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Old 2010-11-29, 04:16   Link #28021
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Is that a challenge?
...why not?

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Tiresias... buddy, friend...

Have you learned nothing of how she operates?!
Shhh, I'm trying to gauge the extent of her abilities, this is a delicate process! For (faux) Science!

...alright I confess, I actually wanted her to torture someone else instead

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Wait. Aside from weakness to metal, Aura Magic is disturbingly similar to Eclipse...
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Old 2010-11-29, 08:41   Link #28022
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Yeah, I really do not care about this Sette storyline. It just feels so out of place.

I think you're over doing Rai's fourth wall breaking. Stuff like that is best for just quick one liners, not multi paragraph long rants. It feels forced and over done. That line about the cooling apparatuses was funny, though
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Old 2010-11-29, 10:21   Link #28023
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...alright I confess, I actually wanted her to torture someone else instead
*checks list* Actually, I haven't tortured Miyuki in a good while, now that I think of it... and Vivio's do for some mental anguish come next chapter of LDG, so you have that to look forward to.
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Old 2010-11-29, 14:17   Link #28024
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Posted All Good Things and the Epilogue to FF.Net

The Epilogue has a special thank you for certain people.
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Old 2010-11-29, 15:47   Link #28025
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Problem: While you removed Cinque's kiss, you still left in "Strange, the desire to get another kiss from him wasn't there anymore."

And I'm glad I could help Thank you for providing us with this story.
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Old 2010-11-29, 15:49   Link #28026
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Problem: While you removed Cinque's kiss, you still left in "Strange, the desire to get another kiss from him wasn't there anymore."

And I'm glad I could help Thank you for providing us with this story.
ACK! *Fixes*

Thanks for the catch.

And I'm glad that you enjoyed it.
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Old 2010-11-29, 15:54   Link #28027
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Season 1

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Old 2010-11-29, 17:13   Link #28028
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Is this the begining of your second onslaught then Nanya?

The conversation between Lina and Luna at the end there tugged at my heartstrings (I'm a real sucker for touching moments). The whole Nanoha nightmare things sends shivers down my spine, I can still see that girl snapping, I really can.
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Old 2010-11-30, 08:10   Link #28029
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"Sis..." Lina turned and saw her sister looking at her, frowning slightly. "Can we talk, just the two of us?"

Lina jerked her head. "Outside then."
Unless Lina's having a very strange conversation, I'm assuming one of those is meant to be 'Luna'.

Other than this one misplaced letter though, very good chapter! I basically agree with what's been already said: the Lina/Luna conversation is really heartwarming, and does a lot to drive home that even though they might not get along all that well under normal circumstances, they are sisters and they love each other. As for Nanoha... poor thing. Six months isn't enough to get over what she's been through, so it's realistic, but that doesn't mean I don't feel bad for the poor dear.

Looking forward to the next part!
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Old 2010-11-30, 09:27   Link #28030
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Unless Lina's having a very strange conversation, I'm assuming one of those is meant to be 'Luna'.

Other than this one misplaced letter though, very good chapter! I basically agree with what's been already said: the Lina/Luna conversation is really heartwarming, and does a lot to drive home that even though they might not get along all that well under normal circumstances, they are sisters and they love each other. As for Nanoha... poor thing. Six months isn't enough to get over what she's been through, so it's realistic, but that doesn't mean I don't feel bad for the poor dear.

Looking forward to the next part!
yeah, one of them is Luna. Luna's speaking in the first line, Moczo.

Just that Lina turned to look at her.
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Old 2010-11-30, 09:40   Link #28031
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yeah, one of them is Luna. Luna's speaking in the first line, Moczo.

Just that Lina turned to look at her.
Aaaaaaaaah. And now I feel dumb!
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Old 2010-11-30, 09:44   Link #28032
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Oh hey, wasn't expecting to be mentioned there.

You did good, Nanya. I'm sorry that I left when I did, but you brought the story along very well by yourself and gave it a good ending. Awesome job.
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Old 2010-11-30, 11:21   Link #28033
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Excellent work as usual, Nanya. Day in the Life was a great fic, one of the best I've ever read and I'm glad to see you've done the ending so well.
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Old 2010-11-30, 14:10   Link #28034
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Probably not going to take over this thread like I did before. But, oh well.

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So, I'm still not sure which path to go yet.
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Old 2010-11-30, 14:23   Link #28035
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More and more different forces seem to have plans for our heroes don't they? Makes me wonder what everyone and not jus Xellos is doing now, it's all getting interesting...again.
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Old 2010-11-30, 16:19   Link #28036
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Just a short.

Spoiler for Breakfast:
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Old 2010-11-30, 17:17   Link #28037
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Just a short.

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Heh, like Nanoha has any right to talk about restraint

Cute short.
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Old 2010-12-01, 14:07   Link #28038
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So, what path am I taking?

...

Find out for yourself.

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Spoiler for well...:
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Old 2010-12-01, 16:27   Link #28039
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So, what path am I taking?

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Find out for yourself.

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Wow, everyone's planning something it seems, this will the most comfusing Xanotos Pileup ever. Also we didn't learn a thing about what any of these plans are did we? That was sneaky.
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Old 2010-12-01, 16:40   Link #28040
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Yay, Xellos, my favourite Affably Evil Mazoku has appeared before Nanoha. And I can`t help but think that huraker is very cute, even though i know how cold-hearted she can be.
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