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Old 2010-12-26, 01:30   Link #28341
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All I can say is...

Go Lina! Go Filia!

Now I need to get to bed.

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Edit: Updated on FF.Net again.
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Old 2010-12-26, 14:19   Link #28342
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Old 2010-12-26, 14:55   Link #28343
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Here we are, part two of the Shadowcat saga! Apologies for the late post; I meant to get it up right after Stray, but then finals started, and I came home, and there was holiday shopping, and then to top it all off I got sick. Nonetheless, enjoy!

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Old 2010-12-26, 15:06   Link #28344
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Good job Nanya.

You was able to make Riksulafto sympathetic without changing her character.

And Huraker (in russian transaltion Huireka) seems to walk on the same path as Darkstar i.e. got her mind screwed with power of opposite polarity.
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Old 2010-12-26, 16:01   Link #28345
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Here we are, part two of the Shadowcat saga! Apologies for the late post; I meant to get it up right after Stray, but then finals started, and I came home, and there was holiday shopping, and then to top it all off I got sick. Nonetheless, enjoy!

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A nice moment of showing a typical Shadow agent's priorities with the first few paragraphs. And about Miranda speculating on how she could make the cat go missing while they were leaving....now I'm imagining a movie scene where Lutecia is searching desperately, then finally gives up as Miranda kindly puts a hand on her shoulder, and they board the ship together with Lutecia giving one last sad glance backwards...for the camera to pan down to an alley behind a dumpster, where a white cat lies with it's neck wrung @_@......

I liked the small touch of how Lutecia was secretly proud of succeeding at sneaking the cat aboard . It reminds me of how kids/teenagers often know they weren't supposed to do something outrageous, and show the proper remorse, but yet can't help but feel that satisfaction at being successful .

*imagines a white kitty stuffed up Lutecia's coat sleeve* Awwwwwwwwwww .....

I admit, I'm not very fond about reading accents in dialogue . Miranda's is not too bad, but I still gritted my teeth whenever I hit more than one slurred word due to the accent in a sentence . Personal preference though!

.....And a nice eerie slip about Shadow ethics at the end .
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Old 2010-12-26, 16:01   Link #28346
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Old 2010-12-26, 16:26   Link #28347
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Zellas also make her appearance... and what about Sherra, hm?
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Old 2010-12-26, 17:07   Link #28348
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Why hello there, fic that I haven't updated in 5 months!

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Old 2010-12-26, 21:27   Link #28349
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Posted that Vivio Travels Back In Time to the original series on FF.net, now titled Three Steps back
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Old 2010-12-27, 01:02   Link #28350
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Why hello there, fic that I haven't updated in 5 months!

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5 months?! =O Around here, that's ancient!

Been waiting on this to update.

Nanoha's dreams are pretty naughty. Good thing she woke up, otherwise she might have found a few more things about herself.
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Old 2010-12-27, 02:18   Link #28351
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I hadn't read the first chapter of this, and forgot the title halfway through, so I did a double take at the end.

...assuming that's what you're implying, of course.
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Old 2010-12-27, 02:19   Link #28352
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Spoiler for MD returns after a light X Mas break!:


Yes, I know that there's a bit of OOCness but I've been wanting to add a dash of paranoia to a perky girl so... I'll see how it works out.
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Old 2010-12-27, 03:27   Link #28353
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Yes, I know that there's a bit of OOCness but I've been wanting to add a dash of paranoia to a perky girl so... I'll see how it works out.
Paranoid Sein is hilarious and Otto seems to be voice of reason between Church-Numbers.

Yami continued her venture into Hayate`s past. And now she remembered Rein 1.
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Old 2010-12-27, 12:20   Link #28354
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I hadn't read the first chapter of this, and forgot the title halfway through, so I did a double take at the end.

...assuming that's what you're implying, of course.
We shall see. ;p And yes, that's what happens when I try to work on more than one project at a time; stuff gets delayed and left behind, heh.

Anyway, uploaded Whipped, Chapter 2: Trial and Error to ff.net. Let's hope it doesn't take 5 months for part 3, heh.

For those curious, Chapter 26 of Future Tense is done, and undergoing some revisions and edits as I proof-read it. Hopefully, I'll have it up in a day or two. In a burst of inspiration, I even got most of chapter 27 done, so hopefully I can pick up the pace on this, too. It's amazing what one can do when one has several days off from work, heh.
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Old 2010-12-27, 13:25   Link #28356
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Wow, and peoples say that the scariest type of woman it`s Woman Scorned. How about the 1000 years old mazoku-priestess who obtained power of god?
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Tried something different from what I usually do. No horror this time. No idea how this short turned out...

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Old 2010-12-27, 15:26   Link #28358
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Yes, I know that there's a bit of OOCness but I've been wanting to add a dash of paranoia to a perky girl so... I'll see how it works out.
Eh, I don't think it works. None of the Numbers save Tre really knew about Sette. She was the last to be brought online and she didn't interact much with the others. Even then she was all quiet and stuff so I don't think Sein would immediately jump to the conclusion that "OMG SHE'S GONNA BRUTALLY MURDER US ALL!" Maybe she'd react that way if Quattro was the one who broke out but she has no reason to believe that Sette would be out for their blood.
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Old 2010-12-27, 18:34   Link #28359
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This was really sad, both on Hayate's side and on the Wolkenritter's side. I really liked the simple language, nothing too flashy, just lots of short statements and questions--it really set the mood, making me imagine a silent movie in my head, which really added to the atmosphere.

The part about the phone was a nice callback to the first episode of A's, and gives that "things came around full circle" kind of tragic feel.

I wonder how old Hayate is here (as I don't think it had been evident in the piece). If Hayate had been 9 (taking place right after A's), then it's sad since she had just lost Reinforce and would also lose the Wolkenritter too (and for the Wolkies, for them to have laboured so hard to save Hayate and to have succeeded, should make them happy, but yet still sad because they would know by now how badly Hayate would take their deaths); if this is sometime in the future when Hayate is older but the Wolkies' "contract" is over, then it's even worse since it could have come as a shock, or all of them could have been dreading this day. Either way, I'm very sad for them .

Hm, "She had known all along..."....I wonder if this is referring to her knowing that she'll always be alone, or that she always knew that the Wolkenritter would have to die/leave/disappear someday?

Great piece, it wrung my heart ^^.
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So earlier this month Alavon approached me and asked if I would write a story for a holiday themed doujinshi that she'd draw. I agreed and she's been hard at work on it ever since. I 'wrote it' in the sense that I described what was going on it in, because there's no dialouge in it. It's three pages in length.

Alavon is using a program to tone that she's not used to, and she doesn't think she'll have it done by New Years when it'd still be relevant. So for now I'm just going to post what she's done so far.



It's still a work in progress, but I hope you enjoy it
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