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Old 2008-03-13, 11:31   Link #22081
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Keroright? What you been smoking?

So does that mean if you forge it, it's a Kerowrong?

*runs*

I assure you whatever I'm smoking is certainly not as bad as whatever you OC-regulars smoke.

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Madness?

This!

IS!

CADIAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!

*throws self down pit of death, screaming "CADIAAAAA!*
It... Had to be done.

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... Keroright?

*Kyonko facepalm*

If there ever was a 'Keroright' it would be the right to use my characters without permission.

I was just trying to be creative is all I mean if you can make Kerokanon...

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Besides, the OC-thread never had a leader. We don't need one, that's what makes us such a tight-nit group.
So you're all one big happy dysfunctional family?

Also:
This didn't even grow a page overnight!?
WHAT IS THIS!?
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Old 2008-03-13, 11:52   Link #22082
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Here is an idea that a friend and I had come up with. Well, my friend thought up the feedback idea for a character in World of Darkness and let me use the idea for a Nanoha OC.

Spoiler for Charese Silverman:
I like the character so far, but she's still bare bones. Hoping to see more extensive background later :3 Keroko and Kha had already hit the nail on the head on what needs work, so I'll just offer my support and my eagerness to see more filled out Charese. :3

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Not so much that, more the yuri loving
Sou desu ka? :3

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Flame should know by now that I always allow my OC's to be used in stories. Asking whether he can use a name I just happened to paste on Jail's prison sounded... rather silly.
I suppose :3

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Missed it. That, and when I finally did find it, you pretty much already said what I wanted to say. I probably wouldn't have pointed out all the millitairy whatnot, minus the Hayate neglecting Hayato's insubordination, but I definetely would have commented on the weapon caches and artillery.
Doesn't work out or something? Care to clarify a bit on that topic? :3

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And... Chatline Khrack thanks to Ghaz:
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:3
LOL may I shouldn't have used Shiro as a basis of Farukon's image eh? :3
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Old 2008-03-13, 11:53   Link #22083
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Heeeeey... Did I just double page claim? I wonder if this is a sign.
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Old 2008-03-13, 12:02   Link #22084
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Welcome Toran! With this, you've found yourself in boot camp! Don't worry we'll take good care of ya, always!

Good start! You might want to develop more on how she got that Feedback curse, and shed a little more light on how that injury is affecting her as a person psychosocially?

Such an injury means that she wouldn't be considered for a combat vocation, so her future division would most likely be in support, with combat-support being the most she'd ever see in terms of hot action, unless it is fixed.

I guess that would mean that her "barrier and unusual LL incidents" division is involved in containing/sealing off contaminated/dangerous areas due to Lost Logia effects? I think it might go through.

Will she be setting up that unit in StrikerS? If so, I believe her work is very cut out for her.

Lastly, no OC is an island! Hope to see more of her teammates in future.
Thanks and yes, I'm planning on her having a division set up in StrikerS.
I still need to get ideas for teammates though.

Psychologically, I was thinking that she would become determined to overcome her disability while in the background, away from others, she would have some confidence issues. Partly due to the loss of her Intelligent Device that she had destroyed in the first magical feedback event. Since she had been with her device since the academy, she had become accustomed to its company and occasional advice. Feelings of uselessness that envelopes her as she is left behind on several missions due to her injury/curse would also hit her confidence.

I was thinking that she had a kind of mask. A professional one that she shows to everyone but her best friend, and later teammates (But that is much later). And her vulnerable one that she only sometimes shows to her best friend.

Curse wise, maybe a new type of virus designed to cripple mages? Something that can hide itself from magical analysis.

I'm also thinking of adding another mage that was best friends with her as a form of friendly support through the tough time in her life between the hospital and the creation of the new mage division.

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Spoiler for Space:


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... Not quite sure what to say here...

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Wow, this is new. A character that starts of with a weakness, I like what I see so far. I hope you're going to continue.
I am still working out the details.
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Old 2008-03-13, 14:46   Link #22085
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Kha's job, as the de facto boss of Cadia, is to pile up as much crack (Khrack?) as he can in the shortest amount of time.
Though he's been a bit silent recently...

Or maybe it's the calm before the storm...

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Madness?

This!

IS!

CADIAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!

*throws self down pit of death, screaming "CADIAAAAA!*

*looks down the pit*


That's one deep hole. Don't forget to take breaths on your way down!

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Here is an idea that a friend and I had come up with. Well, my friend thought up the feedback idea for a character in World of Darkness and let me use the idea for a Nanoha OC.

Spoiler for Charese Silverman:
Welcome . A very interesting OC you have there . So...unusual LL situations, huh? Looks like her Division might cross paths with NERV on occasion.

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*sighs*
IRC-inspired crack. Forgive me.

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Spells later.


You didn't...

*looks again*

You DID

Does this mean I need to make an OC version of myself now?

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Oh no, you did not use Kyonko for this!

*Ahem* I remember 'reserving' Kyonko a while back when I introduced Cadia to the Haruhi genderbend. However, after many hair pulling atempts at a conversion, I came to a realization, one supported by Aaron.

I already had a Kyonko.

Aaron noted something I had stumbled across as well, when he was writing pieces for the genderbend thread, he noted how much Kyonko was like Tesla, and how easy it was to write her down because of it.

As such, I will leave you with this:

Spoiler for A change of hairstyle...:


Kyonko never needed to come to Cadia. She was already here.
Kyonko is actually TESLA?!

What the CRACK?!

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I
Besides, the OC-thread never had a leader. We don't need one, that's what makes us such a tight-nit group.
We need no leader! As long as we BELIEVE in OURSELVES and trust EACH OTHER and our HEARTS we can do ANYTHING!!
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Old 2008-03-13, 14:58   Link #22086
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I think I've kind of slowed down and burned out or something, I'll probably get back to Lynn here in a day or two, but I'm going to work on a Crash battle sequence first and then tomarrow (my day off) I have to make a Nanoha A's track into EPIC music. (Look Forward to it.)

So very little OC work from me this week.

**Notes the various people bringing out duplicates of Lavantine and switching them to SNAKE FORM.**

!

"OH SHI-"
'
Spoiler for !:
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Old 2008-03-13, 15:28   Link #22087
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Here's a little more on Charese.

Spoiler for Space:

Last edited by toran; 2008-03-13 at 15:30. Reason: Coding error
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Old 2008-03-13, 16:41   Link #22088
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I didn't read the whole thing but... I'm curious as to why Charese's device has no name? They traditionally are named I think...
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Old 2008-03-13, 17:11   Link #22089
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I didn't read the whole thing but... I'm curious as to why Charese's device has no name? They traditionally are named I think...
Well it was destroyed, so what's the point :3
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Old 2008-03-13, 17:12   Link #22090
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Well it was destroyed, so what's the point :3
Well even Chrono's Storage Device had a name...
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Old 2008-03-13, 17:18   Link #22091
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Well even Chrono's Storage Device had a name...
Which one? The one he used in the first season, or Dullandel from A's?
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Old 2008-03-13, 17:22   Link #22092
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Which one? The one he used in the first season, or Dullandel from A's?
Yeah his original one. I can't recall the name off the top of my head though.
And I think Durandal is Intelligent?
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Old 2008-03-13, 17:26   Link #22093
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Yeah his original one. I can't recall the name off the top of my head though.
And I think Durandal is Intelligent?
Storage. And his original device's name was S2U which sounds more like a serial number then a device name, really. I don't think it's required for a device to have a name, just that most people prefer to have a name when they're talking to someone, or something in this case.
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Which one? The one he used in the first season, or Dullandel from A's?
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Storage. And his original device's name was S2U which sounds more like a serial number then a device name, really. I don't think it's required for a device to have a name, just that most people prefer to have a name when they're talking to someone, or something in this case.
S2U is how it was referred in the anime, but it means "Song to you"

Durandal was made only to seal away the Book of Darkness, I wonder if Chrono still uses it after that team battle in the comics
I don't see why he'd use it, since all it has is Eternal Coffin, S2U proved very awesome in season 1 and when he used Stinger Blade: Execution Shift in A's

Also, I wonder if Chrono sees much action, since he's an Admiral and all
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Old 2008-03-13, 17:29   Link #22095
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Technically Durandal is focussed on cold spells, not just Eternal Coffin. And its not like he suddenly can only cast Eternal Coffin with it, he still has his other non-elemental spells after all. It wouldn't surprise me if he did still use it.
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Old 2008-03-13, 17:30   Link #22096
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Durandal is just specifically tuned to cast ice magic. I wonder how someone with a ice elemental affinity and Durandal would do...
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Durandal is just specifically tuned to cast ice magic. I wonder how someone with a ice elemental affinity and Durandal would do...
Just ask Yui (my Yui, not tshouryuu's)

EDIT: Currently writing part 2 of chapter 23 and all I can say is this...
Jail Scaglietti is Eeeeeevil!!!
*goes back to work*
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Old 2008-03-13, 17:42   Link #22098
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EDIT: Currently writing part 2 of chapter 23 and all I can say is this...
Jail Scaglietti is Eeeeeevil!!!
*goes back to work*
O rly?
So like...crazy yet smart Dr. Wily evil? Cold-hearted manipulative bastard Gendo Ikari evil? Cryptic and in control Kane evil?
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What's the matter, or am I asking the obvious?
I hadn't worked on an Itsuko conversion yet, so give me time.

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Then we'll just need to OC-fy him.
True, not enough trap oc's in the thread.

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In that timeline, possibly. It's all in the extension. :3
...

See, that's why I hate IRC. I have absolutely no idea what you're talking about.

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I was just trying to be creative is all I mean if you can make Kerokanon...
I never created Kerokanon. that aside though, Kerokanon is called like that for a reason.

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So you're all one big happy dysfunctional family?
Yup, and you're part of it.

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Doesn't work out or something? Care to clarify a bit on that topic? :3
You mean the weapon caches? Certainly. The TSAB has banned all mass based weaponry, what weapon chaches are they supposed to be protecting? Also, what artillery could they possibly have?

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Kyonko is actually TESLA?!

What the CRACK?!
Hmmm, more like 'Tesla is the OC-thread's Kyonko'

And this is not crack, for a change. We need a voice of sanity in this tread anyways. :3

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Here's a little more on Charese.

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Using a standard Storage Device, huh? I must admit, this is the first OC I actually see using the standard devices. Points for originallity.
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Thanks and yes, I'm planning on her having a division set up in StrikerS.
I still need to get ideas for teammates though.

Psychologically, I was thinking that she would become determined to overcome her disability while in the background, away from others, she would have some confidence issues. Partly due to the loss of her Intelligent Device that she had destroyed in the first magical feedback event. Since she had been with her device since the academy, she had become accustomed to its company and occasional advice. Feelings of uselessness that envelopes her as she is left behind on several missions due to her injury/curse would also hit her confidence.

I was thinking that she had a kind of mask. A professional one that she shows to everyone but her best friend, and later teammates (But that is much later). And her vulnerable one that she only sometimes shows to her best friend.

Curse wise, maybe a new type of virus designed to cripple mages? Something that can hide itself from magical analysis.

I'm also thinking of adding another mage that was best friends with her as a form of friendly support through the tough time in her life between the hospital and the creation of the new mage division.

Spoiler for Space:


Spoiler for Space:
Looks good. :3

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Though he's been a bit silent recently...

Or maybe it's the calm before the storm...
:3

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You didn't...

*looks again*

You DID

Does this mean I need to make an OC version of myself now?
Spoiler for A part of Khracker Three:


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Kyonko is actually TESLA?!

What the CRACK?!
It's just something we all missed. :3

We need Itsuko!!!

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We need no leader! As long as we BELIEVE in OURSELVES and trust EACH OTHER and our HEARTS we can do ANYTHING!!


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Here's a little more on Charese.

Spoiler for Space:
Wow you've done it! Not much comments left from me...

Except I don't know why, but the Nagisa vibes that I keep getting from Charase has grown even stronger.
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