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Old 2012-04-13, 08:51   Link #36061
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UYD by lhklan The Unpronounceable, from FF.net

Chapter 1


Spoiler for UYD Chapter 2:
LMAO, it took me a minute for me to realize what was Yuuno's hand stained with.
Yuuno as an accidental pervert reminds me of "blood that flows"

@ old iron: It's inevitable, fanfiction compels you to write more sword and shield.
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Old 2012-04-13, 09:20   Link #36062
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UYD by lhklan The Unpronounceable, from FF.net

Chapter 1


Spoiler for UYD Chapter 2:
Well done there. lhklan is doing really good job starting to flesh out this creation of his and I'm really enjoying Jail. Keep up the good work, sir.

@Mr. Coin: I'm working on it. Why does it get harder to write the closer to the end I get. T_T
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Old 2012-04-13, 09:47   Link #36063
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Glad you both liked it, I'll be sure to convey that to lhklan. ^^
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Old 2012-04-13, 13:49   Link #36064
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@ old iron: It's inevitable, fanfiction compels you to write more sword and shield.
AMEN! ....waiting patiently for the next chapter xD!
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Old 2012-04-13, 14:59   Link #36065
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Well done there. lhklan is doing really good job starting to flesh out this creation of his and I'm really enjoying Jail. Keep up the good work, sir.

@Mr. Coin: I'm working on it. Why does it get harder to write the closer to the end I get. T_T
Because that's the point where your motivation and inspiration gets worn out by time. Why do you think I'm stuck at the final chapter for so long? >_>
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Old 2012-04-13, 15:14   Link #36066
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Jail is so pleased. And the next request is to court Due (tell him that I liked it too xD)
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Old 2012-04-14, 00:08   Link #36067
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While I know these have been ignored before...

UYD by lhklan, The Unpronounceable, who is on FF.net.

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And there you go.
Please note that lhklan isn't a native English speaker, and it might have a few errors in it. Try not to be too harsh about that. ^^;
Ihklan could benefit from a betareader, while it is understandable that his English isn't up to par, it's still annoying for a reader to see spelling mistakes etc.
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Old 2012-04-14, 00:42   Link #36068
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It was the writer's wishes that his story is left as it is, which is why Lyco hadn't done any fixing for his friend. Though, better communication is the future might change things, because I do agree some of the phrases were used so weirdly that it's slightly disconcerting to read.
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Old 2012-04-14, 01:27   Link #36069
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Why can't he just create an account if we want to give him constructive criticism on his work? *face palm*
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Old 2012-04-14, 02:04   Link #36070
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I was busy these days, and I'm... kinda afraid of this place.
Chapter 3 should be done soon.
As for the beta... Could someone beta for me?
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Old 2012-04-14, 02:26   Link #36071
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Lol I can fix your errors xD
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Old 2012-04-14, 02:43   Link #36072
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Thanks. Which way can I send you the files? FFnet or AS?
Here's chapter 3
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Old 2012-04-14, 07:38   Link #36073
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^ Another nice chapter, the characterization of Jail is excellent, to say at the leas. Mysterious and slightly creepy, yet somewhat compelling. I don't know if it's only me, but that's what I feel about it.

Due's character development induce laughter and squeal at the same time, thumbs up.
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Old 2012-04-14, 07:48   Link #36074
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A nice chapter, and welcome to AnimeSuki, lhklan. ^^
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Old 2012-04-14, 08:00   Link #36075
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I gave my welcome in your public page...
but it wouldn't hurt to give you a greeting in the thread...

So, Welcome to Animesuki: MGLN fanfic thread, Lhklan.

Odin: NEET! Shut up and you're still talking to someone else atm...

Me: Oh... Sorry! Anyways... If i got the time, I'll read your fanfics here. So, enjoy our company.
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Old 2012-04-14, 08:04   Link #36076
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Thanks for the warm welcome, guys.
Hope we can get along.
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Old 2012-04-14, 09:25   Link #36077
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Welcome to Animesuki, Lhklan! I enjoyed the latest chapter by the way.
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Old 2012-04-14, 09:34   Link #36078
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Just had this random fanfic idea (in connection with a little something Nanya just sent me): Hayate has a bad flu and is no longer able to support the Wolkies due to mana reserves dropping. The Wolkies decide to go into mana conservation mode like familiars do: Zafira turns into a puppy, Signum and Shamal become lolis and Vita more or less stays the same. Hilarity ensues when they show up at work the next day.

Has something like this been done already?
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Old 2012-04-14, 09:38   Link #36079
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As long as you manage to made a plausible connection between the flu and Hayate's mana dropping ti'll be fine.

Of course is the main focus of the story is getting fun then the explanation isn't as important as is just a plot device to make Signum and Shamal go loli xD

By the way, Welcome Lhklan xD! i haven't read your fic yet but i hope you have a good tme on these forums and have friends(not a difficult task considering how many fanfic enthusiasts are here xD).
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Old 2012-04-14, 09:43   Link #36080
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As long as you manage to made a plausible connection between the flu and Hayate's mana dropping ti'll be fine.

Of course is the main focus of the story is getting fun then the explanation isn't as important as is just a plot device to make Signum and Shamal go loli xD
It's just a plot device. ^^; Of course the real reason is to have our favorite boob monsters reverted to loli, just to see Vita's reaction (probably trolling the hell out of Signum) and Hayate's cosplay urges. Also, Fate's reaction to Loli!Signum. :3
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