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Old 2007-06-04, 23:40   Link #1041
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ohnoes, backlog! and i fail to counterattack!



Anna: not fair! Caro-chan is getting him first! *runs to Hikki & cries* papa, Caro-chan is meanie! She takes Erio from me!
Lutecia: yeah, she takes Erio!
The rest of the lolis: papa, do something!
all of them: onegai!
Hikki: calm down, girls, calm down....!

the rest: *stares at Hikki as he treats the lolis* papa?
Hayate: Hikki really is a good, dedicated father, ne?
Nanoha/Fate:
Nice dedicated father indeed Hikki the Loli Saviour

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1: yup, I try not having the design too influenced by Earth technologies.

2: I know. It would be awesome if ice bullet actually exists

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1: Understandable. Mind if I do my own spin on the designs, like I did Ratler's?

2: Imagine the possibilities if it truly did exist... the people I can kill and get away wit-

*is shot*

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alright, here's the profile of Frieda (I bet Aaron will squeal in excitement when he sees this :P )

Spoiler for omg yanmama!:


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I don't know what else I should put in there, except for the probable encounter with Signum (whether permits).
So Frieda's the close combat counterpart to Takeru's sniper style (even though she can still dish out the reach), and using awesome Gun-Kata Now wondering how well these two work together

Need to get me a copy of The Ultimate Sniper as well
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Old 2007-06-04, 23:49   Link #1042
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OMG massive backlog.

I'll reply to those later on but for now here's the latest training exercise with our unfortunate OC Tais...

This continues on from my original post here Invitation to Training

Spoiler for Tais V Spellblades:


Thanks to tshouryuu for letting me borrow Tais and Yui. I hope you approve.

For Clarification, the mini-fic is written in Yui's POV for the most part.

This has also introduced the other members of the squad

Incomplete Character Profile Below:
Spoiler for Valivis:

Spoiler for Tuala:


As you can see I'm still missing their background/personality info as well as many of Valivis's spells but hopefully it'll make the story make a bit more sense
I'm sure they will be good...anyway, for Tais.... poor him....
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Old 2007-06-04, 23:52   Link #1043
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Oh God No...

First Ginga... then Genya... and now Erio?! In the company of the Aces no less?!

I don't think I want to know what happens next...
@LoweGear: The Aces aren't the problem, well except for Fate who's trying to blast Tais senseless and maybe Hayate who isn't exactly on site but I blame her for starting this mess anyway
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Old 2007-06-04, 23:57   Link #1044
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So I noticed some sneaky posts here, and...

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And while Kha is dragging up the subject of assets

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... is that from BSG?

I've never seen this ship type before, and although it's quite droolworthy...

*wipes mouth*

I don't think it fits the smooth style of the warships we've seen in Nanoha so far. But it still looks awesome as a reference

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Originally Posted by stormturmoil

In the meantime, on the outskirts of administrated space

Spoiler for mysterious encounter...:
At this point, I'm wondering... what's he battling anyway? Kudos for more Bronzion Hammer use though

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OMG massive backlog.

I'll reply to those later on but for now here's the latest training exercise with our unfortunate OC Tais...

This continues on from my original post here Invitation to Training

Spoiler for Tais V Spellblades:


Thanks to tshouryuu for letting me borrow Tais and Yui. I hope you approve.

For Clarification, the mini-fic is written in Yui's POV for the most part.

This has also introduced the other members of the squad

Incomplete Character Profile Below:
Spoiler for Valivis:

Spoiler for Tuala:


As you can see I'm still missing their background/personality info as well as many of Valivis's spells but hopefully it'll make the story make a bit more sense
Excellent tactical assault there, and the very vivid description of the assault give a good idea of each team member's function, although Isamu could use a bit more discretion

And...

Ginga: REVOLVER SHOOT!!!!

Most outstanding indeed! *thumbs up*

(Ginga-neesama FTW! )

Should've made longer profiles for Valivis and Tuala, although at least we have an idea of what to expect from them. Hoping for a battering ram spell, but Tuala's support capabilities make him awesome already
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Old 2007-06-05, 00:08   Link #1045
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OMG massive backlog.

I'll reply to those later on but for now here's the latest training exercise with our unfortunate OC Tais...

This continues on from my original post here Invitation to Training

Spoiler for Tais V Spellblades:


Thanks to tshouryuu for letting me borrow Tais and Yui. I hope you approve.

For Clarification, the mini-fic is written in Yui's POV for the most part.

This has also introduced the other members of the squad

Incomplete Character Profile Below:
Spoiler for Valivis:

Spoiler for Tuala:


As you can see I'm still missing their background/personality info as well as many of Valivis's spells but hopefully it'll make the story make a bit more sense
You got my seal of approval. You pretty much got Yui down pat although Tais has this nasty tendency to think out loud without knowing it, wish you added that in. I could see a few points where Tais could have blundered with this habit but as he's my creation, i know him best but you still did a wonderful job.
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Old 2007-06-05, 00:58   Link #1046
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Anna: not fair! Caro-chan is getting him first! *runs to Hikki & cries* papa, Caro-chan is meanie! She takes Erio from me!
Lutecia: yeah, she takes Erio!
The rest of the lolis: papa, do something!
all of them: onegai!
Hikki: calm down, girls, calm down....!

the rest: *stares at Hikki as he treats the lolis* papa?
Hayate: Hikki really is a good, dedicated father, ne?
Nanoha/Fate:
Didn't see that coming.

Quote:
alright, here's the profile of Frieda (I bet Aaron will squeal in excitement when he sees this :P )

Spoiler for omg yanmama!:


===========

I don't know what else I should put in there, except for the probable encounter with Signum (whether permits).
Oi. I'm dignified enough to make it a whoop instead of a squeal.
Anyway, as expected, Frieda didn't disappoint.
B-but wait? BEOWULF?!
My second character also has a device with that name!

What do I see here?
(at a random non-combat location)
Aurion: Okay, time for a check. Beowulf.
Both Beowulfs: Ja?
Frieda:
Brevis:.............

Quote:
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OMG massive backlog.

I'll reply to those later on but for now here's the latest training exercise with our unfortunate OC Tais...

This continues on from my original post here Invitation to Training

Spoiler for Tais V Spellblades:


Thanks to tshouryuu for letting me borrow Tais and Yui. I hope you approve.

For Clarification, the mini-fic is written in Yui's POV for the most part.

This has also introduced the other members of the squad

Incomplete Character Profile Below:
Spoiler for Valivis:

Spoiler for Tuala:


As you can see I'm still missing their background/personality info as well as many of Valivis's spells but hopefully it'll make the story make a bit more sense
Poor guy...
Anyway, I'm really starting to like the direction where your characters are going. They'll become a well-coordinated and efficient small-scale task force, right?
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Old 2007-06-05, 01:02   Link #1047
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Here is something a little Different

Spoiler for The Director is embarrassing or Tais unit:
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Old 2007-06-05, 01:05   Link #1048
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Here is something a little Different

Spoiler for The Director is embarrassing or Tais unit:
And I was just preparing his tombstone... seems Dr. Tsuzuki has enough preparations already I have a nagging feeling that Dr. Tsuzuki had more involvement in Tais' troubles than just the bounty on his head

But... Rockbell? Is that who I think that is?
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Old 2007-06-05, 01:08   Link #1049
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I've just made an old guy antagonist....I dunno what went in my mind....it's pretty short, but explains it.

Spoiler for Betrüger:
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Old 2007-06-05, 01:12   Link #1050
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Well, at least Tai's more resilient than I am. I got killed the 7th time by the Blue Cheese and didn't respond much to the huge backlog as usual. Most people already spoke my mind anyway.

@ Lowe...considering how blocky Mid-childan vehicles are shown in StrikerS, that BCG battleship doesn't seem too out of place...unless Claudia is trimmed and aerodynamic as hell.

@ Kha...NOOOO~! You had Kha Unisoned first! And in such an awesome manner....I should've cranked out my Saga Unison earlier., but now it's still at least 5 parts away. :3

If Tai dies, I can always get Saga to revive him into a computer program and turn him to the side of chaotic neutral/evil. :3

Shouldn't Graham and the 3 Admirals get a tie-in with Count Dooku? Considering the timeline consideration, a mage of that rank would probably attract that level of attention...
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Old 2007-06-05, 01:14   Link #1051
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I've just made an old guy antagonist....I dunno what went in my mind....it's pretty short, but explains it.

Spoiler for Betrüger:

C-count Dooku...
Darth Tyranus!

Looks like I need to update my murderous antagonists lists.
Awesome entry, Satty.
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Old 2007-06-05, 01:23   Link #1052
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@ Satty: Thanks for the comments

Whee Banzai! Someone who isn't a teen of a loli. Sounds like someone the Spellblades would be after if their ranks were a bit higher.

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Excellent tactical assault there, and the very vivid description of the assault give a good idea of each team member's function, although Isamu could use a bit more discretion

And...

Ginga: REVOLVER SHOOT!!!!

Most outstanding indeed! *thumbs up*

(Ginga-neesama FTW! )

Should've made longer profiles for Valivis and Tuala, although at least we have an idea of what to expect from them. Hoping for a battering ram spell, but Tuala's support capabilities make him awesome already
Tuala: I'm FEMALE!! Make sure you remember /whack

Ahaha, Isamu wasn't sure that he would get to the party on time.. They're not usually like that.. or so I hope.
I'll finish up their profiles soon... exam study takes precedence...
Isamu: Umm sir, you need to get back to study... Sir??

@Aaron008R
Yep, The plan is for them to be team that gets called on when you want the buildings that the target is in to be relatively intact after their done..

@tshouryuu
Thanks for making characters that I can work with I can put some more of Tais's lines in if you want. Just give me a pm with what you want put in and where.

With open season announced, the coffin may be needed
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Old 2007-06-05, 01:29   Link #1053
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Nice dedicated father indeed Hikki the Loli Saviour



1: Understandable. Mind if I do my own spin on the designs, like I did Ratler's?

2: Imagine the possibilities if it truly did exist... the people I can kill and get away wit-

*is shot*



So Frieda's the close combat counterpart to Takeru's sniper style (even though she can still dish out the reach), and using awesome Gun-Kata Now wondering how well these two work together

Need to get me a copy of The Ultimate Sniper as well
1: you know Hikki is married.... don't you?
2: cool. I'd like to see how you're going to work on the designs, then.
3: add the fact that Frieda's a meganekko now point me to any of the mages/knights who wears glasses so far (OCs aren't included)

on the other hand...

Anna: I learned from this anime that meganekko are man's ultimate wish.
Lutecia: so does that mean we'll get Erio's attention if we wear glasses, too?
Anna: *nods* let's go!! *grabs Lutecia's hand & goes to the dressing room*

several minutes later....
Anna/Lutecia: Erio!
Erio: huh?
Anna/Lutecia: what do you think? Do we look beautiful in this?
Erio: err... what's with those glasses?
Anna/Lutecia: *approaches even closer* what do you THINK????
Erio:

Shin: you taught the girls weird things again, didn't you?
Hikki: did I ever do such thing? *laughs silly*
Alexandra: .......

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Didn't see that coming.

Oi. I'm dignified enough to make it a whoop instead of a squeal.
Anyway, as expected, Frieda didn't disappoint.
B-but wait? BEOWULF?!
My second character also has a device with that name!

What do I see here?
(at a random non-combat location)
Aurion: Okay, time for a check. Beowulf.
Both Beowulfs: Ja?
Frieda:
Brevis:.............
1:

2: Beowulf's already used? Ohnoes, I better go and edit the profile, though seeing how both the Beowulf's react might be fun

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I've just made an old guy antagonist....I dunno what went in my mind....it's pretty short, but explains it.

Spoiler for Betrüger:
Quote:
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C-count Dooku...
Darth Tyranus!

Looks like I need to update my murderous antagonists lists.
Awesome entry, Satty.
exactly my thought. Good job, Satty!
This means I need to create Arthur's long-time rival, archenemy, the only one whose power matches Excalibur.
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Old 2007-06-05, 01:31   Link #1054
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I've just made an old guy antagonist....I dunno what went in my mind....it's pretty short, but explains it.

Spoiler for Betrüger:
Be... Betruger?!?!?!

I thought you've become become hellspawn! Grab me my BFG 9000 quickly!!!



The name itself already makes him a very nice target for some large superweapons, but with his Jedi like powers I think it calls for some massive firepower

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@ Lowe...considering how blocky Mid-childan vehicles are shown in StrikerS, that BCG battleship doesn't seem too out of place...unless Claudia is trimmed and aerodynamic as hell.
Not all vehicles though... The Asura isn't that exposed, and some of the docked vessels we've seen in A's also have much better lines. And despite Storm Raider's blockiness, we've seen other vehicles with smooth lines, like the helicopter in StrikerS 1 and 2.

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Tuala:[/B] I'm FEMALE!! Make sure you remember /whack

Ahaha, Isamu wasn't sure that he would get to the party on time.. They're not usually like that.. or so I hope.
I'll finish up their profiles soon... exam study takes precedence...
Isamu: Umm sir, you need to get back to study... Sir??
I'll make sure to remember that *ow*

And yes... study...
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Old 2007-06-05, 01:51   Link #1055
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@LoweGear: only if you're thinking of someone bout 5'6 and has extremely pale brown hair (what color is her hair anyway?)

@satty: Sith FTW!

@Nightengale: Nah, if he dies, I'm think i'll go the Orange-kun route

@Liingo: don't worry its fine as it is.
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Old 2007-06-05, 02:00   Link #1056
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@LoweGear: only if you're thinking of someone bout 5'6 and has extremely pale brown hair (what color is her hair anyway?)
The person I'm thinking of has long blonde hair and makes automail
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Old 2007-06-05, 02:09   Link #1057
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PART V! And it's Reinforce's turn!

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@Lowe - True about the arguments, but it doesn't change the fact that it's not like Mid-childa doesn't have similar structures for vehicles. So, there may be stuff like Asura, but that BCG is also plausible. It's not like they're going to be the same class ships even in Nanoha-verse anyway.
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Old 2007-06-05, 02:17   Link #1058
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Artwork for Ratler here... Ryu's Staff Form:
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Wow that's cool, at first i was looking at it going well thats a nice image buy why is the staff only one sided at the head piece?? Then as I looked at a little harder I saw it the staff is a, umm how do i put it... the head pice of the staff is the hilt of the sword but rotated and the sword reduced. ^^ As soon as I noticed that all i could think of was "That is such an awsome idea!" I love it it looks great^^ thank you so much Lowe(is it ok if i call you that??) I wish that i had even a fraction of your talent ^^


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Poor Tais. he really needs to check his equipment and settings before combat
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Old 2007-06-05, 02:19   Link #1059
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PART V! And it's Reinforce's turn!

Spoiler for Part 5 : Princess:


@Lowe - True about the arguments, but it doesn't change the fact that it's not like Mid-childa doesn't have similar structures for vehicles. So, there may be stuff like Asura, but that BCG is also plausible. It's not like they're going to be the same class ships even in Nanoha-verse anyway.
Good point on the architecture argument there... guess I just found it wierd to have the BSG aesthetic in the Nanohaverse

And nice exposition on Princess Tiara, seeing more and more of her rebellious side.

And she gives Zafira his rightful mention, finally

With Shamal now seeing Saga, I'm wondering what'll happen next

Btw... what's with Acous and Hayate anyways?

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Wow that's cool, at first i was looking at it going well thats a nice image buy why is the staff only one sided at the head piece?? Then as I looked at a little harder I saw it the staff is a, umm how do i put it... the head pice of the staff is the hilt of the sword but rotated and the sword reduced. ^^ As soon as I noticed that all i could think of was "That is such an awsome idea!" I love it it looks great^^ thank you so much Lowe(is it ok if i call you that??) I wish that i had even a fraction of your talent ^^
Yep, got that right. I wanted each of the forms to "flow" seamlessly from one form to the next, and the five-bladed design of the weapon is inspired by the description of Clyuno mode, which is a gauntlet (each blade corresponding to a finger... which would make Blitz Form Ryu's equivalent of flipping the birdie ).

And most everybody calls me that, so it's no problem
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Old 2007-06-05, 02:24   Link #1060
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The person I'm thinking of has long blonde hair and makes automail
I'm talking about the Pantheress of Resembool (in her prime atm). If that does not ring any bells, try thinking back 2 generations.
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