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Old 2011-12-16, 17:32   Link #35301
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Suggestions on how to fix it?

And, good point, I shall have to address this.
Sadly, the only real suggestion I have is Retcon the things a little to pull back Strikers a few years. I can't see Erio (much less Caro) pushing too much against their parents to enter the Bureau.

Otherwise, *thinking* if they have power control problems (after all they kids are human reincarnations of a Mazoku Lord and the Shinzoku equivalent) serious enough Lina might have agreed, just because they may be likely to cause less destruction (or have destruction in a more controlled environment). This rises another point here: "why L-sama would make their seals so weak?", there has to be sort of answer in StrikerS. Probably their power would be very important in the battle against Levi? or something.
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Old 2011-12-16, 17:36   Link #35302
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The first part of the sentence sounds weird ("I'm here to learn to use/practice using")

I know Erio and Caro are important characters in canon Strikers but there's something wrong by them being in BtF's Riot Force division: their parents are Fate, Yuuno and Arisa, who in turn are heavily influenced by Lina (particularly Fate) and her conviction children shouldn't be soldiers so soon (they being reincarnations of the Mazoku/Shinzoku from the other staff being irrelevant here).
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Suggestions on how to fix it?

And, good point, I shall have to address this.
IMO... I think Arisa should have said She's here to improve her control over her magic or something along the lines of refining her control over her powers.

At the second issue regrading Erio and Caro, I can say they took the training, at least, for self-control over certain aspect of their powers, mazoku/shinzoku influenced or not. Another is that they took the training as Lina is reluctant or too busy to training on her own and not to mention about the possible damages they'll make if the dimensional barrier falls if it can't handle the power of the spell used.
And remember that even Lina is a retired adventurer, she's far focused on black magic/offensive spells with some defensive magic to back her up and know how to handle a sword till she can get back casting her spells again. Erio and Caro have their own focus as attacker/support respectively and Erio uses a spear/lance to probably compensate for his height and size, things that Lina can't teach much to them. And wielding a spear and/or lance is different from wielding a naginata.

Of course these are my opinion.
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Old 2011-12-16, 20:54   Link #35303
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I've got some ideas, but, thanks guys, this helps get a point to focus on for the next part.
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Old 2011-12-17, 12:21   Link #35304
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I hope this part addresses people's concerns that they had.

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Old 2011-12-17, 15:07   Link #35305
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I have my own StrikerS-canon concern about BTF that you'll have to address, since you've brought up the scattered missions.

How exactly did this Riot Force 6 even get authorized? There's even more talented, high-ranking mages in it than in the canon. They had to get limiters and such with just the three Aces and the Wolkenritter, and in this you've also given them Reinforce, Yuuno, and Zelgadis, not to mention the kind of firepower Arisa has as a soul fragment carrier.

Experimental new branch or not, without limiters that's going to be seen as favoritism in the rest of the branches.
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Old 2011-12-17, 17:14   Link #35306
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I have my own StrikerS-canon concern about BTF that you'll have to address, since you've brought up the scattered missions.

How exactly did this Riot Force 6 even get authorized? There's even more talented, high-ranking mages in it than in the canon. They had to get limiters and such with just the three Aces and the Wolkenritter, and in this you've also given them Reinforce, Yuuno, and Zelgadis, not to mention the kind of firepower Arisa has as a soul fragment carrier.

Experimental new branch or not, without limiters that's going to be seen as favoritism in the rest of the branches.
Me: Looks like they going to be very busy in the future.

Odin: To answer your inquiry, Rising Dragon. Reguis WANTED a branch that can go into action without the red tapes blocking/stopping the more powerful members from acting/helping when the need arise.

Val: In short, the new Riot Force 6 don't have the limitation of the canon!RF6. Remeber, that if they end up fighting a rogue mazoku in one of the missions, it's suicide to fight them WITH limiters on them.

Reia: And by the time the limiters where removed, if we follow the canon, the group is either already dead/incapacitated/unconscious/about to die.
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Old 2011-12-17, 20:10   Link #35307
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We're baaaaaaaaaack...

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...oh, I'm sorry. Did you think that the Aces would be able to waltz all over these guys just because they're traditional magical girl enemies? Soooorrryyy, it's not that simple~...
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Old 2011-12-17, 20:44   Link #35308
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Wouldn't that go under the crossover thread? Just curious...
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Old 2011-12-17, 20:49   Link #35309
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These guys are way worse than most 'typical' magical girl bad guys. Only the really high-up bad guys tend to be scary in those.
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Old 2011-12-17, 20:55   Link #35310
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Wouldn't that go under the crossover thread? Just curious...
We have one of those?

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...we have one of those. Huh. Thanks for the heads-up, I'll be posting it there too.
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Old 2011-12-17, 21:15   Link #35311
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We have one of those?

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...we have one of those. Huh. Thanks for the heads-up, I'll be posting it there too.
Not a problem, just wanting to let you know.
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Old 2011-12-18, 01:27   Link #35312
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Old 2011-12-18, 04:19   Link #35313
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Wouldn't that go under the crossover thread? Just curious...
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We have one of those?

*checks board*

...we have one of those. Huh. Thanks for the heads-up, I'll be posting it there too.
Please don't. The crossover thread is for discussion only, keep the fanfics here.

Thank you.
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Old 2011-12-18, 07:48   Link #35314
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So...

OC profiles go in the OC thread. Crack ideas from another world go in the XO thread. And fics + whatever else stay here? Does this include fics that use predominately OCs?
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Old 2011-12-18, 12:06   Link #35315
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Blood that Flows, the story that seems up to update everyday and which keeps this thread afloat single-handedly, is a CROSSOVER itself.

Yes, they belong here.
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Old 2011-12-18, 12:34   Link #35316
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Go Nanya! Keep the train rolling while the rest of us deal with...

*is buried by a massive tsunami of paperwork and girlfriend's xmas shoppinglist*

...life in general xD.
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Old 2011-12-18, 12:52   Link #35317
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I hope this part addresses people's concerns that they had.

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Your answer satisfies me.

Teana has even more reasons to feel out of place. Thinking she's here just because she's Subaru's partner isn't far off.




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The whole "missions" looks like the Riot Force's cost for existing: it's the strongest mage group around but they must answer missions quickly from many sources: too strong for Navy? Riot Force. strange magical readings? Riot Force. Who you're gonna call?... or something like that. The limiter question is addressed well enough.

And I was just thinking Limiters won't work with Suzuka. Still, I find it rare Suzuka being able to defeat Signum in battle: no shields, no barrier jacket and nowhere near the experience in armed styles than Signum.
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Old 2011-12-18, 13:12   Link #35318
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And I was just thinking Limiters won't work with Suzuka. Still, I find it rare Suzuka being able to defeat Signum in battle: no shields, no barrier jacket and nowhere near the experience in armed styles than Signum.
It's because Nanya got the message Tusuzuki sent to us in Force xDU.

Signum in BTF is barely more than a cosplay slave for Hayate XP.
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It's because Nanya got the message Tusuzuki sent to us in Force xDU.

Everyone in BTF is barely more than a cosplay slave for Hayate XP.
Fixed it for you.
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It's because Nanya got the message Tusuzuki sent to us in Force xDU.

Signum in BTF is barely more than a cosplay slave for Hayate ...and Shamal's plaything.
Fixed again xDU
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