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Old 2010-09-20, 14:42   Link #27121
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Hmm...

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I want to cry now.

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That... that was really sad, honestly.

I was hoping that Due would break out her 'cold assassin' persona and berate Quattro for being too petty and weak to take any path to freedom she could find and seek revenge later, honestly. God, what a bitch.
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Old 2010-09-20, 16:14   Link #27122
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Wow, big backlog . Forgive my more-than-just-a-little vague remarks...

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As usual, I am wholly dependent on RadiantBeam to give me prompts for NanoFate stories (it's literally true--"Mending" is the only one that wasn't done that wasn't based on something she wrote or something she asked for). So, forthwith, I hereby present the newest entry in the Shadows stories, set directly after "Long Distance Goodbye" Chapter 2:

Throwing Light on a Shadow
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6336134/1/

Okay, that's a little too much pomp and circumstance for a one-shot, but enjoy anyway!

Awwww . I love it, it's always nice to see the reactions and thoughts of people around the situation, instead of being in the midst of it like Lutecia and Vivio. Poor Nanoha, having to deal with a growing teenager!

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Hi there. I'm not back per se... but I'm not longer not here... 'cause makes sense right?

Oh and you can have this too...

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LOL, the moment when Fate opened her mouth to speak is when the crack really hit me . I expected the crack to just be from the antics of the bad guys, but when Fate started talking I immediately thought of the cheesy silver age comics....

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Latest drabble for "Shadowfire" is up and running: It Only Hurts.

Hmm, according to my story links the drabble right after this one is the one I wrote from the challenge DC gave me. Now to actually remember what those requirements were...
Eh, I can't imagine going back to look it up , but I believe that it was the "Jail Bait Wait" story where I had a bunch of random items like umbrellas and staplers that you had to include in the story?

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Hmm...

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I want to cry now.

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Edit: Previous parts are found at the following links.

Part 1
Part 2
Part 3
Just read all the parts, and here are some disjointed comments:
-Zafira is just too adorably sweet. It should be criminal.
-Due is like a Woobie who has stirrings of sociopathic behaviour. Very odd combination...
-Cinque and Sein are really great in how they take care of child Due

One random note: mental disorders, not diseases ^^.

The ADD doesn't exactly work that way in real life, but it's perfect for the humour of a story . The later chapters kind of overdo it a little though, it's much funnier when we see it manifest more in Due being distracted through actions (like picking up a penny, etc ) than just jumping from topic to topic in her speech.

Funny story though, it's great to read!
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Old 2010-09-20, 18:07   Link #27123
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Hmm...

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I want to cry now.

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Hmm.

Story Hijack GO

Spoiler for PT 4.124943:
LOOK WHAT YOU MADE ME DO.
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Old 2010-09-20, 18:14   Link #27124
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Hmm.

Story Hijack GO

Spoiler for PT 4.124943:
LOOK WHAT YOU MADE ME DO.
*melts in a pool of daw* |D

That was cute

MORE STORY HIJACK PLEASE!! XD
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Old 2010-09-20, 18:23   Link #27125
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Hmm...

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I want to cry now.

Spoiler for Due PT 4:


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Edit: Previous parts are found at the following links.

Part 1
Part 2
Part 3
Well, an expected reaction I suppose. Part 3 was more cuteness with a side of creepy, but this part is certainly more dramatic. Now they gotta go find Due and then have a touching reunion for a finale!

And adding to deathcurse's post, tangental speech is actually a symptom of schizophrenia (which is not the same as DID btw).

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Hmm.

Story Hijack GO

Spoiler for PT 4.124943:
LOOK WHAT YOU MADE ME DO.
Heh, that'd be a nice way to end it too Kevin's going to be busy cleaning up all those crumbs later
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Old 2010-09-20, 18:46   Link #27126
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A lot happens here when you leave for the weekend doesn't it.

Nanya - The maximum cuteness level of everything was just blown away...until chapter 4, that was sad, very sad. Although judging by her reaction no one's going to make Cute-adorable-Quattro any time soon.

To thin it was all inspired by one image.
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Old 2010-09-20, 18:54   Link #27127
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Eh, I can't imagine going back to look it up , but I believe that it was the "Jail Bait Wait" story where I had a bunch of random items like umbrellas and staplers that you had to include in the story?
Eh, I saved the link for it when I first posted it to the forum, so if I dig through my Microsoft documents it'll come up eventually. But yeah, I vaguely remember something about involving a stapler, an umbrella, a mention of Yuuno, and a spaceship.

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Hmm.

Story Hijack GO

Spoiler for PT 4.124943:
LOOK WHAT YOU MADE ME DO.
I approve. You should hijack stories more often, Tempy.

Of course, now I get the feeling Kevin will never shake Due off. She'll be after his cupcakes!
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Old 2010-09-20, 19:00   Link #27128
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Eh, I saved the link for it when I first posted it to the forum, so if I dig through my Microsoft documents it'll come up eventually. But yeah, I vaguely remember something about involving a stapler, an umbrella, a mention of Yuuno, and a spaceship.
@_@

Okay. I'm interested.

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Why did this description vaguely remembers me of a episode of Friends?
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Old 2010-09-20, 20:41   Link #27129
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Hmm...

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I want to cry now.

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Edit: Previous parts are found at the following links.

Part 1
Part 2
Part 3
Maybe it's the shock, but I wonder why none of them asked why she acted like this...

And now I have a horrifying idea: they say it's amazing Due managed to live so long like this... Who says she did? Considering how screwed up her brain is, maybe it erased the trauma of more reincarnations? But since she consumed herself again, which meant a sick body...
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Old 2010-09-20, 22:30   Link #27130
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“Help! I’m being kidnapped by a sexual deviant! This hoodlum is going to steal my cuteness!!!

Most epic scream ever... XD
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Old 2010-09-20, 22:41   Link #27131
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Here's a quick joke I wanted to use in some other fic, but I figured I'd write it up now for a quick laugh

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Old 2010-09-20, 22:46   Link #27132
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There's also those ties and ribbons, which may add a few minutes or more depending how impatient or frustrated you are. One can hope they are pin-ups / clip-ons...
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Old 2010-09-20, 23:42   Link #27133
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Hmm.

Story Hijack GO

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LOOK WHAT YOU MADE ME DO.
Tempy, that's awesome.

...

May I use this as a special chapter when I post it up on FF.Net?
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Old 2010-09-21, 00:03   Link #27134
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Tempy, that's awesome.

...

May I use this as a special chapter when I post it up on FF.Net?
Sure, go right ahead.

Though, I doubt anyone on FF.net is going to recognize Kevin other than being a guy with a lot of cupcakes and a sharp ear.

EDIT: Through my amazing ability to pick up on errors long after a story has been posted, I have made a few small edits to the original post.
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Old 2010-09-21, 00:22   Link #27135
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Huh. Seems like Allquall removed [M]Other Love from FF.net.
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Huh, I wonder why.
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Old 2010-09-21, 00:32   Link #27137
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Here's a quick joke I wanted to use in some other fic, but I figured I'd write it up now for a quick laugh

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That's one thing to be sure of. Maybe someone like Vice could teach him the basics of the "procedure"...

Or maybe he should just have a sharp knife at hand to cut his way into happiness.

(Yes. I do consider Vice as a Don Juan in Nanoha)

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About Allquall's [M]Other Love: I hope it's an error from FF.net, because that's a story that everyone should read.
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Old 2010-09-21, 00:50   Link #27138
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You can never have too many knives in anime, there's always something 'round every corner.
And I hope it's an error on ff.net. (there's been a lot of those lately)
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Old 2010-09-21, 01:59   Link #27139
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Here's a quick joke I wanted to use in some other fic, but I figured I'd write it up now for a quick laugh

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Heh, beware the from enemy within... but right now the enemy very close. Don`t give up Yuuno.
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Old 2010-09-21, 02:14   Link #27140
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*Ahem* One part left after this one.

Spoiler for Due Part 5:


Previous parts.

Part 1
Part 2
Part 3
Part 4
Tempy's "Hijack"

Edit:
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