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Old 2011-03-03, 02:37   Link #29581
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Old 2011-03-03, 02:53   Link #29582
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Old 2011-03-03, 02:54   Link #29583
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There's nothing stopping you from going back to you're first chapter post and editing it.
Haha, but then my fun little identity crisis in Chapter 1 wouldn't be as good!

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Hm, I'd say a "wet plop" sounds sort of like somebody dropped a wad of sodden-dripping-wet paper towels onto a linoleum floor. It makes me think of body parts flopping around where all the bones have been ground into powder. Or in this case, like somebody just turned a jello mold upside down and dumped it out.
To, er, not squick anyone out....but that's kinda what I had actually imagined Alicia's body doing ....it's been preserved in a jar for decades now............

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... ... ...

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*sob*

That is all.
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Well what was the point of that?
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To be depressing. And to appease RB, methinks, the girl thrives off of angst.
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Speaking more specifically, I kinda felt like it came out of nowhere. Usually tragedy is foreshadowed, but here it was very abrupt.
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As difficult as it may be to believe, I had absolutely nothing to do with the ending DC gave her fic. Both endings she showed me were going to be depressing either way. She did it all on her own.
The point? Just because I wanted to write it, is all More specifically, because I was interested in seeing how Fate might have turned out if Precia had been honest and relatively caring with her, and also because I was interested in seeing how Vivio might compare herself to Nanoha, since she admires her.

It......came out of nowhere? =O I was laying on the season 1 comparisons pretty thickly , and there Fate barely chose to side with Nanoha at the end, and only because Precia was so openly nasty to her did Fate fail to help Precia when the TSAB had invaded the Garden. But you're right, I probably could have done a better job in building the story up, but I wanted a shorter story instead of an epic multi-chapter tale, so I did skimp out on narrative buildup that I shouldn't have left out.

And LOL, yes, I do depressing all on my own . I blame English Literature since all the books I read for school end depressingly--a requirement to be considered "literature", I believe!

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dc's an angst junkie even without RB's influence anyways

Really want to challenge either of you to do an aforementioned super happy fun time story.

Hard mode: Doesn't take place in the Shadowverse
I think I do the tragedy part, and RB does the angst . I actually kill my characters off, hehehe....

Super....happy...fun....FLUFF?!?! *implodes*

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This sounds to me like a job for a new Logs chapter!
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From the few times I've peeked at the Logs, isn't there quite a bit of drama in there? No drama allowed during super happy fun time!
Something has to keep my interest while writing sugary happy fun time!
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Old 2011-03-03, 03:11   Link #29584
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Looks like the TSAB now has nothing to fear from the Huckebein xD!
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Old 2011-03-03, 07:16   Link #29585
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I wonder what will Lina will say if Naga and Mary laugh their Noble woman's laugh....

And looks like things are evening out.... The cyborys getting offensive upgrade while TSAB getting mostly defensive upgrades...
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Old 2011-03-03, 07:56   Link #29586
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I think adding an epilogue after chapter four might help, just to give the audience (not to mention Vivio) some closure. But that's just me.
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Old 2011-03-03, 08:25   Link #29587
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Eh. I'm personally of the opinion that an epilogue would ruin the emotional impact of what happened, but hey... I rather liked the ending, myself.
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Old 2011-03-03, 08:26   Link #29588
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Eh. I'm personally of the opinion that an epilogue would ruin the emotional impact of what happened, but hey... I rather liked the ending, myself.
Depends on the epilogue, but I'm not thinking of any closure that doesn't sort of ruin the point.
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Old 2011-03-03, 08:38   Link #29589
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I think adding an epilogue after chapter four might help, just to give the audience (not to mention Vivio) some closure. But that's just me.
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Ah, but don't worry Vivio, it's all just a dream! Why? the real Linith had the appearance of a housecat, not a cougar!
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Old 2011-03-03, 08:48   Link #29590
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Eh. I'm personally of the opinion that an epilogue would ruin the emotional impact of what happened, but hey... I rather liked the ending, myself.
It would depend on what happened in it, but I could sort of see the value of an epilogue showing, say... what Vivid learned from this, her determination to move on and grow stronger so it never happens again, her family's love helping her cope, etc.
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Old 2011-03-03, 08:57   Link #29591
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It would depend on what happened in it, but I could sort of see the value of an epilogue showing, say... what Vivid learned from this, her determination to move on and grow stronger so it never happens again, her family's love helping her cope, etc.
Ah, but wouldn't such an optimistic ending ruin a certain someone's appetite?
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Old 2011-03-03, 09:16   Link #29592
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Ah, but wouldn't such an optimistic ending ruin a certain someone's appetite?
She already got her fill. Feed her too much angst and she'll lose the motivation to write her own!
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Old 2011-03-03, 09:19   Link #29593
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Old 2011-03-03, 09:20   Link #29594
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To, er, not squick anyone out....but that's kinda what I had actually imagined Alicia's body doing ....it's been preserved in a jar for decades now............
*roars with laughter* Akin to a splatter then, but less wet

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Old 2011-03-03, 09:26   Link #29595
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She already got her fill. Feed her too much angst and she'll lose the motivation to write her own!
Nonsense! It will drive her to up the ante instead!

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A child that dreamed of becoming a hero, only to snapped and be disillusioned after actually doing the job?

"You can't save everyone! To save the many, you must sacrifice the few!"
- Counter Guardian VIVIO (the name TAKAMACHI is already associated with a certain infamous Heroic Spirit)
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Old 2011-03-03, 13:25   Link #29596
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The bonds of family are incredibly important, it doesn't matter about blood, those who stand by your side unflinchingly are truly family.

Also, upgrades! Yay, everyone's becoming more powerful, it'll make one hell of a challenge for either side.
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Old 2011-03-03, 14:24   Link #29597
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Heh, I caught those Endless Frontier references You'd think that Signum would be pretty immune to trash talk herself, but I guess even she has her limits

Now I gotta read that chapter of Future Days I somehow missed before
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Old 2011-03-03, 16:26   Link #29598
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Blood Calls To Blood

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EDIT: Whoops, and for yuiseppe and Tiresias too ^^, a little...

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It seems like lots of people want some kind of a short epilogue....I keep doing this to myself!

I have some vague ideas for an epilogue, but it'll depend on how it plays out in my head. No promises, guys .
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Old 2011-03-03, 17:34   Link #29599
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Heh, I caught those Endless Frontier references You'd think that Signum would be pretty immune to trash talk herself, but I guess even she has her limits
It's actually pretty easy, you just need to smirk maniacally and talk joyfully about murdering entire towns worth of people xD.
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Old 2011-03-03, 21:06   Link #29600
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Special Epilogue for spawnofthejudge and RadiantBeam

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It seems like lots of people want some kind of a short epilogue....I keep doing this to myself!

I have some vague ideas for an epilogue, but it'll depend on how it plays out in my head. No promises, guys .
...

Can I say that as short as this is, it made me grin stupidly? Because it made me grin stupidly. That is all.
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