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Old 2007-08-11, 01:15   Link #141
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Great job on it Fenrir! I was beginning to wonder about the continuations. So I suppose the next installment will be about getting the uniforms eh?
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Old 2007-08-11, 10:09   Link #142
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Yup, yup!

Will probably have Miria and Clare on that one, because Clare is the only one with experience wearing other clothes

Liked your fic on the fab 4 reunion, the one posted before the story I just posted, I always thought Helen displayed alot of concern for Clare, she just did not know how to express it in a nice way
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Old 2007-08-11, 10:40   Link #143
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Well, she's the only one we've seen that has worn other clothes.

I've always thought of the seven's clothes as being Clare's idea because of Irene. They look too similar not to be noticed. That and Irene looked ten times hawter in that outfit...

Random - Now that I think of it...I wonder how they'd sound if Flora's VA and Cynthia's VA were to have switched roles...Galatea would have some serious comeptition from Flora then because of that voice.
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Old 2007-08-11, 15:01   Link #144
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I noticed that too, Cynthia has Flora's voice in the anime as far as I am concerned, I imagine Cynthia talking whenever I hear Flora's voice and vice-versa
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Old 2007-08-12, 07:58   Link #145
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Ah, Cynthia...I actually shivered when I heard her voice again. So sexy~

I'll wait a few more eps before writing about her and the 'others'.

Oh, and I edited my previous two stories/posts. Now I think they're good enough to put on FF.net. Should put yours up too.
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Old 2007-08-12, 10:40   Link #146
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Been thinking about it, might do it sometime soon.

It is a shame the anime cant seem to get some of the Claymore's looks down right, at first Ophelia looked odd, and now Flora doesnt look like herself and niether do several other Claymore's in the northern campaign.
Cynthia looks alot more mature, when she looked kawaii in the manga
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Old 2007-08-13, 19:36   Link #147
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I know, they role-reversed Flora and Cynthia so much. I'm beginning to think of Cynthia as being hawt moreso than kawaii. I never did get into Flora all that much to tell the truth. She just didn't seem like she'd be of much importance to the overall scheme of things...and I was partly right.

Should ask Toxic to do a Lo'real commercial with Flora for the Claymore girls. XDDD

Man, it's not fair, so many ways to write MiriaXClare and I can't decided which one to use~!! Such a fustrating yet interesting dilemma! Can even have Helen teasing Clare about Miria wanting to go off with just the two of them and everyone else are chaperones.
Can you tell, I like these two soooo much better than the accursed ShizNat.
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Old 2007-08-15, 15:28   Link #148
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I'm always shy to put up my written work, but how else can you improve without some comments and critique right?

This is just a small part, the prologue of the storyline, the rest is allready well on its way of being written.

A question , after you've read it.
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As for the actual prologue.

Warriors of the Past

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Old 2007-08-19, 13:14   Link #149
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Hey!

My friend is writing a claymore fic, a romance fic, including Galatea and one other claymore. Now she cant decide who the other claymore should be. Maybe you guys have any suggestions/ideas/requests?

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Old 2007-08-19, 13:31   Link #150
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Hey!

My friend is writing a claymore fic, a romance fic, including Galatea and one other claymore. Now she cant decide who the other claymore should be. Maybe you guys have any suggestions/ideas/requests?

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Old 2007-08-19, 13:38   Link #151
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@ Mandrake

- physical descriptions as you progress would be better. Also the phrases, 'front most' and 'back most', really don't work. It makes it sound awkward.'First' would have sufficed just fine in that sentance as well.
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“Great” said Cecilia, the back most warrior in the file.
Same note for this one as well - 'last' would be better IMO.
...hm, more spaces used to distinguish one character to the other.
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Seraphine, the one in front of her turned her head to face her. “It’s not like you aren’t used to this by now. Don’t tell me you’re tired already?” “Yes I am tired, tired of seeing nothing else but dust, dirt and rocks. It’s boring.” “Well I cannot argue with that” she said, sighing audibly.
When it runs together like that, it's hard to distinguish who's talking even though there are quotation marks.
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Old 2007-08-20, 02:26   Link #152
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My friend is writing a claymore fic, a romance fic, including Galatea and one other claymore. Now she cant decide who the other claymore should be. Maybe you guys have any suggestions/ideas/requests?

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Helen! totally helen!
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Old 2007-08-20, 04:20   Link #153
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Hey!

My friend is writing a claymore fic, a romance fic, including Galatea and one other claymore. Now she cant decide who the other claymore should be. Maybe you guys have any suggestions/ideas/requests?

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yeah yeah yeah, just Helen
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Old 2007-08-20, 08:13   Link #154
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Clare would be the idea choice
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Old 2007-08-20, 11:34   Link #155
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I'd say create your own Claymore and place her anywhere in time.
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Old 2007-08-24, 00:51   Link #156
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Uh my friend and I have just finished writing a joint fic called A Prostitute's Smile and it's about....a little "situation" that Clare gets into. I posted the link below but be warned that it takes place after the events of volume 12. So no complaining about being spoiled, okay ?

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Old 2007-08-24, 06:20   Link #157
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Interesting story. The little humor bits with Helen are great.
You tease me greatly with the image of Miria and a whip.
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Old 2007-08-24, 12:01   Link #158
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You know if Claire had thought to carve her symbol on the tree next to the goddess, or something, Raki could potentally have a way to know she's alive.
But Hey I liked it. It goes with my feelings that there are two things Claire can absolutly never be fully rational about, Raki, and also Priscilla, although the priscilla fixation didn't play much of a role. Good work though Sepia Tree, I give it a A.
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Old 2007-08-29, 12:27   Link #159
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I've heared that Toxic made a doujin fanfic. i cant find it in the picutre thread, does anyone know where it is?
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Old 2007-08-31, 01:59   Link #160
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Girl Talk is the one.
O.o Wow, people like Girl Talk? That's a surprise. Hm... I know the next segment is around here somewhere...

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