AnimeSuki Forums

Register Forum Rules FAQ Members List Social Groups Search Today's Posts Mark Forums Read

Go Back   AnimeSuki Forum > Anime Discussion > Older Series > Nanoha

Notices

Reply
 
Thread Tools
Old 2012-01-10, 20:27   Link #35481
mega1987
GregOS Offline
 
 
Join Date: Jan 2011
Location: Philippines
Age: 26
Quote:
Originally Posted by Nanya01 View Post
StrikerS 1-45

Spoiler for Blood That Flows - StrikerS 46:
Me: Paging Lamia Loveless... Your Expy just took a page from one of your lines...

Odin: *Palmface.*

Val: Ouch... I don't know how Signum will recover from that... Even I'll be down for a while from that kind of injury.
__________________
Darwin's nominee are best for laughs.
MGLN "Befriending" shows love thru superior firepower (Zenryokou Zenkai!)
Gundams are your worst nightmare in the battlefield.
SRW beats all foes.
JAM Project pwns all!!!

And I can't still make fanfic without restarting from the start when new ideas comes in...
mega1987 is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 2012-01-10, 21:26   Link #35482
deathcurse
Queen of Tragedy
 
 
Join Date: Mar 2009
Location: Place of rocks and trees, and trees and rocks...and water.
Age: 23
Quote:
Originally Posted by Tempy View Post
A rehash.

Spoiler for Obligatory Time Warp Episode Redux:
*drops in*

Nice . I really got the emotional impact of the premise even though you used very sparse narrative on it. And man, Vivio...are these Akashic Records a genie's lamp or a monkey's paw? I guess we'll have to see if Vivio gets her heart's desire, or if she has indeed destroyed all creation @_@.

If Vivio activated something just by touching it, I can't help but imagine...
Six-year-old Vivio is holding Nanoha's hand as they visit Uncle Yuuno at work. The hall is cluttered with rows of stored Lost Logia.
Nanoha: "Now, Vivio, mama has to talk to Uncle Yuuno, okay? Stay here and don't touch anything, can you promise me?"
Vivio: *nods enthusiastically* "Okay!"
Nanoha: *talks with Yuuno*
Vivio: *fidgets, then gets bored. Wanders over to the closest huge Logia*
Vivio: "Cau...Cau-ti-on...Ex...explo...expo-sive? Expose? But it's covered right now..."
Vivio: "Okay, I'll help--" *grabs onto the nearest part to pull off the covered Lost Logia*
The huge fireball was large enough to light up Cranagan City's nightscape.
Utter silence.
Nanoha: "VIVIO! What did I tell you about touching things?!?"
deathcurse is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 2012-01-10, 21:28   Link #35483
Filraen
Big Damn Lurker
 
 
Join Date: Feb 2011
Quote:
Originally Posted by Nanya01 View Post
StrikerS 1-45

Spoiler for Blood That Flows - StrikerS 46:
A harder try asked Teana and a harder try Teana got.

Also, it's just me or BtF!Nanoha needs Vivio even more than canon!Nanoha?
Filraen is online now   Reply With Quote
Old 2012-01-10, 21:33   Link #35484
bhl88
Otaku Apprentice
 
 
Join Date: Jun 2008
Location: The Unseen Horizon
Send a message via MSN to bhl88 Send a message via Yahoo to bhl88
Quote:
Originally Posted by Nanya01 View Post
StrikerS 1-45

Teana narrowed her eyes at Nove. "Listen you..." She stopped as she felt a tap on her shoulder. Turning, her eyes widened as she saw Sein, partially phased through the street. "Sein, what are.." The next thing Teana knew, Sein's hands were on her face and the petite cyborg's lips were pressed up against hers, causing Teana's eyes to widen in shock. Mere moments later, Sein's tongue found its way into Teana's mouth, causing the girl's mind to go into complete shock.

Vita stared at that. "What the hell?"

That seemed to snap Nove out of her daze and she rushed forward and grabbed Wendi from Teana so violently that Teana's shoulder seemed to snap loudly. Wincing at the sound, she threw Wendi and Subaru over her shoulders and took off as fast as she could.

"HEY!" Vita turned and growled as she took off into the air. "Get back here with those two!"

Sein broke the kiss, smiling at Teana's stunned look. "Sorry, had to." She dropped through the ground again, leaving Teana to stare ahead, stunned, though her face was slowly turning red as her brain rebooted.

It took a few moments more, before Teana growled loudly. "DAMMIT, SEIN!"
My brain has shut down....... the yuri kissing shut my brain down..... *nosebleed and pale white from loss of blood*
__________________

Dang it Avalon, you c(XD LOL)-block Shirou and Reinforce, but don't protect his mind in other ways? What is wrong, you woman?
Friendship, be made! Magical power, gather! Starlight Breaker.... this world!

Last edited by bhl88; 2012-01-10 at 21:48.
bhl88 is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 2012-01-10, 21:42   Link #35485
YF19EX
Senior Member
 
 
Join Date: Oct 2011
Talking

Quote:
Originally Posted by Tempy View Post
A rehash.

Spoiler for Obligatory Time Warp Episode Redux:

"I need your boots, your clothes and your motorcycle..."
YF19EX is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 2012-01-10, 22:33   Link #35486
Old_Iron
. . .
*Author
 
 
Join Date: Aug 2011
Location: The Fiery Pit of the Southwest
Age: 28
Send a message via AIM to Old_Iron
Quote:
Originally Posted by Tempy View Post
A rehash.

Spoiler for Obligatory Time Warp Episode Redux:
...I am intrigued. I hope that there is more to come. This looks very interesting and I am very curious as to how Vivio will deal with younger versions of everyone.


Quote:
Originally Posted by Nanya01 View Post
StrikerS 1-45

Spoiler for Blood That Flows - StrikerS 46:
Ouch, just ouch. Signum really drew the short one against Cinque. Well, everyone sort of got their asses handed to them. Good call on releasing Rein though.
__________________
The Art of Shipping is as profound as it is dangerous; not for the faint of heart nor the weak of will, it makes gods and devils out of us all.
Old_Iron is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 2012-01-10, 23:11   Link #35487
Filraen
Big Damn Lurker
 
 
Join Date: Feb 2011
Quote:
Originally Posted by Tempy View Post
A rehash.

Spoiler for Obligatory Time Warp Episode Redux:
The fic looks interesting, though I wonder how Vivio knows it's 2005.
Filraen is online now   Reply With Quote
Old 2012-01-11, 00:43   Link #35488
Craxuan
Crax
*Author
 
 
Join Date: Feb 2011
Location: MY
Quote:
Originally Posted by Tempy View Post
A rehash.

Spoiler for Obligatory Time Warp Episode Redux:
Perhaps a little too summarized, but otherwise could be epic.
__________________
Craxuan is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 2012-01-11, 03:27   Link #35489
WarpObscura
Bibliophile
 
 
Join Date: Dec 2005
Location: There's this dot on the world map...
Quote:
Originally Posted by YF19EX View Post
"I need your boots, your clothes and your motorcycle..."
Terminator crossover, go!
__________________

Yo dawg, I heard you like QB...

Thanks MAEt for the av!
WarpObscura is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 2012-01-11, 12:35   Link #35490
Nanya01
Left for TFF
*Author
 
 
Join Date: Jun 2009
Location: Frozen Hell of the North
Age: 31
Send a message via AIM to Nanya01
...

Word of warning, VERY dark part ahead.

StrikerS 1-45

StrikerS 46

Spoiler for Blood That Flows - StrikerS 47:
__________________

My fics Due to certain things, I am not here, find me over on TFF.

Last edited by CrowKenobi; 2012-01-11 at 13:32. Reason: As much as I agree with you, let's not rehash what caused this thread to be closed last year.
Nanya01 is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 2012-01-11, 13:40   Link #35491
CrowKenobi
Moderator
*Moderator
 
 
Join Date: Dec 2005
Location: there... just there.
Can it be possible that those that don't like Nanya's fic not show your hypocrisy by actually reading it?

For now, any more meta posting on the subject will be edited/deleted so let's just chill out.
__________________



CrowKenobi is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 2012-01-11, 13:43   Link #35492
staplesdex2
Junior Member
 
Join Date: Jun 2011
Damn Levi's twisted
staplesdex2 is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 2012-01-11, 14:55   Link #35493
biodude711
Senior Member
 
 
Join Date: May 2011
Location: USA
Age: 23
Send a message via AIM to biodude711
Quote:
Originally Posted by staplesdex2 View Post
Damn Levi's twisted
Well she IS a Mazoku, who are by definition twisted. Plus, they feed off of negative emotion.
__________________
biodude711 is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 2012-01-11, 15:39   Link #35494
itanshi1
Writer, Jester, MtG nerd
 
 
Join Date: Jun 2006
Location: Nanoha Used Car Dealership. RERISE!
Send a message via AIM to itanshi1 Send a message via MSN to itanshi1
Quote:
Originally Posted by CrowKenobi View Post
Can it be possible that those that don't like Nanya's fic not show your hypocrisy by actually reading it?

For now, any more meta posting on the subject will be edited/deleted so let's just chill out.
That's hypocritical? That doesn't make sense from a literary critique point of view.

If their critiques are more flames than an actual critique, then that would be the offense, not that they read it and feel compelled to review it. People can read and review as they wish, their motives are their own. Flames are bad. Enforce an existing rule instead of making up some eh.
__________________
For those that belittle their favorite characters, complain about pairings, complain about oversexed images. Stop, thank you.

Fear Anxiety Doubt is but a fad. The life of a fad depends entirely on the willingness to support it. Difficulty is a choice. Determination is a path. Your next great idea after your destination is the true goal.
itanshi1 is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 2012-01-11, 16:03   Link #35495
relentlessflame
 
*Administrator
 
 
Join Date: Dec 2003
Age: 32
Quote:
Originally Posted by itanshi1 View Post
If their critiques are more flames than an actual critique, then that would be the offense, not that they read it and feel compelled to review it. People can read and review as they wish, their motives are their own. Flames are bad. Enforce an existing rule instead of making up some eh.
The context here was in fact flaming, not a critique (you can't see that anymore because the comment was edited out). It is nothing but the continuation of grudge matches from long ago that I already warned would not be permitted on this Forum. Of course, reviews and criticism are fine.
__________________
[...]
relentlessflame is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 2012-01-11, 17:18   Link #35496
mega1987
GregOS Offline
 
 
Join Date: Jan 2011
Location: Philippines
Age: 26
Quote:
Originally Posted by Nanya01 View Post
...

Word of warning, VERY dark part ahead.

StrikerS 1-45

StrikerS 46

Spoiler for Blood That Flows - StrikerS 47:
Me: Watched too much horror movies and tried integrating them into the fic, Nanya?

Odin: And some people never ever learns to appreciate you efforts, no?

Me: The suspense is killing me... I wanna know more and Ignore those J@ck@sses how read your story and say they hate it due to the new contents.
__________________
Darwin's nominee are best for laughs.
MGLN "Befriending" shows love thru superior firepower (Zenryokou Zenkai!)
Gundams are your worst nightmare in the battlefield.
SRW beats all foes.
JAM Project pwns all!!!

And I can't still make fanfic without restarting from the start when new ideas comes in...
mega1987 is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 2012-01-11, 18:04   Link #35497
Nanya01
Left for TFF
*Author
 
 
Join Date: Jun 2009
Location: Frozen Hell of the North
Age: 31
Send a message via AIM to Nanya01
StrikerS 1-45

StrikerS 46

StrikerS 47

Spoiler for Blood That Flows - Strikers 48:


BTW, this story now has over 500,000 words to it.
__________________

My fics Due to certain things, I am not here, find me over on TFF.
Nanya01 is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 2012-01-11, 18:15   Link #35498
mega1987
GregOS Offline
 
 
Join Date: Jan 2011
Location: Philippines
Age: 26
Quote:
Originally Posted by Nanya01 View Post
StrikerS 1-45

StrikerS 46

StrikerS 47

Spoiler for Blood That Flows - Strikers 48:


BTW, this story now has over 500,000 words to it.
Me: And the Trara-bubu came.

Odin: Commence head banging to the nearest solid object.

Val: I wonder what will Jail and the rest will do now that Subaru stated that RF6 is made to fight the same threat as they're preparing to face.
__________________
Darwin's nominee are best for laughs.
MGLN "Befriending" shows love thru superior firepower (Zenryokou Zenkai!)
Gundams are your worst nightmare in the battlefield.
SRW beats all foes.
JAM Project pwns all!!!

And I can't still make fanfic without restarting from the start when new ideas comes in...
mega1987 is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 2012-01-11, 19:03   Link #35499
Lycodrake
Senior Member
 
 
Join Date: Dec 2011
Age: 22
...*groaning* did anyone get the number on that revealing plot twist? I knew it was coming eventually, but...*lies back down*
__________________
Lycodrake is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 2012-01-11, 19:17   Link #35500
mega1987
GregOS Offline
 
 
Join Date: Jan 2011
Location: Philippines
Age: 26
Quote:
Originally Posted by Lycodrake View Post
...*groaning* did anyone get the number on that revealing plot twist? I knew it was coming eventually, but...*lies back down*
Here Lyco: right 36, left 10, right 57, right 97..... XD
__________________
Darwin's nominee are best for laughs.
MGLN "Befriending" shows love thru superior firepower (Zenryokou Zenkai!)
Gundams are your worst nightmare in the battlefield.
SRW beats all foes.
JAM Project pwns all!!!

And I can't still make fanfic without restarting from the start when new ideas comes in...
mega1987 is offline   Reply With Quote
Reply

Tags
authorshipping, befriending, fanfiction, interactive fanfiction, nanoha

Thread Tools

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off

Forum Jump


All times are GMT -5. The time now is 09:45.


Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.7
Copyright ©2000 - 2014, vBulletin Solutions, Inc.
We use Silk.