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Old 2010-06-24, 21:41   Link #25621
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I'll say A since I can't see Fate skipping school and besides, talking to her friends is a good way to start exploring this mystery, and B because Vivio dragging a bunch of friends home without checking with her mothers first is a serious no-no.

And as long as we're talking about fics, here's the latest chapter of

Fate-chan's No-Title Adventure!
~Chapter 3~

Spoiler for Well, the story's progressing even if the name isn't:


Previously:

Chapter 1
Chapter 2
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Old 2010-06-25, 02:58   Link #25622
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Yeah, I'm certain that probably counts as beastiality
Yeah...it was a joke for the lol
Romantic PoV aside, they do get along well :3
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Old 2010-06-25, 06:47   Link #25623
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Yeah...it was a joke for the lol
Romantic PoV aside, they do get along well :3
I don't think there are any characters in this series that don't get along well
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Old 2010-06-25, 07:13   Link #25624
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Chrono and Yuuno is about the closest to discord I can think of...
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Old 2010-06-25, 08:03   Link #25625
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Fate-chan's No-Title Adventure!
~Chapter 3~
I haven't read something of this era in so long that having your Fate have mannerisms similar to your Vivio made me sort of double-clutch.

Is good. Want more. Yadda yadda.
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Old 2010-06-25, 08:07   Link #25626
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Also, Yuuno x Arf since S1
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Yeah, I'm certain that probably counts as beastiality
Meh. Sometimes you just have to accept a label like that as the price of landing a totally smoking hot foxgirl.
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Old 2010-06-25, 08:32   Link #25627
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Chapter 5 of Future Tense is up on ff.net and you can find it here. Actually put it up last night before I headed to bed, heh.

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Old 2010-06-25, 09:43   Link #25628
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Fate-chan's No-Title Adventure!
~Chapter 3~
You know, this by itself would make a very epic title.

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Spoiler for Well, the story's progressing even if the name isn't:


Previously:

Chapter 1
Chapter 2
So, finally, we start to see Yaris (or is it Val, now?) warming up to Fate, even when she scolds her for making the wrong call. She's definitely got a motherly/big sisterly edge to her despite what she says, and it's sweet to see her looking after Fate and teaching her how to be a good Enforcer. Of course, now, I say this but with all of the development she's gotten recently, she's rather fit for a meaningful character death to drive Fate....

.... Yeah, um....

He just killed someone, so I don't think many people will be sympathetic to hi, now. ^^;;;;;;; Even if he's under the influence of a Lost Logia that's mused with his mind.
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Old 2010-06-25, 10:20   Link #25629
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Parts 1-6

Spoiler for Part 7 Vivio CYOA.Can anyone think of a good name for me?:
Spoiler for Vivid Life pt. 8:
Spoiler for Part 9:
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Old 2010-06-25, 10:32   Link #25630
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A Curiosity may have killed the cat, but people are always curious...

Besides, don't they know any searching magic for this kind of thing?
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Old 2010-06-25, 10:45   Link #25631
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Chapter 8 of Future Tense is up on ff.net and you can find it here. Actually put it up last night before I headed to bed, heh.
You scared me for a second there. 'It's already up to chapter eight?! When did that happen?! I haven't even read five yet!'.

As thanks for almost giving me a heart attack, chapter five read and reviewed


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I'll say A since I can't see Fate skipping school and besides, talking to her friends is a good way to start exploring this mystery, and B because Vivio dragging a bunch of friends home without checking with her mothers first is a serious no-no.

And as long as we're talking about fics, here's the latest chapter of

Fate-chan's No-Title Adventure!
~Chapter 3~

Spoiler for Well, the story's progressing even if the name isn't:


Previously:

Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Heh. I wish I had something more constructive to say beyond "Excellent as always." The plot is engaging with just a hint (a growing hint!) of creepy, and the characters are a joy in their interactions. Fate, of course, is just mind-breakingly adorable. I want to give her a big hug and tell her what a good lil' Enforcer she is. And Val is just about the best partner a rookie could ask for; one part mom, one part big sis, one part exasperated boss, with the two previous parts taking the edge off the third enough to make it helpful to the newbie instead of harmful.

I hope she doesn't die... RB's got me all paranoid now...
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Old 2010-06-25, 11:01   Link #25632
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A, 'cause I'm curious too

*sees a hand slipping in*
*slaps it*
"Owie!"
"No, don't."
"But I wanna jo~iiin"
"It's not your time yet." *grabs*
"W-wha---eh?!"
"Come on, back to the closet for you."
"Nooo~"
*locks familiar OC in closet*

Sorry 'bout that
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Old 2010-06-25, 12:38   Link #25633
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Parts 1-6

Spoiler for Part 7 Vivio CYOA.Can anyone think of a good name for me?:
Spoiler for Vivid Life pt. 8:
Spoiler for Part 9:
Spoiler for Vivid Life 10:
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You scared me for a second there. 'It's already up to chapter eight?! When did that happen?! I haven't even read five yet!'.

As thanks for almost giving me a heart attack, chapter five read and reviewed
Haha, oops, didn't notice that. I guess it's because I was doing some plotting of chapter 8 this morning. Fixed, and thanks.^^;;
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Old 2010-06-25, 13:47   Link #25635
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Fate-chan's No-Title Adventure!
~Chapter 3~
It was very cute.
This is the first chapter I read of this fanfic, so exactly how old is Fate supposed to be in this fanfic? I imagine it's inbetween A's and StrikerS?
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Old 2010-06-25, 13:57   Link #25636
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Hmm~ managed to rule out one, but still..............tough choice

*flips a coin*

B! Random coin has spoken!
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Now C here!

That's a pun!
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Old 2010-06-25, 14:54   Link #25638
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I think I'll go with C.
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Old 2010-06-25, 17:35   Link #25639
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A's too childish and C's too adult, so I'll for the middle ground and choose B.

Page claim for the letter B.
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Old 2010-06-25, 17:46   Link #25640
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Finally, I have internet again! Anyways, here's to trying to catch up a bit with my backlog...
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Is this the same Yaris from “Steel Queen”?
Yay, somebody noticed!

Nope; Miranda Yaris from Stahlkonigin is, in fact, the six-year-old daughter Valentine Yaris keeps mentioning. Yep, their kids grew up to work together.

(Val does, however, have pretty much the same magical ability profile as her daughter, which is to say that she rips off Lucia from the Sega CD version of Lunar: Eternal Blue.)

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Ah, well, with that scene I only mentioned certain Shadows by name (my OCs, some of RB’s OCs, and also Lutecia), while assuming that the room is packed with other unnamed Shadows. I didn’t introduce Charlie earlier because he doesn’t pop up again in the story, while nearly all of the ones who are named do .
You may want to do some revisions there, b/c the impression is more one of "top-level strategy meeting" instead of "the auditorium is packed with everybody and their kid brother." Particularly, that one "list the cast" paragraph read like an introduction of the people present.

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You know, this by itself would make a very epic title.
I'm having fun thinking up different ways to say that there isn't a title. What's really annoying is that inevitably the title will end up being some kind of annoying phrase that doesn't mean anything and isn't half as much fun as not having a title.

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He just killed someone, so I don't think many people will be sympathetic to hi, now. ^^;;;;;;; Even if he's under the influence of a Lost Logia that's mused with his mind.
No, he just zapped the cop into unconsciousness. Magic damage and all...So nobody's dead. Yet.

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It was very cute.
This is the first chapter I read of this fanfic, so exactly how old is Fate supposed to be in this fanfic? I imagine it's inbetween A's and StrikerS?
Right you are. She's eleven. It's right after she passed her Enforcer exam.

And...hm...so there's three different paths for Vivio. Choose your underwear and choose your fate, eh? Well, on that theme, then let's go with C.
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