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Old 2010-08-10, 19:22   Link #26401
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Materials no Jikan chapter 2: Such a Long Day

Chapter 1 can be found here. This chapter is much longer

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Finally got around to reading this, and... how can I put this?

Very entertaining, as expected. But you got that freakin' Waffle song stuck in my head, Raiser, and I will make you pay. Someday, somehow.
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Old 2010-08-10, 19:24   Link #26402
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Future Tense

Chapter 15: Triumvirate Reunion


In which three people are reunited that haven't been together in a long time, and a desperate plot is laid out...

Previous chapters can be found here.

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I'm expecting to get raked over the coals for this, so don't let me down!
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Old 2010-08-10, 19:37   Link #26403
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Future Tense

Chapter 15: Triumvirate Reunion


In which three people are reunited that haven't been together in a long time, and a desperate plot is laid out...

Previous chapters can be found here.

Spoiler for Future Tense, Chapter 15: Triumvirate Reunion:


I'm expecting to get raked over the coals for this, so don't let me down!
You are SO getting another behind-the-scenes moment from me on this. Just le me think about it for a while...
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Old 2010-08-10, 20:18   Link #26404
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I said I'd write more, so I did.

Side Dish 1

Spoiler for Side Dish 2: Anxiety:
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Damn, Diana. Just... damn. I sense she's going to be a lot of fun.

Very sweet to see Kevin trying so hard to be a good father to the girls, even if at times he doesn't really know what to do for them. The way he comforted Lilia after she hurt him was incredibly heartwarming. Also, ouch, poor Yuuno. Poor guy just can't win. Either he's considered too nice to try anything, or any girl who doesn't want him can beamspam him.
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Old 2010-08-10, 20:56   Link #26405
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Here's my omake for the new chapter of Future Tense.

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I'm thinking of doing this for each new cruelty on Nanoha you come up with. Which probably means one for every chapter up until the end.
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Old 2010-08-10, 21:55   Link #26406
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And, no, no soap opera stuff here...
Uh, you already got evil twins, sex, and now brainwashing. You're knee deep in soap opera territory already

There's quite a bit of mood whiplash with this fic. First it was a fun, wacky misadventure and now it's become a dark journey into the realms of magical mind control date rape

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I said I'd write more, so I did.

Side Dish 1

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Another tasty Tempy fic You must do even more now, you do realize I'd like to see your take on Yuuno and the Materials.

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Very entertaining, as expected. But you got that freakin' Waffle song stuck in my head, Raiser, and I will make you pay. Someday, somehow.
Fufufu! Oh you can try, and I look forward to seeing you fail!

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Future Tense

Chapter 15: Triumvirate Reunion


In which three people are reunited that haven't been together in a long time, and a desperate plot is laid out...

Previous chapters can be found here.

Spoiler for Future Tense, Chapter 15: Triumvirate Reunion:


I'm expecting to get raked over the coals for this, so don't let me down!
Finally! I've been waiting for this for so long! I remember Kaijo telling me Yuuno was supposed to show up around chapter 10. Now it's chapter 15 Knowing this was coming is the reason why I worked on Location of Happiness so much. I wanted to get it finished and have Yuuno/Shari before Kaijo did. Both of us thought it up independantly so like he said there's no stealing of ideas going on It's nice to see some one else do the pairing all the same.

So great chapter! It didn't disappoint The time travel thing works, as you've grounded it within canon via an established plot point (Carim's prophesies). It just figures that Yuuno gets cut off right when he's about to say something important Now I'm looking forward to when you delve into Fate and Yuuno's past relationship. What Clonoha thinks about that should be interesting.
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Old 2010-08-10, 22:30   Link #26407
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It's time to play storm the cast-er i mean bureau eh Kaijo. Time travel huh? Not the route I was expecting, this could throw a whole new twist to the storyline.

The best thing that could happen is for the spacae time continuem rift to expand and transport all characters born after the tragedy to the good timeline that Nanoha creates by replacing herself with increased magical powers to avoid dying, Hayate is de-throned, everybody lives happily ever after with a communication network with the alternate timeline.

The worst thing U can see happening is Nanoha succesfully timetravelling to the past and changing history causing the disintegration of the current world. Sice her origins came from the future of that world Nanoha begins to disappear. The alternate timeline turns out to be ten times worse than the current one onnly there's no Nanoha to save it, as she watches the devestation while slowly fading away she curses the day she ever agreed to time travel.

That the worst I can see, anybody got any other ideas. These are overly optimistic and (probably) over pessimistic so...yeah.
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Old 2010-08-10, 22:43   Link #26408
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Here's my omake for the new chapter of Future Tense.

Spoiler for Behind the Scenes of Future Tense, 2:


I'm thinking of doing this for each new cruelty on Nanoha you come up with. Which probably means one for every chapter up until the end.
Heh, I'd deserve it. With any luck, there shouldn't be too many more cruelties... maybe... depending on how you look at it...
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Finally! I've been waiting for this for so long! I remember Kaijo telling me Yuuno was supposed to show up around chapter 10. Now it's chapter 15 Knowing this was coming is the reason why I worked on Location of Happiness so much. I wanted to get it finished and have Yuuno/Shari before Kaijo did. Both of us thought it up independantly so like he said there's no stealing of ideas going on It's nice to see some one else do the pairing all the same.

So great chapter! It didn't disappoint The time travel thing works, as you've grounded it within canon via an established plot point (Carim's prophesies). It just figures that Yuuno gets cut off right when he's about to say something important Now I'm looking forward to when you delve into Fate and Yuuno's past relationship. What Clonoha thinks about that should be interesting.
She'll have time to think about it, that's for sure. And possibly receive more information from other sources; possibly Fate herself. ;p And thanks again for your Beta reading, too.^^

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It's time to play storm the cast-er i mean bureau eh Kaijo. Time travel huh? Not the route I was expecting, this could throw a whole new twist to the storyline.
You remind me of a scene from one of my favorite movies, The Princess Bride:

Miracle Max: Goodbye, boys! Have fun storming the castle!
His wife: Think it'll work?
Miracle Max: It would take a miracle. Good bye!

Anyway, we'll see how well your good and bad predictions turn out. ;p Thanks for the comments!
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Old 2010-08-10, 22:50   Link #26409
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Another tasty Tempy fic You must do even more now, you do realize I'd like to see your take on Yuuno and the Materials.
Ahh poop. Was hoping you'd all be satisfied with that

Incidentally, my plans for Yuuno was going to be similar to how you had him, but now I may have to rethink it a bit just to keep things fresh.
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Old 2010-08-10, 23:26   Link #26410
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Heh, I'd deserve it. With any luck, there shouldn't be too many more cruelties... maybe... depending on how you look at it...
Trust me: my imagination will do the job. If you had any idea how many different scenarios for Material Days on Mid I ran in my mind...
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Old 2010-08-11, 00:19   Link #26411
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I said I'd write more, so I did.

Side Dish 1

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Heh, that was really good, Tempy. You should do more.
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Old 2010-08-11, 00:35   Link #26412
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Ahh poop. Was hoping you'd all be satisfied with that

Incidentally, my plans for Yuuno was going to be similar to how you had him, but now I may have to rethink it a bit just to keep things fresh.
Hm... I think Kevin being the over protective dad when his daughters start crushing over Yuuno would be very enjoyable
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Old 2010-08-11, 00:51   Link #26413
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Hm... I think Kevin being the over protective dad when his daughters start crushing over Yuuno would be very enjoyable
Heh, the Papa Wolf path would definitely be amusing, though I actually have plans on something else happening. He has known Yuuno for a while though, so the overprotective part maybe be a bit more subtle than expected.

Hmm. Need an epic speech...
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Old 2010-08-11, 00:55   Link #26414
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Considering the situations Yuuno was put in prior to his revealing his true form in the first season, Kevin would likely have to be more worried about the girls putting the poor boy in compromising situations. I'm not sure he could take another round at the bathhouse.
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Old 2010-08-11, 09:21   Link #26415
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Future Tense

Chapter 15: Triumvirate Reunion


In which three people are reunited that haven't been together in a long time, and a desperate plot is laid out...

Previous chapters can be found here.

Spoiler for Future Tense, Chapter 15: Triumvirate Reunion:


I'm expecting to get raked over the coals for this, so don't let me down!
Hmm... Didn't see this coming, nope. But, still... Arrrgh! Now I have to wait for more chapters!

Assault the base! Row Row! Fight da powah!

Is Nanoha going to have to use her power to pierce through destiny?

Guess we'll find out.
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Old 2010-08-11, 09:28   Link #26416
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Future Tense

Chapter 15: Triumvirate Reunion


In which three people are reunited that haven't been together in a long time, and a desperate plot is laid out...

Previous chapters can be found here.

Spoiler for Future Tense, Chapter 15: Triumvirate Reunion:


I'm expecting to get raked over the coals for this, so don't let me down!

Poor Fate, every time she get close to Nanoha, her favourite brunette always run away from her and don`t mentoing her luck with Vivio... or Yuuno.

Hm, maybe she used interogation as excuse to make up for every years of forced celibate with her ex-husband.
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Made the corrections people sent me, and uploaded Chapter 15: Triumvirate Reunion to ff.net.

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Hmm... Didn't see this coming, nope. But, still... Arrrgh! Now I have to wait for more chapters!

Assault the base! Row Row! Fight da powah!

Is Nanoha going to have to use her power to pierce through destiny?

Guess we'll find out.
Her staff is the staff that will pierce the heavens!

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Poor Fate, every time she get close to Nanoha, her favourite brunette always run away from her and don`t mentoing her luck with Vivio... or Yuuno.

Hm, maybe she used interogation as excuse to make up for every years of forced celibate with her ex-husband.
I knew I was probably going to get at least a few angry people for Fate's all-too-short reunion with Nanoha, heh.
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Old 2010-08-11, 10:27   Link #26418
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I knew I was probably going to get at least a few angry people for Fate's all-too-short reunion with Nanoha, heh.
No-no, actualy i feel some sort of sadictic pleasure from this. Hey, maybe it can be turned into the runing gag of the story: whenever Fate got opporotunity to meet Nanoha, she got away.

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Old 2010-08-11, 14:26   Link #26419
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Hmm... Didn't see this coming, nope. But, still... Arrrgh! Now I have to wait for more chapters!

Assault the base! Row Row! Fight da powah!

Is Nanoha going to have to use her power to pierce through destiny?

Guess we'll find out.
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Her staff is the staff that will pierce the heavens!
Nanoha used Strike Flame against heaven. :V
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Old 2010-08-11, 18:39   Link #26420
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Hello guys, I was wondering what you thought of this fanfic on Fanfiction.net

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5707992/1/Nouveau_Terra

I personally like it a lot. I'm just dropping it here to hear your opinions.
one of my old favorite that isn't updating

Liking quite a few aspects of it, but i do wonder what the hell the author can do with it now.
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