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Old 2004-01-13, 09:07   Link #1
Sakura-chan
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Rain: WIP

@.@I think I'm getting sick... My eyes hurt... T.T And plus all of my hosts died on me... T_T
So I need a little help with this one drawing, I can see that there is something wrong with her head, but not exactly sure what... *yawn* I really don't wanna go to school~

EDIT: Yay, uploadit.org is working again!
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Old 2004-01-13, 09:49   Link #2
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heh, yeah, school sux, im there right now.

the only thing i can see is that maybe the nose could be a little bigger, but im not an artist, so.. you know.
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Old 2004-01-13, 17:35   Link #3
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um..the link doesn't work..
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Old 2004-01-13, 18:16   Link #4
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copy 'n' paste... it's geocities... you have to.

but looks good anyway. as for the nose thing. make the shadows make it slightly more prominent
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Old 2004-01-13, 18:40   Link #5
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I really like your coloring style!
anyways, the eye on the left is a bit wierd, and the hair might be the thing causing the head to look wierd...not overly sure.
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Old 2004-01-13, 18:48   Link #6
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sakura chan! I love it!! the style youre developing is -awesome-!! and I love the colors
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Old 2004-01-13, 19:41   Link #7
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Very interesting, I like it. Good job
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Old 2004-01-13, 23:10   Link #8
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me too!! its kewl! ^_~
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Old 2004-01-14, 00:04   Link #9
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Hey sakura-Chan i see you are developin your skills in a good pace, keep it up, but try to be more BOLD and draw more then just the face.
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Old 2004-01-14, 10:03   Link #10
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Not bad, I think the positioning of the eyes isn't too good? And the two stream of rainwater flowing down her face is scary and quite distracting, looks more like veins to me.
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Old 2004-01-14, 23:20   Link #11
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oo i really like the damp blue color scheme. and the sketchiness of the outline is very attractive too.
the problem with her head is that the right side is too flat. it's a straight line from the top of her bangs to her cheek, and the rounded angle towards the back of her head should start a couple inches lower than you have it. the left side of the top of her head needs to come out a bit more, and the whole hair-part of the head needs to be more rounded off and less square-ish. the face looks good, its just the part of the head covered in hair is slightly askew.
when i draw a girl's head, i draw them without hair first to get an idea of the shape of the head. i draw on paper tho heh so my example is pretty crude, but i think you can get the general idea. try covering the top of her head (with your hand, on the screen) outside the red outline i have drawn to see what i mean.
hope this helps ^^

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Old 2004-01-14, 23:45   Link #12
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Arigatou minna-san~ ^.~
ChibiDusk - Yes, the eyes are wierd, I've tryed re-drawing them 10 times... T.T
Tzurial - Hontou desu ka? Youkata... ~_~
Anime-otaku - eh... I'm working on that. ^^
Tboz - Is it really that scary?^^;;
Memorie - whoa... That helps. A whole lot~ Hountou ni arigatou gozaimasu. =^^=
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Old 2004-01-15, 12:10   Link #13
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I think the mouth and nose seem a little too far to her left. But I could be wrong.....
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Old 2004-01-15, 21:47   Link #14
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WHAT WONDERFUL PITCURE you just made the one thing i love more then soda and red eyes

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Old 2004-01-15, 22:39   Link #15
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s][x - hmm... Maybe that's it.
Lst2touchdasky - I love rain too. ^^ ~And red eyes. Yup. xD~ See?
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Old 2004-01-16, 20:28   Link #16
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I like that last pic Sakura-chan! ^^ Maybe you could have drawn more of his nose? That way, it would seem a little less flat
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Old 2004-01-16, 22:01   Link #17
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OMG RED EYES Give HIM A SODA and i could die happy
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