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Old 2010-09-19, 00:54   Link #27081
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Hehe, well I did do a little harem fic with Nanoha, Fate, and Hayate

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Old 2010-09-19, 00:56   Link #27082
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And now you need to make a harem fic featuring all of those pairings. :V

EDIT: Page claim for harems?
Well, they do generally come in twos and threes.

...Maybe I should start looking out for the virtue of my wife's assorted plush rodents, if he's such a player!

(Yes, I got the Yuuno plushie; he arrived Monday and, yes, he is as completely damn cute as the pictures look!)
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Old 2010-09-19, 01:34   Link #27083
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I... I don't even know how to explain this short. Words fail me.

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Sadly, I admit to have read one of the recent "teen vampire" series, Vampire Academy (it's because of the interesting main character, I swear!), and this kind of reminds me of the two main characters--one of them feeding off the other because they're friends and they couldn't trust anyone else at that time. So maybe that was why I wasn't really getting a "cheating" feel when I read it.

Or maybe it's because I find myself in the interesting position of being good friends with my sister's boyfriend, and how he and I have a lot of interests in common and we game and discuss shows together when my sister isn't there. But there's no cheating vibe or anything, it's just that we're all good friends with each other so nothing feels weird.

In the case of Shinobu and Miyuki, I guess I see it as the two of them being friends, outside of the fact that Shinobu and Kyouya are girl/boyfriends. Friends keep secrets from boyfriends sometimes, so I don't really see it as a big deal.

Of course, if the blood-drinking is similar to, er, other vampire series where it feels *good*, then maybe it would make things a little odd....but at this point, I don't really see any of that in the fic. So it just feels like a friend helping out a friend, just with a small complication of the fact that the boyfriend is also the other's brother, is all .

Nice fic though, especially the little moments that show how banal their acts have become--it really shows just how close they've become (in whatever sense of the word you'd like it mean).

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Well, I had this stashed here for ages, so... Not really what we're talking about but your remark remembered me of it.


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Nice, the last quarter of the fic really grabbed me and wrenched at the heartstrings, in a very detached, clinical way, which matches the tone very well ^^.

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(Yes, I got the Yuuno plushie; he arrived Monday and, yes, he is as completely damn cute as the pictures look!)
I admit that I was uninterested before, but after reading this here I gave in and Googled the Yuuno plushie....and all I have to say is that damn, now I want one too!
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Old 2010-09-19, 01:37   Link #27084
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Hehe, well I did do a little harem fic with Nanoha, Fate, and Hayate

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Old 2010-09-19, 02:27   Link #27085
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Been working on this all day.

I'll admit, I was inspired by the image thread.

So...

This one's called...

Spoiler for Due:


...

I can NOT look at that cyborg the same way ever again!
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Old 2010-09-19, 05:45   Link #27086
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Neither can I. Bouncy-bubbly Due. How did she ever become a top-notch infiltrator?
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Old 2010-09-19, 07:35   Link #27087
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I demand a continuation.

Though I'm quite sure Due's not supposed to know Sein... the only ones of the Sisters she has ever met was the first Uno, Tre, Quattro and Cinque.
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Old 2010-09-19, 08:53   Link #27088
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Been working on this all day.

I'll admit, I was inspired by the image thread.

So...

This one's called...

Spoiler for Due:


...

I can NOT look at that cyborg the same way ever again!
Well, I was going to read this story. Then a kitty ran by the front door, and I had to chase it until I saw a birdie, and then I encountered some mice and it became a whole big thing. I found my pen, though!

... Due is so cute! And believe me, those are four words I never thought I'd type.
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Old 2010-09-19, 09:57   Link #27089
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Been working on this all day.

I'll admit, I was inspired by the image thread.

So...

This one's called...

Spoiler for Due:


...

I can NOT look at that cyborg the same way ever again!
The life of a 6-year old...

Only thing I can say is...wow.

That was really cute and I was laughing through most of it, especially because of the ADD fits and the little "knowledge facts" shed throw in
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Old 2010-09-19, 10:20   Link #27090
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Been working on this all day.

I'll admit, I was inspired by the image thread.

So...

This one's called...

Spoiler for Due:


...

I can NOT look at that cyborg the same way ever again!
So...CUTE! I loved her childish distractions...and her frustrated self-awareness of her own childishness during the moments when she could think clearly, although some of her ADD seems more pronounced than mere kid-like-ness, which ties in to what Schach was saying about symptoms of mental disorders, to which the stress of death and regeneration isn't helping, plus the stress of living on the streets for two years. The various "flashbacks" triggered by assorted events also play into this underlying poignancy that jars against the overlay of cuteness.

The bit with Auris was especially funny.

@deathcurse: I think the implication of cheating comes largely in the fact that Shinobu and Miyuki are exchanging an intimate act about which centers around a secret about Shinobu, and the fact that the two of them have to sneak around behind not merely Kyouya's back, but everyone's, even Noel's, in order to engage in it. That makes it not just "something private that Friend A knows and Friend B doesn't" but a central fact of her life.

It's also aggravated by the fact that Kyouya and Shinobu are the same age and, so far as I know, knew each other first--that is, Miyuki is "my boyfriend's sister" to Shinobu, instead of Kyouya being "my friend's older brother whom I fell in love with." Note that the entire vibe of the scene changes if Shinobu knew Miyuki first and they were doing this for a while. Then it becomes a question of whether Kyouya and Shinobu's relationship develops to a point that he'd be let in on the Big Secret.
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Old 2010-09-19, 10:52   Link #27091
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It's also aggravated by the fact that Kyouya and Shinobu are the same age and, so far as I know, knew each other first--that is, Miyuki is "my boyfriend's sister" to Shinobu, instead of Kyouya being "my friend's older brother whom I fell in love with." Note that the entire vibe of the scene changes if Shinobu knew Miyuki first and they were doing this for a while. Then it becomes a question of whether Kyouya and Shinobu's relationship develops to a point that he'd be let in on the Big Secret.
Now I wonder if I should check and see if anyone who knows about TH3 can confirm who Shinobu met first. From what I recall with MGLN, I think Shinobu and Kyouya were friends from high school (or middle school, or something; point is, they were friends for awhile before they got romantically involved), but it's never detailed on if she met Kyouya first and then met the rest of the family through him, or if by some random fluke she met Miyuki and then met Kyouya through her. More than likely Shinobu and Kyouya met first, but it's still something I'd like to confirm if I could.
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Old 2010-09-19, 11:19   Link #27092
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As usual, I am wholly dependent on RadiantBeam to give me prompts for NanoFate stories (it's literally true--"Mending" is the only one that wasn't done that wasn't based on something she wrote or something she asked for). So, forthwith, I hereby present the newest entry in the Shadows stories, set directly after "Long Distance Goodbye" Chapter 2:

Throwing Light on a Shadow
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6336134/1/

Okay, that's a little too much pomp and circumstance for a one-shot, but enjoy anyway!

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Old 2010-09-19, 11:58   Link #27093
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Old 2010-09-19, 14:37   Link #27094
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Been working on this all day.

I'll admit, I was inspired by the image thread.

So...

This one's called...

Spoiler for Due:


...

I can NOT look at that cyborg the same way ever again!
Cute, though under the cuteness there are some surprisingly serious topics like homelessness and murder What she had to eat remind me of Metal Gear Solid 3 and now I can see Due on a mission asking "But how does it taste?"
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Old 2010-09-19, 15:12   Link #27095
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Been working on this all day.

I'll admit, I was inspired by the image thread.

So...

This one's called...

Spoiler for Due:


...

I can NOT look at that cyborg the same way ever again!
Heh, i can`t believe Nanya you make me want to hug Due tightly and make her fell comfy. Good work.
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Old 2010-09-19, 15:33   Link #27096
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Been working on this all day.

I'll admit, I was inspired by the image thread.

So...

This one's called...

Spoiler for Due:


...

I can NOT look at that cyborg the same way ever again!
HNNNNNGGG-

...okay, okay. The cuteness overload is over. Calming down now.

Seriously, though, how do you people do it? First Moczo made emotionless Sette... well, still emotionless, but in an adorable way. Now you've just turned Due, an unrepentant murderer, into an unbelievably cute little girl. I'm beginning to dread the moment someone takes Quattro and successfully applies this arcane, mysterious moefication process of yours to her, of all characters...

About actual, meaningful comments... well, there's not much that hasn't been said already. It's lolified Due being cute, with the other Numbers also getting some attention, and some serious undercurrents below the sweetness.

I've got one thing that no-one else seems to have brought up so far; I'm getting some slight Last Order vibes from the opening paragraphs. Bubbly little girl in a tattered sheet wandering the streets alone, and all that. Was this intentional, or just a coincidence?

And I'm seconding the demand for a continuation.
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Old 2010-09-19, 16:00   Link #27097
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To everyone who commented, thanks. ^_^

But...

WHY do you do this to me?!

Now I wanna continue it!

Spoiler for Due 2:
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Old 2010-09-19, 16:13   Link #27098
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To everyone who commented, thanks. ^_^

But...

WHY do you do this to me?!

Now I wanna continue it!

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Aaand, there's some of the creepiness back. Due's starting to edge into Grotesque Cute territory here.
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Old 2010-09-19, 16:15   Link #27099
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Aaand, there's some of the creepiness back. Due's starting to edge into Grotesque Cute territory here.
She lived homeless for a couple of years, it's not like she's got a lot that she can say that wouldn't creep people out.

And she's mentally just a young girl.
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Old 2010-09-19, 16:22   Link #27100
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She lived homeless for a couple of years, it's not like she's got a lot that she can say that wouldn't creep people out.

And she's mentally just a young girl.
Didn't mean to imply it was implausible, just pointed it out. It actually helps keep the fic from becoming outright saccharine.
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