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Old 2010-08-01, 21:00   Link #26201
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Ah, yes, I forgot about that. Or maybe a better way to put it would be, "I scrubbed that from my memory."
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Old 2010-08-01, 21:28   Link #26202
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transcends universes and defies anything resembling common sense.
Isn't that what Deadpool does on a regular basis?
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Old 2010-08-01, 22:38   Link #26203
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... So, if it doesn't make a bit of difference guys</Piccolo>,

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Heh, even if we could, it wouldn't be the same person, you know?
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Old 2010-08-01, 23:42   Link #26204
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Oh my God, what is this? Could it be that I have actually written something after a month of worthlessness?!

It could be! More than that, it is! The next chapter of Infinity is up on FF.net right here. Enjoy!

I briefly considered posting it here like the last one, but then I realized that was kinda silly to do. Breaking it into two posts is inconvenient, and most of the other chapters aren't here anyway. Maybe when I finish it and start up a sequel, I can post that here from the very beginning. Make a big pretty title for it and the whole nine yards.

Well, now that that's out of the way, time to start working on clowns. Those chapters tend to be much shorter, so hopefully it won't take me as long as this did.
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Old 2010-08-02, 01:40   Link #26205
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Old 2010-08-02, 06:57   Link #26206
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Oh my, we're heading for quite the confrontation. Though I guess there won't be much of a battle if S and D are on the bench. In any case, Yuuno has a lot of explaining to do...
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Old 2010-08-02, 08:20   Link #26207
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The next chapter of Infinity is up on FF.net right here. Enjoy!
Well-written, no complaints. Except that you missed a word in this line.

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as long as none a weak spot in his shield he could be fairly certain they wouldn't kill him
Should be "as long as none hit a weak spot..."
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Old 2010-08-02, 08:30   Link #26208
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Oh my, we're heading for quite the confrontation. Though I guess there won't be much of a battle if S and D are on the bench. In any case, Yuuno has a lot of explaining to do...
Yuuno will apparently solve that problem first. He just heard about a mana battery, you know? It's either go get that with only L as support, or get it on with D and S. While we all know which option we would take if we were in Yuuno's place, he'll never be able to look at Hayate and Nanoha in ths eyes again if it happens.

...But Dragon nest? Oh dear, are Caro and Erio going to be there? Are they aware of what is going on?

Wait, Yuuno only has L as support... OF COURSE they'll be here! Let's hope the encounter won't traumatize them (too much) and give them flashback each time they'll see Fate again.
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Old 2010-08-02, 08:48   Link #26209
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Well-written, no complaints. Except that you missed a word in this line.



Should be "as long as none hit a weak spot..."
Right you are. Corrected, along with a couple other typos I spotted and the addition of a few new lines I thought of while fixing them.

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Old 2010-08-02, 09:14   Link #26210
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Yuuno will apparently solve that problem first. He just heard about a mana battery, you know? It's either go get that with only L as support, or get it on with D and S. While we all know which option we would take if we were in Yuuno's place, he'll never be able to look at Hayate and Nanoha in ths eyes again if it happens.
But he can look in the Material-S and Material-D eyes.
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Old 2010-08-02, 11:00   Link #26211
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Just to clarify, the Dragon Whelp Nest event is something that happened in the past. Here's what Yuuno said just for clarification:

“Heh… you know, you never did finish telling me that story about the most fun you ever had when you and the others were kids.”
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Old 2010-08-02, 11:29   Link #26212
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Just to clarify, the Dragon Whelp Nest event is something that happened in the past. Here's what Yuuno said just for clarification:

“Heh… you know, you never did finish telling me that story about the most fun you ever had when you and the others were kids.”
Ah dammit, I misunderstood. And I was looking forward to how much trauma Rai would inflict. Now matter how prepared they would be, seeing someone that look just like Fate act so different from her would throw them off for sure.

So what will Yuuno do then? He'll have to take care of that problem before it becomes critical, right? Or will Hückebein shows up first for the book (the book IS related to that, right?)?
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Ah dammit, I misunderstood. And I was looking forward to how much trauma Rai would inflict. Now matter how prepared they would be, seeing someone that look just like Fate act so different from her would throw them off for sure.

So what will Yuuno do then? He'll have to take care of that problem before it becomes critical, right? Or will Hückebein shows up first for the book (the book IS related to that, right?)?
Uh, why?

It's not the Book of the Silver Cross.
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The book was actually Nanya's idea. You can try bugging him for hints if you wish.
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Old 2010-08-02, 11:56   Link #26215
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Uh, why?

It's not the Book of the Silver Cross.
Ah. I imagined it was related to it. My bad.
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Incase anyone is wondering where my CYOAs and normal daily updates went, it's like this: I normally write during lunch and at break at work. Lately, it's been so hot (heat index over 100 and sometimes over 110) that during break and lunch I just lay on my desk and try to get enough energy back to finish the day >.<

But on a good note, I have about 5k worth of Vampire!Fate that will be posted as a chapter soonish. Season 2 is heading toward the season finale, so look forward to it
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Old 2010-08-02, 13:11   Link #26217
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Quick and pointless question Satoshi, why is it season two?
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Old 2010-08-02, 13:44   Link #26218
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LOL I knew that L had that potential to break the 4th wall. What about the 5th wall of her being a fanfic character?

Looks like it's truly going to be a battle between the two grope. I bet it wouldn't come to this if they were to sit down and talk. Poor Communication Kills Trope in Nanoha series FTW.
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Old 2010-08-02, 14:08   Link #26219
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Well, now that that's out of the way, time to start working on clowns. Those chapters tend to be much shorter, so hopefully it won't take me as long as this did.
Clowns. Clowns are good. Clowns are always good.
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