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Old 2011-12-13, 08:46   Link #35281
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Dezo posted to the AS fanfiction thread, to follow up on his short "Shadow in the Rain" in which Vivio makes good on her threat of beating Auris if Lutecia gets hurt.

can anyone pls tell me which page that omake is on

(since it isnt in the timelin/au list
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Old 2011-12-13, 10:35   Link #35282
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Posted the first chapter of TTG on FF.Net, and since I'll be updating every day I guess there's no need for me to post a link here. No changes (Though I spotted a few grammatical errors, but that could always wait).
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Old 2011-12-13, 15:05   Link #35283
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Old 2011-12-13, 15:42   Link #35284
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Two points: 1) To busy teaming up(...) -> Too busy (...)

2) Assuming Voltaire is the Caro's second summon, I wonder who is this third summon.
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Old 2011-12-13, 17:10   Link #35285
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D'awww...Erio and Caro can be so adorable. Even though we know deep down that they've been corrupted by Lina, Fate, Yuuno, and Suzuka (or was it Alisa? =w=).

Also, Yuuno and Fate need to get a room. With Nanoha. Or Arf. Or Hayate and Reinforce. Or Vita, Shamal, and/or Signum. Or all of the above. XP
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Old 2011-12-13, 17:42   Link #35286
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Me: One thing for certain, Yuuno's right.

Elane: About what?

Me: About being male and being surrounded with beautiful ladies will really make any male look at them.

Val: Did Lina taught Hidden Weapons Technique to Erio? Because it's one of the few ways to bypass security.

Odin: It's gonna be a tough training season for kids soon.
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Old 2011-12-14, 15:12   Link #35287
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Old 2011-12-14, 16:11   Link #35288
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Just one spelling error:
"Get across the finish line. I just hope they have good brakes."
Other than that, welcome to Riot Force 6 Teana and Subaru!
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Old 2011-12-14, 17:16   Link #35289
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Me: That's one way of slowing down, like a fighter plane returning back to it's carrier.

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Old 2011-12-15, 21:11   Link #35290
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Old 2011-12-15, 22:52   Link #35291
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Reia: Vita, Acting like Excel-neechan. When did she got all ms. fanservice?

Me: I suspect that spiked punch did it.

Odin: That nasty three-way between Yuuno, Signum and Vita just turned into a three-way orgy in the rumors...

Amy: This will not blow over anytime soon...
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Old 2011-12-16, 11:45   Link #35292
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So, I’m used to horror, gore and action. I’ve never written romance. Ever.

So here is a romance short. Set after Force, somewhere. And no gore. I’m totally serious. Very short, too.

Ergo, I have no idea what I’m doing.

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I am now embarrassed. I need to cleanse myself now *goes to write gore and laughs manically*
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Old 2011-12-16, 11:56   Link #35293
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Cute, very cute.

That's all I need to say on that.
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Old 2011-12-16, 16:06   Link #35294
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It sure is :3

Nicely done, AX...very nice
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Old 2011-12-16, 16:42   Link #35295
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Old 2011-12-16, 16:54   Link #35296
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So, I’m used to horror, gore and action. I’ve never written romance. Ever.

So here is a romance short. Set after Force, somewhere. And no gore. I’m totally serious. Very short, too.

Ergo, I have no idea what I’m doing.

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I am now embarrassed. I need to cleanse myself now *goes to write gore and laughs manically*
LOL, I totally didn't read your note before the fic, so when I read it I kept cringing at how cute it was and expecting something absolutely terrible to happen as I kept reading further and further. Imagine how surprised I was when I reached the end and everything was still fluffy with kittens!

Cute fic, I love how they're comfortable with silent moments. That really shows me how close they are to each other more than any other kind of action . Great job!
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Old 2011-12-16, 17:00   Link #35297
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The first part of the sentence sounds weird ("I'm here to learn to use/practice using")

I know Erio and Caro are important characters in canon Strikers but there's something wrong by them being in BtF's Riot Force division: their parents are Fate, Yuuno and Arisa, who in turn are heavily influenced by Lina (particularly Fate) and her conviction children shouldn't be soldiers so young (they being reincarnations of the Mazoku/Shinzoku from the other staff being irrelevant here).

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The first part of the sentence sounds weird ("I'm here to learn to use/practice using")

I know Erio and Caro are important characters in canon Strikers but there's something wrong by them being in BtF's Riot Force division: their parents are Fate, Yuuno and Arisa, who in turn are heavily influenced by Lina (particularly Fate) and her conviction children shouldn't be soldiers so soon (they being reincarnations of the Mazoku/Shinzoku from the other staff being irrelevant here).
Suggestions on how to fix it?

And, good point, I shall have to address this.
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Old 2011-12-16, 17:17   Link #35299
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Reia: O-kay.... Even Excel-neechan CAN'T make anyone climax by just looking at her....

Me: I shall repeat thy words again: DAMN! YOU! HAYATE!!!!!

Odin: Her and her perverted thought have corrupted Vita.

Sarah: Did Erio received the "Ragudo Mezegis" from Lina, who keeps them as ornament?

Me: I dunno but one thing is certain. The Strikers will have a nasty crash course in mazoku combat.

Val: If Riksfalto got a wind of this training, I think we all know who's the new instructor for the anti-mazoku training.
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Old 2011-12-16, 17:19   Link #35300
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Thanks for the comments. I had no idea how it turned out, other than it made even me go ngh. So something clicked in the process. Also:

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[...] when I read it I kept cringing at how cute it was and expecting something absolutely terrible to happen as I kept reading further and further. Imagine how surprised I was when I reached the end and everything was still fluffy with kittens!
I totally wanted a reaction like this. Now I'm proud!
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