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Old 2010-06-28, 17:32   Link #25701
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I can always remember Lucino thanks to the fact that she's the one who contacts Signum after her first Unison with Agito. So there, guys. You no longer have an excuse to not remember who the poor girl is.

Also that Einhart picture is beyond awesome.
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Old 2010-06-28, 17:43   Link #25702
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Spoiler for Danger! High moe levels!:
... I will love you for the rest of my life @////@

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Can I show it somewhere else if I give you credit/link to it here?
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Old 2010-06-28, 18:07   Link #25703
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Well, we know that RadiantBeam is voting for downer.
It's possible she feeds on sorrow.

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Took me a while, but I finished it...came out quite good imo

Spoiler for Danger! High moe levels!:

Unfortunately, that's as far as I can go.
I still haven't picked up tracing, coloring and other skills to make it better
I... I... I... as a man, I am not supposed to squee. It is bad for my image.

Aw, who cares, my image sucks anyway.

Squeeeeeeeeeee! Whosa widdle puppy-Einhart? Whoooooosa cute widdle puppy?
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Old 2010-06-28, 18:10   Link #25704
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It's possible she feeds on sorrow.
Nah, I always said that she's having a torrid love affair with Angst. She hasn't denied it so far. =X
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Old 2010-06-28, 19:04   Link #25705
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FROM A DIFFERENT POINT OF VIEW

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Nice story. I see no particular problems with it

As for a Yuuno funeral, I did one at the beginning of Rise of the Daemon Kaiser. In it there was a ton of people in attendence, to Enforcers he's helped with cases, to rich folks who hired them to appraise artefacts. The large number surprised Nanoha and made her realise how far apart she and Yuuno had grown over the years. It's the major aspect of her character arc in the fic.

As to the question of hated VS. forgotten, well, as some one who falls under the 'hated' category, I'm more concerned with becoming irrelevant, so I'd say being forgotten is worse. Like they say, no one is really dead until they're forgotten.

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(Speaking of which...given that Yuuno is, apparently, a college professor among other things...can't you just see a passel of student fangirls squeeing over him?)
Where's it say he's a college professor?

Anyways, yeah, he's bishonen enough to get the fangirls squealing.

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(Man, Griffith and Luceno? I totally did not see that coming.
I'm not surprised There was that one manga page I linked to in the manga thread, and they look quite close in the StrikerS epilouge. What I am surprised by is that they actually confirmed it
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Old 2010-06-28, 19:12   Link #25706
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It's that time again...

Future Tense

Chapter 7: Be All My Sins Remember'd

Previous parts can be found here.

Now for the new chapter, in which there are several things that you probably won't see coming... and perhaps a few that you will...

Spoiler for Future Tense, Chapter 7: Be All My Sins Remember'd:


...but for me, it is a Monday.

(Side note: I'm happy about Griffith/Lucino, since I shipped them in my Crisis-verse, heh. It's a bit in the background, but has some interesting development.)
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Old 2010-06-28, 20:43   Link #25707
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It's that time again...

Future Tense

Chapter 7: Be All My Sins Remember'd

Previous parts can be found here.

Now for the new chapter, in which there are several things that you probably won't see coming... and perhaps a few that you will...

Spoiler for Future Tense, Chapter 7: Be All My Sins Remember'd:


...but for me, it is a Monday.

(Side note: I'm happy about Griffith/Lucino, since I shipped them in my Crisis-verse, heh. It's a bit in the background, but has some interesting development.)
Corrections in quote.

Sad chapter is sad. Well, I know that particular person had to go eventually, but it still sucks that it happened. We also got some flashbacks and an Important Haircut too. Another well done chapter
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Old 2010-06-28, 21:22   Link #25708
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Nah, I always said that she's having a torrid love affair with Angst. She hasn't denied it so far. =X
Why deny something that is so obvious to the people around me?

Anyway, new short. A little inconsistent with some of my established Shadowverse facts, but everything will be explained in the author's notes.

Spoiler for Within Temptation:


Spoiler for Author's Notes:
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Old 2010-06-28, 21:55   Link #25709
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It's that time again...

Future Tense

Chapter 7: Be All My Sins Remember'd

Previous parts can be found here.

Now for the new chapter, in which there are several things that you probably won't see coming... and perhaps a few that you will...

Spoiler for Future Tense, Chapter 7: Be All My Sins Remember'd:


...but for me, it is a Monday.

(Side note: I'm happy about Griffith/Lucino, since I shipped them in my Crisis-verse, heh. It's a bit in the background, but has some interesting development.)
Mainly a lurker, but I gotta say this is awesome. I have been following this for awhile and hope to see more soon! I loved how you worked Force in. Very few people can capture the characters and show different sides. MORE!
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Old 2010-06-28, 21:58   Link #25710
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Well I'm trying to complete this fic ASAP, so here's

The Location of Happiness chapter 4!

Spoiler for LoH chapter 4:
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Old 2010-06-28, 22:18   Link #25711
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Well I'm trying to complete this fic ASAP, so here's

The Location of Happiness chapter 4!

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*Overly dramatic silly mode activate!* Oh noez! The OC is taking over the story! AHHH!! *Runs around like a demented chicken without a head on a sugar high.*

*Coughs* In all seriousness though, poor girl. Light bit of Stockholm Syndrome there.
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Old 2010-06-28, 22:35   Link #25712
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Well I'm trying to complete this fic ASAP, so here's

The Location of Happiness chapter 4!

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Hmm, Miyako makes me wonder... there's gotta be something more to her, but I wonder what?
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Old 2010-06-28, 23:21   Link #25713
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Well I'm trying to complete this fic ASAP, so here's

The Location of Happiness chapter 4!

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Hm... if this leads to an unexpected bad end with the OC being a really good actress to get some needed info out of Yuuno before offing him, then this can lead to Mucho Angst on Fate's end. I also wonder how Nanoha would react to that.
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Old 2010-06-29, 00:26   Link #25714
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Wow... Kajiro-san, this fic is seriously becoming epic!

It seems that everyone on Hayate's side has became evil because they had lost someone, and critically Nanoha was dead and therefore cannot go White Devil and Starlight Breaker the heck out of their angst. Well, kiddies, that's why if you have an emotional problem, it's never too late to get the Starlight Breaker treatment!

Look at Vivio; she got five and since then she's been a good kid

Speaking of which, I wonder what happened to Vivio, Yuuno, and Crono? hmm....
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Old 2010-06-29, 02:40   Link #25715
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Why deny something that is so obvious to the people around me?

Anyway, new short. A little inconsistent with some of my established Shadowverse facts, but everything will be explained in the author's notes.

Spoiler for Within Temptation:


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Personally, I love this version of Olivie. "Do not snap" LOL
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Old 2010-06-29, 02:49   Link #25716
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Future Tense

Chapter 7: Be All My Sins Remember'd

Previous parts can be found here.

Now for the new chapter, in which there are several things that you probably won't see coming... and perhaps a few that you will...

Spoiler for Future Tense, Chapter 7: Be All My Sins Remember'd:


...but for me, it is a Monday.

(Side note: I'm happy about Griffith/Lucino, since I shipped them in my Crisis-verse, heh. It's a bit in the background, but has some interesting development.)
Wow, many of Nanoha`s cast goes on the same path as an Precia. But at last it`s show why Wendy do such "evil" thing - she just want her beloved sisters to prise her.

And poor Uno... you were too cool to live.

Good story
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Old 2010-06-29, 03:10   Link #25717
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Old 2010-06-29, 03:58   Link #25718
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Alright, here goes. First 3 pages done

-Before Dawn-


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Still trying to get font size right so that the text is actually readable - hopefully it's not too bad as it stands.

To be honest, I just really *really* wanted to draw a bloodied and beaten up Signum.

Is the exposition enough to set the scene here?
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Old 2010-06-29, 04:40   Link #25719
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Alright, here goes. First 3 pages done
Still trying to get font size right so that the text is actually readable - hopefully it's not too bad as it stands.

To be honest, I just really *really* wanted to draw a bloodied and beaten up Signum.

Is the exposition enough to set the scene here?
Amazing.

The font and size is alright. It's only a little bit distracting during the narrative panel, but that's because you crammed everything into one panel.

Objectively speaking, it could had used 2 more pages. A first page of a reminiscence scene by Signum, with her eyes closed recalling the past 3 days before to bridge the Agito calling scene, and another page to the narrative page ( with a random war backdrop scene ) to reduce the clutter. In other words, could use a bit of improvement in the flow of scenes, though that does demand extra pages.

Other than that, it's perfect. >:3

P.S. I'll comment on other things by other authors later, because they're actually made of wall-of-text.
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Old 2010-06-29, 07:47   Link #25720
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Why deny something that is so obvious to the people around me?

Anyway, new short. A little inconsistent with some of my established Shadowverse facts, but everything will be explained in the author's notes.

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Nice fic, for some reason I like the whole body stealing plot. It's going to be continued right?
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