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Old 2012-06-06, 21:49   Link #36541
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I haven't really read it either, but because I haven't seen any of Slayers.

And yeah, no need to put foreign words in the story for no reason. Most novels don't do that.
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Old 2012-06-06, 21:58   Link #36542
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I haven't really read it either, but because I haven't seen any of Slayers.

And yeah, no need to put foreign words in the story for no reason. Most novels don't do that.
True..words aside, I think I'm taking some interesting turns in my Knight of the Night Sky story.. about chapter 6 I think is when I take a huge twist
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Old 2012-06-07, 08:11   Link #36543
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I decided to redo the helmet formation, since I thought the previous description was too little
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Old 2012-06-07, 08:36   Link #36544
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I decided to redo the helmet formation, since I thought the previous description was too little
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Got a question.. How do you handle descriptions of say armor and what not? I try to describe as best as I can, but it's hard
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Old 2012-06-07, 09:50   Link #36545
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Wait, you actually understood that? I was worried that I over-complicated things

For me, I visualise the formation again and again in my head. It's like replaying transformation scenes from the television/youtube over and over (e.g. transformers). Then I replicate the changes in real life to stimulate the actions during transformation.

Take the helmet for example. I kept covering my face with my hands to act as if the plates were actually covering my face as I was writing it. Luckily nobody saw me doing that

I don't know if that helped, but that's what I did for that scene.
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Old 2012-06-07, 09:52   Link #36546
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Wait you actually understood that? I was worried that I over-complicated things

For me, I visualise the formation again and again in my head. It's like replaying a certain scene from the television/youtube over and over (e.g. transformers). Then I replicate the changes in real life to stimulate the actions during transformation.

Take the helmet for example. I kept covering my face with my hands to act as if the plates were actually covering my face as I was writing it. Luckily nobody saw me doing that

I don't know if that helped, but that's what I did for that scene.
I usually try to visualize the scenarios, dialogue and appearances.. kinda feel lucky that no one's around to see me type my story.. otherwise it'll be awkward

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Old 2012-06-07, 15:24   Link #36547
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Me: Is it me or Ixy will became an energizer bunny later and fell in love with Arashi for giving her somewhat a semi-living life... not like a sleeping beauty?

Odin: Who knows? *shrugs.* we might see Einhart laughs like a noblewoman.

Me: I think she's better of as the reincarnation of a certain princess, not someone with genetic memory of a king....

Kaguya(Currently wearing a replica of Rein Zwei's barrier jacket.): Huh? Me?

Rein Zwei(Currently wearing Princess Moo's VERY small tube.): Weeeee!!!!

Amelia: *Stares at Rein Zwei.* *mutters while slightly blushing.* Cute. So cute.

Reia: While Ami is having her cute attack, Subaru is taking this rescue business quite seriously...

Odin: We'll never know if there's someone who quite way off redemption or saving. And Let's hope that Gar-tan don't follow the faker's and the paradox seeker's ideal, not healthy for someone like her.

Shirou and Archer: HEY!!!
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Old 2012-06-07, 15:55   Link #36548
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Don't know about anyone else here but I'm sure that girlxgirl isn't out of the picture on this one
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Old 2012-06-07, 20:11   Link #36549
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Lina, you're either lucky or favored by L-sama: of all times you or yours have tried to use Chaos none have been "bad changes". (I''m not counting the Cyborgs pre-adoption)

And while I hadn't thought of Arashi, getting Chaos inside Ixpelia was somewhat expected. Still, just linker core drain? I'm sure Reinforce could have helped without resorting to Chaos (an hybrid-type spell from a variation of the Linker Core drain used in the BoD incident, now used to infuse mana, and Resurrection or somewhat similar can help)

No, I don't believe you're leaving the Aces and Reinforce out of Mid for the time Ixpelia is wake.

Sorry, I still get a bit bitter.
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Old 2012-06-07, 20:29   Link #36550
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I'm still surprised that Nanoha's Lina's daughter.. in this story.. holy..
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Old 2012-06-07, 22:22   Link #36551
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Nanoha, why do your jokes stink so much?

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Old 2012-06-07, 22:45   Link #36552
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Nanoha, why do your jokes stink so much?

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D'awwww.

I love how you referenced Nanoha's meeting with Ixy during her recovery in the Peek Arc.
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"Hope she doesn't have a headache from that." Ixpellia mumbled, hoping to see Nanoha in the future sometime.

After all, it would be nice to wake up and see that not all her friends were dead like the last few times she was awake.
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Old 2012-06-07, 22:45   Link #36553
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Aww, you didn't take my suggestion about Caro and Arisa.
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Old 2012-06-08, 00:46   Link #36554
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So Chaos energy sped up her resting time by 1000 years...
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Old 2012-06-08, 08:43   Link #36555
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Nanoha, why do your jokes stink so much?

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Me: damn.... can't think properly in MST3k.... just finish a quick test in C basic, after at least 2 days of tutorial lesson...

Odin: That's what you get for being a NEET, NEET.

Me: You know me... laid-back as always.

Reia: At least you're prediction of Ixy going energizer bunny is on it's way to reality.

Me: Like Odin said, who knows what happens after this.

Odin: A quick Q&A with Rune about some details from Neph?

Me: that's one possible scenario... And we might get a swimsuit contest, due to tanning in the future.

*Lamia came, in her black bikini, followed by Excellen in her STRING bikini, then Aschen in her green bikini while Kaguya's in a white tube bikini... And Suzuka-hime in a one-piece school swimsuit.*

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Old 2012-06-08, 08:59   Link #36556
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Now that I think of it, I don't think Nanoha ever did make any good jokes
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Old 2012-06-08, 09:55   Link #36557
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Now that I think of it, I don't think Nanoha ever did make any good jokes
At least i think the scene when Yuuno reveals his true form was a pretty good one. I was laughing xD
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Old 2012-06-08, 11:45   Link #36558
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Written in at least four different moments, so even I don't know what's the final point on this.

I understand BtF!Nanoha is more playful in general than in canon because of Lina's influence, but I still can't see her making that "joke".

Your references are starting to feel shoehorned too (I see your mentions of Signum getting a tan as references to Cypha)

Looks like we'll be having a Drei soon...

Note that I somewhat was expecting Nanoha not remembering Ixpelia, having them meeting a dream after all. And then Ixpelia ignoring that pain because, even if indirectly and not remembering, Nanoha kept her promise. Of course, I'd rather have Nanoha remembering.

Chrono addressed Lina by her current last name in front of Ixpelia in a previous chapter (as Ixpelia may not know how long she has been asleep she could have wondered/asked if Lina is related to Nanoha... well she may not had time at that time)


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I love how you referenced Nanoha's meeting with Ixy during her recovery in the Peek Arc.
Actually I was expecting this meeting ever since Peek.

On random thoughts, who is with me on Hayate buying things to have a personal Photo Studio by this point of the timeline? The fanservicey images from Vivid have to come from somewhere, right?
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I'm pretty sure Signum getting a tan isn't a reference to Cypha. Nanya already played with that joke using the eyepatch anyway.
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