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Old 2010-08-25, 21:04   Link #26741
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I don't remember that at all...

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Well, in the translation I have in episode 3, he said he was a probation officer in name only, but did tell Fate that if she never betrayed her friends and such, he promised not to put any limitations on her actions, so that does kind of infer that he's acting as her parole officer in this case.
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Old 2010-08-25, 23:51   Link #26742
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Oh, I kinda remember that... thought it was just a general pep talk rather than because he was in charge of her.
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Old 2010-08-26, 05:42   Link #26743
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Yeah, they should have called Phoenix Wright. *Nods*

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I think there's something wrong with the Mid Childan legal system. One year probation, even including all the blame she took on...wow.

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Well... I can't say it hasn't been fun.

But...

Did you REALLY think that was the end?

WHO THE HELL DO YOU THINK I AM?! *Gurren Lagann theme music starts up*

*Ahem*

Anyway!

Spoiler for Changes Finale!:
Yes we have the happy ending, plus yay for beating the system.
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Old 2010-08-26, 05:54   Link #26744
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Anyway...

The story's up on FF.Net with 2 bonus Omakes at the end.

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Heh. Trust Lindy to bend the rules in her favor.

(And play matchmaker for her own son.)

You know, despite being intended as a one-shot, this story ended up as a rather fun ride.
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Old 2010-08-27, 16:57   Link #26745
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I've only just now gotten around to reading BetrayerS, which of course was the best thing ever. So, is it officially dropped, or is it just super-delayed?
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Old 2010-08-27, 17:04   Link #26746
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I've only just now gotten around to reading BetrayerS, which of course was the best thing ever. So, is it officially dropped, or is it just super-delayed?
From the way it looks, BetrayerS was most likely one-shot only.
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Old 2010-08-27, 17:16   Link #26747
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From the way it looks, BetrayerS was most likely on-shot only.
Much to everyone's rage.
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Old 2010-08-27, 19:44   Link #26748
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I'm going to admit I never read BetrayerS. I've seen images from it, and the artwork looks very beautiful, but I never actually read the story.
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Old 2010-08-27, 22:55   Link #26749
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I'm going to admit I never read BetrayerS. I've seen images from it, and the artwork looks very beautiful, but I never actually read the story.
The artwork is worth the read. The only real problem I had is that Nanoha is downright evil, and it's established early that she's perfectly fine with obliterating Subaru and Fate. Then again, it's only the first chapter, and I imagine that there's more to it than meets the eye. It might be a Snape thing, where they only pretend to be evil so they can double-backstab the bad guys. (Although I doubt that's the case.)

Essentially, it's 'StrikerS: Civil War' with the realism cranked to 11.
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Old 2010-08-27, 22:57   Link #26750
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The artwork is worth the read. The only real problem I had is that Nanoha is downright evil, and it's established early that she's perfectly fine with obliterating Subaru and Fate. Then again, it's only the first chapter, and I imagine that there's more to it than meets the eye. It might be a Snape thing, where they only pretend to be evil so they can double-backstab the bad guys. (Although I doubt that's the case.)

Essentially, it's 'StrikerS: Civil War' with the realism cranked to 11.
Nanoha isn't evil, neither is Hayate. If I'm not mistaken they're only acting evil so someone will create a new better organization free of corruption, unlike the TSAB who at that point is extremely corrupted.
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Old 2010-08-27, 23:42   Link #26751
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So basically, BetrayerS is kind of like a darker alternate to StrikerS? Or does it pick up the story from StrikerS and develop from there?
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Old 2010-08-27, 23:43   Link #26752
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So basically, BetrayerS is kind of like a darker alternate to StrikerS? Or does it pick up the story from StrikerS and develop from there?
Pick up from StrikerS. Its kinda like Future Tense, actually, only less death and more evil Nanoha.
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Old 2010-08-27, 23:48   Link #26753
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Pick up from StrikerS. Its kinda like Future Tense, actually, only less death and more evil Nanoha.
Considering Vita went to Nanoha "Do you LIKE waking up every morning puking up blood?!" it makes me want more!
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Spoiler for Material Days Returns!:


Final scene written by 00-Raiser.
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Old 2010-08-28, 02:14   Link #26755
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Final scene written by 00-Raiser.
Poor guadian-guys, they karma realy suck to be cath by blood-lustful Rai-chan.
On other hand Yuuno get a very "intence" caryng.

Good twist Yasanagi.

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Old 2010-08-28, 03:13   Link #26756
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What the hell did I write? Man, late-night writing makes for weird stories...

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Kevin is awesome. That is all.

Also, I know what he said, but somehow I don't think this issue with the Bureau is over and done with just yet. And if that's true, it's pretty safe to bet that what Kevin did won't win him any favors from the group that wants the girls back for their power.
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Old 2010-08-28, 09:39   Link #26758
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Nice to see that Papa Wolf side come out, Tempy. Great job and thanks for sharing.
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Old 2010-08-28, 09:53   Link #26759
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Final scene written by 00-Raiser.
Oh God, I can see where this is heading (the prison part I mean. We all know where Seikou's part is headed).

Two Numbers, one of them Sette and also Runessa. If you have just a tiny bit of pity on Yuuno, the other Number won't be Quattro. My money is on them joining the ship. Yuuno will then go even more crazy for a bit, considering that not only he just can't seem to return home but now he could be considered a wanted criminal.

And the Bureau will think that they played into the Materials's hands. How many will press the panic button after that?
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Old 2010-08-28, 11:27   Link #26760
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