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Old 2011-02-19, 23:25   Link #29341
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Old 2011-02-19, 23:38   Link #29342
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Old 2011-02-19, 23:51   Link #29343
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Old 2011-02-20, 00:12   Link #29344
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Old 2011-02-20, 00:24   Link #29345
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Ronery. So ronery. So ronery and sadry arone...
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Old 2011-02-20, 00:35   Link #29346
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Old 2011-02-20, 00:49   Link #29347
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... to be fair, I haven't gotten around to watching the movie yet, so I had no idea what Linith's cat form was supposed to look like. But I do stand by my point that mountain cats are also called mountain lions, at least around where I live.

That said, there's always transformation magic.
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Old 2011-02-20, 01:11   Link #29348
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...Okay. You know what? I don't care. I don't care if my fic gets completely ignored. I'm putting it here anyway. I don't care if it sits ignored, gathering so much dust that an asthmatic would have an attack if they tried to read it. I'm putting it in anyway. I don't care if it gets flamed so much that I could stick it between two hamburger buns and call it barbeque. I'M PUTTING IT IN ANYWAY.

Teana's influence on the path of canon is minimal in Books 1 and 2, Book 3 is an original, she has considerably more influence in Book 4, and BIG influence in Book 5.

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Old 2011-02-20, 01:12   Link #29349
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Old 2011-02-20, 01:14   Link #29350
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Old 2011-02-20, 02:29   Link #29351
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...Okay. You know what? I don't care. I don't care if my fic gets completely ignored. I'm putting it here anyway. I don't care if it sits ignored, gathering so much dust that an asthmatic would have an attack if they tried to read it. I'm putting it in anyway. I don't care if it gets flamed so much that I could stick it between two hamburger buns and call it barbeque. I'M PUTTING IT IN ANYWAY.

Teana's influence on the path of canon is minimal in Books 1 and 2, Book 3 is an original, she has considerably more influence in Book 4, and BIG influence in Book 5.
In my POV.. Teana gaining power for the sake of getting revenge out of Nanoha and/or Vita... Just because she thinks they're limiting her is just plain s2pid IMO...

Reasons:

1. She wants be the best in terms of Shooting arts, which is a range magic type.
2. She also wants to become an enforcer, who's job has a high probability of duels against the target. Meaning being a shooter in an enclosed area is not a good place to be where melee combat is the deciding factor with the exception of rooms or area large enough to fit a 3-5 story houses in a 3x3 or more block.
3. Teana's a rookie, A ROOKIE, learning from some of the well known instructors in TSAB. That means Nanoha and the rest of the senior officers of Riot 6 have already gone thru what she's experiencing and was about to do something to make her understand her mistake when she blew up on them(well you can understand her but going to the point of taking revenge is not a good way to go).

And why there's little to no response to yer tale:
1. In her adventures, Teana gained an army, her personal group and a status of being a hero. This will have a certain degree of impact to her new friends if she decided to go thru with her revenge that might destroy her entire being...
2. And the reason that this one is not pretty much gain any attention is that Teana is now a spartan, an blasted Uchiha(sorry... I don't like Uchiha and their game-breaking eyes.), a semi-leader of an army and the leader of her own group, got a huge arsenal of jutsu from the ninja world, a fast (IMO) paced fanfic with most of the tale focusing on the battle and Teana's and her group growth in combat capabilities from the worlds they end up with almost every skills, abilities and arsenal from them.

I know that Archangel's Amazing Adventure by CSS.Stravag, a Gundam Seed multi-crossover (Magic Knight Rayearth, Mechwarriors, Final Fantasy 6[Yes... He did crossover them there], an AU GS where the residential Mad Char clone Rau succeed in making ZAFT and EAF blow each other up with their nukes and currently at Gundam Wing, before the fall of Sanc Kingdom), also follows the same path as yours but he does his homework well and tries to get it done as smoothly as possible without losing too much details or making the Archangel team a game breaker too much. In fact the Archangel have lost Dearka Elsman and a bondman , kick out Flay Alster and Natarle Badgiruel left behind to lead Figaro with Edgar Roni Figaro, lost the Strike and Blitz at hostile bondmen(ouch) and the Archangel nearly got scraped too many times. They also kick out at least 10 men(minus the KIA'ed) for a coup de ta during the MKR arc, got problems with ammunition and supplies, and not to mention the chickens they're breeding at the hanger when the said area was blown open by the bondmen while they're in space and got crushed after the ship got warped under the sea at the FF6 realm.

oh well... I said my peace. I don't know if this one is classified as a flame or not but that's what i think about this fic, although i read them by skimming thru it, seeing if it got better or not.

As for me, Can't figure how to continue mine without making my OC side, Ragna-breakers, a game breaker too much. (Reia as a 2 time war vet and a reincarnation of Fenris Fenrir, who's also powerful sorceress like herself, Odin as a 1 time war vet, a reincarnation of Vergil and a Dark knight/dark slayer/paladin, Trigger as a 150+ yr old war vet, a purifier, a class S marverick hunter and adventurer who's lost in time and place, Mariemeia as a deadly blood knight assassin and sniper, Elene as a gun-craze, small girl-big gun gunslinger, Sarah as a Mystic Swordwoman and the reincarnation of Sarah Irene, Iris as a powerful Cleric and also the reincarnation of Iris Irene and Ami as the residential hot head martial artist/monk) tell me how I can't have a hard time balancing them up Ami and Iris with ZAFT, Reia is aligned with ATX team, Trigger with the Alpha Numbers, Odin with Orb(offically) while Sarah, Maria and Elene being free agents who tends to fight the oppressive side.
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Old 2011-02-20, 02:42   Link #29352
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^ Another awesome read.
Thanks! ^^ I can't promise if the next chapter will come as quickly, as I'm tweaking the last two chapters. But I'll do my best!

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*Reads above chapter* OMGWTFBBQ
Haha, thanks, I wanted to get that kind of reaction from people!

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Why, why is time travel shenanigans never the answer. (Canon said so I know(And I would totally write but effort so...))

Also I kind of didn't get that it was Vivio instead or Nanoha 'till RD pointed that out.

Also, also, how desperate can Precia be when she has to rehash her old plot. (Though to be fair she almost won except for telling Fate that she didn't love and the like.) At least it shows that she learns if a little late.
I...didn't know that there's not time travel in canon O_O. That's news to me!

I know, but it was really cool to see how it was a series of guesses from people that led to the realization . That's so great to see!

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... to be fair, I haven't gotten around to watching the movie yet, so I had no idea what Linith's cat form was supposed to look like. But I do stand by my point that mountain cats are also called mountain lions, at least around where I live.

That said, there's always transformation magic.
Yes, I had meant "puma/cougar/mountain lion/mountain cat" . And as mentioned to Tiresias...... *blush* I had no clue what Linith's familiar form looked like, since I hadn't watched the movie yet either, and I read that Linith was a mountain cat so the first image that came into my head was this:



And yes....transformation magic .

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Old 2011-02-20, 03:19   Link #29353
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Old 2011-02-20, 03:57   Link #29354
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Old 2011-02-20, 11:31   Link #29355
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Okay, I've calmed down. But I'ma keep postin'.

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Old 2011-02-20, 11:32   Link #29356
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Any fan fictions where the characters just flip out? I kinda enjoy that psychological type of writing (preferably hayate but anyone will do)
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Old 2011-02-20, 11:48   Link #29357
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Old 2011-02-20, 11:58   Link #29358
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Touma/Vivio? That's pretty cracky but considering this is Material Days were talking about, I think this can work.
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Old 2011-02-20, 12:58   Link #29359
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Ugh, I HATE Saturdays!

SOOO much!

11 hours straight at work does NOT do wonders for writing energy.

Shine 1-40

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Old 2011-02-20, 13:43   Link #29360
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Yes, Tia isn't in the first of these two chapters except for a radio contact at the end, but this chap is necessary for story flow.

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