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Old 2008-03-12, 11:54   Link #22041
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I just finished the drawing

Spoiler for somewhat big...:



Too bad I couldn't fit Altea there
Oh, well, I'll just do one with Koji and her

*runs*

Caramelldansen spreads!!!! Epic picture!!!!!!!

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The latter. Besides, I got Khracker Three coming. :3
Oh boy...

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The person who created Gundam and Ideon. He's even more h4xx than I can ever be.
Good ol' "kill them all' Tomino

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Allas, even they have succumbed to the sheer joyous hypnotism that is Caramel Dansen.

Although I can't really see Altea do the Caramel Dansen voluntarily. Did Koji drag her into it?

Oh, and speaking of strange art, I stumbled upon this little number recently:

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Someone better explain this, that person, and the smile on Tesla's face. *glares at all Gurren Lagann crackgoers*

By the gods...IT'S SPREADING!!!!!!!!!

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NO! It's not like that! *takes deep breath*

I am a pervert and a gentleman!
Sure....

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Plain and Simple:

Do not mess with Nanoha and her friends, or even Sakura K or her friends...

So very true....

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....
:Kyonko-facepalm*
Even Kagerou's reaction got infected by the gender-bending

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OH MY GOD.
THIS. THIS SONG. EPIC.
Not Epic...BEYOND GOD-LIKE

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Well here's my own version of Post-StrikerS stories.

Those who've had their OC's mentioned so far, I hope you don't mind me using 'em :3

Spoiler for My Story:
Very nice writing there . Good amount of detail and it flowed pretty well, too. So RF6 is still operational after 6 years, huh? Still need to see where NERV would be at that point. Though that all really depends on what Kha has planned for them in ReBuild (and character development from Kagerou's Alpha).

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Tesla is an eternal teenager. Do the math.
*starts doing some 4th degree polynomials and Fourier transforms*

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Griffith VS Simon?

Oooh yes I can use this.
Incoming!!

*dives for cover*
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Old 2008-03-12, 12:01   Link #22042
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Man that was sooo impressive. Too bad it's not the OG (and maybe Kerokanon?) timeline; I'd love to be able to stick several OCs in there. :3

Then again, this might just be the continuation of the Good End of Unlimited Blake Works, which means Anita's gonna be really happy cos Kha'd be paired with Sophia... And so even it's NxF, it's all still Keikaku Doori...

That aside, great work! I love how I can feel the grit of the character here, and the non-emo background sure makes you not stand out at all, ne?

6 years after StrikerS? Hayate's still pretty busy huh?

*books the year MC 0079, 4 years after StrikerS. And maybe MC 0093*

:3
Well if you want me to throw in a few characters, I don't mind :3 This is supposed to be another 'Alternate Universe' so I don't mind doing so :3

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I hope you didn't try to slip that in at the end to try and hide the fact.. Interesting start to a story. Just one thing though. Given the highly accelerated rates of promotion that they have, The aces need not be at the same ranks as after Strikers. Then again it's your story so go with it.
LOL You referring to how I slipped in the three aces at the end?

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Captain, do you have a shortage of sensor specialists? Why do you let a non-specialist stand the watch? Are you not worried you might miss something significant? If he's in training as the story implies, where is the qualified sensor operator to back up the report?
So noted

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Wow, Hayato. You personally can't pick up anything, so you conclude there is no activity within the star system, even though you are not qualified for your post. Wouldn't "No contacts, sir" be more intellectually honest? Or even "the scope is clear" (which only means nothing is showing on the scope, not that there is no acitivity.)

By the way, if there is really no activity inside the system, why is it so interesting. Is there no life in this star system? Would the time be better spent checking out the next system, then?
So noted

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It is self contradictory for Akemi to be an older (senior) sister while being 6 years his junior (younger).
Ooops

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The story tries very hard to make Takei be the bad guy, but Takei has a point. But again, where is the sensor instructor? Shouldn't he be doing this?
Noted

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The fact that a pistoleer is considered "long-range" says a lot about the TSAB
*Shrugs*

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He's that Gun-Kata guy you've been talking about awhile back, right? I don't blame his company commander one bit. At least in the show, Gun-Kata was statistically proven with a scientific (statistical) methodology, something that won't be possible for a family project.
Read my...Actually better yet, I'd rather not hear from you on that regard.

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By the way, he's enlisted, but he graduated from the "Academy"?
Have you not read the StrikerS manga?

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How many sisters does this man have? Is this the same one that's now in officer school?
He has the one, who's in officer school right now.

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The TSAB has bunkers? And what weapons caches?

Tough luck, you whiner.

Oh, so your little nepotism failed, and now you want to fix it with more nepotism. Very typical TSAB, but still...

The selfishness of Hayato and family, trying to get someone else into the position they so hate...

I can't believe Hayato wants and expects someone to be fired for actually being fair and not falling victim to nepotism. Oh, the TSAB corruption!

Your guy seems to believe being assigned to an "exciting" unit is his right, not just his fortune...
So noted....and disregarded

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Bad choice, Sergeant. Awful choice of words for a superior to use on a subordinate.
I've been there, literally on the receiving end of such...incompetence when I was an Air Cadet.

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The TSAB has artillery? Sure would be nice to see some of them when Scarlietti was around...
I'm not going to give it any further response


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I find it laughable that this formality occurred after the complete breakdown of discipline and superior-subordinate relationships above.

This line is marginal. I can see a private using the same words when speaking to his officer. Perhaps "I would like to speak with you" is more appropriate. In fact, have Rein say it, as in "The Colonel wants to see you."

Hayato might have something to him, but he needs a firm hand more than most if he's not to turn insubordinate, and Hayate isn't doing it.

I'll agree the Sergeant didn't act the best way there. However, Hayato was clearly insubordinate. To do nothing to Hayato while scrawling over the Sergeant's file is hypocritical and makes a mockery of the chain of command, the basic superior-subordinate relationships ... etc.

Also, the Sergeant is not under Hayate's chain of command. A more appropriate action will be to discuss this with the Platoon commander and let him decide. Hayate is making a hash of the unity of command principle.

Further, the action is unproductive. Does she think the Sergeant will reform? No. With the file scratched like that, his promotion prospects are probably shot forever. There's no point in being enthusiastic.

And who is Hayate to complain about unenthusiastic leadership (the Sergeant's only real "crime") anyway, considering StrikerS... pot kettle black.

Such neglect of discipline is typical of canon Hayate, who acted as if nothing has happened even after an incident where her training officer shot a trainee. But I thought this thread is moving in the De-Shaft Hayate direction, and even the canon Hayate is not such a pot-kettle-black hypocrite.
Okay, you got me there on Hayate.

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I suppose the General Idea of the above was to portray Hayato as an enthusiastic visionary that is unafraid of authority. However, he doesn't look that way at all. He looks like a insubordinate, whiny, dislikable brat that keeps going "Rights! Rights! Rights!" when he's in a service and is supposed to be serving people. If that's what you want, I guess that's OK, you did a good job then. But if not, some thought is necessary.
Yeah....You are taking this WAY too seriously dude....granted you picked out things that I missed out....I'd rather you keep your hands off my story before this 'discussion' ends up in a heated argument, due to you finding logical fallacies in my story. If there's a contradiction, or an error, I'd rather let those whom I consider peers pick at it.

I'd rather not let any bad blood run boiling in here.

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Old 2008-03-12, 13:26   Link #22043
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For a while there, I thought you actually went to do a Caramelldansen GIF with the template.

Still though.
There's a template?

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YATTE YARUZE!!!

Final Update of Ninja of Ninja Julie Liu Ming's profile is up!

Spoiler for Special Moves and Trivia:


And that ends the profile for the three primary Belkarangers, but like all Super Sentai you need additional members, so stay tuned!
Wow, those are some nasty, yet cool, attacks

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Caramelldansen spreads!!!! Epic picture!!!!!!!
And here's the rest of the pic, I just finished it

Spoiler for BreakerS Caramelldansen 2:



Well...back to work...
*runs*
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Old 2008-03-12, 13:37   Link #22044
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The Caramelldansen just can't be escaped can it...?
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And here's the rest of the pic, I just finished it

Spoiler for BreakerS Caramelldansen 2:



Well...back to work...
*runs*
Someone doesn't look very happy about being a part of this...it is cute, though.

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The Caramelldansen just can't be escaped can it...?

There is no escapeThere is no escapeThere is no escapeThere is no escapeThere is no escapeThere is no escapeThere is no escapeThere is no escapeThere is no escapeThere is no escapeThere is no escapeThere is no escapeThere is no escapeThere is no escapeThere is no escapeThere is no escape
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Old 2008-03-12, 14:16   Link #22046
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Actually, if by God you meant something like Jehovah in Judeo-Christian religion (or Allah for Muslims), sorry, that guy, who only handles one universe, is only Tier 8 or thereabouts. In the Seinarukana context, he's but a Jiroru fragment. The Sword that Jesus will bring in Revelations 1:16 will be cast as a Class 5-6 Eternity Sword, complete with permanent wills for his beast.
Not that god...

since you're placing it in the Seinarukana context, you will know what i mean. unless...

and yes, the "" smiley is somewhat annoying and an invitation for a plasma torch


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I believe the spoiler kinshi level can be downgraded by now...
Spoiler for 22 Spoilers:
- Why Michael? I don't his fangs sinking anywhere here.

- Been right all along with VEDA... but that means...

Tiera/Ribbons: NOOOOOOO~ *sound of lightsaber slicing thru hand*

- Did you say Arisa has a Trinity?

*imagines 3 boys chasing after her*




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Nice character models that you're using. Looks good overall. XD
Bridget? Ruri? who?

Thanks ayways


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hey~

when did i double compute?

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And you forgot Tier 11...Becoming the GOD of HAXX!!!
HUSH YOU!


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Now all we need is a Harmonizer Keroko that in an epic story, will take all Kerokos into him/her to become the one true Keroko. :3
The Quest for the One True Keroko Begins...

Is she tsun-tsun, dere-dere or yan-yan

*runs from ICB*

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Hmm...

Spoiler:




possible story?

Spoiler:
WHY DOES IT COMPUTE SO MUCH


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...and a crapload of guns and ammo.
Kyla checks over the shipment of ammo from *static*


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...Gilliam Aker?

.....Gespenst-RV & GN OVERFlag fusion?
Fixed

ALL HAIL!!!

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Wow, tons of new backlog, but nothing much to comment on. Except for one thing. Kha, that's a ton of crack you got there!

Oh, and that female!Kamina pic is so disturbing... damn, my eyes.

And yes, my little free time is being eaten by Brawl these past few days.
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Hmm...

Spoiler:




possible story?

Spoiler:


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The Caramelldansen just can't be escaped can it...?


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Someone doesn't look very happy about being a part of this...it is cute, though.
Not just cute, tsundere cute

As as seen, only Maren and Altea find embarrassing to dance it

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There is no escapeThere is no escapeThere is no escapeThere is no escapeThere is no escapeThere is no escapeThere is no escapeThere is no escapeThere is no escapeThere is no escapeThere is no escapeThere is no escapeThere is no escapeThere is no escapeThere is no escapeThere is no escape


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hey~

when did i double compute?
oops, my bad

*edits post*

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There's a template?
Yup . Check out the first post of the Caramelldansen thread here.

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And here's the rest of the pic, I just finished it

Spoiler for BreakerS Caramelldansen 2:



Well...back to work...
*runs*
There's MORE?!?!

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The Caramelldansen just can't be escaped can it...?
Escape is futile.
Escape is futile.
Escape is futile.
Escape is futile.
Escape is futile.
Escape is futile.
Escape is futile.

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hey~

when did i double compute?
*looks around for flying pigs*

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The Quest for the One True Keroko Begins...

Is she tsun-tsun, dere-dere or yan-yan

*runs from ICB*


*runs far, far, FAR away from SaintX*

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Wow, tons of new backlog, but nothing much to comment on. Except for one thing. Kha, that's a ton of crack you got there!

Oh, and that female!Kamina pic is so disturbing... damn, my eyes.

And yes, my little free time is being eaten by Brawl these past few days.
Welcome back to the backlog and crack Erio

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Oh man...I want to go home already .
The Kamen Rider Den-O movie just got subbed and I MUST WATCH IT!!!!!!
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Ah, Tesla-chan it is then

...

Though that still isn't any consolation now is it?

*Smith and Creator-san RUNS FASTER*
Yeah.

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- Why Michael? I don't his fangs sinking anywhere here.

- Been right all along with VEDA... but that means...

Tiera/Ribbons: NOOOOOOO~ *sound of lightsaber slicing thru hand*

- Did you say Arisa has a Trinity?

*imagines 3 boys chasing after her*

I mixed up Michael and Johann! NUUUUuuuuuuuuuuu.....
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There's MORE?!?!
No
I'm just going back to writing the next chapter

Which reminds me...

@Keroko: Mind if I use the same name you did for the prison Jail and his loyal numbers are being kept?
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I was unaware I had copyright on it.
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I was unaware I had copyright on it.
Maybe when you make things it gets Keroright?
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I was unaware I had copyright on it.
Well considering it was probably your idea originally, that's why people are asking for rights to use it. It's the same thing with me asking if I can use Syn, Keroko, and Tesla actively in my story.
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I suppose that grants me a right to Khapyright? And is copying Keroright a Khapyleft?

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I suppose that grants me a right to Khapyright? And is copying Keroright a Khapyleft?

*runs from frozen tsukikomi*
Sorry Kagerou...I'm gonna need to copy you to reply to this one...

...
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I suppose that grants me a right to Khapyright? And is copying Keroright a Khapyleft?

*runs from frozen tsukikomi*


KHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!

Btw, I've also added a picture for what Reddo Farukon looks like :3 *points to link on the bottom of his Signature banner*

*Runs like the wind*
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Old 2008-03-12, 19:46   Link #22059
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It's amazing how a simple question can trigger all this...

Anyways...here's Chapter 23!

Spoiler for Chapter 23 - Codename: Heart Waver - Part 1:

Why does this chapter has this name? You'll find out in the next part

That's it for now
The next part should be posted soon, sicne most of it is already written, just needs to be revised and updated

But right now, I'm tired...
*goes to bed*
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Old 2008-03-12, 20:12   Link #22060
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@Thread: Hey guys.

Due to some problems on my end, I'll be most probably missing for a while... I'll be mostly like Aaron and crawl in sometime to comment on something...Anyway, hope you guys have fun. Keep the backlog going (hurray for super long to-read list) 'kay?

Oh and @Keroko-kun: Do keep fighting against the Darth Chaos He needs ro realize not all of us are his 'acolytes'
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