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Old 2012-05-20, 18:19   Link #36461
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Okay, looks like we need some fanfiction. And I need to get off my ass and get back into writing, so this will be my attempt to get my flame burning again. I didn't want to start anything new until I finished what else I was working on, but if this can get my desire to write back, I'll do it.

This is one of the two continuations I am writing to my Crisis storyline. There are several reasons I broke my next continuation into two parts; one of which was to better handle the multiple characters. There is another reason, which mostly concerns this fic, which will become evident in later chapters.

Anyway, as this is a continuation of my Crisis storyline, there would be some fics to read first, to understand the situation going into this. They are:

Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha Crisis
Red Jewel Diaries
Recollections of a Lost Age

And now, presenting...

MGLN: Through a Mirror, Darkly

Chapter 1: Casting Shadows


Spoiler for MGLN: Through a Mirror, Darkly, Chapter 1: Casting Shadows:


Just a note that you don't need to read G-Squad if you don't want to, to understand anything in this fic (and hopefully if I can get my writing mojo fully in gear, there will be more of that fic as well). It's just that there will references and small connections here and there between the two.
Yahooo! After months of waiting, my prayers are finally heard. Kaijo's writing mojo is back!

Is the government separated by mages and normal people or are they all governed under one flag? Is the Saint Kaizer's church going to have their part as well?
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Old 2012-05-20, 18:49   Link #36462
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Spoiler for Blood That Flows - SSX 14:
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Old 2012-05-20, 19:22   Link #36463
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Yahooo! After months of waiting, my prayers are finally heard. Kaijo's writing mojo is back!

Is the government separated by mages and normal people or are they all governed under one flag? Is the Saint Kaizer's church going to have their part as well?
Heh, thanks. Hope to be back and publish stuff more often. I've got a lot of work to catch up on.

And I'm not doing anything too different with regards to mages and people; just how you see the Bureau doing things in-universe. There, mages and normals have equal parts in life. Some just tend to feel a bit differently.

As for your second question, yes, the Sankt Kaiser Church will definitely have a prominent role in all this. I thought it was about time to really explore their existence, and the implications of such an organization.

Also, uploaded Chapter 1 of MGLN: Through a Mirror, Darkly to ff.net.

Another small note: this does take place during the year 0079.
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Old 2012-05-20, 19:38   Link #36464
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Nevan: Hohohohohohoho! You thought this one is you normal outbreak...

Me: *Looking at Nevan, shocked as she still got her "batty" attire on.* Wha!? How?

Nevan: Odin let me out, pretty boy.

Odin: She wanted to "stretch her legs", as she put it.

Me: *Got a dripping nose bleed.* Just get some modest dress for a while, Nevan... There's some kids visit this site.

Nevan: Awwww.... Spoilsports... *pouts*

Kamina: I want her in the Team Gurren!!!

Shishio Gai: She's better of with GGG!!!!

Gai: She's a brimming example of YOUTH!!!!!

Reia: Argh!!!! Shut up and COOL OFF!!!! *Summons Leviathan and wash away the testosterone inducing morons out to the nearest bay.*

Mathias: You should have let me, my fair lady, to deliver a swift and final retribution and depositing their loathsome corpses into the nearest sea.

Me: *Looks at the readers.* Anyone else going to claim Subaru for her rousing speech at Ixy?

Iris: At least she just took the "lighter" side of befriending... Not someone we all know and love in this thread.

Every Nanoha in the multi-verse: HEY!!!!
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Old 2012-05-20, 19:41   Link #36465
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@Nanya: And thus Subaru is Kamina-tan alongside GaoGaiGar-tan! :3

@Mega1987: Reia has Leviathan? Gimme gimme gimme.~
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Old 2012-05-20, 20:10   Link #36466
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@Mega1987: Reia has Leviathan? Gimme gimme gimme.~
Oh sure... you can have her... Girls? He's asking for it.

*Reia, Sarah and Iris summons FFVIII, FFVII and FFIX Leviathan, respectively, and nearly drowns Lyco with THREE sets of Tsunamis...*

Odin: Be careful what you wish for, kid...

Maithas: You people should really let me deliver a swift and final retribution to him before I deposit his loathsome corpse to the nearest creek. *looks flatly at Lyco's shivering body...*
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Old 2012-05-20, 20:28   Link #36467
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Kaijo's fic title reminds me of this.
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Old 2012-05-20, 20:29   Link #36468
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Not cool, not cool at all. :/

That being said, I'm thinking that Subaru and Ixy are going to either get along well over time, or Ixy is going to be horribly tsun-tsun.
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Old 2012-05-20, 21:48   Link #36469
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Subaru: Giga.... Revolver.... BREAKERRRR!!!
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Old 2012-05-20, 21:52   Link #36470
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Kaijo's fic title reminds me of this.
Uh oh, someone found out where I got my title from...
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Old 2012-05-20, 23:12   Link #36471
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Subaru: Giga.... Revolver.... BREAKERRRR!!!
Ginga: Ginga... Knuckle... BREAKERRR!!!!
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Old 2012-05-20, 23:19   Link #36472
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Subaru: Giga.... Revolver.... BREAKERRRR!!!
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Ginga: Ginga... Knuckle... BREAKERRR!!!!
Yuuno: Flame... Spiral... PUUUNNNNCCCCCCCHHHHHH!!!!!!

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MGLN "Befriending" shows love thru superior firepower (Zenryokou Zenkai!)
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SRW beats all foes.
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And I can't still make fanfic without restarting from the start when new ideas comes in...
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Old 2012-05-21, 05:52   Link #36473
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Uh oh, someone found out where I got my title from...
You cannot escape the eyes of this Vice Admiral Trekker. :3
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Old 2012-05-21, 17:09   Link #36474
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Obviously all of this means that Vita and Subaru need a GAR-off.
The prize being Yuuno.
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Old 2012-05-22, 03:34   Link #36475
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Spoiler for Left alone, abandoned by love Chapter 4:

I don't really know what else to say right now
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Old 2012-05-23, 10:11   Link #36476
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Didn't know whether this particular content is better suited here or the crossover thread, but here's a fic brought to my attention that I'd like to read but can't... because it's in Japanese. Crossover with Zero no Tsukaima.

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I will regret saying this, but in the Japanese Fandom, there is a fic that summons Takamachi Nanoha post-Strikers, at least a year or so, into Halkeginia.

Nanoha, in this fic, had grown during the events of Strikers, and adopting Vivio had made Nanoha into a more mature woman, and absolutely more adept in social relationships as a bonus.

The first reaction Louise has when she meets this Nanoha, is that Nanoha kind-of-reminds her of Cattleya, which makes it impossible for Louise to take aggressive actions against Nanoha.

Nanoha, being the nice person she is, quickly accepts her position as Familiar, so as to soothe Louise's mental state.

From Louise's point of view, it is like having Cattleya at her side as a constant support, and it also helps that Nanoha has some gear with her(which is explained in-fic as equipment that is used to analyze Lost Logia; Nanoha's training program had accidentally activated a Lost Logia at a previously-thought-to-be Dead World Turned into Training Grounds, in the prologue of the fic and Nanoha, being the most powerful mage at hand, volunteered to investigate), that allows Nanoha to realize that Louise is doing something very different from the Local Magi. And a very different Training Regime would be required for Louise.

All of this accumulates into Nanoha becoming a Magical mentor for Louise(and several others, after the Guiche Duel), while Nanoha's constant support mellow Louise's behavior and turns Louise(unintentionally for Nanoha) into a rather effective Combat Mage.

Oh, and when Nanoha meets Karin? They actually BOND over numbers of duels; The Duke of Valliere increases his usual medicine for his Migraine. Why? He has now TWO Karins to worry about, pretty much.

In the fic, by the time Nanoha meets Karin, Louise had grown so much that she takes Karin's character in stride... which prompts Karin to taunt Nanoha. Louise's growth, though natural for the reader, was making Louise OOC from Karin's point of view.
This fic demands translation
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Old 2012-05-23, 10:55   Link #36477
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Wrong thread. This belongs in the xover.
FYI, for me Hill of Swords was better
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Old 2012-05-23, 11:11   Link #36478
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Didn't know whether this particular content is better suited here or the crossover thread, but here's a fic brought to my attention that I'd like to read but can't... because it's in Japanese. Crossover with Zero no Tsukaima.

Untranslated fic link



This fic demands translation
The only Nanoha/ZnT crossover fic I've read had Nanoha set as an old woman... so I agree, needs translation. :k

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Wrong thread. This belongs in the xover.
FYI, for me Hill of Swords was better
Nah, it's an actual fanfic that's been written that's being discussed, so it can be posted here.
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Old 2012-05-23, 11:13   Link #36479
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*blink* It's a Nanoha/Louise xover, so I though it belonged there.
*shrug* Guess I'm wrong.
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Old 2012-05-23, 21:07   Link #36480
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Didn't know whether this particular content is better suited here or the crossover thread, but here's a fic brought to my attention that I'd like to read but can't... because it's in Japanese. Crossover with Zero no Tsukaima.

Untranslated fic link



This fic demands translation
It's interesting from what little I read of it.


"Prologue - The Circumstances of the Summoning

0077. 9. 18 Unadministrated World 64.

Unadministrated World 64 is an abandoned planet... The ability to support life/an ecosystem has long been exhausted, forsaken wastelands stretches across the planet."
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