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Old 2009-01-18, 12:41   Link #3161
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Full chapter of Stories From the North chapter 8 is now uploaded on fanfiction.net
Read and review please.
Oh no Yuma took her attention off the fight! Looks like Clare and Miria still have lots of work to do.
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Old 2009-01-18, 13:59   Link #3162
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Hehe, don't forget to leave a review.

And for anyone who is interested, there is a great Clarice/Raki fanfic called "Papa" on fanfiction.net, and I have to admit, that is some awesome stuff.

Edit: As is "Life Sucks!" a rather well done modern Claymore fic, it definitely falls into my favorite fan fiction list.
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Old 2009-01-19, 06:32   Link #3163
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Let us continue with more East-West insanity. Roll on Tianshui.


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Old 2009-01-19, 11:57   Link #3164
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Here is chapter 2 of After War.

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Old 2009-01-19, 17:04   Link #3165
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Now is here is chapter 3.

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Old 2009-01-19, 17:28   Link #3166
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Now is here is chapter 3.

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@ h88 - i'm assuming you already killed off raki since clare has awakened now?
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Old 2009-01-19, 17:37   Link #3167
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Finally here it is. the chapter 5.
Next one is almost ready. I just have to edit it. With luck, it will be online by tomorrow


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sorry hell88, I'm trying to finish your previous fic before reading this one. I will tell you what I think after
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Old 2009-01-19, 17:44   Link #3168
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@ h88 - i'm assuming you already killed off raki since clare has awakened now?
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Old 2009-01-20, 01:54   Link #3169
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Review for your first 3 Chapters of After War,

Can roughly remember what happened in Double-Edged, but I get the picture of what's happening.

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Old 2009-01-20, 06:36   Link #3170
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@ shelter - hey, when will you be posting a new claymore fanfic besides proximity on ff.net? you, moonlith and hamstadini are such talented writers and i've always been a fan of you guys. lol

if you're planning on something, let me know. ^^;
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Old 2009-01-20, 11:04   Link #3171
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@shelter: Lol no I have been planning this story before I found out about the third Underworld movie, and it has nothing to do with that lame Twilight series. BTW I portray them as they should be portrayed, in the movies vampires always get looked at like they are grundge rockers or heavy metal rockers that would probably be fun to be around. In my fic I show them as they should be, blood thirsty violent killers that don't stop any bloodshed for anyone or anything.

Anyway all of the chapters have been written in advanced, and here is the next chapter.

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Old 2009-01-20, 17:17   Link #3172
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Okay here is my next chapter, I am giving this one a more mature warning because of the use of adult themes. You have been warned, but we all seem to write about that stuff anyway.

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Old 2009-01-21, 09:23   Link #3173
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Final chapter.

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Old 2009-01-21, 17:09   Link #3174
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:P Review for chapter 4 and 5, Hell.


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And now for MisterJB's review.

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And finally, chapter update for IF.

Chapter 39: The Heroine of Shu

Chapter 40: Lady Phoenix
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Old 2009-01-22, 10:11   Link #3175
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nice story can you make a story where claire is partner with any claymore
As requested.

A completely random Clare x Yuma short written to let off some steam.

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@Hell, still reading your last 3 chapters. Will post something about them soon.
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Old 2009-01-22, 12:24   Link #3176
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yosei: Thanks for the review.
Well, a little legitimate and little fake too. He doesn't really care about the Continent

shelter:finally we see more of your narrative. I hope it suffices to say that I liked it
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Old 2009-01-22, 16:23   Link #3177
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As requested.

A completely random Clare x Yuma short written to let off some steam.

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@Hell, still reading your last 3 chapters. Will post something about them soon.
You really like to make your yuri fics cryptic don't you? It took me a while to figure out what Yuma was doing to Clare.
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Old 2009-01-22, 16:34   Link #3178
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Cool one-shot, Shelter. Now I like Yuma more and more. While I don't have any major points, I think there were a couple of past-tense/present-tense confusions due to the fact that they weren't italicized and therefore couldn't be thoughts from a character. There was a minor disconnection between "bracing against the all of her comrade's weight" part but that's, like... a minor mistake... all I can pick out.
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Old 2009-01-22, 22:57   Link #3179
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Hehe, don't forget to leave a review.

And for anyone who is interested, there is a great Clarice/Raki fanfic called "Papa" on fanfiction.net, and I have to admit, that is some awesome stuff.
Ah, thank you. Always good to hear a recommendation, though I'd have to point out that any and all Clarice/Raki is entirely one-sided.

Anyway, Papa is completely finished, so anyone who was put off by the short-chapter format can rush through from start to finish, and then hit all the side arcs.

The next Claymore project to be, which is only in the planning stages now...

All the Difference: Behind every great man stands a woman. Which woman can make all the difference. Glimpses at Raki and what could have been if we ask ourselves two questions. What if it hadn't been Clare who walked through into that village that day? What if it had been... someone else? From Helen to Irene, Mirai to Ophelia, different women, different events, and different bonds.
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The next Claymore project to be, which is only in the planning stages now...

All the Difference: Behind every great man stands a woman. Which woman can make all the difference. Glimpses at Raki and what could have been if we ask ourselves two questions. What if it hadn't been Clare who walked through into that village that day? What if it had been... someone else? From Helen to Irene, Mirai to Ophelia, different women, different events, and different bonds.
an interesting concept this is. i wonder who also would make an big impact on raki's life besides clare. i think galatea or miria would definitely be that. ^^;
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