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Old 2010-09-21, 12:12   Link #27161
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No, not the same person. The one who gave her the scarf was a living person.
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Old 2010-09-21, 12:25   Link #27162
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I~ was~ right~

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Old 2010-09-21, 12:27   Link #27163
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You can either have the washer and dryer on my right, or the Mystery Box on the left.
Which will it be?
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Old 2010-09-21, 12:28   Link #27164
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*Gives Tempy a cookie*
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Old 2010-09-21, 12:36   Link #27165
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Well what do you know, it was the dead priest afterall

On a side note, during the prison scene I was curious on Sette's reaction, but judging by her character and the fact that she never knew her personally, I guess her reaction would be something like "..."
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Old 2010-09-21, 12:38   Link #27166
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Yaaay~!

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*dashes off to find milk*

Also, mystery box.
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Old 2010-09-21, 16:12   Link #27167
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"A washer and dryer is a washer and dryer, but the Mystery Box could be anything! It could even be a washer and dryer!"

Also, I see no reason why Due should get all the attention. Soooo...

Spoiler for 'Ready, Sette, Go!' Part 4:

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Old 2010-09-21, 16:25   Link #27168
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*Laughs* that was crazy and awesome, Moczo. Just awesome.

Just one thing I need to point out...

Nove is shorter than anyone but Cinque. Even Hayate is a bit taller than she is. And that's when Nove's on roller blades...

Sette is taller than anyone in the show but maybe Zafira.

If Sette wore Nove's swimsuit, she'd probably suffer from a major wedgie. ... Which is something that someone should have commented on "we can't let you out there, since people will stare at your legs and then gawk at your butt."

Also...

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Nove's finger shot out to point at something in the distance, her eyes wide with shock. "... 'Blood Zombies 2'! I didn't even know it was out yet! Sette, Sette, we have to play that one!" She squealed.

"Oh, Hell..." Nove muttered.
I think you mean Wendi's finger, right?
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Old 2010-09-21, 16:31   Link #27169
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No Highschool of the Dead video game? Wendi would have made for a great Rei. ^^
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Old 2010-09-21, 17:37   Link #27170
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Here’s a little thing I wrote during a break between English and French homework last night. It was preventing me from concentrating so I just had to write it to get it out of my head.

Spoiler for A Bit Too Far:


Spoiler for Notes:


Are the any huge errors? I was quite tired when I wrote this, so I'd like to know.

@Tempy - Your mystery box is being sent to you by intergalactic airmail, we here at Prizes.ltd ask that you be patient as your package is travelling 112 lightyears from your nearest intergalactic post-office and we don't have faster than light travel yet.
PS: as for how this message got here, don't ask.

@Nanya - The ending to that story was so adorable, i thought i was going to cry.

@Moczo - It has already been said, awesome incarnate.
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Old 2010-09-21, 18:44   Link #27171
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"A washer and dryer is a washer and dryer, but the Mystery Box could be anything! It could even be a washer and dryer!"

Also, I see no reason why Due should get all the attention. Soooo...

Spoiler for 'Ready, Sette, Go!' Part 4:
You know, reading through this, I think it might be a good idea to keep Sette and Wendi separated for a little while as she gets settled into normal life. I know the girl means well, but she isn't exactly the best influence on Sette with her mindset at the moment. I vote leave her alone with Ginga! Torturing Ginga is always fun!
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Old 2010-09-21, 18:55   Link #27172
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You know, reading through this, I think it might be a good idea to keep Sette and Wendi separated for a little while as she gets settled into normal life. I know the girl means well, but she isn't exactly the best influence on Sette with her mindset at the moment. I vote leave her alone with Ginga! Torturing Ginga is always fun!
But 'Blood Zombies 2'! That's the sequel to the renowned, award winning arcade smash hit from year 72 of the Mid Calendar, 'Blood Zombies'.

The plot is, there are zombies and you have to shoot them until they bleed. Without Wendi, how would Sette learn of such marvels?
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Old 2010-09-21, 19:21   Link #27173
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"A washer and dryer is a washer and dryer, but the Mystery Box could be anything! It could even be a washer and dryer!"

Also, I see no reason why Due should get all the attention. Soooo...

Spoiler for 'Ready, Sette, Go!' Part 4:
I would call this sugar rush, but it's because Sette is here so I'll call this Sette rush. And Wendi's dose of Sette is way, way too high right now. Insanity will be the only outcome of that game.

And may God have pity on everyone else's mind if they learn the kind of outfit Wendi have. I can only imagine briefly the mental images they'll have.
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Old 2010-09-21, 22:39   Link #27174
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Sette's latest misadventures are up on FF.net right here. Enjoy!
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Old 2010-09-21, 22:46   Link #27175
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Also, I see no reason why Due should get all the attention. Soooo...
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Spoiler for Suggestion:
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Old 2010-09-21, 23:16   Link #27176
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Sette's latest misadventures are up on FF.net right here. Enjoy!
Sweet. This is getting more fun by the minute.

Tiresias pretty well covered what I noticed but:

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Old 2010-09-22, 01:14   Link #27177
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Sette's latest misadventures are up on FF.net right here. Enjoy!
The very first line had me grinning like an idiot. "I prepared to commence Operation: 'Live A Normal Life and Hopefully Eventually Chill Out and Stop Calling Everything an 'Operation'' (Operation name chosen by Wendi)."

Brilliant stuff.
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Old 2010-09-22, 01:20   Link #27178
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A little saddened that Due's 2nd chapter on FF.Net got no reviews, but, oh well...

Due 3 is now up.
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Old 2010-09-22, 02:55   Link #27179
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Well, you wanted to know, here you go.

Spoiler for Due Final:


Spoiler for Notes:
First off... well, I have to admit, the part with the priest was a little too sappy for my tastes (although at least it gave us the "try not to kill any more priests" line, that was pretty funny). It didn't ruin the ending, no, but I still think the fic could have done without it; Due spending her first Christmas with her new family is already a sweet and happy way to finish the story.

That being said, I did enjoy the fic overall. On the surface, it's kiddified!Due acting cute and unintentionally worming her way into just about everyone's heart, and that's nicely rounded out by the serious implications of the psychological damage she suffered while homeless (which turns more hopeful as she slowly begins to heal). That, and her dramatic confrontation with the older Numbers in chapter 4; bloody hell, Quattro is quite the bitch - not that that's anything new, but her behavior was still quite the punch in the gut for poor Due and the reader alike.

So yeah, minor gripes about the finale aside, this was a fun read. Not to mention that it accomplished the impossible by making Due likable.

Side note on Tempy's alternate ending (or, well, alternate-finding-Due, at least): great little addition to the story. Actually, I kind of prefer this over the saved-by-the-priest deus ex machina; sure, Kevin being around at just the right time is a bit convenient, but it's still more plausible in my opinion. Also, the "crumbs everywhere" gag cracked me up.

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"A washer and dryer is a washer and dryer, but the Mystery Box could be anything! It could even be a washer and dryer!"

Also, I see no reason why Due should get all the attention. Soooo...

Spoiler for 'Ready, Sette, Go!' Part 4:
Oh, wow. Wendi, you dirty, dirty girl. (Should I hazard a guess that Nove is the other person in the household who's familiar with that certain outfit?)

You know, as much as Sette is still entertainingly clueless, I think Wendi steals the spotlight in this chapter. Her hyperactivity just overshadows everything else right from the operation name all the way to the arcade. Not that letting her take over occasionally is a problem; I nearly fell out of my chair laughing multiple times due to her antics.
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Old 2010-09-22, 07:22   Link #27180
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Chapter One of Reinforce Threshold

Chapter Two of Reinforce Threshold

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