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Old 2011-12-08, 08:30   Link #35221
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And this idea probably would fit better under the crossover thread anyway, unless it would just be Nanoha-verse characters...don't know for sure, though.
Nah, if it has Nanoha chars in it, and as such is posted within this sub-forum as a whole, it can be posted here, IMHO. It's been that way for a long time.

OCT and FFT, from time to time, cross-post as well. I've done it a multitude of times because it sort of fits in both ways, and people that follow what some of us writes sometimes only follow one thread and might as such miss out.
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Old 2011-12-08, 08:42   Link #35222
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Nah, if it has Nanoha chars in it, and as such is posted within this sub-forum as a whole, it can be posted here, IMHO. It's been that way for a long time.

OCT and FFT, from time to time, cross-post as well. I've done it a multitude of times because it sort of fits in both ways, and people that follow what some of us writes sometimes only follow one thread and might as such miss out.
Well, just making sure; I prefer to be "rather safe than sorry". XP
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Old 2011-12-08, 09:19   Link #35223
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The crossover thread inspired me to tried a once buried idea, a crossover between MSLN and Command & Conquer. I manage to work up a prologue, but I'm still not sure about it and there are some points I'm considering to rewrite. Oh well, let's give it a try anyway.

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Uh, I could never imagine CnC together with Nanoha no matter what. Nanoha is already pretty idealistic in its own way, but CnC is just off the scales; no matter how military it tries to be I can never get serious with the game...
Nice work Tierias!

And Crax, never say never. Even though I discontinued it in its infancy, a prologue was created.

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Old 2011-12-08, 11:52   Link #35224
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I hadn't really stopped to think in the repercussions to have Quint alive: her relationship with Nove.

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And here comes the finale!

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Where did you put a time skip?... *reads again* You can't have a so big and meaningful time skip (from non-visible pregnancy to her two children being able to talk and walk) with just a "Later"

I had the idea Aston was a baby at first.

It looks like Sette is being a good keeper for Mr. Snuggles, I dare to say as good as Suzuka.

At first I thought it was a little strange, Tilda's death caused by Levi (not being her style), then I realized that happened.

I liked Levi in this chapter, and liked how create conflict in StrikerS given that your version of Jail doesn't look like wants to press the conflict like in canon.

The sad irony of Jail preparing herself for a Mazoku when one already messed up with all of them.

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Old 2011-12-08, 12:00   Link #35225
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Time Skip, um...

Well, considering that the mini-arcs have been spaced apart weeks and sometimes months, it's been a couple of years now, so... Uh...

The twins aren't that old, just old enough to walk and talk.



Babies can do that at age 2... Right?

...

Can I please be given a hand-wave?

Edit: I'm going to admit this, right now...

The timeline, even to me, is a bit... Muddled, I guess you can say.

If you're asking for exact dates and ages... *Hangs head* It's one of the failings of this story, I don't have any exact dates and ages right now.

Forgive me?
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Old 2011-12-08, 12:18   Link #35226
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Time Skip, um...

Well, considering that the mini-arcs have been spaced apart weeks and sometimes months, it's been a couple of years now, so... Uh...

The twins aren't that old, just old enough to walk and talk.



Babies can do that at age 2... Right?

...

Can I please be given a hand-wave?

Edit: I'm going to admit this, right now...

The timeline, even to me, is a bit... Muddled, I guess you can say.

If you're asking for exact dates and ages... *Hangs head* It's one of the failings of this story, I don't have any exact dates and ages right now.

Forgive me?
...I want to pity you for making a possible plot hole here, but the fact you write so well drives me to shove the pity aside to laugh at this. Sorry.

I forgive you, at least...maybe. XP
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Old 2011-12-08, 13:18   Link #35227
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Time Skip, um...

Well, considering that the mini-arcs have been spaced apart weeks and sometimes months, it's been a couple of years now, so... Uh...

The twins aren't that old, just old enough to walk and talk.



Babies can do that at age 2... Right?

...

Can I please be given a hand-wave?

Edit: I'm going to admit this, right now...

The timeline, even to me, is a bit... Muddled, I guess you can say.

If you're asking for exact dates and ages... *Hangs head* It's one of the failings of this story, I don't have any exact dates and ages right now.

Forgive me?
I forgive you, Nanya.
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Old 2011-12-08, 13:36   Link #35228
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Time Skip, um...

Well, considering that the mini-arcs have been spaced apart weeks and sometimes months, it's been a couple of years now, so... Uh...

The twins aren't that old, just old enough to walk and talk.



Babies can do that at age 2... Right?

...

Can I please be given a hand-wave?

Edit: I'm going to admit this, right now...

The timeline, even to me, is a bit... Muddled, I guess you can say.

If you're asking for exact dates and ages... *Hangs head* It's one of the failings of this story, I don't have any exact dates and ages right now.

Forgive me?
If you hadn't of said that you could have waited until the end and worked everything out before saying "I had this planned out all along." Now we simply have to accept the mages did it.
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Old 2011-12-08, 13:37   Link #35229
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If you hadn't of said that you could have waited until the end and worked everything out before saying "I had this planned out all along." Now we simply have to accept the mages did it.
Wizards did it? What does that make Nanya? =w=
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Old 2011-12-08, 13:38   Link #35230
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If you hadn't of said that you could have waited until the end and worked everything out before saying "I had this planned out all along." Now we simply have to accept the mages did it.
I *DO* have most of it planned...

But...

Horrible with some of the details.

That's why I like it if you guys can catch mistakes, then I can correct them.
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Old 2011-12-08, 14:00   Link #35231
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I'm not asking for exact chronology, just tell us when and roughly the amount of time. Note that for a previous timeskip you simply announced it without much fanfare (two years, and it wasn't even in the end of an arc)

Short version: replace "Later" with "A few years later".
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Old 2011-12-08, 14:01   Link #35232
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I'm not asking for exact chronology, but for a similar timeskip you simply announced it without much fanfare (two years, and it wasn't even in the and of an arc)

Short version: replace "Later" with "A few years later".
Yeah, I think Filraen has the right idea here. Even if it's just that slight editing, it makes it sound a bit smoother.
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Old 2011-12-08, 14:04   Link #35233
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I'm not asking for exact chronology, just tell us when and roughly the amount of time. Note that for a previous timeskip you simply announced it without much fanfare (two years, and it wasn't even in the and of an arc)

Short version: replace "Later" with "A few years later".
That SPECIFIC later was actually within the same day.

Hmm...

*looks at Coda*

However, I can do something about it.

Edit: Actually... Hmm... *thinks*

Time frame from Healing to Cycle...

Nanoha was just over her injury in Healing and Cycle was the airport fire in StrikerS, so...

Uh...

I need more time to think right now.
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Old 2011-12-08, 14:10   Link #35234
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That SPECIFIC later was actually within the same day.

Hmm...

*looks at Coda*

However, I can do something about it.

Edit: Actually... Hmm... *thinks*

Time frame from Healing to Cycle...

Nanoha was just over her injury in Healing and Cycle was the airport fire in StrikerS, so...

Uh...

I need more time to think right now.
Need some Chao Lingshen time-travel? Or just more time? XP
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even though I pushed back Nanoha's injury till she was somewhere between 12 and 14 and Quint had her children later that year...

...

Still, enough time should have passed, I think, especially since Nanoha was 15 when the airport fire happened and this is about a year (give or take) removed from StrikerS.
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Old 2011-12-08, 14:21   Link #35236
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Some options:

- Reorder the scenes of Coda End: Numbers-Levi-Quint or Numbers-Quint-Levi depending of when you pretend to do the timeskip.

- You can make the Quint scene a StrikerS prologue (thus removing it from coda End)

- Give some signs in-story the pregnancy happened/is happening (for example, Genya, Gubaru and Ginga appear in Cycle; they could have a line, spoken or not, about it).
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Hmm... Yeah, that last one could work easily enough too. *nods*

I'll fix my master copy, it'll be up on FF.Net when I post it there.
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Old 2011-12-08, 14:28   Link #35238
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Yeah, same here. CnC is one of the tactical games I grew up playing, but despite attempts to stay serious, I could never end up doing it...
Also, if we go by CnC mechanics or rules, Hayate and Nanoha would pretty much be OP, Hayate because of her AoE attacks, and Nanoha because of Starlight Breaker.

And this idea probably would fit better under the crossover thread anyway, unless it would just be Nanoha-verse characters...don't know for sure, though.
I thought nobody could take CnC seriously was because of the bad acting. xD.

Although I can KIND of see a crossover, although it could mean that Tiberium would be close to the Huckebein virus in Force. And with Nod = Huckebein, but they would have to claim that Tiberium is another form of magical matter that gives additional magical power, maybe at the cost of something.

maybe something close to dark energon maybe?
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StrikerS...

GO!

Peek's Mini-Arcs:

Yagami Mid Four Dwell Takamachi Scrya Fatherhood Harlaown Dreams Dance Healing Twins Advice History Onwards Cycle Playdate Forging Meetings Search Valkyrie News Coda

BTF Omakes:

Old Iron Omakes 1, 2, 3 Mr Snuggles Omake Oh Bandit Tree Old Iron Omakes 4, 5

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Old 2011-12-08, 16:07   Link #35240
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StrikerS...

GO!

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Old Iron Omakes 1, 2, 3 Mr Snuggles Omake Oh Bandit Tree Old Iron Omakes 4, 5

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Zwei just makes me "d'awww..." almost every time. When she isn't doing that, she's having moments of BA.
Also, Vita-chan on a motorcycle is full of win. Seriously.
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