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Old 2010-08-16, 01:35   Link #26501
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I think Precia just has this thing against clones, maybe it's that same soul different dimension thing, like in Tsubasa Chronicles, or maybe she's so sick of cheap rip-offs of good things that she won't even give living being a chance because they may be too infereior to the originals or something. It just makes me wonder.
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Old 2010-08-16, 02:33   Link #26502
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Old 2010-08-16, 02:44   Link #26503
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Can`t wait to see Fate reaction, and everybode else ractions too..
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Old 2010-08-16, 02:45   Link #26504
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use your imagination :3 it's just a random quip i had upon reading the discussions
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Old 2010-08-16, 07:10   Link #26505
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Precia and Subaru?

... I smell sitcom! *cue theme music*
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Old 2010-08-16, 10:45   Link #26506
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Precia and Subaru?

... I smell sitcom! *cue theme music*
Material-L comes in with a guitar

Precia and Subaruuuuuuu,
These are the oddest Two,
She really hate clones,
She's a robo clone,
While I happens to be,
a clone of a clone,
I don't think my Seiyuu is fit for this song

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Precia: You're not build from my project were you?
Material-L: Nope
Precia: Ugh...
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Old 2010-08-16, 11:17   Link #26507
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Old 2010-08-16, 15:57   Link #26508
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So, Nanoha was right... They just want revenge and are using the trial as a sham.

*Shakes head*

Politics, makes me want to punch someone.

Page claim for punching politics.
If I hadn't expressed it enough in the story, I'll mention it here--one of the reasons Auris is insisting on this case is because she's trying to gain respect from the Shadows due to her newness (whether she's going about it the right way or not, or whether she's actually gained their respect or not, doesn't matter for this story ). So sadly, yes, it's politics, but the more important of a person you are, the less you can ignore it .

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Well, I have to admit that's part of what makes the story so interesting from my perspective (what does that say about me?): on one hand it's definitely wrong, what's going on, but at the same time I can't help but feel some sympathy because the people involved--or most of them, anyway--feel pain from losing one of their fellows and want to see the murderer, who apparently has no remorse about it, suffer.

....

Yeah, what does this say about me when I find this awesome?
I think it would totally depend on who the victims were. If someone had murdered Nanoha or Fate, I'm sure the sympathy for seeking revenge on their murderer would be higher .

Well, in a twisted way, it's friendship/loyalty to it's max, right?

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I like how you worked in season one references ^^. It's also interesting how Precia is still unaccepting of Fate because she's a clone, since in this case Fate isn't supposed to be Alicia's replacement.

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Beta`ed version of my second story. Sequel to this shot.

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Hm, after re-reading the first story I still have a tough time figuring out who's who and what sentiments are being expressed . I'll probably have to re-read a few more times to fully get it.

This short was quite interesting, but the disturbing ending has completely taken over my thoughts on the story @_@......

I find the themes between Auris and Hayate quite interesting, and similar to what I'm doing in Crime Never Sleeps (without the romance though! XD). Having Auris try to subtly undermine Hayate, but yet Hayate is far more clever than Auris expected...very fun to read the back-and-forth interaction . The romance here makes the whole situation more complicated--I would have loved to see Hayate and Auris' relationship described by more than just the emotional Vita (from Fate or Nanoha, I suppose), since what they feel and how they act together are dissimilar.

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Nanoha in a wheelchair? @_@ Subaru lost in dimensional space?? WITH PRECIA?? Interesting!

But my favourite line of the short :
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"Well, I hate floating upside down talking to giant breasted people!" Subaru flailed again.
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Old 2010-08-16, 16:09   Link #26509
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Hehe, thanks Deathcurse, Zeroichi and 00-Raiser. Sitcom eh? That might be fun. I mean we already discussed 2 and half women before. Was there another sitcom we could cop a feel off of?

I suggest 'Parks and Recreation'

Nah, maybe The Office.

Come to think of it, how about MASH?
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Old 2010-08-16, 16:31   Link #26510
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How about Friends.
And for the record I love being upside down, it's fun. Lost in dimensional space sounds like the most boring thing ever.
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Old 2010-08-16, 16:48   Link #26511
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We can get X amount of episodes of no advancement of the plot whatsoever
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Old 2010-08-16, 16:50   Link #26512
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Well... if they're trapped in a timeless void, it would be easier not to advance the plot, wouldn't it?
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Old 2010-08-16, 20:24   Link #26513
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Which gave me this idea.

Subaru: Uh...Precia? Precia, you listening? Precia?
Precia: What?! What is it?!
Subaru:.....I need to go pee.
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Old 2010-08-16, 20:45   Link #26514
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haha, now i know what sitcom to go with, Rugrats! (available on bittorent and netflix, get it now!)
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Old 2010-08-17, 03:42   Link #26515
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Hehe, thanks Deathcurse, Zeroichi and 00-Raiser. Sitcom eh? That might be fun. I mean we already discussed 2 and half women before.
*perks up*

Did somebody say, "Two and a Half Women"?

Hm...I'm QUITE tempted to add chapter 4....

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Which gave me this idea.

Subaru: Uh...Precia? Precia, you listening? Precia?
Precia: What?! What is it?!
Subaru:.....I need to go pee.
....I have a funny feeling that Subaru WOULD say that.....
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Old 2010-08-17, 04:22   Link #26516
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Hm, after re-reading the first story I still have a tough time figuring out who's who and what sentiments are being expressed . I'll probably have to re-read a few more times to fully get it.

This short was quite interesting, but the disturbing ending has completely taken over my thoughts on the story @_@......

I find the themes between Auris and Hayate quite interesting, and similar to what I'm doing in Crime Never Sleeps (without the romance though! XD). Having Auris try to subtly undermine Hayate, but yet Hayate is far more clever than Auris expected...very fun to read the back-and-forth interaction . The romance here makes the whole situation more complicated--I would have loved to see Hayate and Auris' relationship described by more than just the emotional Vita (from Fate or Nanoha, I suppose), since what they feel and how they act together are dissimilar.
Ending supposed to be distrubing.
It`s about Catherine after all.
Main purpose, though, it`s to show that even after death Auris continue to be tormented. Not only she lose her life, now her reputation (and her beloved one) totaly tranished. Moreover, Catherine do it not because she wanted to fill the power gap, but purely out of sheer sadism.

Hayate-Auris relationship from other characters POV... Thanks for idea.

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Old 2010-08-17, 08:35   Link #26517
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I'd hate to say, if Precia and Subaru were stuck together floating in nothingness even for awhile, they'd either be bored out of their minds or forced to talk to each other just to have something to do.
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Old 2010-08-17, 09:55   Link #26518
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You know, I'm beginning to wonder if I'll EVER get done with this drabble or if it'll turn into a very long one-shot.

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Old 2010-08-17, 09:57   Link #26519
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You know, I'm beginning to wonder if I'll EVER get done with this drabble or if it'll turn into a very long one-shot.

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... ... ... aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwww.
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Old 2010-08-17, 10:07   Link #26520
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You know, I'm beginning to wonder if I'll EVER get done with this drabble or if it'll turn into a very long one-shot.

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Alicia is a good mom - Fate pull a winner ticket.
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