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Old 2012-01-26, 20:59   Link #35701
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The chapter was just the right length to let play Snow Rain in the background.
*Laughs*

Funny enough...

I was listening to Snow Rain the entire time I was writing it.

So, yeah, this whole scene would have had Snow Rain playing in the background.
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Old 2012-01-26, 21:28   Link #35702
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Nice one, but you should have killed Rein off to make the story more fun. Not like I dislike what you do here, but you can make a more interesting conflict if Rein dies.
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Old 2012-01-26, 22:10   Link #35703
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Nice one, but you should have killed Rein off to make the story more fun. Not like I dislike what you do here, but you can make a more interesting conflict if Rein dies.
Um... The path of Gainax/"Kill 'em All" Tomino?
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Old 2012-01-27, 04:49   Link #35704
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Um... The path of Gainax/"Kill 'em All" Tomino?
Tomino's end. Gainax ends are more like WTF in my opinion. If you want more drama, have Hayate kill Rein, gets berserk with emotion and kill off Levi. Before Levi died, she brain fried Hayate and she turned into a child in mentality. To add more, have Nanoha start losing her memory slowly due to her overstraining her powers, starting with the most recent wants ala Tekkaman Blade and you will have a fun piece. If you think it is not enough, make sure all the sacrifices made are for nothing and there.
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Old 2012-01-27, 05:04   Link #35705
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Tomino's end. Gainax ends are more like WTF in my opinion. If you want more drama, have Hayate kill Rein, gets berserk with emotion and kill off Levi. Before Levi died, she brain fried Hayate and she turned into a child in mentality. To add more, have Nanoha start losing her memory slowly due to her overstraining her powers, starting with the most recent wants ala Tekkaman Blade and you will have a fun piece. If you think it is not enough, make sure all the sacrifices made are for nothing and there.
In short... you prefer bitter-sweet endings....

Oh well... we got our own preferences in the endings... Let's not make this into a heated argument.
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Old 2012-01-28, 01:03   Link #35706
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Old 2012-01-28, 01:32   Link #35707
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Good thing you came so soon. This topic was on the fast track to chaos.
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Old 2012-01-28, 02:41   Link #35708
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For everyone waiting patiently for the next chapter of Medieval Belka, you will be pleased to know chapter 2 should be up relatively soon.

On that note, chapter 1 is undergoing some revisions to make things ...well, make sense. I'll be posting the revised chapter 1 alongside chapter 2.
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Old 2012-01-28, 15:34   Link #35709
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Old 2012-01-28, 16:18   Link #35710
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Me: I use video games to forget some problems... *Everyone stares at me.* What!? Do you prefer I drink Beer or drugs for that?

Odin: Whatever you say... But one thing is for sure, We're missing some people from the party on the ground. Namely, Luna and Schach.

Val: At least there's some good reunion happening downstairs... the only thing left is Lutecia's and Vivio'd break out from the cradle alive and well...

Reia: This gonna be tricky, that's for sure.
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Old 2012-01-28, 18:26   Link #35711
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After 5 months...I finally have a new chapter!

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Prerogative of the Brave

“A coward is incapable of exhibiting love; it is the prerogative of the brave."
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Old 2012-01-28, 18:27   Link #35712
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Old 2012-01-28, 18:33   Link #35713
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Are you sure your muse will be okay, DC?
*points at DC-muse, who's currently smooched by Nanya-muse.*
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Old 2012-01-28, 19:15   Link #35714
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I feel really dizzy for some reason.

But I saw this little gem...

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“OH MY GOD! Do you want to sleep with her???”

“…How many pedophile points will I get if I answer that question?”

“HAYATE!”
LOL! XD

Awesome!
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Old 2012-01-28, 21:24   Link #35715
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Old 2012-01-28, 21:44   Link #35716
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Me: Another wild card just smacked Levi in the face again...

Val: Heh. She had that coming... But still, it's not enough to finish her off. Incapacitate for a while, yes. Kill her off, not!

Odin: A rider kick?

Me: And I just revisit one of your older fanfic in Fanfiction.net... I just realized you already used the Super Inazuma Kick in the Timeloop fanfic... XD
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Old 2012-01-28, 22:05   Link #35717
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You and your rocket muse never ceased to amaze me xDD AMAZING!! Please keep up the good work!
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Old 2012-01-29, 03:12   Link #35718
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Chapter 6 now posted on FanFiction.net.

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Are you sure your muse will be okay, DC?
*points at DC-muse, who's currently smooched by Nanya-muse.*
Eh, I got her back for my next one-shot .

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I feel really dizzy for some reason.

But I saw this little gem...

LOL! XD

Awesome!
That scene had been in danger of being cut, so I'm glad you enjoyed it .

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Old 2012-01-29, 07:28   Link #35719
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Chapter 6 now posted on FanFiction.net.
It's uuuuuuuup!

Congrads pardddner, now you should get some deserved rest before binging that last chapter xD. Imagine the freedom you will feel after its done!

I'll give this revised version a read as quick as I get the time. I miss the days when Sundays were just lounging around and play Nintendo T_T.
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Old 2012-01-29, 09:35   Link #35720
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Nuke her with everyone's firepower Nanya... then bury her. XD
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