!



*Brain Breaks*



And how the Holy Hell did HxA reach the point that you would actually ship it?! >.>


I'm off...

Almaria: Creator-san!!! What on earth happened to you! Oh no, OH NO! I must get you to the hospital!

*is dragged of the thread by an upset Almaria*
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No... time...

Progress Report.

GenerationS Chapter 1: part 3
Words: 10,421 and counting
I guess I better explain details about Tiara as well... thru Rein...

Will comment later...

But Before I leave...

YOUR CRACK HAS SURPASSED BREAKING POINT!!!
WTF IS WITH THAT FREAKY SYRINGE CRAAACCCKKK!!!?!!!?
NIIIIIIGGGGHHHHTYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!



*Brain Breaks*



And how the Holy Hell did HxA reach the point that you would actually ship it?! >.>


I'm off...

Almaria: Creator-san!!! What on earth happened to you! Oh no, OH NO! I must get you to the hospital!

*is dragged of the thread by an upset Almaria*
Judging by that this gimongous Breaker was directed at Nighty, and still no word from Keroko-kun, Kai is safe?

*keeps running*
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*Freaks out from large amounts of red text and calls in Divine Support!*

I'm feeling the urg to create a killer Axe weilding haxXed out OC...

And I don't have any story spots for an Uber HaxXed OC....
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*Freaks out from large amounts of red text and calls in Divine Support!*

I'm feeling the urg to create a killer Axe weilding haxXed out OC...

And I don't have any story spots for an Uber HaxXed OC....
You just made me imagine "Jigoku Majou VS Goddess Chainsaw Massacre"...

Bottomline: "Whoever wins, we lose."



EDIT: What is this pressure deja'vu I feel...?
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