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Old 2011-06-01, 06:17   Link #31021
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And with this post, I realize that I'm totally insane.

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Old 2011-06-01, 07:29   Link #31022
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And with this post, I realize that I'm totally insane.

Comments in spoilers, please.

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Do I foresee a love triangle between the kids in the StrikerS arc?

I do pray it's true... XD

and looks like Hayate's Amazon brigade is about to grow even larger in StrikerS... If you know what I mean...
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Old 2011-06-01, 13:56   Link #31023
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LOL, now I want to write a Non Indicative First Episode-style story where happy fluff and flowers and bunnies reign, just to give me maximum mood whiplash? XD But I bet even if I did it would come as no surprise to anyone!
You should do it the other way, angsty tragic first part... then flowers and bunnies... then angst and tradgedy again. That would be ultimate mood whiplash, especially considering everyone would assume you wrote the second part just to show that you could.
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Old 2011-06-01, 15:35   Link #31024
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Hapless Suitor #4: *Running up from a distance away* "Excuse me, Hay--"
*Flattened by Graf Eisen and Vita, as a cloud of dust rises up and obscures them in the distance*
Hayate: "Huh, I wonder what that was?" *keeps on walking*
Vita wins, hands down
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Old 2011-06-01, 16:21   Link #31025
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*Coughs* I should be in bed, resting.

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Old 2011-06-01, 16:42   Link #31026
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NOW you're truly insane, it will likely take at least ten minutes for what I just read to actually filter down into the part of my brain that can understand the situation.
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Old 2011-06-01, 17:32   Link #31027
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You're going to jinx it.
I've already jinxed it .............. 7 chapter Hayate x Vivio follow-up story in the works???

Should have known better than to say it!

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You should do it the other way, angsty tragic first part... then flowers and bunnies... then angst and tradgedy again. That would be ultimate mood whiplash, especially considering everyone would assume you wrote the second part just to show that you could.
LOL, but everyone would expect that of me! The only way I can surprise anyone is if I do the classic setup--happy, angsty, happy...since they'd expect me to end with an angsty?

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Vita wins, hands down
She is awfully protective of Hayate .
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Old 2011-06-01, 17:45   Link #31028
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She is awfully protective of Hayate .
Still waiting for the next time Vita faces Curren xD.
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Old 2011-06-01, 18:54   Link #31029
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I've already jinxed it .............. 7 chapter Hayate x Vivio follow-up story in the works???

Should have known better than to say it!
You should have. Not that I'm complaining, I want more of this!
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Old 2011-06-01, 19:10   Link #31030
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Uploaded Future Tense, Chapter 36: Before I Sleep to ff.net.

I change the explanation section in the middle somewhat, editing out the pseudo-magical-reality stuff, and adding some clarification to one of Raiser's concerns (which I belatedly realized I should have had before, heh).
I'm wondering something. A couple of your ff.net reviewers were complaining about a reset ending, but when I read the fic, it didn't seem like there was a true reset. Rather, there were a series of timelines in which Precia went back in time, rescued Early Precia to set up the Future Tense future, then Nanoha, etc. would thwart her attempt to change the past but leave the other Precia free to reset Future Tense for the next timeline. Until finally, this time, Fate and Hayate take out one Precia and Nanoha takes out the other Precia, leaving a future out there in which the series of events leading to Future Tense don't happen and therefore an end to the looping timelines (and as a side effect, creating the timeline for the "Battle of Aces" PSP game with the parts of themselves "left behind"). So there's really no reset at all, quite the opposite...

...or am I not getting something? Because whatever else was going on or not going on, one thing that I did not get out of this fic was any kind of cheesy reset button ending...
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Old 2011-06-01, 20:29   Link #31031
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I guess it's safe to post this now.

So as a reward to Alavon for finishing her doujinshi (check it out here) I had her pick a fic to update and she chose this one.

You can probably guess who is the focus from the title. That person will also be appearing.

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Old 2011-06-01, 20:39   Link #31032
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Old 2011-06-01, 21:01   Link #31033
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Well this is a bummer. I finish the latest chapter of Section Thirteen (yeah, finally), and find I can't upload it because of some time out problem.

And you should probably put that in spoilers, Dezo, since you kinda state what the ending involves.

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Old 2011-06-01, 21:37   Link #31034
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Mmmm... Tsundere Lord of Darkness is good stuff. Nice to see her grow up a bit.

Waiting for Seikou's turn now. I will give you bonus props if you can write in a way for her to curtsey in her barrier jacket like she did in that GOD promo art. That was so HNNNGGGHHH worthy.
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Old 2011-06-02, 00:39   Link #31035
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That person will also be appearing.
... Who?

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Raiko was cute. I wonder if Rein will have to lecture any of the others?
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Old 2011-06-02, 06:44   Link #31036
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I guess it's safe to post this now.

So as a reward to Alavon for finishing her doujinshi (check it out here) I had her pick a fic to update and she chose this one.

You can probably guess who is the focus from the title. That person will also be appearing.

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I really liked that, it shows just how much Yami needs to grow. Changing her views from a childish impression of a king to the real thing while still keeping her acting her old self.

Reinforce could probably get a job as a counceller at a school with that kind of attitude.
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Old 2011-06-02, 06:47   Link #31037
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... Who?
I was referring to Reinforce.
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Old 2011-06-02, 07:08   Link #31038
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*Coughs* I should be in bed, resting.

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Looks like Rangort and Zelas will be joining Lina in the Mama Bear trope... XD
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Old 2011-06-02, 07:42   Link #31039
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@Dezo: I will say that I did leave it a bit vague on purpose, but I did hint something to that effect, so what you are feeling has some basis.
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Old 2011-06-02, 08:12   Link #31040
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Well this is a bummer. I finish the latest chapter of Section Thirteen (yeah, finally), and find I can't upload it because of some time out problem.

And you should probably put that in spoilers, Dezo, since you kinda state what the ending involves.
Looks like it's up on FF now

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I'll leave the actual story comments on FF
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