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Old 2010-11-01, 09:20   Link #27661
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Fic part two!

Spoiler for If It Weren't For You Meddling Kids, Part 2:


Spoiler for Jinkies! An author's note!:


Spoiler for Zoinks! Can't forget the VMOT!:
hahaha I loved Zaffy's impression of the cartoon

...and of course, as deathcurse mentioned - 'you're going to be helped' *snicker*

I thought this was AU at the start - probably because we rarely get teenage Suzuka in non-AUs, but I loved the set up and detective work


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Well, I was talking with Shiny and she's busy with college apps. ("hopefully, I'll be done with this college app crap soon.")

Her birthday's in 7 days...

So, everyone, she says "hi" to you all and she hopes she'll be back soon.
I hope Shiny will be back soon too :P Happy bday in any case!
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Old 2010-11-01, 10:18   Link #27662
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Here's part 7

Part 1

Part 2

Part 3

Part 4

Part 5

Part 6

Spoiler for Slayers Nanoha part 7:
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Old 2010-11-01, 10:37   Link #27663
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Again I apologize for that last story, the quality checks in brain crashed last night. Won't happen again. I have now removed it from my original post, if 00-Raiser would be so kind as to remove it it his I would be delighted.
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Old 2010-11-01, 10:43   Link #27664
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Again I apologize for that last story, the quality checks in brain crashed last night. Won't happen again. I have now removed it from my original post, if 00-Raiser would be so kind as to remove it it his I would be delighted.
You didn't have to go that far. The fic itself wasn't offensive or anything so leaving it up would be harmless. Well, if that's what you want me to do, I'll comply.
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Old 2010-11-01, 10:49   Link #27665
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You didn't have to go that far. The fic itself wasn't offensive or anything so leaving it up would be harmless. Well, if that's what you want me to do, I'll comply.
I know it wasn't that bad, but I that I will come back here some day and cringe. I really can do better. If you want an example, All There Is (the single fic on my fanfiction.net account) was written sometime around midnight.
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Old 2010-11-01, 11:06   Link #27666
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Well, I was talking with Shiny and she's busy with college apps. ("hopefully, I'll be done with this college app crap soon.")

Her birthday's in 7 days...

So, everyone, she says "hi" to you all and she hopes she'll be back soon.
Happy upcoming birthday to Shiny!
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Old 2010-11-01, 11:10   Link #27667
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Happy upcoming birthday to Shiny!
Yes! Happy birthday! Sadly I will have make a present later, I've got to babysit.
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Old 2010-11-01, 12:06   Link #27668
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Here's part 7

Part 1

Part 2

Part 3

Part 4

Part 5

Part 6

Spoiler for Slayers Nanoha part 7:
Heh. Well... more set up, but nice. I'll admit I chuckled at Lina's eyes sparkling over the thought of a magical interdimensional spaceship.

Still, I really can't wait wait for the real plot to hit again... it's been training and getting to know stuff for a few chapters in a row. A nice breather period after the Big Reveals, but... well... I really want to see a Mother/Daughter tag-team on something. Nanoha and Lina vs... well, anything at all, basically. Nothing could stand up to that, so it doesn't really matter what they're fighting.

Oh, and is Lina going to get a Device? Not like she needs one but she seems the sort who would want one anyway...
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Old 2010-11-01, 18:03   Link #27669
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I thought I'd steal RadiantBeam's schtick and post a Vivio/Lutecia short!

Spoiler for Maybe This Time Next Year?:
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Old 2010-11-01, 18:30   Link #27670
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I thought I'd steal RadiantBeam's schtick and post a Vivio/Lutecia short!

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Spoiler for Comments:
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Old 2010-11-01, 18:55   Link #27671
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By that time, a Screaming Orgasm would be more appropriate.

But perhaps that writer typo wasn't a typo at all? Author cameo? I'll allow it.

Also, oh look, a continuation.

First part

Spoiler for Responsibility:
Yep.

Also, new sig :3
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Old 2010-11-01, 19:05   Link #27672
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By that time, a Screaming Orgasm would be more appropriate.

But perhaps that writer typo wasn't a typo at all? Author cameo? I'll allow it.

Also, oh look, a continuation.

First part

Spoiler for Responsibility:
Yep.

Also, new sig :3
Zim called, he wants Gir back.

Erio, fucking is what got you into this problem in the first place, I don't think you'd want that now.

Signum's a Shota-con, should have seen that coming.

Can't wait to see what Caro and Lutecia do to him... *Snicker*
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Old 2010-11-01, 19:25   Link #27673
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Okay, that's it! I'm posting parts 8, 9, and 10 together!

...

They're all pretty short.

Part 1

Part 2

Part 3

Part 4

Part 5

Part 6

Part 7

Spoiler for Nanoha Slayers Part 8:


Spoiler for Nanoha Slayers Part 9:


Spoiler for Part 10:
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Old 2010-11-01, 19:48   Link #27674
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By that time, a Screaming Orgasm would be more appropriate.

But perhaps that writer typo wasn't a typo at all? Author cameo? I'll allow it.

Also, oh look, a continuation.

First part

Spoiler for Responsibility:
Yep.

Also, new sig :3
Heh, Erio's got a lot of explainin' ta do

Well, physically speaking Signum is 19, so there's only a 5 year gap. Though considering how Erio looks at 14, can it really be considered shotacon?
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Old 2010-11-01, 20:43   Link #27675
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Maybe This Time Next Year?
At some point, everyone will be doing whatever they can to get Shadows-Lulu to spit-take.
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Old 2010-11-01, 20:47   Link #27676
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So... Here's part 11.

Parts 1 through 10

Spoiler for Nanoha Slayers Part 11:
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Old 2010-11-01, 21:35   Link #27677
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So... Here's part 11.

Parts 1 through 10

Spoiler for Nanoha Slayers Part 11:
"This Device of mine glows with an awesome POWER! It's mild computerized voice tells me to grasp VICTORY! Now take this! My love, my anger, and all of my FRIENDSHIP! STARLIIIIIIIGHT! BREAKEEEEEEEER!"

... sorry, couldn't resist.
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Old 2010-11-01, 21:37   Link #27678
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When we talked a little about it on IM, I used:

"This staff of mine glows with an awesome power! It's pink grip tells me to befriend you! Take this! My love, my friendship, and all of our expended magic! STARLIGHT FINGER!"
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Old 2010-11-01, 22:18   Link #27679
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I thought I'd steal RadiantBeam's schtick and post a Vivio/Lutecia short!

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They only do it so they don't feel guilty about having a sex life while Lutecia's stuck in eternal limbo.

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By that time, a Screaming Orgasm would be more appropriate.

But perhaps that writer typo wasn't a typo at all? Author cameo? I'll allow it.

Also, oh look, a continuation.

First part

Spoiler for Responsibility:
Yep.

Also, new sig :3
D'aaaaw, I feel kind of bad for him, in a way. He's really doing the sweet, right thing, taking responsibility and deciding to stay by Signum's side.

...

The threats against his health if he broke Signum's heart were still hilarious, though.
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Old 2010-11-01, 22:41   Link #27680
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I thought I'd steal RadiantBeam's schtick and post a Vivio/Lutecia short!

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I was wondering what was going on until the waiter named the drink . I loved the simplicity of the second to last line, we really don't need anything more to vividly imagine what hilarity Lutecia's spit-take would look like .

I feel like maybe Vivio should have had some kind of reaction at the end though, like maybe a smirk, or a twinkle in her eyes, or something, to show her amusement?
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