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Old 2012-01-04, 01:20   Link #35421
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Heavy.

Then very, very d'aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaw.
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Old 2012-01-04, 02:04   Link #35422
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Oh wow, great chapter Iron. Nanoha is all set to be slaughtered when she finds out that what she thinks of Scrya is only what she wanted him to be, thought he'll ever be, and that Signum was the one who reignited his passion in life.

Sex? XD Sorry I just cannot resist putting this down.
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Old 2012-01-04, 03:49   Link #35423
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Spoiler for Swords and Shields: Chapter 4:
Yep, there's going to be a lot of trouble for Yuuno becoming a shield & sword maniac...

... Zwei.... you are getting it wrong.
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Old 2012-01-04, 09:03   Link #35424
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...well now, Nanoha has her presumptions, Signum had her eyes opened to a bit more of what she was doing, though both seem to be assuming things incorrectly...somewhat.

Poor Yuuno, Zwei knows just what buttons to push to embarrass him. XD

Wonderful job, Old Iron. ^^
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Old 2012-01-04, 11:45   Link #35425
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Try to not froth at the mouth too much...

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Spoiler for Blood That Flows - StrikerS 38:
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Old 2012-01-04, 12:43   Link #35426
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Though this might mean versions of S, D, and U-D might show up...not sure if want. =w=
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Old 2012-01-04, 13:23   Link #35427
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It's official, the fecal matter has hit the rotary circulation device.
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Old 2012-01-04, 13:24   Link #35428
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Sorry that this took so long and I apologize that its not as long as the others. But I hope you enjoy it all the same.

Major credit goes to Kuroi Hadou for beta-ing this chapter and helping me get off my sorry arse.

Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3a
Chapter 3b

Spoiler for Swords and Shields: Chapter 4:
Uhhh, so impressive, so grim, so.... lustful? Anyway, nice update is nice!
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Old 2012-01-04, 16:11   Link #35429
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Try to not froth at the mouth too much...

StrikerS 1-35

StrikerS 36

StrikerS 37

Spoiler for Blood That Flows - StrikerS 38:
Me: You don't hold back on those cliffs and suspense do ya, Nanya?

Odin: Levi, Levi, Levi. *shook head* Nice knowing you, I'll award you with a darwin's award after a few dragon slave level spells vap your ass.

Me: *looks at Odin.* You're already jumping on the award? You can't be serious!?

Odin: Sirus and Riksfalto haven't left Mid-Childa yet as far the the story state. No doubt that they too will investigate the source.

Me: Oh boy. And now I'm the person who's asking somebody to ignore you, Odin. *sweatdrops.*

Mariemeia: Like I care about what Odin's have to say. I want MORE of this!!!!

Me:-_-"
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Old 2012-01-04, 20:31   Link #35430
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Sorry that this took so long and I apologize that its not as long as the others. But I hope you enjoy it all the same.

Major credit goes to Kuroi Hadou for beta-ing this chapter and helping me get off my sorry arse.

Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3a
Chapter 3b

Spoiler for Swords and Shields: Chapter 4:
Dang, It's the violent yet dramatic scandal before the sweet teeth-crushing moe. You really should update more frequently (like Nanya), the action and drama are asking me to see more. It's killing me...

Oh yes, I can't wait to see your another fic, the one about Fate being raised by someone other then Rinith.
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Old 2012-01-04, 20:47   Link #35431
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Responding to an old post.

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Aw, that was such a cute story... Guess I shouldn't hold back on the link either.

http://comic.naver.com/webtoon/detai...d=350217&no=31
That was freaky. When I looked back and saw the trick, I was impressed. Very clever storytelling with the medium.
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Old 2012-01-04, 20:55   Link #35432
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I'm glad you all have enjoyed chapter 4 and thank you for the comments.

Poor Zwei, she tries and is adorable when she does so. Though its Yuuno who needs protection from Signum, not the other way around. *cackle*

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Oh yes, I can't wait to see your another fic, the one about Fate being raised by someone other then Rinith.
Regretfully, the idea hit a major roadblock and I'm unable to do anything with it without scrapping it and starting over.

I will tell you that the person to raise Fate was none other than Ryoma Nagare of Shin Getter Robo: Armageddon fame. Let that roll around in your heads for a while.
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Old 2012-01-04, 21:01   Link #35433
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Sunder...

That was freaky...

Holy crap...

*tries to get breathing under control*

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Old 2012-01-04, 21:29   Link #35434
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Sunder...

That was freaky...

Holy crap...

*tries to get breathing under control*
I know, right?

That was shock-type horror ("terror?") done RIGHT.


Though I'm not sure if it's ridiculous or in-character for a teenage girl to think it would be worse for a woman's hair to be messy than for all the woman's joints to be horribly twisted.
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Old 2012-01-04, 22:22   Link #35435
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Sorry that this took so long and I apologize that its not as long as the others. But I hope you enjoy it all the same.

Major credit goes to Kuroi Hadou for beta-ing this chapter and helping me get off my sorry arse.

Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3a
Chapter 3b

Spoiler for Swords and Shields: Chapter 4:
For some reason I get the feeling Nanoha's little talk is going to backfire on her with Yuuno.
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Old 2012-01-04, 22:46   Link #35436
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For some reason I get the feeling Nanoha's little talk is going to backfire on her with Yuuno.
For some reason I feel the dialogue will go:
Nanoha: Yuuno.... kun... is there something wrong with you?
Yuuno: Nanoha, I'm FINE.
Nanoha: Aren't you becoming violent?
Yuuno: No I am not, I'm still the same old-
Nanoha: Stop going with Signum.
Yuuno: WRYYYYY~ *pushes her* I'm fine dammit!
*5 seconds later*
*Yuuno gets blasted out the doorway with a level 3 Divine Buster.*
Nanoha: I hate you!

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Old 2012-01-04, 23:18   Link #35437
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Also there are works here that i'm actually following with a smile and waiting for them to be continued(deathcurse, i'll be eternally waiting for the continuation of little Seagull's story xD).
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*facepalms so hard she rattles the seas*

Aki... if you're refering to the Signum story called Father's Knife where little Signum is called Seagull, I think you'll have better luck with elbowing me.... ^^;;

*wanders off in a cloud of gloom*
Hey, I don't see a problem in getting a fabulous fic falsely attributed to me! (j/k Shigan, love ya!)

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Lol? They are like, the TSAB's three most powerful mages in the world. Any single one of them can wipe out an entire army, and Hayate probably could shoot down a few spaceships on her own given the time and opportunity.
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I see potential in this idea...

Deathcurse, if you see this, you gave me armies. Now, you give me spaceship blasting Hayate, please
.........spaceship blasting Hayate? That may give me incentive to dig up my "Hayate takes over the world" story ideas .

I believe there was debate in the past about if Hayate could actually take down a space-orbiting object, with very realistic physics calculations about how it can't be done, so we may be out of luck XD.
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Old 2012-01-04, 23:29   Link #35438
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Spoiler for Swords and Shields: Chapter 4:
Hey Nanoha, I think you should rewatch that battle you had with Signum.


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.........spaceship blasting Hayate? That may give me incentive to dig up my "Hayate takes over the world" story ideas .

I believe there was debate in the past about if Hayate could actually take down a space-orbiting object, with very realistic physics calculations about how it can't be done, so we may be out of luck XD.
I wish I can find that
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Old 2012-01-04, 23:40   Link #35439
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Though its Yuuno who needs protection from Signum, not the other way around.
I'm unable to form a coherent opinion, due to varying levels of canon and fanon.

From the first Megami Sound Stage:

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Fate: Poor Yuuno, he’s become our logistical support completely.

Nanoha: Yeah, but a peaceful place like a library or an archaeological excavation site suits Yuuno more than a battlefield/battle-torn sky.

Fate: Yeah, I guess that’s true.

Nanoha: I’ve told Yuuno-kun so many times to leave combat to me.
I supposed I read too much into before, because it felt like saying that Yuuno had no place on the battlefield.

My own interpretations of the canon, as well as Yuuno's revealed and expanded capabilities in Gears of Destiny, would not agree with that idea. Nanoha herself even says that Yuuno's (deviceless) defense is much better than hers, and that she (powerhouse that she is) cannot penetrate his defenses without going all-out with an attack.

Of course, she may just be saying that Yuuno is happier and more at home being a scholar than a soldier, and I can't disagree with that at all. It's true, for all that Yuuno actively throws himself into danger to protect others, he's happier when he doesn't have to fight.

Indeed, it's even possible that he doesn't particularly like friendly sparring, or feel any inclination to engage in martial sport.

But while possible, that's never been conclusively stated or shown. Perhaps Yuuno does have some pride and competitive spirit in regards to his combat ability.

How much is the "canonical" Nanoha relegating Yuuno "to the kitchen" in her conceptions? How much is your version of Nanoha doing that?

Would either of them be thinking that way after knowing that Yuuno could defeat the likes of Stern the Destructor (an event that did not happen before the Sound Stage was made or your story was begun, and thus had no impact on their "canon")?

Would Nanoha be as upset about this development if it were anyone other than "kind, gentle Yuuno"?

How much of her displeasure stems from disaproval of the character trait itself? Did she previously feel uncomfortable about the trait in Signum? Does she feel that NO ONE should fight with such urges?


In short, I'm having trouble forming an opinion on who is "right", and what I personally feel is "best" for Yuuno.

And how much of this is a previously undeveloped part of Yuuno's personality, and how much does it derive from his usual drive to give others what they want? Is he doing this because he wants to, or because it is something within his power to give to Signum?


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Hey Nanoha, I think you should rewatch that battle you had with Signum.
Signum addressed that; she was fighting for victory. Nanoha wanted to win.

Yuuno is trying to defeat and dominate Signum.

Domination is more concerned with the opponent, whereas Victory is more impersonal. For example, Victory can be achieved through time-out, or a judge declaring a technical victory, or achieving some other sort of goal.

Domination can only be achieved by knocking the opponent unconscious, forcing them to surrender, or killing them.
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Old 2012-01-05, 01:43   Link #35440
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I'm glad somebody called out Signum for that at least a little: this whole thing started because Fate wasn't good enough to satisfy her, after all.
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