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Old 2011-06-08, 21:38   Link #31261
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It's not my fault that you guys can't write like I can.
We go for quality over quantity. Not your fault indeed!
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Old 2011-06-08, 21:40   Link #31262
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We go for quality over quantity. Not your fault indeed!
Hard to tell, considering that most of you guys only update once a month if you're lucky.

Indeed.
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Old 2011-06-08, 22:12   Link #31263
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All right.

DC seems to have the thread focused on this, so I can hardly not contribute to the Hayate/Vivio FEVAH, right? XD

Granted, as is my wont, I've chosen to take a slightly differing viewpoint on the relationship between the two. One that, I hope, will be appreciated.

Or laughed at.

Really, mostly the second.

Raiser, your ficlet was also a major source of inspiration for me here, so thank you as well. I hope you enjoy the fruits of your inspirationing. Inspirationizing. ... I hope you like it.

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Don't worry, Hayate! You're only old by anime terms!

But oh my goodness, is this brilliant. XD Different from the idea you mentioned to me this afternoon, but hilarious all the same. I just love how Vivio took the wrong impression she had and ran with it completely, much to Hayate's dismay. And somehow, I sense Hayate's groping tendencies will become a running gag of yours.

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Tends to happen when you have two big names (deathcurse and RadiantBeam in this case) endorsing it.
It's worth endorsing.
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Old 2011-06-09, 01:03   Link #31264
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I just don't post them :3 I really need to tho. Any ideas how not to make an apocalyptic ending suck?
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Old 2011-06-09, 01:39   Link #31265
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I sense Hayate's groping tendencies will become a running gag of yours.
*Makes a shrine of Archives the groping jokes*
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Old 2011-06-09, 01:52   Link #31266
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.... How did Hayate/Vivio end up absorbing this thread?
LOL, since someone mentioned crack pairings...and I brought up my current crack pairing and then suddenly all this happened?

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I rather quickly came to the conclusion that this thread has a herd mentality. Someone writes something; someone then comments. Then someone sees someone commented, so they make their own comment. It snowballs from there until another person sees all the positive comments the one writing is getting and then decides to write their own story related in some way it. Rinse and repeat.

How do you think the Shadowverse got to be so big?
I don't know if it's herd mentality as such, but more like a common....conversation, if you will, between people about an idea. And as we are all writers, our conversations tend to be articulated in the form of stories?

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Tends to happen when you have two big names (deathcurse and RadiantBeam in this case) endorsing it.
While I suppose I'm very flattered, since when have I become a big name????? O_o I think that I just spend way too much time writing weird fics and posting on this forum .
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Old 2011-06-09, 01:58   Link #31267
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Much appreciated!
Wish I could gather enough coherent thought to thread my Yuuno/Rein ideas into a proper story rather than oneshots.

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I just don't post them :3 I really need to tho. Any ideas how not to make an apocalyptic ending suck?
A sense of hope and renewal perhaps? Like the original Ragnarok. The old has gone, but the new is coming.
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Old 2011-06-09, 02:56   Link #31268
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Well, I would not want to break the current string of Hayate x Vivio fics .

Prerogative of the Brave

“A coward is incapable of exhibiting love; it is the prerogative of the brave."
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Chapter 1
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Old 2011-06-09, 07:51   Link #31269
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And here I was, starting to get bored.

Excellent.

...

*Is bored again*
...Is that how you have such a ridiculous output rate? You're bored?

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I rather quickly came to the conclusion that this thread has a herd mentality. Someone writes something; someone then comments. Then someone sees someone commented, so they make their own comment. It snowballs from there until another person sees all the positive comments the one writing is getting and then decides to write their own story related in some way it. Rinse and repeat.

How do you think the Shadowverse got to be so big?
Well, it was also a factor of Dezo (and me, to a lesser extent) wanting to explore the non Vivio/Lutecia aspects of the premise RadiantBeam created. Suddenly there was a fanon, giving the opportunity for others to play with something that other people liked.

That it was RB and Dezo that basically created it helped, given how beloved they are .
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Old 2011-06-09, 08:38   Link #31270
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...Is that how you have such a ridiculous output rate? You're bored?
Actually...

Yes.

That's exactly it. I get bored, so I write so I'll have something to do. The more bored I get, the more I write.
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Old 2011-06-09, 08:43   Link #31271
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Actually...

Yes.

That's exactly it. I get bored, so I write so I'll have something to do. The more bored I get, the more I write.
So... we have a vested interest in not entertaining you?
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Old 2011-06-09, 09:05   Link #31272
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*snippy snip snip*
Well, currently I have no critique, because from where I'm reading this turned out very nicely. As usual, introducing Miyuki is full of win and awesome.

It seems Nanoha is trying to nudge Vivio along in her own way, but she'll need to be careful with how she goes about it; that kind of thing could really backfire on you if you aren't too careful. And I'm sort of surprised that this is the first time Vivio has met Momoko and Miyuki in person, at least from what you're implying; I always figured Nanoha would at least bring her home a few times to introduce her to the family. That's probably the only odd thing right now that really catches my eye.

Anyway, a repost of mine; it was generally well liked, but Dezo and Spawn gave me some small critiques on it, so here's a slightly altered version of Vivio's interlude! If it flows better than the last one, I'll post it to FF.net today.

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Old 2011-06-09, 09:18   Link #31273
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*Makes a shrine of Archives the groping jokes*
... ... I guess I will have to make more, then, the shrine is looking a bit sad. XD
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Old 2011-06-09, 09:20   Link #31274
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... ... I guess I will have to make more, then, the shrine is looking a bit sad. XD
You can hardly call it a shrine when it only has two examples. XD
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Old 2011-06-09, 09:24   Link #31275
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Well, currently I have no critique, because from where I'm reading this turned out very nicely. As usual, introducing Miyuki is full of win and awesome.

It seems Nanoha is trying to nudge Vivio along in her own way, but she'll need to be careful with how she goes about it; that kind of thing could really backfire on you if you aren't too careful. And I'm sort of surprised that this is the first time Vivio has met Momoko and Miyuki in person, at least from what you're implying; I always figured Nanoha would at least bring her home a few times to introduce her to the family. That's probably the only odd thing right now that really catches my eye.

Anyway, a repost of mine; it was generally well liked, but Dezo and Spawn gave me some small critiques on it, so here's a slightly altered version of Vivio's interlude! If it flows better than the last one, I'll post it to FF.net today.

Spoiler for LDG Interlude: Vivio (Rewrite):
If I have any issue with this at all, it would be the last line. I'm not even sure why, but the wording seems... awkward, somehow. I have never heard satisfaction described as 'quick'. 'Sudden' might be better, perhaps?

Other than that, excellent as always.
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Old 2011-06-09, 09:26   Link #31276
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You can hardly call it a shrine when it only has two examples. XD
And yes: Hayate's Groping Shrine (... sounds like a really filthy massage parlor) clearly must grow. XD
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Old 2011-06-09, 09:27   Link #31277
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For the one word on the second line: instantaneous?
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Old 2011-06-09, 09:31   Link #31278
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Prerogative of the Brave

“A coward is incapable of exhibiting love; it is the prerogative of the brave."
--Mahatma Gandhi

Chapter 1
Chapter 2

Spoiler for Prerogative of the Brave, Chapter 3:

Spoiler for Author's Note:
Go Vivio, GOOoOO!!

Hit that hard and I'll show you just how well it pays off in the end . *holds up half-edited manuscript*

Haha, nice introduction there. Also, the Takamachi family does other things aside from baking?
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For the one word on the second line: instantaneous?
That... might work better, yes. I was trying to think of something I could use to replace crash and burn, and the best I could think of was lightning, for some reason.

@Moczo: Hm, I'll have to look into that. Lemme try a few other words, see what happens.
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Haha, nice introduction there. Also, the Takamachi family does other things aside from baking?
They're ninjas.
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