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Old 2011-01-18, 15:14   Link #28701
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Page Claim for mecha bugs.
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Old 2011-01-18, 16:08   Link #28702
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Posted the slightly revised version of Future Tense, Chapter 30: Storm of Battle to ff.net. Not too major of changes, but most of the ones people have suggested through various channels. Thanks again for the commentary!
So now Nanoha's been equipped with Fortress from the very beginning?
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Old 2011-01-18, 20:26   Link #28703
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Something Nanya wanted me to do.

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Old 2011-01-18, 21:20   Link #28704
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Page Claim for mecha bugs.
Mecha bugs, well at least it's not leprechauns I suppose. If Hayate can master close range magical combat it would make her a real terror in battle.
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Something Nanya wanted me to do.

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Why was I expecting it to be Arf?
That would be an embarrasing claim wouldn't it?

Yuuno held the phone to his ear waiting for it to stop ringing. When he finally got through to emergency services he heard a young woman ask.
"Hello and how may I help you?"
"I'd like to report stolen property."
"Very well sir, what was stolen?"
"A television, two antique statues and a microwave oven."
"When did this happen, sir?"
"Some time this morning."
"Where were you, sir?"
"I'd rather not say."
"I'm afraid we need the information for the investigation, sir."
"I was lying in bed naked trying to remember who I slept with last night."
"V... very well... sir, w-we'll get right on it."
Yuuno sighed as he hung up the phone, there was no way this was gonna look good on his records.
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Old 2011-01-18, 21:27   Link #28705
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That amused me, Raiser.
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Old 2011-01-18, 22:15   Link #28706
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Something Nanya wanted me to do.

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For Yuuno's sake, let us hope that Chrono never finds out. Ever. I'm amused by the implication that this is a normal thing for him, though.
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Old 2011-01-18, 23:00   Link #28707
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Something Nanya wanted me to do.

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*snerk* "Put on a bus" gag!

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Poor Yuuno! He really doesn't have any control when drunk, does he?

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Ha, ha! "Another" claim!

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Ha! Great; a total surprise!

Funny little short!
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Old 2011-01-18, 23:01   Link #28708
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So now Nanoha's been equipped with Fortress from the very beginning?
Yep.

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Old 2011-01-18, 23:03   Link #28709
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Something Nanya wanted me to do.

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Old 2011-01-18, 23:20   Link #28710
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Old 2011-01-18, 23:25   Link #28711
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Old 2011-01-18, 23:41   Link #28712
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a blue blur trailing behind him as his barriers and Hayate's swords smashed into and through the creatures,
"Hayate's swords" just appear out of nowhere. They weren't mentioned before and readers would be expecting Hayate to be carrying a staff instead.
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Old 2011-01-18, 23:50   Link #28713
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Actually, players of the PSP game would know that Hayate has a spell called Balmung that either shoots out energy swords in a fan-like pattern or fires a whole bunch with limited homing.

Rather than explaining though, It's better if the reference is visual, eh?

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Old 2011-01-19, 00:30   Link #28714
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I'm amused by the implication that this is a normal thing for him, though.
My thought process was that others would keep handing him drinks, and he'd be too polite to refuse them.

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*snerk* "Put on a bus" gag!
Glad some one picked up on that

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Ha, ha! "Another" claim!
"Hello, police? I got drunk, took some random person home, and then they robbed me... No, I assure you it's only the 4th time this month!"

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Ménage à trois ensues

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Wait, since when was "How I Met Your Mother" an 'obscure' show?
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Old 2011-01-19, 01:04   Link #28715
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An old fic I kinda wrote on a white heat emo fit. I'm not expecting it to be found all that good.

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Old 2011-01-19, 01:16   Link #28716
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An old fic I kinda wrote on a white heat emo fit. I'm not expecting it to be found all that good.

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That was really quite sad, I think I'm going to cry. I did enjoy it though.
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Old 2011-01-19, 02:27   Link #28717
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Raiser, I liked that. ^_^

Poor Yuuno, no control when he's drunk.

Oh well, at least he has an open mind.
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Old 2011-01-19, 02:52   Link #28718
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That was really quite sad, I think I'm going to cry. I did enjoy it though.
Thank you. I was worried that I would do a bad job of it.
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That was sad. *nods*
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Old 2011-01-19, 03:43   Link #28720
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Something Nanya wanted me to do.

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Ha-ha-ha, that was hilarious. I think Yuuno should try to avoid drunken parties, otherwise the numbers of female occupants of his bed could rise to a very dangerous level.
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