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Old 2010-04-26, 17:19   Link #24581
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Now, for something different... this is a shortfic based off "Nanoha the Movie 1st". This is an idea I actually had rattling around in my skull for quite awhile, and finally decided to write it.

Spoiler for The Importance of Safety:
Already reviewed on FF.net, but... Here I was reading the summary, thinking. "Some humor might be good to brighten my day". I read the thing, and now I'm in for some shooting games. Any suggestions?
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Old 2010-04-26, 17:20   Link #24582
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sin and punishment 2?
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Old 2010-04-26, 17:47   Link #24583
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The idea is that in the end of the epilogue, as it was written, Teana doesn't end up with Vice or with Subaru within that one-shot. It was never specifically stated that the possibility that she would hook up with Subaru after was a sunk possibility. That's what the whole ending is based around; possibilities.
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Nailed it . *tosses RB a cookie*
Aha! So rather than all that discussion about how you should rewrite the story, I should instead have been advising you about how you should rewrite the author's note!
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Old 2010-04-26, 18:03   Link #24584
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Aha! So rather than all that discussion about how you should rewrite the story, I should instead have been advising you about how you should rewrite the author's note!
A little late for THAT now.

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No. That's not the ship I... was talking about...

...

Damn you. Now you stuck the idea in my head.
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Old 2010-04-26, 18:24   Link #24585
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Okay, all edits are in! Long Time No See is now posted on Fanfiction.net.
And on its coat tails, my alternate ending Tough Love has also been posted to FF.net!

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No. That's not the ship I... was talking about...

...

Damn you. Now you stuck the idea in my head.
Teana/Nanoha?
Teana/Fate?
Teana/Erio?
Teana/Caro?
Teana/Shari?
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Old 2010-04-26, 18:41   Link #24586
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Teana/Nanoha?
Teana/Fate?
Teana/Erio?
Teana/Caro?
Teana/Shari?
Teana/Ix?
Teana/Mariage?
Teana/Genya? (Heck, she spends half her time acting like Subaru's mom anyway... )
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Old 2010-04-26, 18:46   Link #24587
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Okay, all edits are in! Long Time No See is now posted on Fanfiction.net.

I've added some more details and incorporated more suggestions by Dezo into the story . Hopefully it's now more in line with what I was trying to get at....and if not, ah well, it's an optional ending anyhow!

Thanks guys, for all your feedback!
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And on its coat tails, my alternate ending Tough Love has also been posted to FF.net!
And both commented/reviewed.

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Teana/Nanoha?
Teana/Fate?
Teana/Erio?
Teana/Caro?
Teana/Shari?
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Teana/Ix?
Teana/Mariage?
Teana/Genya? (Heck, she spends half her time acting like Subaru's mom anyway... )
Are you going to list every single character?

When I said odd, I meant odd from the fandom. The other character seems to receive the short end of the stick too many times, and in other the character appear without any romantic motivation at all.
To be sure, I didn't saw/read any fic with them togheter yet, and that's why I'm uneasy to bring them to the table without a good story.
For now, it's just a pet idea I have to it, but to make it happen it'll take time, so first, I'll finish at least one of the stories I have ongoing.
Not that I'm confident that with a good story they'll be well received anyway

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(Or that I'm confident to write a good story about them at all. )
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Old 2010-04-26, 18:50   Link #24588
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Teana/Mariage?
Now your playing with necrophilia!

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Are you going to list every single character?
No, just the ones Teana's had some interactions with

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Not that I'm confident that with a good story they'll be well received anyway
Eh, I was pretty certain everyone would be disgusted at the idea of Vivio/Yuuno. But... well, ok, I did get those reactions eventually, but not from anyone here

But it depends, really. If the pairing you have in mind is yuri, 99.9% of people will be all for it. If the pairing is straight, it'll probably be a smaller percentage
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Old 2010-04-26, 19:01   Link #24589
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Well, teana/Signum is rare, but amusing. i tried it once.
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Old 2010-04-26, 19:30   Link #24590
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The Importance of Safety is up on ff.net here. Or should be soon, if it doesn't work for you, heh. Waiting to see how badly the NanoFate fans crucify me over this...
Reviewed ^^.

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Aha! So rather than all that discussion about how you should rewrite the story, I should instead have been advising you about how you should rewrite the author's note!
LOL, that would have saved me lots of editing! But thanks Dezo, amazing comments, and I made quite a few changes by your suggestions .

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And both commented/reviewed.
Thanks! Yeah, we debated it pretty fiercely here, eh?
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Old 2010-04-26, 19:46   Link #24591
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Reviewed ^^.
I saw that, thanks!^^ In answer to your question, Nanoha wasn't firing at full power, so that's why there are still walls; instead, Fate just got plastered across the wall (no barrier jacket and no time for a barrier). =)
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Old 2010-04-26, 20:01   Link #24592
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This is deathcurse's fault. In her review at ff.net of "Shadow in the Rain," she wrote:

"You're not doing it just because you feel guilty or because Auris Gaiz is a manipulative **? 'Cause I will pitch her non-magical hind end out a window and have Aunt Hayate cover it up if she ever hurts you, NSIS director or not."

...oh, that is just BEGGING for an omake! =D *nudge nudge* =P
So...okay!

Spoiler for Always Read the Fine Print:
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Old 2010-04-26, 20:15   Link #24593
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This is deathcurse's fault. In her review at ff.net of "Shadow in the Rain," she wrote:

"You're not doing it just because you feel guilty or because Auris Gaiz is a manipulative **? 'Cause I will pitch her non-magical hind end out a window and have Aunt Hayate cover it up if she ever hurts you, NSIS director or not."

...oh, that is just BEGGING for an omake! =D *nudge nudge* =P
So...okay!

Spoiler for Always Read the Fine Print:
God: the only person who can kick your ass and not get punished for it.

Awesome omake, Dezo. I always did wonder if Vivio would make good of her threat if Auris did anything even remotely threatening to Lutecia.
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Old 2010-04-26, 20:31   Link #24594
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This is deathcurse's fault. In her review at ff.net of "Shadow in the Rain," she wrote:

"You're not doing it just because you feel guilty or because Auris Gaiz is a manipulative **? 'Cause I will pitch her non-magical hind end out a window and have Aunt Hayate cover it up if she ever hurts you, NSIS director or not."

...oh, that is just BEGGING for an omake! =D *nudge nudge* =P
So...okay!

Spoiler for Always Read the Fine Print:
YESSSSSSS! Awesome!

I love how snippy Auris is . And haha, Vivio got revenge in more than just the physical pain--she's gonna bankrupt Auris too! (I bet you Hayate not only helped cover up for Vivio, but looked up the TSAB military insurance policy first before putting the idea in Vivio's head! )
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Old 2010-04-26, 21:13   Link #24595
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Celica was the one who broke into the insurance database and made sure the medical treatments wouldn't be covered... *whistles innocently*
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Old 2010-04-26, 22:07   Link #24596
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This is deathcurse's fault. In her review at ff.net of "Shadow in the Rain," she wrote:

"You're not doing it just because you feel guilty or because Auris Gaiz is a manipulative **? 'Cause I will pitch her non-magical hind end out a window and have Aunt Hayate cover it up if she ever hurts you, NSIS director or not."

...oh, that is just BEGGING for an omake! =D *nudge nudge* =P
So...okay!

Spoiler for Always Read the Fine Print:
I kept thinking that the punchline was going to be more in the ways of a painful, sturdy, and chubby thing... delivered to Auris where the light doesn't shine.

Glad it wasn't.

*takes mind out the gutter*
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Old 2010-04-26, 22:11   Link #24598
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Celica was the one who broke into the insurance database and made sure the medical treatments wouldn't be covered... *whistles innocently*
Seems Lutecia has a wide and varied network.
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Old 2010-04-26, 22:15   Link #24599
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This is deathcurse's fault. In her review at ff.net of "Shadow in the Rain," she wrote:

"You're not doing it just because you feel guilty or because Auris Gaiz is a manipulative **? 'Cause I will pitch her non-magical hind end out a window and have Aunt Hayate cover it up if she ever hurts you, NSIS director or not."

...oh, that is just BEGGING for an omake! =D *nudge nudge* =P
So...okay!
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Celica was the one who broke into the insurance database and made sure the medical treatments wouldn't be covered... *whistles innocently*
Shadows stick together. I have a vision of a kind of quiet mutiny within their ranks after that little stunt gets out, with that being the opening act.

That is something that would warrant further exploration, what exactly Vivio's role in society really is. She could be anything from a monarch in exile to like here, but somehow I don't think 'ordinary mage girl' is going to be anywhere on the list.
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That is something that would warrant further exploration, what exactly Vivio's role in society really is. She could be anything from a monarch in exile to like here, but somehow I don't think 'ordinary mage girl' is going to be anywhere on the list.
I actually had a story for that when I was trying to find a main plot to develop during the ViCia series. The original idea actually focused on the idea of the Sankt Kaiser and Vivio being two separate entities, and Sankt Kaiser had taken control of Vivio's body and forced Lutecia to work with her. It never did manage to get off the ground, though.

EDIT: Pageclaim for stories that never get off the ground!
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