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Old 2010-01-03, 12:19   Link #21841
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Sounds to me like another problem FF.Net is having.

Happens all the time.

Don't worry about it.
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Old 2010-01-03, 17:07   Link #21842
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You may be right... I've checked couple other fics (I haven't been to FF.net in long time either) and they're all aligned in the center.

I take back my statement then, Rider.
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Old 2010-01-03, 19:08   Link #21843
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Winter Festival II version 2.0

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5631341/2/

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Old 2010-01-03, 19:42   Link #21844
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Hi everyone, I introduced myself a while ago here but went back to lurking shortly thereafter. Sorry for such a late (and critique-ful) response, but I've come out of lurking now, I think.
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The confession scene and its aftermath bugs me for some reason, but writing it out was surprisingly painful so I just wanted to get it over with as quickly as I could.
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I'm a little mixed on the confession and aftermath....there's something about it that bugs me a little, but not in a bad way.....
You know, I think it's the fact that there was little build up to Ein's appearance. Vivio was walking home, thinking of Lutecia, when Ein suddenly appeared after being gone for a while. I think there needs to be more conversation. They're friends right? So I would've thought they'd be trying to catch up first before Ein goes to the point of her visit.
Spoiler for Ex.:

Otherwise, especially with the ending, it feels like she dropped by just to confess to Vivio. Kinda like it was a last minute sort of thing. Actually, Ein almost feels like any other random character walking up and confessing rather than someone who (possibly) gave a lot of thought to their actions, and has known Vivio since childhood.

Still, you said it was a challenge did you not? And that you found it painful to write? You did well considering

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Would Vivio really be taller than Ein? I went over Ch. 7 of Vivid and when Vivio was in a stance while Ein was standing upright, Ein actually seemed taller so I'm thinking if Vivio were to straighten also, they'd be about the same height.
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Old 2010-01-03, 19:47   Link #21845
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Would Vivio really be taller than Ein? I went over Ch. 7 of Vivid and when Vivio was in a stance while Ein was standing upright, Ein actually seemed taller so I'm thinking if Vivio were to straighten also, they'd be about the same height.
Nice ta meet you first off.

And second off, Vivio's a teen in that fic and going off the theory that the Kaiser form from StrikerS and the Adult Mode from Vivid are what Vivio will grow up to be, Vivio will become the tallest female character in the series so she probably will be taller than Ein.
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Old 2010-01-03, 20:07   Link #21846
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Meh, annoyed and angry as hell at several people from work and other things today, err, yesterday, bah, whatever!

On top of that, there was that annoying "review" that I got for "Day in the Life" that's still bothering me, and I got it several days ago.

So, this is what I do when I'm angry and can't stand to write the long fic that would be required for me to vent my anger at what was "written" to me, if you can call what was put down actual 'writing'. Telling me what I can or cannot write for pairings.. GRRR!

So, I came up with this in my head.

Spoiler for Pairing you never saw coming:


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A new couple is born! XD
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Old 2010-01-03, 21:02   Link #21847
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Still, you said it was a challenge did you not? And that you found it painful to write? You did well considering
Yes, it was a challenge, and yes, the confession and rejection scenes were incredibly painful to write. I don't even like Ein all that much, but by the end of the fic I was in tears, so I just posted what I had and said screw it to backstory.
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Old 2010-01-03, 22:01   Link #21848
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Yes, it was a challenge, and yes, the confession and rejection scenes were incredibly painful to write. I don't even like Ein all that much, but by the end of the fic I was in tears, so I just posted what I had and said screw it to backstory.
You're too kind hearted for someone who writes angst as a specialty :P
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Old 2010-01-03, 22:04   Link #21849
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You're too kind hearted for someone who writes angst as a specialty :P
More like it touched just a little too well on something that happened to me IRL, where I was in much of the same position that Ein was.
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Old 2010-01-03, 22:45   Link #21850
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More like it touched just a little too well on something that happened to me IRL, where I was in much of the same position that Ein was.
Awww~ *pats* but still it was a good one.

P.S. *whispers* She hasnt changed her avatar!
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Old 2010-01-03, 23:09   Link #21851
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P.S. *whispers* She hasnt changed her avatar!
You're trying to jinx me, aren't you?
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Old 2010-01-03, 23:19   Link #21852
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You may be right... I've checked couple other fics (I haven't been to FF.net in long time either) and they're all aligned in the center.

I take back my statement then, Rider.

This problem seems to be unique to Opera browser. I checked on IE and Firefox and fanfics are properly aligned left, whereas on the Opera (which is my default) has them all aligned center. Grr. Any ideas on how to fix that? I've already upgraded to the latest version but that didn't work.
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Old 2010-01-03, 23:36   Link #21853
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You're trying to jinx me, aren't you?
tis only a matter of time until she gets bored.

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Old 2010-01-03, 23:37   Link #21854
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This problem seems to be unique to Opera browser. I checked on IE and Firefox and fanfics are properly aligned left, whereas on the Opera (which is my default) has them all aligned center. Grr. Any ideas on how to fix that? I've already upgraded to the latest version but that didn't work.
Make sure the alignment isn't messed on on FF.N itself in that browser. On upper right hand of screen you can shift the reading view to 1/2 or 3/4 of the screen. That's only a guess if it'd even work with your problem though T_T
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Old 2010-01-03, 23:48   Link #21855
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Well, color me stupid. When your suggestion didn't work (nothing happened), I checked with Opera settings, and it turned out that I had disabled JavaScript for FF.net. When I re-enabled the script, the fics were properly aligned to right.

Does that mean FF.net fics have their alignment stripped when uploaded? Sounds messy.
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Old 2010-01-03, 23:55   Link #21856
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Alrighty...here's part II of the damn thing I wanted to write and where I can finally start breaking off from the main story. The next chapter I write should be chapter 1 lol

Once again, for the certain someone (and you know who you are)...I hate you XD

Spoiler for Part II:


Now that the prologue is done I can go on my OWN path mwahahahaa!!! *kof*kof*
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Old 2010-01-04, 08:43   Link #21857
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Hi everyone,
Hello and welcome! (again) Always nice to have someone de-lurk, so feel free to post as much as you want :3

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Would Vivio really be taller than Ein? I went over Ch. 7 of Vivid and when Vivio was in a stance while Ein was standing upright, Ein actually seemed taller so I'm thinking if Vivio were to straighten also, they'd be about the same height.
As was said, Vivio is the tallest female characters, and I think tallest of all except for Zest when on the size chart? I know Ein comes after this fact, but I like teasing the girl about her height :3

Vivio: I'm tall and lanky!

Syn: Oh shut up, you are not.
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Old 2010-01-04, 10:11   Link #21858
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Which is extremely funny, because when I look back on my ViCia series, for the first few stories Lutecia was taller than Vivio for a little while... then "Shadow" came along and Vivio hit a growth spurt, making her taller than Lutecia.
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Old 2010-01-04, 11:05   Link #21859
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Adult Vivio is one of the tallest characters in the series, loli Vivio is about as tall as her friends. Ein is a few years older, so for now Ein is taller.
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Old 2010-01-04, 13:17   Link #21860
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Adult Vivio is one of the tallest characters in the series, loli Vivio is about as tall as her friends. Ein is a few years older, so for now Ein is taller.
Vivio: Jiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

Einhart: Wha...what?

Vivio: *gets closer* Ji....

Einhart:Vivio?

Vivio: I'm taller than you now.

Einhart D:!!!!!!
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