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Old 2008-02-16, 03:15   Link #19841
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I was in a hurry to post and posted the wrong copy of Signum's rebuilt.

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Finally Lamia Loveless Signum's rebuilt profile, though you still up with that Caronum PIME TARADOX crack again?!?!?!

Lacks Koujinsen though
Yeah, since it was in the other file.

Check below for the changelog, and refer to the fixed original above. I've not only added more crack, but did a little reorganizing of the hierarchy of the Issen slashes, plus a new Issen debuts!

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The history is well done, and generally I approve of this. However, it feels that it lacks details on other areas when compared to the other rebuilds. Is this finalized? Anyway, thumbs up!
Yeah it does. Signum sadly isn't very high in my agenda in the earlier arcs, so StrikerS is pretty much the Signum Showtime of the well-developed Wolkies, so the much more lack of details.

It's not complete, and that version was the wrong one!

OK guys here's more details:

Spoiler for Offensive:
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Old 2008-02-16, 03:28   Link #19842
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What kind of milk?

And from who?

*hops into gondola and rows fast... really fast*
What kind of milk? The Alicia-brand

*dive dive dive*

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we can bring in all other six if you wanted to...

*sees giant rifle falling from the sky*



I'd rather bring Eldora V here

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That's Kyon-bait...

*sees GN particles floating*

"Yes, ponytails turn me on"

*runs from GN Mega Launcher*


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well I did base Rurika from Ruriko...

a port attempt turned scratch build... but will be refined in the rebuilt

see the name resemblance?

maybe i can port in Junko the meganekko as well- her gate is is really good for searching...
Yes, more meganekko is good

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Yuuko's one of the more stable Dimensional people... well TSAB Middle Council Seat 9/11 is always empty asides from Carim's seat 10/11 and Andrei's seat 11/11...



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@ Lowe do you have a solo pic of Sumeragi?

I have a job for you... and the rewards are great... since you've enjoyed the first set of Aqua's treasures....

Use the usual channel for communication...
Orders recieved and understood

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Franz: "THE TRUE SPIRIT OF MEN BURNS IN OUR- *kicked*

Glen: "Thank you."
Emili: " :3 "
Smith: Now that hurts
Wesson: That looks painful *cringes*
Mai: ...

Shall I share the pain with you?

Smith: I was wondering when you'd gonna show up
Wesson: Took you long enough

*S&W RUN*


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Can you actually escape Sentai?
There is No Escape

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... ohohohohohohohohohoho...

*makes twisted grin* I LIKE WHERE THIS IS GOING.
Me too

*whistles*

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XD I like you already.
And I am by no means the best writer here. We all stand out occasionally, but ultimately, we're a band of brothers and sisters that stick together and help each other out, and all of us improve together.
Band of Brothers?

Spoiler for *salutes*:


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OK guys here's more details:

Spoiler for Offensive:
Aaaah, there's Kojinsen

Though who's the unlucky Ex-Number?
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Old 2008-02-16, 03:37   Link #19843
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Okay, a recalc example using crash applied to the modified ranking system...

Spoiler for CRASH PROFILE:


Let's see what other characters get.

EDIT: Corrected for missing Charisma stat.
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Old 2008-02-16, 04:45   Link #19844
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Greetings. Pitch up a tent and sit with us around the campfire. No harm will come to you.
Thank you. ^_^

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... ohohohohohohohohohoho...

*makes twisted grin* I LIKE WHERE THIS IS GOING.
Like I said, Kha overreacts... -_-

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XD I like you already.
And I am by no means the best writer here. We all stand out occasionally, but ultimately, we're a band of brothers and sisters that stick together and help each other out, and all of us improve together.
Haha. ^_^

Band of Bros ah? Kha once something about him not being a hero, but him having served in the company of Nano. Cheesy. >_>

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Oh damnit there you go beating me again . I was going to use Vysaga in Alpha as well... though I probably still will... just in a different way.
So ripping off things from another anime then using it as your own a thread habit?

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"Yes, ponytails turn me on"

*runs from GN Mega Launcher*
No matter how many times people suggest it, that's a pain to maintain. -_-

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Smith: Now that hurts
Wesson: That looks painful *cringes*
Mai: ...

Shall I share the pain with you?

Smith: I was wondering when you'd gonna show up
Wesson: Took you long enough

*S&W RUN*
LOL.

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Aaaah, there's Kojinsen

Though who's the unlucky Ex-Number?
Probably somebody he's gonna rip off next.
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Old 2008-02-16, 04:51   Link #19845
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CRASH: Just keep a safe distance from any possible blast radii, and you shouldn't have a problem.

FOX: You warning about them... Or yourself?

CRASH: Both, it's more economical that way.
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Old 2008-02-16, 04:56   Link #19846
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I hate it when Anita throws a dictionary like the above post, hits me with it, then come poking me on MSN.

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XD I like you already.
We may be bros but HANDS OFF!

What did I just do...?
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And I am by no means the best writer here. We all stand out occasionally, but ultimately, we're a band of brothers and sisters that stick together and help each other out, and all of us improve together.


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Oh damnit there you go beating me again . I was going to use Vysaga in Alpha as well... though I probably still will... just in a different way.
Actually, Alpha is after StrikerS right? Any changes here can be used then anyway.

BUt if you want you can do 2 Vaisagas.

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Me too

*whistles*
THAT GOES FOR--

Sorry.

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Aaaah, there's Kojinsen

Though who's the unlucky Ex-Number?
Yeah, but it feels rather weird thanks to the earlier spells...

Anybody know what Mirage Sign and Mirage Sword would be in Japanese?

I've got quite a few Ex-Numbers, but at the moment the League of Dark Butler crack still hanging around my head makes me wanna do the same... So...

Rukia?
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Thank you. ^_^
Ano... Neko-chan...

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Like I said, Kha overreacts... -_-
Don't make yourself sound like you're talking about some sorry pitiful lowlife...

...

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Haha. ^_^

Band of Bros ah? Kha once something about him not being a hero, but him having served in the company of Nano. Cheesy. >_>
It isn't!

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So ripping off things from another anime then using it as your own a thread habit?
More like my drug habit...

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No matter how many times people suggest it, that's a pain to maintain. -_-
*rubs bump on head for suggesting it too many times before*



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LOL.
Ah yes you've met the thread comedians. :3

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Probably somebody he's gonna rip off next.
Hidoi... Must you always make my things sound so awful?

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Old 2008-02-16, 05:10   Link #19847
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Hey look ma, free tickets to the Kha & Anita show, let's get me some popcorn

*dodges sniper fire*

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Band of Bros ah? Kha once something about him not being a hero, but him having served in the company of Nano. Cheesy. >_>
Company of Nano?

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So ripping off things from another anime then using it as your own a thread habit?
Very much so. Although the challenge is turning that rip into an original all its own

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No matter how many times people suggest it, that's a pain to maintain. -_-
I can imagine

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LOL.

Probably somebody he's gonna rip off next.


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I hate it when Anita throws a dictionary like the above post, hits me with it, then come poking me on MSN.
Dictionary?

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We may be bros but HANDS OFF!

What did I just do...?
It's only natural man

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I've got quite a few Ex-Numbers, but at the moment the League of Dark Butler crack still hanging around my head makes me wanna do the same... So...

Rukia?
Nanda?

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Don't make yourself sound like you're talking about some sorry pitiful lowlife...
Spoiler for I'll be borrowing this for a while:




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*rubs bump on head for suggesting it too many times before*

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Old 2008-02-16, 05:17   Link #19848
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Hey look ma, free tickets to the Kha & Anita show, let's get me some popcorn

*dodges sniper fire*
Too bad she doesn't understand the set up of tsukikomi and uke, and doesn't have a harisen.

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Company of Nano?
BAND OF CADIA

"I am not a hero, but I served in the company of Nano."


After all, Nanoha just doesn't rhyme with hero like Nano does.

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Very much so. Although the challenge is turning that rip into an original all its own
I work my way around that by being a character that is a totally original level of ripoff.

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Dictionary?
Ie to say, any object/phrase from her that's designed to attack me.

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It's only natural man


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Nanda?
It's random. Set to change.

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Spoiler for I'll be borrowing this for a while:
OH SHI--

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Old 2008-02-16, 05:24   Link #19849
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Too bad she doesn't understand the set up of tsukikomi and uke, and doesn't have a harisen.
Doesn't have to. Just watching you two already makes my day

*runs*

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BAND OF CADIA

"I am not a hero, but I served in the company of Nano."


After all, Nanoha just doesn't rhyme with hero like Nano does.


*salutes*

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I work my way around that by being a character that is a totally original level of ripoff.
Now how does a character become a "totally original level of ripoff"?

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Ie to say, any object/phrase from her that's designed to attack me.


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OH SHI--
It's Super Effective

I can always rely on Thy Master's arsenal to do that

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Don't think you're immune to your own KHA BREAKER
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Old 2008-02-16, 05:24   Link #19850
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I hate it when Anita throws a dictionary like the above post, hits me with it, then come poking me on MSN.
Oh really now... -_-

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We may be bros but HANDS OFF!

What did I just do...?


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Hidoi... Must you always make my things sound so awful?



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Hey look ma, free tickets to the Kha & Anita show, let's get me some popcorn

*dodges sniper fire*
Chotto! -_-

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Spoiler for I'll be borrowing this for a while:
Kyou-chan! Can I keep this? Thank you so much!

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Too bad she doesn't understand the set up of tsukikomi and uke, and doesn't have a harisen.
I'm still here Kha... -_-

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BAND OF CADIA

"I am not a hero, but I served in the company of Nano."



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I work my way around that by being a character that is a totally original level of ripoff.
Does 2 rips make an original?

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Ie to say, any object/phrase from her that's designed to attack me.

Arm training.

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OH SHI--
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Old 2008-02-16, 06:36   Link #19851
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Hey look ma, free tickets to the Kha & Anita show, let's get me some popcorn

*dodges sniper fire*
*joins Lowe*
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Very much so. Although the challenge is turning that rip into an original all its own
which Kha fails at a lot of the time...
*runs*
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So ripping off things from another anime then using it as your own a thread habit?
More like thread addiction....
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Probably somebody he's gonna rip off next.
Bwahahahah, yep you know him well allright XD
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Don't make yourself sound like you're talking about some sorry pitiful lowlife...
Ara, but you are a pitiful lowlife...

*runs really fast*
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Hidoi... Must you always make my things sound so awful?
Although you have to admit, she does have a point....
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Does 2 rips make an original?
As much as he would like it to... No no it doesn't.

Once again, @thread Currently busy so not much time to respond to things. I have read most of the new posts, but if you want replies to your work, give me the links to them in a pm or in this thread and I'll get back to you as soon as I have the time.
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Old 2008-02-16, 08:23   Link #19852
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Maybe Keroko should start carrying around cans of RAID
RAID?

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Kind of a surprise near the end, but really I just wanted to demonstrate Keroko-chan's power under pressure :3 . Might need to change that up a little, though...
I'm not complaining.

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snkkkt. Well it's not that it matters. If it gets too confusion, I'll start calling him Keroko-nyan just to confuse people more.
Why nyan?

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Not quite Zerg, though much of how they act/what they do is based off of the Swarm. Instead, I took the Zerg and spliced them together with the Flood, and made my own creation with its own history, the Spawn.
Eek, no Keroko-chan hasn't faced those before.

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I figured . It was really Keroko's my half-hearted attempt at a joke in a tense situation.
Ah, in that case it's cool.

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Ahhh, okay. That's much different from the way I envisioned it, which was simply Blast Lancer on a much larger scale. I can probably change the spell to a cartridge-enhanced Blast Lancer, no problem.

Hey, it's better than the original idea. I was gonna make Keroko-chan activate Ethereal Mode, but figured it'd kill her in this state.
In that state? Definetely. Ethereal Mode is even worse then Blaster 3, so its only activated in huge drama moments.

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so does mean that "Everyone is gay for Bridget Keroko-kun?"

*runs*
That is all up to you.

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I think it's a curse of life. Authors always hate their own work.
Not always, but yes, they often do. Though maybe I have that problem less because I usually write and re-write untill I'm satisfied with it

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In my storyline, the Cradle was Vivio's personal warship, but out of her kindness and concern for her people she loaded as many people as possible that weren't involved in the actual defense of the old Belka on to it then sent it to another planet.

It ends up on Midchilda after the War of the Lords and Saints.
Hmm, in mine it goes slightly different.

Spoiler for Fall on an Empire:


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I do hope she is still receptive of Xealot the friendly Tyrannid.
If its not snarling in an atempt to bite her head off she'd all right with it.

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Unfortunately, my mental circuits are so lined with crack I sometimes mistake fanon for canon, and that's where screwups happen. That's why I need to run my ideas by you guys first for moderation.
*sigh* Okay, we'll keep you in line.

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Oh I interpreted that sheepish laugh as "Oh dear I got found out!" rather than "Huh? What? Really?"
... *looks at the above quote* ... Now I see what you mean.

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So I'll be going with an agricultural Core World that Kia, Megane, Quint, Lutecia, Erio, Caro and later the Numbers will live on for now due to the lack of magical pollution until their bodies recover, and also gives them a chance to be examined.

Thoughts?
Sounds good to me.

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Kha I see that you've been hard at work overseas... Don't think I'll forgive you for slacking off just because you miss me.

^_^

Kagerou that was one swell piece of writing! I wish I could write like that!

(How do you guys do that noddy thing?)
Heeeh? So the infamous tsundere apears? A pleasure to meet you. ^_^ Do stick around, make an OC, and have fun!

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And hello everyone... I hope Kha hasn't been too much trouble... What's with this place being called Cadia anyway? And I even see that Kha made an OC called Canoness... What's with all these WH40K madness?
*raises hand* My fault. This place has always had weird nicknames (Orange Country for example) but I found Outer Cadia to be a better one. Several reasons include the amounts of 40k references scattered around this thread (again, my fault ) and the fact that this place used to be somewhat of a 'bastion' for Yuunoha supporters.

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Will attempt a proper backlog break later.

Time for a random short one hour one shot nao, just because. Takes place pre-Alpha and is full of WAFFy goodness.

...that said, whether or not its canon to Alpha is entirely up to the reader .

Spoiler for Valentine's Day:
....

....

That is So. Amazingly. CUUUUUUUTE!

Oh my god, I love it! Brilliant work, Kagerou!

*saves*
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Old 2008-02-16, 09:09   Link #19853
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Bursting the bubble is the best part, though. I always love telling people that characters like Bridget or the Utawarerumono twins are traps.
Quite frankly, I hope a time like that comes later. I’ll be the one to burst the bubble if I can! XD

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Go ahead, its Aurion's profile after all.
Will do!

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Having a partial knowledge on the other side helps when writing romance about them.
And I guess having sisters also help. >.> (<~Only has a brother.)

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The only real rules we have is to keep the characters in IC and keep in mind the timelines. Beyond that, it depends. Some people like an FYI if you're going to use their characters. I myself don't need permission. If you want to use any of my characters, go ahead
Yep. Myself, I‘m a bit more possessive of my characters. Though wouldn’t mind if they’re suddenly used as long as their in-character.

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Went through briefly. This is good really. Explains his combat prowess in better detail.
Thanks.

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Motivated! To rebuilt my OCs myself. Or rather, I really just need a bunch of tweaks here and there.
I’ll be looking forward to that.

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Back for more crack and roll.


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Eh?
You said it before. You felt scammed.

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The only one I ever mistook a gender mistake of was PF. His post about Leona had me thinking from the start he was a girl.
I WAS referring to PF!

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Though I'm starting to not able to shake the impression of Keroko being female lately.


"Wait. Is he a guy or a girl? Oh yeah ."

*later that day*

"Which sex is Keroko again ?"


And repeat everyday and you'll see why I'm confused.
Oh boy…

You seem to be doing an excellent work of being a trap so far, Keroko… XD

(I’ll remove the ‘-kun’ for more confusion!)

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Keroko will be okay; the next scene, which introduces the OFM, reveals her condition.
Whew…

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...the Super Sentai Harem?

*runs*
Aurion: Right… -_-

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snkkkt. Well it's not that it matters. If it gets too confusion, I'll start calling him Keroko-nyan just to confuse people more.
XD

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XD. Don't worry about Keroko-chan, she's not dead yet.


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Depends on the person, really. I already explicitly stated my desire to use just about every OC conceived, so yeah .
You’ll be in some trouble if you want to use Grandis. They’ll most likely be married by now… Ah, well. It’s your story anyway, so a little delay with things won’t hurt. :3

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And after some delays, finally starting off PROFILE TIME

for the second of the Belkarangers, the Honest Heart, and Ebony Justice, Mayura Lee Labatt

Here's Part I: History

Spoiler for Chronicles of the Roaring Fist:


As per usual, an innovative profile that makes good use of references, has good emotional depth, and EPIC way of relating the story!

Melikes, a LOT! Especially their interconnection with Shinobu…

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Mayura: WOW

*poses in fighting stance, then signals for Ryotaro to come ala Neo*

I'd like to have this dance
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C'mon Aurion, you have nothing to lose... right?

*runs*
Hayate: Souya, Oji-chan! You agreed to cosplay as Kiritsugu once, right? Cosplaying as Tokusatsu character is easy!

Aurion: What does this have to do with my current situation?!

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Spoiler for VID:
[/QUOTE]



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Nonetheless, here's the 2nd Update to Mayura Labatt's profile -

Part II: Personality

Spoiler for length:

No wonder you named Rio as Rio in Mayura’s profile.

Anyway, she also gets a from me! Passionate, docile, determined and refined. With an obsession for Kamen Rider to even things up.

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Time for a random short one hour one shot nao, just because. Takes place pre-Alpha and is full of WAFFy goodness.

...that said, whether or not its canon to Alpha is entirely up to the reader .

Spoiler for Valentine's Day:


OH… MY… GOD!!!



Heck yeah! I wouldn’t mind this as Alpha canon!

Give me this over any NXF I’ve ever read before anyday. This is MOAR awesome in dynamic! AWESOME!!!

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Kha I see that you've been hard at work overseas... Don't think I'll forgive you for slacking off just because you miss me.

^_^

And hello everyone... I hope Kha hasn't been too much trouble...


Matte… So you’re… Kha’s ‘Fate’ in real life?! (with the corresponding avatar to boot)

WELCOME! And don’t worry. Even though Kha is our unofficial clup-president, we can keep him under control. (To a limited degree, anyway.)

I hope you enjoy your stay here. We’ve heard a lot about you from Kha. Mostly saying about how you’re a tsundere; though he wouldn’t have you any other way.

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OMFG HOW ON AZEROTH DID YOU FIND ME HERE?!?!?!?!?!

(runs off screaming incoherently)
Heh… Now I get it why you were approving of my idea of a remade MSL Nanoha where Chrono would be the villain instead of Fate and Fate would instead be the tsundere senior instead of Chrono.

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(Should I? Should I not? Should I? Should I not? Should I? Should I not? Should I? Should I not?)

Er... Anyway...

PLZ FEEL FREE TO MAKE AN OC HERE!

(I said it! I'm so gonna regret this... )
You won’t. Or at least, WE wont! XD XD XD

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I've been lurking here for a couple of weeks without registering. ^_^
I see!

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And nope I'm not as free as you. Lab rat for 8 to 6 every weekday lor, how to keep up with this post speed sia.
Aww…

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Reading is fun enough. Kagerou and PheonixFyre are really really cool! Kha's just spammy. Cheap. >_>
Ah, such true words…



*runs*

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Do carry on what you guys are doing. I hope my presence doesn't change anything, really funny to watch your exchanges. Reminds me of that long-named super robot anime Kha gave me for christmas.
Oh, don’t be too worried! Your presence actually made things much more interesting!

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Anyway, Kha is rather childish and loves overreacting, and this is not the first forum where both of us are members at the same time, so I'm used it now. I'm sure you all are used to it too.
Come to think of it, he was a major factor in infecting me with overreacting…

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Ja ne~~!

(rides off on a scooter)
Bye!

Wait… Scooter?!

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And thanks for ruining my rep here...

(chills in the corner)
What? Ruined?! You mean it wasn’t already notorious in the first place?!?!

*RUNS LIKE HELL*

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Not in the mood for too much crack, and there's enough in Signum herself already anyway. Just left with stuffing more crack into her lifestory. :3

[CENTER]LIGHTNING-02
Rebuilt of Signum
Ahh, yes….

The Rebuilt profiles are really starting to get better per profile posted!

Approved! Signum’s awesomeness has taken an entirely new level!

Though do you really have to keep up with the Signum = Caro crack?!?!

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Okay, rebuilding that rank system to more work in line with the Nanoha profile:

This should give a more accurate mage profile and more match up with the overal levels of ability based on a range of attributes going from physical, to magical, to mental, or behavioral. I keep them simple enough however not to overly confuse or contradict.

Spoiler for In depth Rank System:


EDIT 1: Forgot confidence
EDIT 2: Forgot Charisma
Wow…

Quite the most thorough ranking system I’ve ever seen in forums!
Though I guess I’ll pass up on ranking my characters for now…

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... ohohohohohohohohohoho...

*makes twisted grin* I LIKE WHERE THIS IS GOING.
Don’t we all?

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XD I like you already.
Careful, man… You wouldn’t want Kha suddenly jumping on your neck with a WHYAREYOUTALKINGTOMYGIRLLIKETHAT KIIIIIIICCCKKUU~~~~!!!

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And I am by no means the best writer here. We all stand out occasionally, but ultimately, we're a band of brothers and sisters that stick together and help each other out, and all of us improve together.
Quoted for absolute frickin truth!

But still, I do look up to you and Wild Goose as the type of writer I’d like to be. Since you two uses the style of writing I find to suit my writing approach better.

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Like I said, Kha overreacts... -_-
Tell me about it. He infected me with that!

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We may be bros but HANDS OFF!

What did I just do...?
It’s called POSSESSIVENESS.

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Hidoi... Must you always make my things sound so awful?



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Too bad she doesn't understand the set up of tsukikomi and uke, and doesn't have a harisen.
Tsukkomi and BOKE

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Doesn't have to. Just watching you two already makes my day

*runs*
Truth…

*runs with Lowe*

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Does 2 rips make an original?
It gives the same answer to the question; “Does two positives make a negative?”



Anyway, I’ve found a suitable basis for Grandis’ voice.
Spoiler for He should sound like this guy.:
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So ripping off things from another anime then using it as your own a thread habit?
Lol, yeah, to a certain degree. For example, the Order of Freelance Mages, created by Kagerou and myself, are heavily based off real-world Delta Force, SEAL Team SIX, Halo's ODST Marines... those are the 3 most visible markers, anyway.

The trick is to adapt it and weave it into the StrikerS timeline. For example, we've got both Johnson and Master Chief in the OFM - though Johnson is Sergeant Major Ivanovich, as the planet he comes from, Erusia, has a strong Russo-German influence (or rather... Belka/Erusia/Yuktobania for Ace Combat fans), while Franz Jaeger, my main OC, had his name based off that of Frank Jaeger from Metal Gear Solid. (Though Franz is his own person and kicks less ass than Frank. )

Anyway, welcome to OC, and feel free to hang around....
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So ripping off things from another anime then using it as your own a thread habit?
A better wording would be 'using elements from other anime, then using them as your own is a thread habbit'

For example, a different style of magic I created, called 'Aspect Magic' relies on signing contracts with one of the five Aspect dragons from the Warcraft universe, Nozdormu, Malygos, Ysera, Alextrasa or Neltharion. Of course, since Neltharion's corruption, signing a contract with him is all but impossible, and almost certainy suicidal.

Another example is Syn, whose fighting style, while obsiously Nanohaverse, is very similar to the use of nen from Hunter X Hunter.

Rogue Squadron, on the other hand, is mostly one big rip-and-edit.
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Maybe a fight between BelkaRed and Gwen then, to see whose style is better?
Hmm, since you say Asagi is in the leagues of Signum as far as close combat is concerned, then Gwen will be in trouble if she gets close. However, since Asagi is a counterattack type, then Gwen will have the advantage throughout the fight. Asagi is going to need to go on the offensive.

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And Lightning Gravity Fall translates to "Inazuma Juuryoku Otoshi"... which is actually a name of a Super Sentai Robo finisher, and shares the same name with another famous attack in SRW

Colwell's licensing Ferraris for creation? Now why didn't I think of that
I wonder who comes up with these names...

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The SGS is quite involved with searching for Lost Logia, and quite unlike the TSAB don't have much red tape to stop them, except in the case of high-level Lost Logia which, as explained above, requires the presence of an Enforcer to collect

While SGS probably won't have the TSAB's resources at hand, they still have the ability to track down alot of B+ to AAA+ level Lost Logia running around
I can surely make use of this.

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That's not illegal



*runs from mob*
Then what would be illegal is this...

...

... wait, I better not post such a pic...

*runs*

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Wow, ever since Aria I've had this desire to go to Venice... didn't know you already had

Although unfortunately Venice's water guides are all male, nothing like the wonderful and sexy Undines of Neo-Venezia



*rows faster*
They mostly use electric boats to transport people around, too. Gondolas are mostly used by couples.

... But of course, I wouldnt mind taking a gondola alone if I saw such hawt and sexy water guides...

*runs*

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Spoiler for Ask, and thou shalt recieve:


BELKARANGERS WIN!

And hopefully these are their *real* barrier jackets.

*runs*

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That's perfectly legal.



*runs*
I definitely agree with you, my friend.

*runs too*

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Wow, you did go to Venice. Wish I could go overseas as well.

Yeah, all gondoliers need to be as HAWT and SEXY as Aria's...

*RUNS REALLY FAST*


If you get a chance to go, it is very worth it.

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And here's Aurion's combat capability assessment.

Going along the lines of HAXX that is not HAXX, I present you....

Spoiler for LONG:


Hopefully, it'll come thru as acceptable. I lowered his stamina further and batted off some more unacceptable capabilities. And I also made sure to properly cite the limitations of each aspect. So, how is it?
I see nothing wrong here.

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RADIO EDIT: Finished Scene V. Keroko's introduction and pwnage/pwnd. Hope you all enjoy (insert obligatory question to Keroko-kun here if I got her character right).
I forgot which was the last part I read... Do you have a list of links for Alpha?

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Well, Yuuno actually, when you unlock the Nice Boat ending.

*runs*
If it is what I think it is, HOLY SH--! The bad memories...

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Neil and the other competitor?
Well, if Artei is still 18 during StrikerS, then Neil will be his sempai... and even the "other competitor" wont be a gaki for him.

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Because... it is her?
So I guess she copied Hayate's ways...?

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@Erio: Er... No one knows for sure if Kha and Fate are married officially... yet.
When do they start their romantic relationship anyway?

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~~~New intelligence data updated~~~

Fate's profile has been updated! Click here for more info.

A quick look at the changelog:

Spoiler for Fate awesomeness:
Any other issues to point out?

Library closing! BRB in a while!
Well, IMO, the fact that Bardiche is very quite and most of the time speaks in single word sentences is what makes it unique, interesting and awesome. That's why the sudden change to a super-GARlock Bardiche does not compute, at least for me.
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Well, double post, since no one has posted since I last posted...


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It's been a while since I last paused, and how here's the thing I've strived to write down (although it came out as less spectacular as I had previousluy expected). Oh, well, it can't be helped, can it?

besides, by the time I finished this, my hands and brain were frozen due to the airconned room.

Spoiler for the end?:


finally acquired SRW Alpha 3 OST & Dragonforce CD. Awesome to the max!
Its been a while indeed. And Exceed Mode

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So this is the best I can come up with right now, based on what responses there were. These are in no particular order, and list their ranks or titles as of the end of the canon material, as well as their positions. Note that I still don't know whether there is any extra information in the Sound Stages.

There's a lot of uncertainties and unknowns here, so any help filling in the blanks will be appreciated. Any corrections for errors in terminology (except for the "Private Second Class" thing) will also be appreciated.

Regarding Private/Private Second Class: I'll be using "Private Second Class", despite the non-existence of such a rank in Real Life. After all, beam-spamming magic doesn't exist in Real Life either.

I know that a lot of it may seem stupid, but I'm sticking with the canon, as stupid as it may be. Because it's the canon, and this is meant to be a guide: distracting new writers with fanon will be a bad idea.

Spoiler for Cut for space:
I'll be adding this post to the front page.

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And after some delays, finally starting off PROFILE TIME

for the second of the Belkarangers, the Honest Heart, and Ebony Justice, Mayura Lee Labatt

Here's Part I: History

Spoiler for Chronicles of the Roaring Fist:
Now that's a lot of Aliases...

Sweet and interesting background story. And Mayura sure is very skilled in hand-to-hand combat, matching Quint at such a young age.

I also like how Shinobu had an impact on each and every one of the girls.

I wonder, though, what do the three think of Mai?

More please.

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For some reason I find this chapter wierd, even for my style of writing.

Nonetheless, here's the 2nd Update to Mayura Labatt's profile -

Part II: Personality

Spoiler for length:
I dont see what's weird with this. I like the details.

Mayura seemed like the onee-san of the team... until you mentioned Julie's sage advice... I now wonder if the onee-san role is actually Julie's.

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Will attempt a proper backlog break later.

Time for a random short one hour one shot nao, just because. Takes place pre-Alpha and is full of WAFFy goodness.

...that said, whether or not its canon to Alpha is entirely up to the reader .

Spoiler for Valentine's Day:
What the-- a Vivio and Syn RABU-RABU piece?! ...And I didnt expect that they'd actually kiss...

Even if its Vivio--- OK OK, sorry. I did like it.

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Kha I see that you've been hard at work overseas... Don't think I'll forgive you for slacking off just because you miss me.

^_^

Kagerou that was one swell piece of writing! I wish I could write like that!

(How do you guys do that noddy thing?)

And hello everyone... I hope Kha hasn't been too much trouble... What's with this place being called Cadia anyway? And I even see that Kha made an OC called Canoness... What's with all these WH40K madness?
Welcome. And Kha has indeed been a lot of trouble. We've come to built natural resistances towards his bluecheesium now, though.

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And thanks for ruining my rep here...

(chills in the corner)
LOL. Finally we see Kha-chan's cute side?!

*runs*

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Not in the mood for too much crack, and there's enough in Signum herself already anyway. Just left with stuffing more crack into her lifestory. :3

LIGHTNING-02
Rebuilt of Signum



The Burning Fire General

Spoiler for Signum, the Burning Fire General:
Not much crack here... Except maybe when I get the Rebuilt Signum's Vaisaga KA picture ready.

The slight Caronum crack was just an inneudo; don't worry.

Shall I post the possible theories of Signum's past, as discussed by OCs and CCs too?

*runs*
First of all, nice pic.

And then... You're really bringing up the Signum/Caro CRACK?!
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Band of Brothers?

Spoiler for *salutes*:
*Salute*

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So ripping off things from another anime then using it as your own a thread habit?
That's... a bit harsh. More like some really heavy alterations first.


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We may be bros but HANDS OFF!
No problem~

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Actually, Alpha is after StrikerS right? Any changes here can be used then anyway.

BUt if you want you can do 2 Vaisagas.
We'll see .


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Why nyan?
Because it's Tsuruyaism for -chan, apparently, but slurred slightly thanks to her idiosyncratic speech method, so it sounds a bit confusing. Thus, -nyan. XD

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Eek, no Keroko-chan hasn't faced those before.
And they put her through a ride...

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Ah, in that case it's cool.


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In that state? Definitely. Ethereal Mode is even worse then Blaster 3, so its only activated in huge drama moments.
Excellent. This fits perfectly into my plans for the finale (Ironically, I have the finale planned out in its entirety )

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Not always, but yes, they often do. Though maybe I have that problem less because I usually write and re-write untill I'm satisfied with it
I can't do that. My drafts are almost always completely different, and my final draft has no resemblance other than plot to my first draft.

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*raises hand* My fault. This place has always had weird nicknames (Orange Country for example) but I found Outer Cadia to be a better one. Several reasons include the amounts of 40k references scattered around this thread (again, my fault ) and the fact that this place used to be somewhat of a 'bastion' for Yuunoha supporters.
*raises hand* one of the aforementioned Yuunoha supporters.



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....

....

That is So. Amazingly. CUUUUUUUTE!

Oh my god, I love it! Brilliant work, Kagerou!

*saves*
Glad you liked it. I was honestly afraid of minor character derailment, then realized it was WAFF, and stopped caring.

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You’ll be in some trouble if you want to use Grandis. They’ll most likely be married by now… Ah, well. It’s your story anyway, so a little delay with things won’t hurt. :3
Oh? Well that makes things easier. Too bad their jobs put them through a lot in the first half, but there will be happy reunion in the second.

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OH… MY… GOD!!!



Heck yeah! I wouldn’t mind this as Alpha canon!

Give me this over any NXF I’ve ever read before anyday. This is MOAR awesome in dynamic! AWESOME!!!
Glad you like it.
As for it being canon, like I said, it's totally up to the reader. It's rarely mentioned by Syn and Vivio, and when it is, they never speak of the kiss, leaving one to wonder if it really happen.

But they don't really need to have; the two rely on each other so much by Alpha whether or not there's love of any sort is a silly question. Do they love each other as sisters, or something more? Just like Nanoha and Fate, the answer is up to you :3

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Quoted for absolute frickin truth!

But still, I do look up to you and Wild Goose as the type of writer I’d like to be. Since you two uses the style of writing I find to suit my writing approach better.
Hey now, I like your style too.
On the other hand, there's something about Goose's that's pretty good and, when he's writin' serious business, very military and awesome. Really, to compare, if my writing was "soft" sci-fi, Goose's would be "oh my god hardcore" sci-fi.



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Lol, yeah, to a certain degree. For example, the Order of Freelance Mages, created by Kagerou and myself, are heavily based off real-world Delta Force, SEAL Team SIX, Halo's ODST Marines... those are the 3 most visible markers, anyway.

The trick is to adapt it and weave it into the StrikerS timeline. For example, we've got both Johnson and Master Chief in the OFM - though Johnson is Sergeant Major Ivanovich, as the planet he comes from, Erusia, has a strong Russo-German influence (or rather... Belka/Erusia/Yuktobania for Ace Combat fans), while Franz Jaeger, my main OC, had his name based off that of Frank Jaeger from Metal Gear Solid. (Though Franz is his own person and kicks less ass than Frank. )

Anyway, welcome to OC, and feel free to hang around....
Speak for yourself. My OCs are fairly original . Their references to other characters really have little effect on their personality, except perhaps the Glen/Emili = Kyosuke/Excellen allusion that's sorta there.

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I forgot which was the last part I read... Do you have a list of links for Alpha?
Maho Shoujo Lyrical Nanoha Alpha, Episode 1: Maho no Jumon Wa...
Scene I
Scene II
Scene III
Scene IV
Scene V
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Okay, I decided to give my system a check on a known rank. I can't think of Raising certain aspects of Hayate's stats higher than they are right now, so I decided she's getting a bonus because of her very high leadership qualities, and her magical power qualities. Oh, and to make things evenly rounded off, I added one more rank above triple S. Not that anyone makes that rank...

Spoiler for Control Check: HAYATE:


Comments, suggestions?


EDIT: Non-conventional ranking...

Spoiler for E.D.I. MADCAP:
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So this is the best I can come up with right now, based on what responses there were. These are in no particular order, and list their ranks or titles as of the end of the canon material, as well as their positions. Note that I still don't know whether there is any extra information in the Sound Stages.

There's a lot of uncertainties and unknowns here, so any help filling in the blanks will be appreciated. Any corrections for errors in terminology (except for the "Private Second Class" thing) will also be appreciated.

Regarding Private/Private Second Class: I'll be using "Private Second Class", despite the non-existence of such a rank in Real Life. After all, beam-spamming magic doesn't exist in Real Life either.

I know that a lot of it may seem stupid, but I'm sticking with the canon, as stupid as it may be. Because it's the canon, and this is meant to be a guide: distracting new writers with fanon will be a bad idea.

Spoiler for Cut for space:


A couple of notes.

The Navy doesn't have a Private First Class; the equivalent E-1 rank is Seaman.

Warrant Officers exist in both the Navy and Army.

Lastly, why did Vice get a demotion? IIRC he was a Master Sergeant...

IIRC, there are mentions that Ginga s part of 108th Ground Batt's Investigation Department/Section. (will rewatch subs. If can be pried away from loli meido pilot KyosukexExcellen ftw HOT BLOODED AWESOME.

With regrads to my writing style, my early influences were very hard (Tom Clancy) and also somewhat soft (Aaron Allston is pwn, and writes Wedge the best) on the scale of realism. The hot blood is a sorta new thing. I guess I'm trying to make realistic hot blooded awesome.
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