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Old 2010-03-05, 17:52   Link #23581
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*STAB* Boy, that pointed comment is really pointy ....
Way to stab someone right after they've been shot, you coward!

EDIT: Pageclaim for violence between friends!
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Old 2010-03-05, 17:58   Link #23582
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The resolution is that Vice is planning to stay with Teana, Subaru is going to give her up and stay in deep space, and so far Teana herself has no real closure in the situation at all at this point.

Which is why I say DC should write a "ten years later" bit. *shot*
Ok, that's kinda what I thought was going down. On Teana's end I would certainly hope that she'd stay resolute in sticking with her initial decision to be with Vice.

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*wince* Was I too cryptic and vague for my own good?
Well, I think my mindset isn't too great either. Feelin' pretty weird today...

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But... but... what about Alto? What someone PLEASE think of Alto!?
I did!
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Old 2010-03-05, 18:09   Link #23583
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@_@ Too many people!!!! Triangle up-graded to a square???
Why stop there? Let's go for a dodecahedron!

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Woo!
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Old 2010-03-05, 18:13   Link #23584
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On Teana's end I would certainly hope that she'd stay resolute in sticking with her initial decision to be with Vice.
Which is why we need a "ten years later" bit so we can see that Teana has some closure with herself, regardless of whether she's single and doesn't want either Vice or Subaru, or still married to Vice and making the best out of it.

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Old 2010-03-05, 18:28   Link #23585
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Well, I had bit of an idea for a follow up if that's ok with deathcure...
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Old 2010-03-05, 19:44   Link #23586
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Okay, while I was busing home today I was thinking about how to possibly tackle Teana's closure, and I came up with something (It doesn't mean that I will write it! Just that I was thinking, that's all ):

Spoiler for post-Fortune Knocks But Once:


Just a rough idea I was mulling over ....

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Well, I had bit of an idea for a follow up if that's ok with deathcure...
Sure, shoot! ^^
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Old 2010-03-05, 20:51   Link #23587
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But... but... what about Alto? What someone PLEASE think of Alto!?
Vice: hmm alto... Is that another sister I forgot about?
Alto: ... *huddles in the corner*
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Old 2010-03-05, 20:52   Link #23588
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Well, Nanya wanted me to write some Chrono/Amy and I managed to throw a little something together.

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It's not much, but... *shrug*

Spoiler for Alternatively...:

Awwww! Cute Chrono/Amy is cute! I'm always happy to see this couple get some 'air' time. I'm sure their romance was something out of a romcom with extra space shenanigans!

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Finally, I'm finished!

This is the third (and LAST!!! How did I let myself get talked into these things? ) part of the Teana x Subaru x Vice love triangle.

Previous two stories here: When One Door Closes and As All Good Things Must.

Thanks to everyone who reviewed the previous two, and to Dezo and RB for giving me lots of help and feedback with this last installment !

Spoiler for Fortune Knocks But Once:
I really like Vice. He's a good man and I also agree with him, Subaru leaving things like that and unresolved wasn't smart. But my heart also aches for Subaru, that she had to go so far, I understand she needed to cut the chord feeling unfortunately it left no room for closure for both of them.

*cough* So, I might be siding with RB and hoping for one last part from Teana's POV. For closure *cough*
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Old 2010-03-05, 21:14   Link #23589
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Vice: hmm alto... Is that another sister I forgot about?
Alto: ... *huddles in the corner*
...not quite what I had in mind; now I just feel worse for her... =(
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Old 2010-03-05, 21:42   Link #23590
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...not quite what I had in mind; now I just feel worse for her... =(
Alto: W-Who needs that jerk that keeps telling everyone I thought I was a boy until I started school and used the wrong bathroom!
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Vice: hmm alto... Is that another sister I forgot about?
Alto: ... *huddles in the corner*
Alto: This must be how Kaon feels about Shiny...

*R.D. flees*
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Decided to throw this up, not sure how good it is, but don't know what might need changes. Feel free to tear it apart or suggest. :x

Unexpected Expectations

Chapter 8: Fight or Flight


Previous chapters can be found here.

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Old 2010-03-05, 22:10   Link #23593
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Guilt makes Yuuno do really stupid things, doesn't it?
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Old 2010-03-05, 22:25   Link #23594
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Chapter 21 of my Naruto/Nanoha crossover is now up!

The faster this finishes, the faster I can get to Part II, where...

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Old 2010-03-05, 22:41   Link #23595
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Decided to throw this up, not sure how good it is, but don't know what might need changes. Feel free to tear it apart or suggest. :x

Unexpected Expectations

Chapter 8: Fight or Flight


Previous chapters can be found here.

Spoiler for Unexpected Expectations, Chapter 8: Fight or Flight:
I really liked this chapter and the addition of Frey into the mix it really made things more tense and put an interesting moral dilemma for Fate. Fate was awesome in this BTW, she didn't like what she's forcing Frey to do but she stayed true to her mission regardless and brought Yuuno to hi senses.

Spoiler for moar spoilery reaction:
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Old 2010-03-06, 00:12   Link #23596
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Gark. I need to catch up with the chapters. I have stopped reading almost everything that goes posted here.

The backlog is going to be insane.

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Old 2010-03-06, 00:29   Link #23597
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Ok, so I wrote a follow up to deathcurse's fic. I'm not confident it'll all match up to what she intended everything to be like, or if it's even any good, but here goes nothing:

Spoiler for Tough Love:
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Old 2010-03-06, 00:31   Link #23598
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Finally, I'm finished!

This is the third (and LAST!!! How did I let myself get talked into these things? ) part of the Teana x Subaru x Vice love triangle.

Previous two stories here: When One Door Closes and As All Good Things Must.

Thanks to everyone who reviewed the previous two, and to Dezo and RB for giving me lots of help and feedback with this last installment !

Spoiler for Fortune Knocks But Once:
I'm going to go against the flow here and say that I'm perfectly happy with this ending.

I can't help but think that a situation like this can't possibly end up neatly and with closure for all. Its messy, its painful, and its unfair, but I think its true to life.

Well done for making it work so well.

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Gark. I need to catch up with the chapters. I have stopped to read almost everything that goes posted here.

The backlog is going to be insane.
No joke. It shouldn't take me an hour just to catch up on this one thread! And I'm here just about every day.

Quit writing good stuff everyone!

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Ok, so I wrote a follow up to deathcurse's fic. I'm not confident it'll all match up to what she intended everything to be like, or if it's even any good, but here goes nothing:

Spoiler for Tough Love:
On the other hand, this works too.

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Old 2010-03-06, 01:06   Link #23599
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Decided to throw this up, not sure how good it is, but don't know what might need changes. Feel free to tear it apart or suggest. :x

Unexpected Expectations

Chapter 8: Fight or Flight


Previous chapters can be found here.

Spoiler for Unexpected Expectations, Chapter 8: Fight or Flight:
Two major mistakes to point out:

"Apparently, either the village really did have one who could fly" should be "didn't have one"

and "tea always helped Nanoha the two relax before." that Nanoha should probably be deleted.

On the whole, a good chapter. The way it ended certainly didn't surprise me all that much. If I were to say something was off, it's that Fate seems a bit too agressive when it comes to Yuuno. Sure, she should be displeased with him, but this is super gentle worrywart Fate we're talking about here. I don't think she would go that far.
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Old 2010-03-06, 01:13   Link #23600
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Finally, I'm finished!

This is the third (and LAST!!! How did I let myself get talked into these things? ) part of the Teana x Subaru x Vice love triangle.

Previous two stories here: When One Door Closes and As All Good Things Must.

Thanks to everyone who reviewed the previous two, and to Dezo and RB for giving me lots of help and feedback with this last installment !

Spoiler for Fortune Knocks But Once:
Way too tired to actually review and comment properly, but I must note in passing that you win points for using that awful word "blunette" for a character (Subaru) whose hair is actually blue instead of a character whose hair is black and is depicted dark blue for visual effect (Natsuki, Chikane).
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