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Old 2010-12-30, 09:33   Link #28381
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Inspired by Future World Music. An alternate past for a certain Knight.

You don't need the music really, but it might provide quite a nice mental image.

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I quite liked this piece. There is one point I don't get though - the last 2 lines. Perhaps there could have been more of a hint why she had to leave after essentially winning the battle (her current benefactor didn't buy the farm, after all). I'm guessing it's part of her 'contract' with War, but I'm not entirely sure. She feels like a phantom in chains.

But damn, all this makes me want to draw lol
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Old 2010-12-30, 10:53   Link #28382
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^I see what you mean. Though I did mean her "job" was complete, it was handwave really.

And after some feedback in IRC, it seems this short developed into a story with a past AU for Signum (mercenary and some divine stuff). Keep a look out if you want more in a similar style.
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Old 2010-12-31, 22:21   Link #28383
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So yea, with Vivio's fate disclosed, and well-liked it seems, I figured I should make an attempt at this.

This will be a story CYOA with Arisa Bannings as the protagonist. There will be path choices and decisions choices.

The paths are signified by only being two possible. It might be a shortcut, more story or a different route entirely. It affects the ending, of which there is two.

The decisions are three at a time. Two wrong, one right. If a wrong one is chosen, it will play out and then return to the right path. These do not affect the endings. Knowing me, the obvious one might not be so obvious. Or it is. Or not.

I don't know how this will turn out but I think it's worth a shot. Beware I do not beta this so some phrasing might be weird. I'll try and update after a minimum of 4 replies, as often as I has energy.

This first part is a bit short, just to get it started.

Spoiler for Roadside Manor Part 1:
Now, you see, this is the kind of thing that happens when I go home for Christmas weekend and stay off the forums for a couple of days. I miss an entire page of stuff that I didn't even realize was here until I went hunting back through the thread to find the titles for RB's cat fics so I could add them to the Shadowverse timeline.

So, I'm going to say B on the grounds that I hate changing floors in any RPG/dungeon setting until I've explored the floor I'm on. Plus in most mansions, upper stories contain "private family stuff" while the ground floor has the rooms where the public is welcomed into and therefore if Arisa has manners she'll be more likely to poke around on the ground floor first. Obviously, there's no evidence that's a good choice, but...hey, I figure if you're writing the story a happy ending is out of the question, anyway.
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Old 2011-01-01, 15:24   Link #28384
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Hum, thought no one wanted to play but since you voted... Might as well pick up what I had. Posting B path, then.

I'm gone next week but might get in some posting between mail checking.

Spoiler for Roadside Manor Part 2B:
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Old 2011-01-01, 17:39   Link #28385
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Hum, thought no one wanted to play but since you voted... Might as well pick up what I had. Posting B path, then.
Ah, neat! Hopefully, you'll get some more votes in for this one (honestly, I really did completely miss the entire page of the FFT this was posted on until I needed to go back looking; I hope several other people had the same issue).!

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I'm gone next week but might get in some posting between mail checking.

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"So silly" indeed. Hmmm. The right choice would be "turn around and walk out the front door and never even look back again," but one suspects that we're looooong past the Point of No Return by now. I'm surprised that Uber-Creepy Missing Master managed to pass Arisa's pre-story checking-up...but then again, that's what evil masterminds do. And it's especially what happens if the evil mastermind is someone/something else entirely manipulating the situation for its own ends...

Or, y'know, I could just quit babbling since this is only the second chapter. Let's try B again to see what other possible elements we could have to deal with before tampering with possible Sealed Evil Boxes.
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Old 2011-01-01, 22:19   Link #28386
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Something bite-sized, and out of nowhere. I blame Alavon for wanting a fic staring these two...

Spoiler for A Day in the Life (of Bardiche and Raising Heart):


/goes back to snorting LSD and writing.
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Old 2011-01-01, 23:00   Link #28387
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Something bite-sized, and out of nowhere. I blame Alavon for wanting a fic staring these two...

Spoiler for A Day in the Life (of Bardiche and Raising Heart):


/goes back to snorting LSD and writing.
So... Both Raising Heart and Bardiche are sadists? Can such a relationship work?
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Old 2011-01-01, 23:19   Link #28388
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Something bite-sized, and out of nowhere. I blame Alavon for wanting a fic staring these two...

Spoiler for A Day in the Life (of Bardiche and Raising Heart):


/goes back to snorting LSD and writing.
To be honest...

...

I didn't find it that funny.
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Old 2011-01-01, 23:45   Link #28389
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Hum, thought no one wanted to play but since you voted... Might as well pick up what I had. Posting B path, then.

I'm gone next week but might get in some posting between mail checking.

Spoiler for Roadside Manor Part 2B:
Why not A
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Old 2011-01-01, 23:47   Link #28390
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Spoiler for Another non-MD Nanoha thing I'm doing:
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Old 2011-01-02, 00:18   Link #28391
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DEATH TO THE COORDINATORS! I mean... what?
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Old 2011-01-02, 01:37   Link #28392
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Hm....it's been a looooong time since I posted a fic here in AS.

Well....lately, my muse sort of abandoned me and even though I wanted to draw, write, do exercise (yeah RIGHT!), my body would not listen to my mind. But BEHOLD! Thanks to Kaijo and my constant requests, his Raising Heart and Bardiche snippet finally broke the chain to my mind block and I was able to finish this part of my one-shot. So, without further ado, I hope you'll enjoy this part of my story that came crashing down on me. :3

Title: Device Mischief
Characters: Raising Heart/Mariel Atenza/Shario Finieno
Genre: Humor
Rated: T

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Old 2011-01-02, 01:47   Link #28393
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Hm....it's been a looooong time since I posted a fic here in AS.

Well....lately, my muse sort of abandoned me and even though I wanted to draw, write, do exercise (yeah RIGHT!), my body would not listen to my mind. But BEHOLD! Thanks to Kaijo and my constant requests, his Raising Heart and Bardiche snippet finally broke the chain to my mind block and I was able to finish this part of my one-shot. So, without further ado, I hope you'll enjoy this part of my story that came crashing down on me. :3

Title: Device Mischief
Characters: Raising Heart/Mariel Atenza/Shario Finieno
Genre: Humor
Rated: T

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Oh my, this can't possibly turn out well Also, hurray for finally something with Shari in a leading role
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Old 2011-01-02, 06:18   Link #28394
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Hum, thought no one wanted to play but since you voted... Might as well pick up what I had. Posting B path, then.

I'm gone next week but might get in some posting between mail checking.

Spoiler for Roadside Manor Part 2B:
Going with B here, making sure you have checked everything seems like the best idea.
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Old 2011-01-02, 08:27   Link #28395
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From a few pages back... we were talking about face huggers:

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DC's idea. I read it when she sent it to me and collapsed into giggles on my keyboard.

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Colours are off because I didn't check my settings before I started colouring :3
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Old 2011-01-02, 11:19   Link #28396
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Updated Blood That Flows to FF.net

I hope that people go and check this chapter out. It's a lot more... *Ahem* Twisted than it was before.
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Old 2011-01-02, 12:42   Link #28397
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So... Both Raising Heart and Bardiche are sadists? Can such a relationship work?
Heh, actually I saw it more as the two talking dirty to each other, but I guess only a few of us found it funny.

Anyway, on to my main fic at the moment...

Future Tense

Chapter 27: Return


In which Nanoha arrives back on Mid-Childa in a manner she didn't quite expect, two groups run into each other, and we find out what Fate is up to...

Previous chapters can be found here.

Spoiler for Future Tense, Chapter 27: Return:

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Old 2011-01-02, 16:18   Link #28398
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From a few pages back... we were talking about face huggers:




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Colours are off because I didn't check my settings before I started colouring :3
Oh my, amazing!!!
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Old 2011-01-02, 16:21   Link #28399
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Well, new year, more Blood That Flows from me.

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Old 2011-01-02, 16:56   Link #28400
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Well, new year, more Blood That Flows from me.

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Being a human has it`s disadvantage. Aren`t it Vita?
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